Review Request 2.2.2

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Doctor Devin, Part 2
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: This thread is kind of weird. Keep in mind that Devin actually has Expert Medicine when you review this thread. At that level, he should be able to nearly always give his patients the correct treatment.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Xanthea: Names often contain an apostrophe
Linguistics: Xanthea: Kudi’Eltu means “dumb people”
Linguistics: Names shouldn’t always be taken literally
Medicine: Telling human and animal bites apart
Medicine: Bite wounds need to be cleaned and disinfected
Medicine: Bandaging a wound

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5, for treating a patient.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When Sound Falters
City/Area: Yaralon / Emea
Notes/Warnings: Language. I started this thread with North and I'm fairly certain it's been abandoned. Not sure if that means I get 6 or 8 knowledge. I put 8, remove the bottom 2 if I only get 6.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Defiance - Enhancing your jump with a rising stone
Stealth - Hiding from an Emeyan being that looks like a wolf
Detection - Spotting a moving figure in an Emeyan forest
Detection - Finding raw wells in a dark Emean forest
Discipline - Not using your magic in Emea, even though it would make things easier
Discipline - Functioning off a few breaks of sleep
Strength - A high jump
Strength - Working out the arms with repetitive stick grinding
Loot: Dreamwalking skill via sleeping in Emea and whatever quantity of wells the reviewer feels Balthazar's four trial efforts earned him
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes?
Magic Experience?: If applicable. Balthazar was not a master at the time, so he was pushing his magic use relative to when the thread was set but not relative to what he can do now. Not sure how that works.

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[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Deeper in Cups
City/Area: Lysoria/Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Heavy flirting maybe suggestive themes.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

[*]Deception: Remembering your fake name.
[*]Detection: Noticing someone's body language out of the corner of one's eye.
[*]Intelligence: Sy: A squeaky little woman at a bar.
[*]Psychology: Understanding the underpinnings of a person's motivations.
[*]Resistance: Rum is strong, and can be made stronger through distillation
[*]Seduction: Seduction is a collaborative engagement.

Loot/Losses: Sy's attention
Injuries/Overstepping: Getting pretty freaking drunk at this point.
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Eighteen Lashes PT 1/3
City/Area: Etzos Crescent Arena
Notes/Warnings: I'm not the best at writing combat.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

[*]Negotiation: Settling on a price for materials and make of a weapon.
[*]Textile Production: Spider silk is highly resistant to cutting.
[*]Whip: Blacksnakes are full of metal shot, with a ball-bearing in the handle knot.
[*]Whip: Blacksnakes are efficient at blludgeoning while holding them by the narrow.
[*]Whip: Blacksnake whips tend to be shorter than full-length leather bullwhips.
[*]Whip: Reverse the grip of the whip to use the bludgeoning end of the blacksnake to hammer your opponents.

Loot/Losses: -14 wp for a Masterwork+ Grave Gold and Spidersilk Blacksnake Whip.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Brent Forrester]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: No Stone Unturned
City/Area: Alivilda, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Construction: Rock is strong but brittle
Construction: Rock has natural folds called cleavage
Construction: Using a sledgehammer and wedge to split rock
Construction: Using a chisel to carve more precise lines in rock
Construction: Crowbar can be used to extract rock from quarry
Endurance: Full day of manual labour

Loot: Probably not, other than building supplies to be used in the following thread. Doesn't need to be formal loot.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not, the following thread will have renown for it.
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Spider and the Rabble Rouser
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Flirting, References to torture and treason and some violence k/o.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

[*]Detection: Overhearing treasonous words.
[*]Deception: Promising something you have no intention of providing.
[*]Empathy: Sensing and scouting out a person's tangle with the joint cooperation of attunement magics.
[*]Discipline: Restraining amusement, so as not to blow your veneer.
[*]Seduction: Nibbling a woman's ear.
[*]Seduction: Compliments go a way to softening their disposition.

Loot/Losses: +1 Prisoner
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Empathy, if it's enough.

