Review Request 2.2.3

[Darius Baer]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Darius, Darius, Let Down Your Hair
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Novice Acrobatics (16XP, 4 knowledges), Novice Discipline (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Disguise (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Endurance (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Persuasion (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Stealth (2XP, 1 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Acrobatics: You can trip yourself up if you're not careful.
Discipline: Don't pick a fight if you don't need to.
Disguise: Changing your appearance might be a necessity.
Endurance: Brace yourself for a walk of shame.
Persuasion: A little bit of controlled aggression can be very persuasive.
Stealth: Slip past carefully when you don't want to be seen.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Location: Scalvoris Town: Peytr's Pots And Potions
NPC: Peytr Lovan, Apothecary

Loot: 2 x potions for Odd Job #2: one for breathing underwater; one that lowers inhibitions and causes the user to speak the truth (notwithstanding high discipline or related skills to resist it).
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5, if warranted, for being that super hairy guy who walked through town that one time.
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Darius Baer]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Nails On A Chalkboard
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: This collaborative thread was abandoned. I finished it off with solo posts to bring some sense of conclusion to the story. This plot includes gambling.
Skills Used: Novice Deception (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Discipline (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Endurance (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Gambling (5XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Pickpocketing (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Stealth (2XP, 1 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Deception: Making people think you're doing something else can throw them off the scent.
Discipline: Not reacting when someone tries to take advantage of you.
Endurance: Sitting through a terrible performance.
Gambling: Even beginners can get lucky.
Gambling: Don't cheat!
Gambling: If you do cheat, don't get caught!
Pick Pocketing: Wait for the opportune moment.
Pick Pocketing: Strike when nobody is watching.
Stealth: Sometimes you can hide your actions in plain sight.

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Location: Scalvoris Town: The Four In Hand
NPC: Mixiebelle, Waitress

PC:
Natalie Cooper: A much worse singer than she realises.
Natalie Cooper: Will take advantage of someone if she thinks she can.

Loot:
Handkerchief that grants access to the private gambling area of The Four In Hand.
A pair of weighted dice.

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If warranted.
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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	Claimed for review 5/1/2020

[Darius Baer]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Boundaries
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Novice Animal Husbandry (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Discipline (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Endurance (6XP, 3 knowledges), Novice Linguistics (0XP, 0 knowledges), Novice Seduction (0XP, 0 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Animal Husbandry: Rabbits like eating cabbage.
Animal Husbandry: Rabbits poop when they're frightened.
Discipline: Aspire to be a better man.
Endurance: Obey your superiors.
Linguistics: Mishearing a word can lead to unexpected consequences.
Seduction: Animal poop is not an aphrodisiac.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If warranted.
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Heatwave II
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is a combined calendar event/Becoming series that will lead to Devin getting an Avriel totem, among other things.
Skills Used: Master Medicine (151x/43k), Expert Persuasion (76x/43k), Competent Discipline (26x/26k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), Competent Intimidation (26x/12k), Competent Stealth (26x/26k), Novice Cooking (2x/9k), 0 Singing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking x2
Singing x2
Intimidation x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Gennadiya Lyosha]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Maybe Frogs would have been better
City/Area: Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: The thread is about Genna autopsying a monster.
Skills Used: Medicine (Master), Surgery (Expert), Research (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Research 3
Medicine 1
Surgery 1
Discipline 1
Loot: Gemstone fragment found in the creatures brain
Injuries/Overstepping: sick to the stomach
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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	Claimed 5/2/2020

[Aylune]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Three Glimmering Lights
City/Area: Fensalir, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Transmutation Initiation for Aylune by his mentor, Ragnum.
Skills Used: Transmutation (Initiation), Meditation

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Manipulation & Creation of Ether
Transmutation: Initiation
Transmutation: The Feeling of One's Soul Being Transmuted
Transmutation: Presence of the Transmutation Spark
Transmutation x 1
Meditation x 1

Loot: Transmutation Spark
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Always pretty notable getting a new Spark.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: Yes, Transmutation

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	Claimed 5/2/2020

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Guest Lecture
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Teaching a class. Lots of science! The ending's a bit abrupt. There's a sequel though!
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/132k), Master Research (151x/65k), Master Discipline (151x/36k), Expert Teaching (76x/44k), Expert Detection (76x/35k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy x3
Teaching x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5, for holding a guest lecture.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Rakvald]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: In the Prayer Den
City/Area: Quacia, the Lair
Notes/Warnings: references to murder, crime, conspiracy to kill a prostitute and her unborn child, drug use, references to dismemberment.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Rakvald

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[*]Meditation:  Listen calmly while you're burning up inside.
[*]Intimidation:  Getting pushed around teaches you a thing or two.
[*]Intimidation: Threats of jail.
[*]Intimidation: Threats of exposure.
[*]Negotiation:  Being hired for a hit job.
[*]Resistance:  Injesting an entire bowl of Pray.

Loot: All expenses paid for a hit job and threats of exposure. (no wp change)
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: yes please.

Skillplay

Discipline: Expert
Detection: Novice
Meditation: Novice
Negotiation: Untrained
Intimidation: Novice
Resistance: untrained.

Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Rakvald]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: How Sharper than a Serpent's Tooth
City/Area: Quacia, Plenty
Notes/Warnings: Implied partial nudity, implied breast-feeding a baby, Rakvald recovers from getting stabbed in the groin, references to the injury and grossness and mature themes. A little summarized at the end, but i ran out of patience to complete this storyline. Sorry.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Rakvald

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[*]Caregiving:  Letting a baby spend time with its mother.
[*]Endurance:  Recovering from a grave wound, with the aid of graft.
[*]Endurance:  Holding in his own giblets, and enduring the pain while healing.
[*]Meditation:  Calming influence of a woman, even one as evil as Ildred.
[*]Negotiation:  Arranging for a property purchase.
[*]Negotiation:  Making up the difference by offering free services.

Loot: Purchased Coldheart Hostel (accounted in ledger. Tier 7 house +1 small room and house hold items.) Reacquired Tobol's Hone Grimoire.
Injuries/Overstepping: Recovered from his previous injury to his groin.
Renown: Yes please

Skillplay

Caregiving: Untrained
Endurance: Competent
Discipline: Expert
Meditation: Novice
Negotiation: Untrained

Wealth Points: lost on purchase of house, recorded in ledger.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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	reviewed

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Llaren
City/Area: Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Violence and language
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skill's don't matter.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No