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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Starving an Animal
City/Area: Viden Merk Pass
Notes/Warnings: Mental trauma
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Strength: Pulling the chains on your legs
Strength: Pulling the chains on your arms
Resistance: Hunger for a day
Resistance: Cold stone
Endurance: Hunger for a day
Endurance: Trying to break free of the chains
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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            Tristan Venora
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            Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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            Thread Name: [Oakleigh] A Man After My Own Hart (Tristan)
            City/Area: Rynmere
            Notes/Warnings: Unfinished thread. Valeria stopped posting/retired.
            Requested Rewards:
            Knowledge:
            Mount (Horse): Mounting a horse
            Mount (Horse): In order to get your horse to move, press your knees against its sides
            Mount (Horse): Following someone
            Persuasion: Tempting someone with delicious food
            Persuasion: If someone is unsure, tell them that it isn't as hard as it sounds
            Persuasion: If someone is afraid of horses, offer to cover the horsiest parts
            Persuasion: You don't really know if you like something until you try it out
            Seduction: Taking a woman into your arms and kissing her
            Seduction: Telling a woman that she looks beautiful
            Socialization: Giving complements

            Loot: -
            Injuries/Overstepping: -
            Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
            Wealth Points: -
            Collaboration: yes
            Magic Experience?: no
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                      Abra
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                      Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                      Thread Name: A necromancer is born
                      City/Area: Melrath wilds
                      Notes/Warnings: no

                      Abra
                      Requested Rewards:
                      Knowledge:
                      Necromancy: Undead don’t have souls
                      Necromancy: Necromancers don’t have to raise the dead to be effective
                      Necromancy: Mixing blood is a part of initiation
                      Necromancy: Husks are raised skeletons
                      Necromancy: Control of a thrall can be taken from another Necromancer
                      Running: The fear of being eaten by a Husk is good motivation

                      Loot: N/A
                      Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                      Renown: N/A
                      Wealth Points: N/A
                      Collaboration: (No)
                      Magic Experience?: Necromancy
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                                Devin
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                                Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                Thread Name: Welcome to Scalvoris
                                City/Area: Scalvoris
                                Notes/Warnings: Unfinished thread. The other PCs stopped posting.
                                Requested Rewards:
                                Knowledge:
                                Acting: Acting offended
                                Acting: Sometimes you need to tone it down
                                Deception: Sometimes it's better not to mention what you really do
                                Detection: Noticing that somebody's not happy
                                Persuasion: If you give me one of your feathers, I'll help you!
                                Persuasion: Let's skip the main course and just eat sweets!
                                Socialization: Apologizing when you feel it's necessary
                                Socialization: Getting to know a stranger better
                                Socialization: Greeting your (possible) fans

                                Loot: -
                                Injuries/Overstepping: -
                                Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
                                Wealth Points: no
                                Collaboration: yes
                                Magic Experience?: no
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                                          • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
                                          • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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                                          Kalortah
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                                          Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                          Thread Name: 2. Stifle
                                          City/Area: Athart
                                          Notes/Warnings: None
                                          Requested Rewards:
                                          Knowledge:

                                          Blades (Saber): Quick draw.
                                          Flying: Spinning dive to quickly descend.
                                          Flying: Casting off from a cliffside.
                                          Intimidation: Screeching to unsettle your foes.
                                          Meditation: Feathered Friend: Maintaining connection with your familiar, to receive direct sensory input.
                                          Singing: Using the power of your voice to sound a battlecry.

                                          Loot: +1 Ring of reversal bought from the Point bank shop.
                                          Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
                                          Renown: Reviewer's discretion
                                          Wealth Points:
                                          Collaboration: No
                                          Magic Experience?: No
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                                                    Image
                                                    ~ Image ~ Image
                                                    Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
                                                    Grandeur

