Review Request 2.2.4

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Zemos
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Through Warp and Weft
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Creepy Zemos tries to catch a disease, succeeds in tackling a patient.
Skills Used: Textile production: Novice; Needlework: Novice; Meditation: Competent; Resistance: Novice; Poison: Novice; Unarmed Combat: Untrained.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Resistance: (Yithnai) Immunity: Cannot be afflicted by any disease.
Textile Production: x 2
Meditation: x 1
Poison: x 2

Loot: Acquired whooping cough (He's immune though, but is a carrier)
Injuries/Overstepping: Carries whooping cough
Renown: +10 for assaulting a guy in a crowded infirmary. Goes to jail for a season.
Wealth Points: Technically he did a job... so will be applying for wealth thread.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Doran
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Thesis I
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Thesis writing (and other paperwork). Scientific. I've included the outline of Doran's thesis this time (it's the first time it shows up in an IC thread), in the second part where he finishes his thesis, I may just link it though as it affects the thread's word count quite a bit.
Skills Used: Master Discipline (151x/38k), Master Research (151x/71k), Expert Endurance (76x/38k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Competent Writing (30x/12k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Writing x5
Discipline x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Gotchu D-man
word count: 111

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N/A

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A light blue panther, part 2
City/Area: Viden, Student Accommodation Building
Notes/Warnings: Problem solved. Also, don't do this at home, kids.
Skills Used: Meditation (10, 4), Discipline (5, 8)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring cold room temperatures
Discipline: Failing to bury one thought with another
Discipline: Giving in to panic
Meditation: Repetition of knowledge as a mantra
Rupturing: A ceiling sized phasing portal
Rupturing: Overstepping: Telescopic Sight

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Telescopic sight from overstepping by phasing almost the entire ceiling of his room
Renown: Negative, throwing someone out of your room in the middle of the night
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Possibly.
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Balthazar Black
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Profession: Leader of The Black Cats
Renown: 1885
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Till We Meet Again
City/Area: Isabella's Dreamscape, The Veil, The Untold, A stranger's dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Lucid Dream
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Navigation (Novice), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Dreamwalking (Crossing - I have a chart to track his progress on the second page of my CS so it's not with the other skills.), Alchemy (Novice - they talk about it so I included it.)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Navigation - Moving through the Veil into the Untold
Navigation - Moving through the Untold
Discipline - Focusing on your goal in the Untold
Leadership - Delegating tasks to friends
Stealth - Trying to blend in during a lecture you showed up late too
Persuasion - Convincing an Ex to watch your stuff
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hello There
City/Area: Viden - The Cold Shoulder
Notes/Warnings: Naked Balthazar but I'm gonna be honest, I really don't describe how his butt glows. Ghost dialogue may be a little hard to see but that was kinda the point. I thought it would be a cool way to reflect that Balthazar doesn't really know what it is saying to him because he isn't focused on it. Here is a link to the approval for the ghost.
Skills Used: Unarmed Combat (Master), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Stealth (Untrained), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Dreamwalking (Crossing), Intelligence (Expert), Investigation (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Intelligence - The Cold Shoulder is haunted
Investigation - Asking the bartender for information
Endurance - Choked by a ghost tendril, not in a kinky way
Endurance - Naked in the Viden cold
Stealth - Don't knock things over
Stealth - If someone spots you, knock them out
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None - He was trying not to be noticed.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance.

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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Gennadiya Lyosha Doctor
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Return of Light and Rebirth of Storm's Edge
City/Area: Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: Some Language

Gennadiya
Skills Used: Leadership (Novice), Singing (Novice), Psychology (Expert), Dance (Novice),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Leadership x2,
Singing x2,
Dance x2,
Psychology x2
Seduction x1
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Kasoria
Skills Used: Socialization (Novice), Detection (Expert), Psychology (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Socialization x5
Psychology x2
Detection x1
Rhetoric x1
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Mathias
Skills Used: Dancing (untrained), discipline (untrained), socialization (untrained), detection (competent), stealth (novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Dancing x 3,
Discipline x 3,
Socialization x 3
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Rei'sari
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Starter Quest] Third Test
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Musical Instrument; Percussion (glass flute) (Expert; 76/250 exp, 48 knowledges)

Requested Rewards: Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Detection: hearing emotions in someone's voice
Musical Instrument; Percussion (Glass Flute): x 5
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for giving a performance.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Scale and Shadow
City/Area: The Underground, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Hot, Sexy, Scaly, Hoboy Violence
Skills Used:
Kasoria - Unarmed Combat (Master), Gladius (Master), Karambit (Master), Throwing Knife (Master), Tactics (Master), Intimidation (Master), Acrobatics (Expert), Intelligence (Expert), Strength (Expert), Torture (Novice)
Praetorum - Defiance (Master), Polearm (Master), Shield (Master),Tactics (Expert), Endurance (Expert)


Requested Rewards:

PRAETORUM

Skill Knowledge:
Defiance x1
Tactics x3
Polearm x2
Shield x5

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes

KASORIA

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation x2
Tactics x3
Torture x2
Negotiation x2
Strength x1
Unarmed Combat x1
Endurance x1

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Feast on Life
City/Area: Emea, partly in the FRA, but I left that open to interpretation whether it was also part of the dream.
Notes/Warnings: Not lucid, disgusting imagery, mature content, beheading a sacrifice, disgusting disgusting don't read this. Seriously you were warned.
Skills Used: no skills not lucid.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

Text Code

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Thinking and Learning
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Romance, fade-to-black referencing of sexy times. Obviously, they are very studious students studying very hard.
Laures
Skills Used: Resistance (Competent), Climbing (Unranked), Strength (Unranked), Seduction (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Cosmetology (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance x5
Climbing x3
Endurance: x3
Cosmetology: x4
Carver
Skills Used: Resistance (Unranked), Climbing (Unranked), Endurance (Comp), Seduction (Novice), Strength (Novice), Research (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance: Short-Term: Cold (Ice, Snow, etc.)
Climbing x 2
Endurance x 2
Seduction x 2
Caregiving x 2
Strength x 6
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Up to Reviewer.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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