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In the darkness, that light grew brighter and brighter and brighter. It wasn't angry like the cinders that clung to Luther's soot-stained skin nor was jovial like the spirit of flame that followed Vega. This light was harsh, stark in the face of unrelenting darkness. It was full of life and all the stubbornness that existence brought with it, and it did not yield. Luther could feel his soul splinter and shred itself as that light consumed the once empty blackness that he found himself in, but as long as that emerald lantern burned onward the ghost would not relent. Life and Luther, both far too mulish to know when to stop.

He could feel his ectoplasm flee him as he poured his being into Daia. He could feel layers of himself shear off from the surface of his soul. Memories once held so tightly to his core began to unravel and dissipate before his very eyes as he pushed his spirit far beyond anything an Echo would be capable of. Quiet trials spent in the fields with his brothers, an inside joke he shared with his mother, even a moment of quiet admiration for his grandfather, all gone in a flash. He sacrificed those treasured moments of his past and more so that a new future could be forged. In that, Luther found peace in offering them to Daia.

Or he would have, if he even realized they were missing. Which he wouldn't. Those trials, those ticks of time more valuable than any possession that Luther owned in life or death, were burned at the altar of an Immortal who deserved her second chance. And he would never even know that they were gone.

Like smoke from a pipe, Luther was expelled from Daia's body. The black fumes which hung ever present around his form seemed darker now and the cinders that once only burned in anger now sparked in the smoke. His spectral body regained its form, but even that was far more obfuscated than it appeared prior to his possession. He had shredded so much of himself in that desperate attempt to resurrect Daia, he knew that all it would take was a moment more before he was reduced to a Whisper of himself. Drained of his ectoplasm and some memories, Luther's appearance had taken on an unstable quality. As he looked at his companions and the sudden shape of Moseke, it became apparent that they all made sacrifices for the return of Daia.

The Immortal blinked back tears of joy, and if the spectre had the body to do so he would have done the same. She smiled, loving and impossibly thankful to all of them. In that moment, Luther knew it had all been worth it.

The ghost offered a solemn smile in return, for he had no strength left to speak. If he could have, he would replied that he was simply returning the favor. That his soul was suited towards liberation, and that it was almost like he was made for this. To free her. A life for a life, and a soul for a soul. He wanted to say that and so much more, but the ghost knew it wasn't his place. These were the affairs of the divine, he was just a farm boy angry at the world. He had done enough, said enough, at least for now. Instead, he sat next to his Anchor, allowing the ambient ectoplasm to restore some semblance strength to the spirit.

With some selfish sadness, he watched Daia collect the fractured form of Moseke and turn towards a door that had sprung from plants so much like those that clung to Moseke. He wanted Daia to stay, to join them all in a moment of rest. They had all earned a tick of quiet peace, and the ghost very much wanted to spend it with this woman who had so deeply affected him. He wondered, for a moment, if this was how others felt towards Immortals they worshiped. He wondered if they felt this type of...well, loyalty wasn't quite the right word.

Devotion?

Caught in his own thoughts and exhausted of his ectoplasm, Luther almost didn't notice the appearance of another Immortal. The man in red, the man that Daia had been waiting for all that time under the Mistress' thrall. The woman's face lit up at his arrival, and Luther felt an angry stab of jealousy pierce the waves of joy that emanated from the Immortal. If Daia noticed, she made no sign of it. It was clear where her attention lay.

Faldrun. The tyrant of flame who still ruled the woman's heart.

Defiant cinders sparked from Luther's smoking form as he rose from his seat. He had barely enough ectoplasm to make his Anchor rest on his shoulders, but at Faldrun's icy tone the ghost found enough emotional energy to make the coat cling to him. Luther had seen what the Daia's devotion had done to her soul, and though there was little he could do to challenge an Immortal of Faldrun's caliber, he would not allow her to be chained to her feelings again.

Then Faldrun left, and all the turmoil of the world became clear.