                                                    Aliases:
                                                    Eldyn Morose
                                                    ,
                                                    Larza Impre
                                                    ,
                                                    Flavius Erythrian
                                                    ,
                                                    Milian Le Moigne
                                                    .
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                                                    Ashling
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                                                    Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                    Thread Name: Deal With an Outlander
                                                    City/Area: Melrath, in the wilderness of the Fensalir/Alivilda region
                                                    Notes/Warnings:Note: The first thread in a series of two. Brent and Ashling meet in the wilds. They discover that they seem to have been deceived by outlanders who hired them and who are up to good. They decide to hurry back to Fensalir and try to twarth the outlanders. Next thread will be in Fensalir.
                                                    Requested Rewards:

                                                    Brent


                                                    Knowledge:
                                                    (5 posts, collab thread = 8+2 = 10 skill knowledge)
                                                    Navigation: Trailblazing using charcoal crosses on trees
                                                    Cartography: Using sightlines and a compass to determine angles
                                                    Cartography: Charting winding trail by using multiple short segments
                                                    Cartography: Indicating steep terrain with semi-circle symbols for hills
                                                    Socialization: A charming greeting
                                                    Seduction: Complementing a woman's looks
                                                    Business Management: Simple delegation for working as a team
                                                    Negotiation: Standing firm to the original agreement
                                                    Investigation: Noticing suspicious behaviour
                                                    Mount: Nudging a horse into a walk with one's heels


                                                    Non-skill:
                                                    Ashling: Young lady who looks like a child of the forest
                                                    Ashling: Herbalist from Fensalir
                                                    Warrick: Possible outlander causing trouble Melrath


                                                    Collaboration: Yes

                                                    Ashling


                                                    Knowledge:
                                                    (4 posts, collab thread = 8+1= 9 skill knowledge)
                                                    Detection: Detecting a snob from Raelia by their attire
                                                    Detection: Detecting a discrepance between appearance and accent
                                                    Detection: Detecting potentially suspect activity by signs in nature
                                                    Detection: Detecting a honest and reliable person by their behavior
                                                    Detection: Detecting when another person shows signs of attraction
                                                    Detection: Detectig the temeprament and age of an animal
                                                    Detection: Detecting a toxic plant by feeling the stench of it
                                                    Tactics: Unique knowledge of the terrain is a military advantage
                                                    Tactics: Avoiding a backlash by seeking approval from a spirit


                                                    Non-Skill
                                                    PC: Brent Forrester,a cartographer from Alivilda
                                                    PC: Brent Forreste,slightly disabled (limps)?
                                                    PC: Brent Forrester,charming good guy
                                                    PC: Brent Forrester,serious about his work

                                                    NPC: Warrick: Possible outlander causing trouble Melrath (hired Brent)
                                                    NPC: Well-groomed "raelnob" woman buying Hannyban (hired Ashling)

                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: A toxic and sticky plant
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: White flowers with dark freckles
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Even the toxic smell is enough to make people giddy
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Shamans use as a drug to get complex visions
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Causes dry mouth and intense thirst
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Causes difficulties to swallow and slurred speach
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Causes drowsiness, delirium and disorientation
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Boosts aggression
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Causes warm and flushed skin
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: Causes dilated pupils and so, intolerance to light
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: A big dose leads to convulsions, heart-stroke, coma
                                                    Melrathi Hannyban: A big dose will mostly lead to death

                                                    Loot:
                                                    One sackful of Melrathi Hannyban

                                                    Collaboration: Yes


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                                                              Soren Kvistson
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                                                              Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                              Thread Name: Another Day, Another Stool
                                                              City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
                                                              Notes/Warnings: Nope

                                                              Brent Forrester
                                                              Requested Rewards:
                                                              Knowledge:
                                                              Business Management: Selling to businesses can have greater returns than selling to individuals
                                                              Business Management: A multitude of generic products are easier made than a few custom ones
                                                              Business Management: Proposing a verbal contract
                                                              Business Management: Benefit of a trademark name or signature on products
                                                              Negotiation: Offering a discount for a larger quantity
                                                              Storytelling: Recounting a simple childhood story
                                                              Teaching: Identifying flaws in a physical piece of work
                                                              Business Management: Creating a basic business plan
                                                              Business Management: Determining which skills are best delegated to a hired hand
                                                              Socialization: Using mime for comedic effect

