Review Request 2.2.4

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Central Science
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Teaching a class to low-level students. Doran's getting his second degree now, and teaching a class is one of the requirements for earning a Diploma.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/138k), GM Chemistry (100x/61k), Master Discipline (151x/39k), Master Research (151x/73k), Expert Teaching (76x/47k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Competent Writing (30x/18k), Competent Etiquette (26x/32k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Chemistry x3
Teaching x2
Writing x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Don't Spar(e) The Horses
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Skills Used: Doran: GM Blades (257x/45k), Master Discipline (151x/39k), Master Strength (151x/56k), Expert Endurance (76x/39k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Expert Tactics (76x/26k), Expert Teaching (76x/47k), Competent Etiquette (26x/32k), Doran also has a Blades capstone that makes him very good at parrying.
Darius: Combat: Blades, Discpline, Endurance, Negotiation, Strength, Tactics, all Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Doran

Blades x5
Strength x4
Tactics x1

Darius Baer: I taught him to use the sword
Scalvoris: Location: The Proving Ground

Darius

Combat: Blades: How to properly wield a two-handed weapon.
Combat: Blades: Relax your body.
Combat: Blades: Turn defensive parries into attacks, because simply parrying is never enough.
Combat: Blades: Combat the fighter rather than his or her weapon.
Combat: Blades: Leading with your blade - rather than your feet - gives your opponent less time to react.
Combat: Blades: Raising your sword too high to make a strike might create an opening for your opponent.
Discipline: Follow the instructions of those more experienced than you.
Endurance: Keep persisting, no matter how many times you want to stop
Negotiation: Sometimes a deal will fall into your lap.
Tactics: Learn from the mistakes of others.
Tactics: Varying your attacks might create an opportunity to strike your opponent.

Doran: Is a master swordsman.
Doran: Is a patient teacher.

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Yes, for both of us. Doran fought in The Proving Ground and won (and taught Darius), and Darius was seen in his company.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no

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[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Clean Getaway
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: Animal Cruelty, one mildly gross and disturbing event, corporal punishment. Memory thread.
Skills Used: Fishing (Novice), Discipline (Novice), Endurance (Novice).

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Fishing] Cleaning and scaling a fish.
[Fishing] A fish that isn’t fully dead can still escape back into the water.
[Fishing] Basics of ray-finned fish anatomy.
[Endurance] Dads can hit hard; take it like a man.
[Discipline] Overcoming squeamishness.
[Discipline] Regaining composure after an upsetting event.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Echo
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Skills Used: Expert Discipline (76x/28k), Expert Endurance (76x/30k), Expert Meditation (76x/22k), Expert Cosmetology (76x/22k), Competent Becoming (50x/19k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), 0 Singing (!)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming (Echo) x3
Meditation x1
Singing x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Becoming. Devin learns a new technique.

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	Claimed for Peer Review Training

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hey You! Teach Me Alchemy!
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Balthazar just walking around Viden, reading, looking for Doran.
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Discipline (Expert), Intelligence (Expert), Alchemy (Novice), Attunement (Expert), Research (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Alchemy - Gives Things Magical Effects
Alchemy - On an item is good, in the item is better
Alchemy - Effects come by reducing reagents to different forms
Alchemy - Crafting skills help to improve results
Research - Not all books are created equally
Navigation - The Cold Streets of Viden

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: None

[Llyr Llywelyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Balancing the Bones
City/Area: Nashaki
Notes/Warnings: Slavery, mature themes.

Saza

Skills Used: Intelligence (Novice), Detection (Novice), Writing (Novice), Etiquette (Novice), Discipline (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Spiders are spies by nature.
Intelligence: Something is always watching.
Intelligence: Secret doors.
Intelligence: Don't trust your surroundings.
Detection: Signs of hesitance (Nonverbal)
Detection: Determining lies from known truths.
Writing: Leaving out unnecessary details.
Writing: Slowing down to keep things neat.
Etiquette: Using formal titles.
Etiquette: Knowing one's place.

Llyr/Ezili

Skills Used: Intelligence (Grandmaster), Negotiation (Master), Etiquette (Expert), Appraisal (Competent), Politics (Comp), Business Management (Expert), Discipline (Master), Detection (Master).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Can be used in tandem with Psychology.
Negotiation: Using a messenger.
Negotiation: Can be used in tandem with Intelligence.
Etiquette x 1
Appraisal: Comparison of many offerings.
Appraisal x 1
Business Management: Testing a potential employee without their knowledge.
Politics: How the city of Nashaki treats their slaves.
Intelligence - Contact: Jasmina, a Nashaki slave trader who operates in the Tower of Flesh.
Mark Ability: Xypha: Telepathic Communication (Minor) I

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5-10 each
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Zemos]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bookworm meets Worm
City/Area: Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Not much to warn of.
Skills Used: Research: Untrained; Poisons: Novice; Linguistics: Untrained.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Code: Select all

[*]Linguistics: Common: Reads stranger and more difficult than it sounds.
[*]Poisons: Bookworm meets Worm (1/4)
[*]Poisons: Bookworm meets Worm (2/4)
[*]Poisons: Bookworm meets Worm (3/4)
[*]Poisons: Bookworm meets Worm (4/4)
[*]Research: Toxicology: Bookworm meets Worm (1/1)

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Menochoros III
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Part 3 in a series of training threads.
Skills Used: GM Blades (257x/45k), Master Strength (151x/56k), Master Discipline (151x/39k), Expert Endurance (76x/39k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Expert Tactics (76x/26k), Competent Etiquette (26x/32k), Novice Unarmed Combat (20x/1k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Menochoros) x5
Tactics x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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	Claimed

[Llyr Llywelyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: 2.14 Where in the World is Lord Karnos Vuda
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Part of a series (non-linear), makes use of various info given in different threads/etc., some mature themes at the beginning.

Skills Used: Intelligence (Grandmaster), Detection (Master), Discipline (Master), Tactics (Expert), Psychology (120 Expert), Business Mgmt (Expert), Politics (Comp), Investigation (Comp), Leadership (Comp).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Can be used in tandem with Intelligence.
Investigation: Can be used in tandem with Psychology.
Investigation: Discovering leads via an informant.
Intelligence - Contact: Bailey, a fall-guy who has a wife and children in the city of Etzos.
Intelligence: Locating someone who doesn't want to be found.
Tactics: Scouting a potential location through someone else.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking - Brand (Object): The Pebble (a modest unassuming gray pebble that can be kept on twine).

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +10 (likely known that he was investigating Vuda's whereabouts)
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Rabu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:Rainbow Puzzle
City/Area: Rabu's personal dream scape after the events of crack in reality
Notes/Warnings: Rabu and Tio are lucid
Skills Used:
Rabu: Dreamwalking (novice), Construction (Novice), Persuation (Novice)

Tio: Dreamwalking (Grandmaster),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rabu:
Construction x 4, Persuasion x 4, Tio: the masked mean guy, Tio: Tried to destroy my dream

Tio:
Chemistry x8 and Intimidation x1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: reviewers choice
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no