"He caused the war. All those people dead, because of him! He destroyed the world in my name!"

Luther could feel himself boil with a shared rage. So much death, so many people chained to the machinations of a would-be-ruler, all so that Faldrun could wear a crown.

"It is time to end this. Once and for all."

He couldn't agree more. He only hoped, that, when the time came, Daia would allow him to fight alongside her to end the tyrant's reign. With a quiet nod, Luther bade the Immortal goodbye, knowing that he would see her again before his soul faded from this world.

When the Door of Death appeared, Luther did not move to it immediately. Without adequate ecto, he couldn't even attempt to open it, so he waited while his strength slowly returned. With quiet appreciation, he watched Hart once again serve others before himself, closing the eyes of the dancers that gave themselves to Daia. As Hart moved to the door, Luther followed close behind. With all that the ghost had seen totrial, the strange appearance of Number None barely gave him pause. He gave the figure a half-hearted wave and entered the circular stone room.
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It wasn't an easy thing and Vega grit her teeth against the feeling of her life being drained - but she had volunteered for it and, as such, she gave what was needed, what was required. Breathing in, she leaned backwards as her head reeled from the feeling and then, there were all these emotions. Vega didn't do well with emotions, she didn't like them when they got to the point of overtaking. But when Daia thanked them, Vega's eyes were brimming with emotion; "It was an 'onour to be able to help. The world's missed you."

They helped Moseke, Moseke helped Daia, and it all seemed to be going so well. Feeling like the marrow had been sucked from her bones notwithstanding, it was the right solution. And then, her father reared his face and Vega watched, in some irritation and then building anger as he upset Daia by being an ass. Or, just by being in fairness - ass came as part of the whole Faldrun package. She would have kept out of it, but he turned to her and asked her if it was worth it? Child mine he said and that was it.

Vega's temper was never far away, not even on a good trial, and so she looked at him and snarled. "Worth it? She was, yeah. Life an' energy an' dance an' stuff? She's a useful Immortal. A real gem. Not like you." Vega was in no mood to be trading words with her father right now. But, still, she couldn't help it. "She's needed in th'world. You? Yer less use than the skin on a turd, you are" And so said Vega. Older, not wiser, and certainly no less inclined to run off at the mouth.

But, once he'd gone, Vega nodded her head to Daia's words. "For what it's worth, I'm with you. Against him an' his arrogance. Jus' gimme a call, if I can do anythin'. An', I hope you feel better, soon. Both of you." It only left to leave, via the door that Hart and Luther were leaving through. But Vega couldn't. Not straight away. So many had died here, she had to mark it, somehow. It was - to the strange little place that was Vega's head - the right thing to do. So, she went to every dancer and took a piece of their clothing - just a scrap of cloth - if she could get a handkerchief or a scarf or, if needed, she'd tear some of their skirt or shirt. As she did, each one, she closed their eyes and whispered to them. "Rest. You've earned it." and other such sentiments. Then, she picked up the potted plant, nestling it under her arm. This had exploded with Moseke's powers and she wasn't leaving it here. Then, and only then, did she go to the door.

And, before she went through, she checked that she had Arlo's hat on her head.
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Overview

Hello - and thank you for your patience with these reviews. So - I very much enjoyed this thread as a participant - and it is truly bizarre reviewing something I was a part of. However, for clarity - Squirrel is the one determining Vega's reward, and he will add that in here when he has done so. This was a great thread, and you both were amazing partners to write with - thanks so much. As always, if you've got any questions or concerns, feel free to drop me a PM.