                                                              Soren: Barkeep of Ox's Bellow Tavern
                                                              Soren: Verbal contract to sell maps
                                                              Soren's story of Nedward the fruit seller
                                                              Loot: +1 Business Deal with Soren Kvistson
                                                              Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                                                              Renown: Small for making a deal with a local businessman
                                                              Wealth Points: N/A
                                                              Collaboration: (Yes)
                                                              Magic Experience?: (No)

                                                              Soren Kvistson
                                                              Requested Rewards:
                                                              Knowledge:
                                                              Business Management: Deal with Brent Forrester
                                                              Business Management: Using one business deal to create another
                                                              Intelligence - Contact: Mrs. Torstold, widowed mother of three
                                                              Intelligence - Contact: Brent Forrester, crippled cartographer
                                                              Intelligence - Contact: Nedward, fruit seller
                                                              Mixology: The Taste of Noatun Blue Stout
                                                              Resistance: Tolerance to Noatun Blue Stout
                                                              Storytelling: The Tale of Brent Forrester Becoming a Forrester
                                                              Storytelling: The Tale of Nedward the Unyielding Fruit Seller
                                                              Woodworking: Creating a simple barstool

                                                              Loot: +1 Business Deal with Brent Forrester
                                                              Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                                                              Renown: Small for making a deal with a local businessman
                                                              Wealth Points: N/A
                                                              Collaboration: (Yes)
                                                              Magic Experience?: (No)
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                                                                        Mathias Blackwood
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                                                                        Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                        Thread Name: Rats... Always Rats...
                                                                        City/Area: Rharne
                                                                        Notes/Warnings: Murder
                                                                        Requested Rewards:
                                                                        Knowledge: Ranged (Shortbow) - Shooting in the dark
                                                                        Ranged (Shortbow) - Shooting at rats
                                                                        Ranged (Shortbow) - Aiming based on sound
                                                                        Detection - Listening for footsteps
                                                                        Detection - Finding rats in the sewer
                                                                        Trap Making - Mouse traps
                                                                        Loot: If applicable
                                                                        Injuries/Overstepping: None
                                                                        Renown: If applicable.
                                                                        Wealth Points: None because I don't have a wealth thread/ this is passed the season change so I don't think I can claim any.
                                                                        Collaboration: No
                                                                        Magic Experience?: Maybe, using his hands is kinda using brilliance and he uses identity.
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                                                                                  Wald Lowca
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                                                                                  Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                                  Thread Name: Ladder or Man
                                                                                  City/Area: Merk Pass Viden
                                                                                  Notes/Warnings: Violence blood bodies
                                                                                  Requested Rewards:
                                                                                  Knowledge:
                                                                                  Wald
                                                                                  Unarmed (Wolven Wrestling): Avoiding knives
                                                                                  Endurance: 50 lashes
                                                                                  Strength: Dragging bodies to pile
                                                                                  Strength: Pushing people back
                                                                                  Resistance: Whips on the back
                                                                                  Resistance: Flesh of man
                                                                                  Loot:
                                                                                  Injuries/Overstepping: Rasul (can not be removed without a psychologist)
                                                                                  Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
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                                                                                  Collaboration: (No)
                                                                                  Magic Experience?: (No)
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                                                                                            Abra
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                                                                                            Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                                            Thread Name: Summit Journey, Dreams of
                                                                                            City/Area: emea
                                                                                            Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream
                                                                                            Requested Rewards:
                                                                                            Business Management: Magic can be used to reduce inefficiencies of daily operations.
                                                                                            Mathematics: Addition is the act of combining two values
                                                                                            Empathy: Strumming multiple emotions at once
                                                                                            Empathy: Strumming a knot can make it loosen faster
                                                                                            Empathy: Knots become undone as soon as the connection goes away
                                                                                            Empathy: Each source of an emotion must be knotted separately

                                                                                            Loot:
                                                                                            Injuries/Overstepping: no
                                                                                            Renown: no
                                                                                            Wealth Points: no
                                                                                            Collaboration: no
                                                                                            Magic Experience?: Empathy was used. Up to you to reward
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