Review Request 2.2.4

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In The Pit
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: A smidgen of violence
Skills Used: Unarmed Combat [Novice], Tactics [Novice], Politics [Unskilled]

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat: Unarmed: Leg Sweep/ Shove Combination
Combat: Unarmed: Knee Strike
Politics: The Value of Success When Witnessed by Commanding Officers
Tactics: Winding a Larger Opponent to Weaken Him
Tactics: Using One's Natural Environment as a Weapon
Tactics: Applying Dirty Techniques to Regain Control

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: N/A
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Chrien
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams
Notes/Warnings: Violence.
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skills don't matter.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Non-lucid Dream.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Thwog Thweaven
City/Area: Scalvoris/Surrounding Waters & Landmarks
Skills used: Hunting(Novice), Combat:Spear(Novice), Caregiving(None)
Notes/Warnings: Some violence and animal cruelty. But the thing had it coming.

Requested Rewards: All rewards for Oram Mednix. +10 xp

Knowledge:

[Combat:Spear] Bracing your spear to receive a charging boar
[Combat:Spear] Striking quickly when you have an opening
[Combat:Spear] Hold onto and retract your weapon! It can get stuck in your opponent’s body.
[Hunting] Behavior: Thwarthogs are cunning enough to use hunters’ traps against other hunters.
[Hunting] Soft spots: A warthog’s skull isn’t one.
[Caregiving] When possible, help a person with their own supplies rather than yours.


Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +10 for saving another hunter’s bacon (see what I did there?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) None. Just knowing the other guy’s safe is reward enough.
Link to this season’s wealth thread: viewtopic.php?f=249&t=22655
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Oram Mednix on Fri Jun 19, 2020 1:13 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 183
Villains are powerless against story beats.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: The First Meeting of The Council of Balthazar's
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams (Lucid Dream)
Notes/Warnings: Debate.
Skills Used: Persuasion (Novice), Discipline (Expert), Socialization (Competent), Politics (Untrained), Intelligence (Expert), Leadership (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Leadership x 3, Persuasion x 3
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Honing the Weapons of War
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe

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[*]Two-Handed Blades:  Honing the Weapons of War (1/3)
[*]Two-Handed Blades:  Honing the Weapons of War (2/3)
[*]Two-Handed Blades:  Honing the Weapons of War (3/3)
[*]Acrobatics:  For every inch of height you have on a smaller opponent, there are that many ways to fall on your ass.
[*]Hone: Rune of Strength:  Activating three runes at once.
[*]Hone: Rune of Strength:  Isn't always a boon, if you're not used to handling your strength.
Skillplay
Blades: Competent (Unskilled with two-handed)
Acrobatics: Untrained
Tactics: Expert
Hone: Novice
Meditation: Expert
Endurance: Competent
Strength: Competent
Loot/Losses: Borrowed a basic steel bastard sword (Within Tier)
Injuries/Overstepping: bruises and exhaustion.
Renown: Dunno? Maybe? Please?!
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: Yes Hone xp please.
 ! Message from: Praetorum
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Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:A relaxing morning jog - part 6
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Memory/a disturbing lack of jogging.
Skills used
Detection, discipline, endurance: competent, investigation: expert, intelligence: novice
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Shield: (A relaxing morning jog 6) x3
Detection: (A relaxing morning jog 6) x2
Endurance: (A relaxing morning jog 6) x1

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Everything has healed already.
Renown: idk
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A light blue panther
City/Area: Viden, Student Accommodation Building
Notes/Warnings: I'm sorry, Yana.
Skills Used: Discipline (5/8), Research (15/6), Teaching (0,0)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignore distractions with focus.
Research: Sharing good notes.
Teaching: Using notes to review classes.
Teaching: Teaching foundation knowledge first, then building up.
Common Sign: Writing can replace signing if necessary.
Endurance: Training for survival... or beauty.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Exhaustion?
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: It was probably magical but I don't think that counts here.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Runaway Reunion
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Theft.
Ari'sora
Skills Used: Expert Flying, Competent Endurance, Novice Detection

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: dealing with crowds in order to get a necessary task done
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): creating a space to move around in in a crowd by using your wings to make the crowd draw back
Flying: flying low to the ground is more difficult than flying high in the sky due to the need of avoiding obstacles in your path
Flying: backwing to change directions in mid flight
Flying: changing directions while flying at high speed isn't easy
Flying: every beat of your wings creates a down draft that can bother others if flying at a low altitude
Detection: searching for one person in a crowd
Detection: trying to keep an eye on someone while flying
Flying: flying low to the ground causes more strain than flying at higher altitudes
Running: avoiding obstacles on the ground while running

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Balthazar
Skills Used: Running (Untrained), Unarmed Combat (Master), Acrobatics (Competent), Rupture (Expert), Attunement (Expert), Persuasion (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Running: x 6
Persuasion: x 4

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Darius
Skills Used: Novice Acrobatics, Untrained Intimidation, Novice Navigation, Novice Negotiation, Novice Running

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Your hands will instinctively attempt to catch your fall.
Acrobatics: A running jump can help you get somewhere quickly.
Intimidation: Standing over someone can be very persuasive.
Intimidation: Press the advantage.
Navigation: You can take more than one route to the same destination.
Navigation: Cutting corners can make for a shorter route.
Negotiation: Find common ground.
Negotiation: Don't be afraid to hold your ground.
Running: Watch your step!
Running: Cutting corners can make for a faster run.

Non-Skill Knowledges:

PC:
Ari'sora: Can fly.
Ari'sora: Believes in the rule of law.
Balthazar: Is a mage.
Balthazar: Has an angry streak.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Beneath The Open Sky
City/Area: Western Heights, Northern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Combat
Skills Used: Attunement (Competent), Defiance (Master), Hone (Expert), Tactics (Expert), Shield (Master), Polearm (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Beneath The Open Sky (1/1)
Hone: Beneath The Open Sky (1/1)
Tactics: Beneath The Open Sky (1/2)
Tactics: Beneath The Open Sky (2/2)
Taithir (Nobility's Endurance): Activated with a phrase
Taithir (Nobility's Endurance): Reinforces allies


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Delayed until the next solo in this series
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Hone
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bending Over Backwards
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Skills Used: Acrobatics (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Strength (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Stretching can help to prevent injuries.
Acrobatics: How to use a forward roll to control a fall.
Acrobatics: How to perform a wall walk.
Acrobatics: How to perform a handstand hold.
Endurance: Pushing through the pain of fatigued muscles.
Strength: A good rest can help to regain strength.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bumps and bruises, muscle aches.
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
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