Hart

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XP = 20
Renown = None

knowledge

Seafaring: Sailing the trade routes
Seafaring: Sailing courtesy / right of way
Seafaring: Sailing in shallow waters
Seafaring: Keeping a watch out for sandbars and reefs
Seafaring: Using a sand anchor for a long boat
Seafaring: Navigating a port
Seafaring: Docking
Seafaring: Tying the mooring lines
Seafaring: The bowline knot
Seafaring: The bowline knot makes a fixed loop on the end of a line
Dual Wielding: Rapier x Rapier
Dual Wielding: Rapier x Rapier: Switching between dominant hands / weapons
Dual Wielding: Rapier x Rapier: Defend with one sword, attack with the other
Dual Wielding: Rapier x Rapier: Good when dueling multiple opponents
Dual Wielding: Rapier x Rapier: Best used for personal defense, not in battle
Magic: Attunement: Initiation
Magic: Attunement: The magic of observation and classification
Magic: Attunement: Observing frequencies
Magic: Attunement: Identifying one's own frequency
Magic: Attunement: Separating out specific notes

Rewards

The Lion's Locket:
A small locket, depicting the Immortal Daia and with a lion engraved on the outside. Any who wear the Lion's locket are able to communicate with each other - no matter the distance. Once a cycle you may teleport yourself (only) to one of the others who wears this. For Hart - and Hart only - this locket also gives you the ability to remove your own fear and to be brave, like a lion - when you activate this (once daily), then Hart becomes truly intimidating and increases your Intimidation or Leadership by 2 levels (eg: Novice -> Master).


Luther

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XP = 20 (non-ghost)
Renown = None

knowledge

Dancing: The March of the Empress
Dancing: Falling into a crowd’s rhythm
Dancing: Conveying culture through movement
Dancing: Dancing with Daia
Dancing: The joy of a perfect partner
Dancing: Two souls moving in absolute harmony
Discipline: Focusing on an objective in the face of confusion
Discipline: Regaining composure after sensation-overload
Discipline: Mentally surviving a second death
Discipline: Holding an Immortal together
Discipline: Discovering Devotion
Materialization (Convey): Phasing through locked doors is dangerous
Materialization (Convey): Look before you leap
Materialization (Convey): More dangerous with a living body
Materialization (Convey): Makes a living body look spectral
Materialization: Channeling frustration into fuel
Materialization: A poor substitute for real life
Syphon: Linking souls with a kiss
Syphon: The taste of an Immortal
Syphon: Absorbing a dead god’s emotions

Rewards

The Lion's Locket:
A small locket, depicting the Immortal Daia and with a lion engraved on the outside. Any who wear the Lion's locket are able to communicate with each other - no matter the distance. Once a cycle you may teleport yourself (only) to one of the others who wears this. For Luther - and Luther only - this locket also gives you the ability to hunt for prey, like a lion - when you activate this, then Luther becomes an excellent Hunter and increases your Hunting or Fieldcraft by 2 levels (eg: Novice -> Master).


Vega

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XP = 20
Renown = None

knowledge

Singing: Harmonizing
Singing: Scales
Singing: To calm others down
Singing: To control your own emotions
Singing: Breathing from your stomach
Singing: Tone
Singing: Pitch
Singing: Acapella
Resistance: Allergies
Resistance: Slow-acting toxins are hard to spot.
Dancing: Slow steps
Dancing: Group dances
Dancing: Old, forgotten dances
Dancing: Formal ballroom
Dancing: Dancing in synchrony with others
Dancing: Ghost-dance
Dancing: Dancing to portray emotion
Dancing: The dance of Daia
Dancing: Dancing with Faldrun
Dancing: Formal hold

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 ! Message from: Squirrel
The Lion's Locket:
A small locket, depicting the Immortal Daia and with a lion engraved on the outside. Any who wear the Lion's locket are able to communicate with each other - no matter the distance. Once a cycle you may teleport yourself (only) to one of the others who wears this. For Vega - and Vega only - this locket also gives you the ability to roar and terrify, like a lion - when you activate this, Vega's voice increases fivefold in volume and gains a deep, husky tone, however the words she speaks remain crystal clear. This increases your Singing or Storytelling by 2 levels (eg: Novice -> Master)

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