Review Request 2.2.4

[Pig Boy]

Peer Review Requests

PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.

Peer Review Guide

How to Request Rewards

Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: There is no minimum word count, however, we feel that 1500 is a worthwhile number to strive for, for each participant. That said, we will not be hard enforcing word count. Individuals found abusing this system in order to powerplay will be dealt with accordingly, as individuals.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may usually choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. In most cases, this is the minimum. However, if the evidence of collaboration is strong enough, then a Peer Reviewer may award Collaboration Knowledge for less posts. If you feel this applies to you, identify the "additional" knowledge in your review and put forward a brief (one or two sentence) justification. For every post made after three, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Abandoned Collaboration Threads: Sometimes a collaboration doesn't work out. If one of your partners is absent for a length of time or loses inspiration, or the thread itself becomes non-canon you can submit a thread as abandoned. When an abandoned thread is graded, all participants are entitled to full knowledge and XP awards. If your thread does not meet the criteria for a collaboration's full rewards (outlined above) while you will still be given xp credit of a collaboration, you may only claim knowledge awards as if it were solo thread.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.

Roleplay Standards and Rules: 'As reviewers, it's our job to ensure that roleplay standards are upheld, such as playing to skill level. Those posting threads for review must identify skills used, skill levels, for the feats they are accomplishing. Reviewers should compare skill levels versus the poster's feats. If they do not match, reviewers may deny the review request until the player(s) fix the issues within the thread. Until then, the reviewer should mark the player's request as not approved. They are instead to identify the issue with the thread, message the player on the site, and review the players within the thread who have adhered to standards. Then they can move on to the next review if they wish.'

Wealth Points and Rewards: Once the seasonal Wealth Thread has been completed, players may request WP from other threads so long as they take place in that season and the PC is gaining additional wealth via IC means. The maximum per additional thread is 1 WP

Peer Reviewers may deny this request, and can only approve up to 1 WP.

Prophets reviewing modded threads may approve more than that, specific to the event and/or city-based approval.

Please note, this does not apply to business threads and the like, which have their own system for the acquisition of wealth points. If claiming Wealth points for a business thread, please note in the request and provide appropriate links to relevant information.

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[b]Thread Name:[/b] (Name with link included)
[b]City/Area:[/b] (Where is this taken place in?)
[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Skills Used:[/b] ex. Combat: Blades. Currently Competent (26 XP, 50 knowledge). 

[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) 
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Aegis:

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[Kisaik]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Kindred Spirits
City/Area: place
Notes/Warnings: Finished up an old collab with me and Qit'ria. Qit can apply for knowledge for herself when it gets reviewed I suppose?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Kisaik

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[*]Etiquette:  Greeting a ghost kindly
[*]Etiquette: Making a solemn promise to a ghost.
[*]Persuasion:  Getting a ghost to tell her story.
[*]Storytelling:  The story of how Qit'ria found her mate Noth.
[*]Navigation:  Location: The shores of Lake Lovalus.

Skillplay

Etiquette: expert
Persuasion: Untrained
Storytelling: Untrained
Navigation: Untrained.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Carver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Quiet, not Silent
City/Area: Scalvoris Town (University of Scalvoris)
Notes/Warnings: n/a

Devin

Skills Used: Master Medicine (151x/43k), Expert Endurance (76x/30k), Expert Discipline (76x/27k), Competent Cosmetology (26x/20k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), Competent Research (26x/11k), Novice Teaching (10x/10k), Novice Etiquette (3x/20k), Untrained Writing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology x2
Etiquette x2
Research x2
Teaching x5
Writing x1

Tarouz Ability: Clothed in Finery: Stops working once discovered

Carver: Grafter
Carver: Gave me a new title
Carver: New to town
Laures: New to town
Laures: Likes shiny things

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Some (Devin's pretty noticeable and was showing off his ability and being helpful.)

Laures

Skills Used: Etiquette (Unranked), Investigation (Unranked), Resistance (Novice), Discipline (Unranked).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette x5
Investigation x5
Resistance x3

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: If Applicable.

