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[Lysoria] The Skinbane

Ashan 56, Arc 700

“You will play the Skinbane“,
Victor told Michael in his best imitation of his father’s commandeering tone of voice and pointed his wooden toy sword at him. The two boys, one of them a son of the current Lord of Lysoria and the other one the son of said lord’s captain of the guards, were standing in the sun-lit courtyard of the fortress where Victor and his family lived, surrounded by a couple of other children that were of a similar age and all came from comparatively wealthy backgrounds.

“Why do I have to play the monster?” complained red-haired, freckled Michael and stuck out his lower lip.

“Skinbanes are awesome”, Victor insisted rather than answering his playmate’s question directly. “They are mean and violent, and they have tentacles and spider legs – and what more, they were made by magic! Speaking of tentacles”, he murmured as something had just occurred to him and took a look around before he grabbed a piece of rope that was lying on the ground, as if someone had forgotten it there.

“You can use this instead”, he decided. “Next time, you can be one of the heroes”, he added in a rather generous tone of voice because saying “You will play the monster because I’m the lord’s son, and I say so!” might not go over well with the other boy. In fact, it might lead to protests.

Besides, Michael was his friend!

Michael continued to pout for a few moments, and then his eyes suddenly lit up and he asked, “Skinbanes eat people, right? Can I kill a few heroes before you defeat me?”

“Sure”,
Victor who had decided that the best way to get people to go along with his decisions was to occasionally make a few concessions said. “Now, go and hide somewhere, and we’ll try to locate your lair. I’ll count to one hundred, and then we’ll go and find you”, he told him. This time, Michael did not complain. He went on his way quite happily and with a spring in his step. He had decided that being a hero was boring, anyway.

They always had to be noble and honorable and follow lots of rules. Monsters could do pretty much whatever they wanted!

“How do we decide who’ll be the Skinbane’s victims?” Lydia, the daughter of a university professor, a girl with brown curls and green eyes wanted to know. “I don’t want to die! Being dead sucks!” she added, and the other children – apart from Victor, Michael and Lydia there were two more boys and two more girls - nodded in agreement.

“We don’t”, Victor replied. “The two that Michael hits first with his tentacles will be the victims.”

“Well, you should have told Michael that and established the rules before he left”,
Lydia pointed out.

She was not particularly impressed by his leadership skills!

“We can tell Michael when we find him”, Victor retorted.

“Did you already start counting, by the way?” Lydia asked next.

“I’ll start now”, Victor said, trying not to blush too hard because he had forgotten that very important part of their game and began, “One … two … three … four … five … six …”

“That’s enough”,
blonde, blue-eyed Jonathan, the son of an influential judge, said once Victor had reached seventy-five. “I’m bored. I’ll go and look for the Skinbane now. Who’ll come with me?”

Victor looked at his playmates, making a face as he did so because they didn’t follow the rules that he had set, and then he just counted the rest of the way to one hundred very quickly and told them, grinning all over his face, “Let’s go and find that Skinbane now!”
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“Did you tell Michael how far he’s allowed to run?” Lydia wanted to know as they left the courtyard and proceeded to run down one of the hallways of the fortress, brandishing their wooden swords as they did so much to the shock and disapproval of two maids that were just dusting off the sculptures that decorated the aforementioned hallway.

(Victor did not pay any attention to them. He was much too focused on his game.)

“Ummm … no?” Victor replied in a somewhat questioning tone of voice. This time, the young lord did blush a little. A moment later, he added, trying to sound confident, “I doubt he’ll leave the fortress though. We’ll find him. Come on!” With that, he grabbed Lydia’s hand (the hand that she wasn’t holding a sword with, to be exact) and urged her to follow him up a staircase while the other children continued to search the ground floor.

Soon, they were in the attic where Victor usually hid when he tried to avoid his etiquette and dancing lessons (he especially disliked the latter – he hated dancing!) and looking under damaged armchairs and old tables and a pile of old clothes, with no success.

Victor did find an old book that looked interesting though (it dealt with cave exploration) and tucked that into his waistband before they left the attic again and continued their search.

A few moments later, he removed it again though as it caused him some discomfort and placed it on a table in the hallway in order to save it for later before he urged Lydia onwards.

They decided to check out the library next as it had a lot of good hiding places. Just as the heavy wooden double door came into view, Victor thought that he noticed some sort of movement out of the corner of his eye. When he turned his head and looked down the hallway to the left, there was nothing there though. Maybe he had just been imagining things …
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Michael was not in the library either, and neither was he in the kitchen, in the ballroom or in the lord’s music room, and after a while, Victor, Lydia and their other playmates met in the entrance hall where they sat down on a pair of luxurious couches in order to sulk and be bored – and worry a little because Michael had already been gone for a while.

“Maybe he had an accident and is dead now!” Jonathan guessed and shuddered.

“They would have noticed a dead child!” Lydia insisted.

“Not if he fell from the balcony and is lying somewhere in the bushes”, Jonathan retorted.

“This game sucks”, Hannah, a girl with light blonde pigtails and green eyes, interjected which caused the other children that were worried about their friend’s fate to look at her in shock.

“Maybe we should tell Lord Amielle”, Jonathan proposed.

“Father’s too busy with politics and other important stuff, besides …” Victor began just as a scream rang through the fortress. A few moments later, Michael burst out of a door to the right, his face as pale as a sheet, and proclaimed, “A ghost! There’s a ghost! Help!”

“There are no ghosts in the fortress”,
Victor insisted. “You were supposed to hide until we found you, by the way. That reminds me … where were you?”

“I snuck out of the fortress and found an old cellar”,
Michael replied somewhat sheepishly (in hindsight, he realized that he should not have strayed too far – he hadn’t wanted to make things easy for them though) after which Victor abruptly grabbed his hand and told him, his eyes shimmering brightly with excitement, “Show us! I want to see!”

Michael refused to go back to the cellar again though, no matter how much Victor tried to persuade him that was in both of their best interests, so Victor, Lydia and Jonathan decided to take a look alone (the others didn’t want to hunt ghosts after Michael had refused to go back).

They were just walking towards the gate, when another door was being opened, and Master Martinus, Victor’s old, white-haired and kind of scary tutor approached, looked at the children disapprovingly and asked, “Was what Clarice just told me about running in the hallways true? You know that you can run as much as you want to when you are outside, but we have valuable works of art in here. Your father would not be pleased if one of his treasures got damaged, Lord Victor!”

“But we were hunting an evil Skinbane!”
Lydia pointed out, as if that justified running in the hallways.

“And Michael found a ghost in the cellar!” Victor added before he asked, sounding a little scared even though he didn’t want to because he realized that he shouldn’t have gotten carried away like that, “Will you tell father? We didn’t break anything, I swear!”

The old man looked at the children for a moment, and then he replied, much to Victor’s surprise because he had been convinced that he’d be punished quite severely (Master Martinus was usually quite strict), “No, my lord. You said you didn't break anything, did you? Follow me though, my lord, and ask your friends to come with us as well. I will tell you what is the matter with the cellar that you think is haunted …”
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Notes:

Though he forgets about his own rules a lot, and kind of lets people walk all over him, Victor seems to be quite the diplomat. Compromise is a powerful tool, after all. Though I do feel he more or less let everyone do pretty much whatever they wanted. Then again, he's still a child in this thread, and you did a great job with all the child characters. They don't feel like adults trapped in a child's body, but behave and act and think just like actual children do (including the lack of attention span). Fun little thread, though I must admit I was hoping for an epic showdown between the heroes and the Skinbane.


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