Review Request 2.2.4

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Ichabod Hyde
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Refresh
City/Area: Nashaki
Notes/Warnings: The saga of drunk old man and frizzy-haired soldier in the far-flung past of 718 continues... from the previous thread of thrilling clothes shopping, now to implied nudity at a public bath house. Next, they'll probably get some tea while staying out of the sun. Hyde also levels up his Hygiene skill.

Saza
Skills Used: Navigation (Unranked), Discipline (Competent), Resistance (Competent), Intelligence (Novice), Etiquette (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Navigation x3
Intelligence x2
Resistance x2
Discipline x2

Hyde
Skills Used: Caregiving (None), Socialization (None), Etiquette (None), Navigation (Unranked), Strength (Unranked), Climbing (Novice), Linguistics (Comp), Meditation (None), Discipline (Novice), Resistance (Comp).

Requested Rewards:
Caregiving x2
Strength x2
Meditation x2
Navigation x3


Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 maybe for the... you know... saying different city names near a gossipy group of elders and stuff.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yas
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Wraithgrass and Snow Nets
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Lots of science!
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/148k), Master Discipline (151x/44k), Expert Teaching (76x/52k), Novice Rhetoric (10x/4k), Novice Resistance (10x/8k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance x1
Rhetoric x5

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: None. This is my Saun wealth thread though.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Why do I only ever review your threads?
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Tristan Venora
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: How to change somebody's mind
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: A solo that I never posted a review request for for some reason. Some weird typos/wrong words.
Skills Used: Master Politics (152x/73k), Expert Seduction (78x/38k), Expert Leadership (78x/16k), Competent Discipline (26x/19k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline x1
Leadership x5

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Attuner's Guide to Privacy Invasion
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Language. Muuuuuurder.
Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Intelligence (Expert), Socialization (Competent), Persuasion (Competent), Meditation and Discipline (Expert), Running (Untrained), Stealth (Untrained), Leadership (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Attunement - The Frequency of Scalvoris Town
Attunement: Note - Violence
Attunement: Note - Death
Stealth - Spying on your ghost-friend
Leadership - Picking the right person for the job
Tactics - Divide and conquer for large searches

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Attunement

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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Mathias Blackwood
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Mage, Archer, Hunter, Killer
City/Area: Stormwastes
Notes/Warnings: Language, violence... gore?
Kasoria Skills Used: Abrogation (Master), Transmutation (Competent), Medicine (Expert), Leadership (Expert), Tactics (Master), Endurance (Master), Research (Untrained), Fieldcraft (Untrained), Mount (Horse) (Untrained)
Mathias Skills Used: Transmutation (Expert), Ranged: Shortbow (Expert), Detection (Competent), Endurance (Novice), Mount (Novice), Strength (Novice), Tactics (Novice), Leadership (Untrained), Teaching (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Kasoria Knowledge:
Detection: Being Alter for the Tiniest Sound
Detection: Hearing is Your Greatest Asset Underground
Fieldcraft: Choosing a Campsite with a Commanding View
Hunting: Guessing How Long Prey Passed Judging By the State of Tracks
Logistics: Never Leave Supply Lines at Risk During a Siege
Medicine: Pure Alcohol to Clean Wounds and Numb Pain
Medicine: Keep Pressure on a Laceration
Medicine: Some Wounds are Too Catastrophic to Survive
Mount (Horse): Trusting the Horse's Sense of Direction
Research: Connecting Live Lessons with Book Learning
Tactics: Splitting Your Force - One Half Covering, the Other Half Moving
Transmutation - Brilliance: Can be Brighter or Fainter Depending on Flow of Ether
Transmutation - Brilliance: Illuminates a Limb, a Hand, or an Entire Body
Transmutation - Brilliance: Can be Maintained While You're Busy With Other Things

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Ser Zebon: Lightning Knight, Lieutenant, One-Armed