Carver

Skills Used: Deception (Competent), Etiquette (Unranked), Research (Novice), Investigation (Novice), Climbing (Unranked), Discipline (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception x5
Etiquette x2
Discipline x2
Investigation x2
Research x1
Climbing x1

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: If Applicable.

Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: At Last I See The Light
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Cheesy "romance." A kiss. Player for Abigail is currently MIA.
Skills Used: Rupture (Expert), Defiance (Master), Detection (Novice), Navigation (Untrained), Intelligence (Expert), Acrobatics (Competent), Socialization (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 14
Rupture - Maintaining a stable portal for someone to go through
Rupture - Forming an egress as far up as you can see
Flying - Navigating in the air with extra weight
Flying - Manipulating air currents to keep yourself afloat
Intelligence - Friell owns the Spirit of Adventure
Intelligence - The Spirit of Adventure has many things
Intelligence - The Menagerie has mounts for Elements
Intelligence - Natalie/Abigail is... friendly.
Acrobatics - Falling with style
Acrobatics - Landing on a tree branch.
Acrobatics - Balancing on a tree branch to enjoy the view
Detection - Enjoying the view from up high
Detection - Spotting far off lights
Navigation - The streets of Scalvoris Town

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes. Rupturing and Defiance

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[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: W're All Going On A Dragon Hunt (1)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: ex. None.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tio

• Leadership x6
• Politics x 2

Nir'wei

• Leadership x4
• Logistics x4

Alyssia

• Logic: figuring out what a creature looks like
• Logic: letting your leader know of possible issues
• Tactics: a strange way to set up a decoy
• Rhetoric: stepping up to prove yourself
• Tio: leader of the group
• Nir'wei: a friendly face in the group
• Kisiak: a long name yet brave for one so small

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: We're All Going On A Dragon Hunt (2)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: None

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tio

• Stealth x6
• Mount (Wagon) x2

Nir'wei

• Detection x4
• Stealth x4

Alyssia

• Negotiation: saying exactly what you need
• Logic: buying what matches your size
• Logic: don't be late for an important meeting
• Animal Handling: don't kick an old cow to get it moving
• Tactics: use the world around you
• Tactics: a way to hold down a target while distracted
• Tactics: using a creature's eating habits against itself

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Llyr Llywelyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Raj'Ufnaj] We'll Say We're Frightened and We Want to go Home...
City/Area: U'frek's Domain (Raj'Ufnaj); The Veil. (and Etzos at the very end)
Notes/Warnings: It's kind of all over the place due to OOC, as a hiatus interrupted it and we weren't sure if it'd get abandoned a couple different times. Brief nudity due to transformation and minor references to torture.

Woe

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Torture: The Captain's Daughter: Another name for a scourge.
Torture: Put 'em in a bed with the captain's daughter, put 'em in a bed with the captain's daughter...
Torture x 2
Discipline x 6
Leadership x 1
Endurance: x 1
Swimming x 1

Skill Play

Whip: Master
Torture: Competent
Leadership: Novice
Discipline: Expert
Endurance: Competent
Swimming: Untrained
Strength: Competent
Detection: Competent

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a

Llyr

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Swimming x 2
Detection x 2
Leadership x 3
Discipline x 3
Psychology: Concept: The Use of Familiar Faces.
Psychology: Drawing from Memories to Build Visions.

Skill Play

Dreamwalking: 85/100
Swimming: Competent
Detection: Master
Discipline: Master
Tactics: Expert
Persuasion: Competent
Psychology: Expert
Leadership: Competent
Investigation: Novice
Becoming: Expert
Navigation: Unranked.