[Vluharqih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Finding a Patron
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings:N/A
Requested Rewards:
Disguise: Using a Supporting Arm to hide
Disguise: Using a well-known face to avoid confrontation
Disguise: One in a crowd
Disguise: Using magical items to enhance your abilities to be unseen
Negotiation: Seizing the opening
Negotation: Showing vulnerability

Renown: Some- Garrett Langley is not likely to keep Corin's arrival a secret, and Corin/Nightshade has been spreading rumours of Sintra's betrayal around Etzos. That's not likely to go unnoticed.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Never

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Perchance
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Some language, most violence

First of Three! Chasing that Crossing ability... and some of the usual slicey-dicey stuff

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Leaning Back and Under an Incoming Strike (and staying on your feet while doing it)
Axes & Bludgeons (Waraxe): Defensive Stance
Axes & Bludgeons (Waraxe): Weight Can be Used to Balance You While in Motion
Axes & Bludgeons (Waraxe): Leaping Strike
Tactics: Never Take Your Eyes Off an Opponent
Tactics: Meeting a Leaping Enemy in Mid-Air

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[Llyr Llywelyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: 1.8 The Final Offer Part Two
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: All NPCs have been approved. It's a lot of back and forth dialogue.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence - Contact: Madam Miller, Northside Orphanage housemother and well-connected Etzos citizen.
Intelligence - Contact: Snorri Steingrímir, friend of Miller's, nomadic trader and a wonderful listener.
Logistics: A private location for meetings with trusted contacts is preferable.
Business Management: The first introduction of a team.
Business Management: When there are issues between employees from day one.
Business Management: Choosing the safety of an employee over your own benefit.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: maybe +5 for a small scene being made and such.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Llyr Llywelyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Blood Aurora
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Emea thread in the emea place, both lucid, dreamwalkers, talking about lotta things.

Requested Rewards:

Doran

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Blood needs to be kept cool
Alchemy: Using a centrifuge to purify blood
Alchemy: You cannot replicate magic without magical reagents
Alchemy: Can seem like magic
Alchemy: It's impossible to create something from nothing
Alchemy: Creating a substance that absorbs other substances
Alchemy: Fresh blood is best
Alchemy: Potions: A good base is essential
Alchemy: Certain reagents react negatively with certain substances
Alchemy: Potions: Masking the taste of certain components is a good idea
Alchemy: Reagent: Ignis Bean
Alchemy: Using the correct amount of each reagent is important
Alchemy: Testing a potion that has been made in Emea on yourself is a bad idea
Medicine: Most living beings bleed
Research: Not doing any research beforehand can be dangerous
Research: It's important to know if someone has already researched something before you
Research: Laying the groundwork for future research

Non-Skill:
Dreamwalking: Harm can befall you when you lucid dream
Dreamwlaking: Being physically in Emea can be dangerous
Dreamwalking: It's possible to bring items with you

Llyr Llywelyn: Supposedly practices Attunement and Mirage

Llyr

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Using a centrifuge to purify blood
Alchemy: You cannot replicate magic without magical reagents
Alchemy: Can seem like magic
Alchemy: Creating a substance that absorbs other substances
Alchemy: Fresh blood is best
Alchemy: Potions: A good base is essential
Alchemy: Certain reagents react negatively with certain substances
Alchemy: Potions: Masking the taste of certain components is a good idea
Alchemy: Reagent: Ignis Bean
Alchemy: Testing a potion that has been made in Emea on yourself is a bad idea
Alchemy: The Use of Ingredients for Magic
Alchemy: Requires careful planning
Alchemy: Requires multiple steps
Research: Not doing any research beforehand can be dangerous
Research: It's important to know if someone has already researched something before you
Research: Laying the groundwork for future research

Non-Skill:
Doran: Has met Immortals.
Doran: Has met Mortalborns.
Doran: His research is in Blood Magic via Alchemy.
Doran: Can create the effects of magic without a spark.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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