Mathias Knowledge:
Transmutation (Brilliance) - Maintaining Brilliance during combat
Transmutation (Brilliance) - Conjuring a ball of light
Transmutation (Pathway) - Establishing a pathway from skin to stone
Transmutation (Shapecraft) - Creating hands out of the earth
Transmutation - Unconsciously drawing ether from your initiate
Teaching - Explaining Brilliance to a student
Teaching - Talk in simple terms
Teaching - Give a demonstration
Ranged (Shortbow) - Feeding arrows from your hand to the bowstring
Ranged (Shortbow) - Aiming while holding other arrows
Ranged (Shortbow) - Firing fast in a confined space
Socialization - Being a smart ass
Socialization - Cracking jokes to ease the tension

Loot: Heath Hound body parts for study.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Transmutation

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Sintih
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: A visit to the infirmary
City/Area: Viden, Infirmary
Notes/Warnings: Deals with hallucinations

Doran
Skills Used: Master Medicine (151x/65k), Master Discipline (151x/45k), Expert Detection (76x/41k), Expert Meditation (76x/27k), Competent Psychology (26x/33k), Competent Persuasion (26x/22k), Competent Etiquette (26x/33k), Novice Rhetoric (10x/4k), Untrained Caregiving

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving x3
Meditation x2
Persuasion x2
Psychology x2
Rhetoric x3

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Small, for being poor, old Sintih's first visitor ever
Wealth Points: None

Sintih
b]Skills Used:[/b] Meditation (10, 10), Endurance (0, 20), Psychology (0, 14), Detection (3, 32), Deception (0, 10), Discipline (5, 15), Tactics (150, 42)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: An impactful day makes you more susceptible to mental fatigue
Endurance: Exhaustion can come from mental fatigue as well
Etiquette: Listen to experienced advice, especially from a 500-something arc old elder
Linguistics: Sometimes a language doesn't allow you to express yourself fully
Linguistics: Falling back on different languages to help express yourself fully
Medicine: Very few potions or tonics are designed to work for Yludih
Meditation: Taking slow breaths to calm down (or asterism pulses if you don't need oxygen)
Psychology: Seemingly unrelated events, people or things can trigger hallucinations
Psychology: People can change a lot over ten arcs
Psychology: Talking about trauma when you're not prepared for it isn't good for you.
Psychology: Hallucinations and reality can be impossible to distinguish
Psychology: Thinking or talking about hallucinations can make them appear

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Exhaustion
Renown: Small, for having a famous professor as his wheelchair-pusher-man
Wealth Points: None

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Some opportunities are traps. And vice versa...
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: No animal cruelty! Except by implication...
Skills Used: Trap Making (Competent), Cooking (Novice), Woodworking (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[Cooking] Adding meat to stew.
[Trap Making] Scissor trap
[Trap Making] Attaching trap parts to a baseboard to make the trap portable.
[Trap Making] Customizing traps for other end users.
[Trap Making] Using a safety catch so that a trap doesn’t trigger while you’re setting it.
[Wood Working] Specific woodworking tasks are best done with proper woodworking tools.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: +5, delivering his first portable traps to customers.
Wealth Points: None. Wealth thread for Saun 720.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Saza Moshe
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Corinne's Inferno I
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Non-lucid. Script format; Corinne Darling (Saza) ft. his dream-wife.
Skills Used: n/a

Requested Rewards: n/a

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Ulric
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: The Proverbial Slap
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A friendship falls apart.
Skills Used: Materialization (Master), Socialization (Untrained), Discipline (Novice), Deception (Untrained), Teaching (Untrained), Tactics (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Materialization (Flux) x 3
Deception: The truth with different names
Teaching: Using sticks instead of real swords
Tactics: Exploiting a boy's desire for a father figure

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No. He a ghost.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Ashling
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Return of a Strange Ranger, Chapter One

City/Area: Fensalir, Melrath

Notes/Warnings: none

Requested Rewards:

Ashling


Request
Skills Used: Competent Animal Training, Expert Detection, Expert Medicine, Competent Intelligence

Knowledge:

Animal Training: Telling the dog to be silent
Animal Training: Reading the dog's body langauge
Animal Training: Controlling an enraged dog with a leash
Animal Training: Giving orders to an unruly dog
Medicine: Making sure that the patient will not get light in their eyes
Intelligence: Estimating weakness by observing people's movements

Loot: n/a

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a

Renown: n/a

Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: n/a

Magic Experience?: n/a


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