Loot: Diri of Transformation

This is the official acquisition thread of Llyr's Diri of Transformation that he was awarded from The Call Event here

Here is a copy of the description given in that event

Zarik (Llyr Llwelyn): Spirit of Transformation

1: Lead to Gold: One of the most famous quests all those who pursue the art of Transformation is the mythic ability to change lead into gold. As a Transformation Spirit, Zarik's Diri has the ability to manage this sort of Transformation, able to tranform any non-living material into another non-living material. However, this is a direct 1-1 transformation. The Diri cannot, for instance, change one ounce of lead into five pounds of gold. It will only be one one ounce of lead into one ounce of gold. The transformation is also total, you cannot, for instance, change steel into glass but have the glass keep the strength of the steel. It will just be glass. This ability takes five bits of focus on a stationary object no larger than Zarik can hold in his two hands to use, but has unlimited uses.
2: Outline Made Real: Another quest of those who pursue the art of Transformation is the ability to change non-living matter into living matter. This ability allows Zarik's Diri to change any non-living matter that resembles a living creature into an inert version of that living creature. The being isn't alive, but it works with all other Magics and Blessings as though it is. However, it only works when applied to something that looks like a living creature, such a model or a stuffed toy or a taxidermied body.
3: Formshift: There are many abilities that allow one to take on the full form of another creature, and at higher levels, may even allow one to take on partial forms. However, there are limits to the latter, and a Diri of Transformation transcends those limits. Zarik's Diri can transform any one part of Zarik's body into that of an animal that Zarik has at least a passing familiarity with. While this is limited, it allows Zarik use of animalistic traits and abilities hey may not otherwise have access too, and is not bound by the limits of any magic or Blessing.
4: Materialshift: Sometimes, the limits of living matter prevent ones body from being up to the task one needs to perform. Zarik's Diri of Transformation allows him to temporarily overcome that limitation by transforming parts of his body into non-living materials, though they keep the manueverability they had when they were living matter and their weight doesn't change. However, this is ability overclocks the body, and as such, can only be used for a limited time, for a single break once a season. Any damage sustained will be kept once the body returns to normal.

Injuries/Overstepping: Whether Llyr used actual magic is vague on purpose as to whether it was all illusion-based from being in the Untold domain as a method to tie the story into the weirdness of The Call and link the Spirit of Transformation into it (and also when he gets the Attunement spark, though that was covered in the event thread). But if you'd like to award some overstepping anyway, that's fine.

Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No)

[Kirei Qe'Azour]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Two is Better than One
City/Area: Scalvoris, Sweetwine Woods
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Cooking (Competent; 26/250 exp, 46 knowledges), Hunting (Novice; 25/250 exp, 9 knowledges) - her hunting is augmented by the fact that she is hunting in her caracal form using its instincts

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking: to zest a citrus fruit is to remove just the thin, colored skin, or zest, of the fruit, making sure to leave behind the soft white pith that lies underneath; the tools that can be used for this purpose are a microplane, a citrus zester, a vegetable peeler, and a paring knife
Cooking; Uses for zest: Finely grated zest from a microplane can be used in batters, doughs, and any time you want the zest to melt into the dish, curly zest from a citrus zester can be used for cocktail garnishes and for candied citrus decorations, and large pieces of zest from a peeler or paring knife can be used for rimming cocktail glasses, cocktail garnishes, and for infusing things like oils or sugar syrups
Hunting; Caracal: how to catch birds
Hunting; Caracal: ground squirrel scent
Hunting; Caracal: partridge scent
Hunting: ground squirrel tracks
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Gifting Trial
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Baking a cake with 0 Baking! It's a disaster!
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/83k), Expert Acting (76x/36k), Expert Persuasion (76x/43k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), 0 Baking

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Baking x4
Deception x2
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Carver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: (Almost) The Real Thing
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just two dudes, signing up to be Elements. Fairly straight-forward.

Laures

Skills Used: Etiquette (Novice), Discipline (Unranked), Deception (Competent).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette x6
Discipline x2

Carver

Skills Used: Etiquette (Unranked), Discipline (Competent), Deception (Competent).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette x2
Discipline x4
Additional Collab Knowledge: Deception x2
Reason: Two posts with well over 1,500 words, that includes varied points of interaction with Laures and multiple NPCs.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5-10 (signing up for the Elements)
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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