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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: How Do You Weed Out A Snake?
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Lots of swearing but, honestly, it's tame as fuck
Requested Rewards:
  • Discipline: Keeping Your Cool
  • Discipline: Suppressing Your Anger When It's Crucial
  • Discipline: Hearing Out Your Enemies
  • Discipline: Restraining Yourself From Doing Something Stupid
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Answers
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Flaying Specialization - Fire
Defiance: Reigniting a fire that has just gone out
Leadership: Sitting in a commanding way
Linguistics: Language: Atvian
Linguistics: Atvian is a very guttural language
Logistics: Weighing the pros and cons of repeated flaying

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes, Defiance, for learning to flay fire
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: The Gathering
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Do you like intense arguments with heavy swearing?? This is loaded thicc with it.
Requested Rewards:
None as it was strictly story driven

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Order from Chaos 6: Putting Two Things Together
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
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Faith
None

Kyreen
Acting: drilling lines until they come automatically
Discipline: remaining alert to situation changes
Discipline: standing your ground in the face of fear
Detection: spotting subtle differences
Etiquette: speaking to someone of higher rank
Etiquette: polite courtesies
Etiquette: navigating differences in power
Etiquette: offering thanks

Order of Adunih: meaning of new cloaks and trims
PC: Faith Augustin, professor of medicine and head of the Order of Adunih
Location: University of Scalvoris

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Set Up A Trap He Can't Slither Out Of
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mild af
Requested Rewards:
None as it was strictly story driven

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Thu Jun 20, 2019 6:07 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 51
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Focus
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence

Part One of Three, wrapping up a series Zip, Finn and Kas were going to do. They're gone, but I'm not, and I can't leave this hanging. Hope you enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Leaping Over a River of Sewage
Acting: Hacking, Racking, Distracting Cough
Blades (Karambit): Downward Diagonal Strike
Detection: Deducing the Position of an Unseen Enemy By Their Voice
Detection: Smelling Tobacco in the Air
Tactics: Pen Them In, Burn Them Out


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Silvester: Pretender to Vorund's Throne
NPC Silvester: Keeps a Fortified Watermill as a Hideout Beyond the City Walls
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Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Signs of Trouble
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking; Ingredient: Chamomile has a bittersweet flavor that can be sweetened with sugar or honey as desired; the flowers and leaves are the parts that can be eaten, and each tastes different from the other. The flowers have a slight apple taste to them. The flowers and leaves can be used fresh in a salad or as a garnish. They can also be used fresh or dried to make tea. The leaves can be chopped up and put into butter or sour cream as a flavor when used for mashed potatoes. And dried chamomile flowers can be ground into a powder that can be used in tea, sprinkled over soups, drinks, or side dishes. It can also be added to the batter of cookies, scones, and muffins to add a delicate floral fragrance to the dessert.

Field Craft: Chamomile can be found in pastures, cornfields, roadsides, and other sunny, well-drained areas.
Field Craft: There are two kinds of chamomile; both are edible and can be used in herbal remedies. Both have tiny white flowers that look like daises. One type has feathery, fern like light green leaves while the other type has finely divided parsley like leaves.

Gardening: Chamomile is an herb that will self-seed and can be quite aggressive if left unchecked. When growing chamomile from seeds, start the seeds indoors, roughly 42 trials before the last expected frost. Once they germinate, simply scatter the seed and press firmly onto the soil; do not cover the seed with soil.

Medicine; Herb: uses for chamomile as an herb
Medicine: it is important to know about potential allergic reactions and to know who shouldn't take a particular herb when administering herbal remedies

Non Skill Knowledges

Chamomile: helps to fight dandruff, and add a silky look to your hair while strengthening your roots when used in a shampoo or conditioner
Chamomile: dried flowers can be used as an insect repellent
Chamomile: is a popular ingredient in soaps, shampoos, oils, lotions, candles, and cosmetics due to its pleasant scent

Location: Olọravu Slosneppe
Olọravu Slosneppe: the traditional place of healing in Desnind

Location: Order of the Adunih Outpost
Order of the Adunih Outpost: offers more "western" healing techniques that some are highly suspicious of

NPC: Juel'rie
Juel'rie: works at the Order of the Adunih Outpost

NPC: Rue Westfield
Rue Westfield: head healer of the Order of Adunih Outpost
Rue Westfield: is a hooded Gold Cloak member of the Order


Xanthea: Olọravu Slosneppe means Medicine House

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight for helping out at the Order of the Adunih Outpost, and for being there when a crime took place.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Closing In On Cobra
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Very Mature! Sexual themes are referred, blood and murder transpire, all very good fun in the city of Rharne.
Requested Rewards:
None as it was strictly story driven

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: DIscord
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Phobius:

Socialization: Introductions are Important
Singing: Singing for Nels
Socialization: Contact: Kalortah, a Man With Wings
Linguistics: Rakahi, the Native Tongue of the Biqaj
Singing: Songs Sound Better When Sung Together

Kalortah:

Singing: Singing for nels.
Singing: Singing poorly on purpose.
Acting: Pretending to be pitiful
Acting: Pretending to tolerate lesser beings.
Detection: Detecting the pity of others.
Detection: Knowing your singing is garbage.
Resistance: Being out in the cold.

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: a slight chill from the cold
Renown: up to reviewer
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

Aliases:
Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
,
Flavius Erythrian
,
Milian Le Moigne
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Saving Private Reyna
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Violence

Reyna
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None requested
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Sephira
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Sliding over rooftops
Acrobatics: Spinning beneath an incoming blade
Blades (Saber): Sprinting into a thrust to carry momentum
Blades (Saber): Throwing your shoulder into a block
Blades (Saber): Attack weak points like the throat
Rupturing: Using a Roar to draw off additional patrols
Thrown Weapons (Dagger): Pick the broadest target you can
Tactics: Holding your ground when in close-quarters combat.
Strength: Handling the impact of an incoming block

Nonskill:

Qit: That crazy Becomer
Max: Stupid, just like Sephira
Finn: Never give him coffee again


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Really bad headache that will last her a few days as well as a nosebleed.
Tasting Colors: Since she really pushed herself to use Attunement while in the presence of that nasty well she is going to be tasting colors for at least a few days. Fun times!
Injuries: Some full body bruising, cuts and scrapes on the hands and face. Will take a couple weeks to heal, although her hands will retain some permanent scarring from the battle and the blast.
Renown: 10 for going hard
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Maxine
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
1. Acting: Behaving as You Would Any Other Trial
2. Acting: Playing the Victim
3. Disguise: Mantis Ashcloak
4. Intelligence: Maintaining a Cover
5. Intelligence: Relaying Information
6. Intelligence: Knowing Where Your Target Is
7. Investigation: Searching for an Ether Well
8. Running: Let Adrenaline Fuel Your Sprint
9. Running: Moving to Create Distance Quickly
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Finn
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None requested
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Qit'ria
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Twisting vault off a wall
Detection: The sound of a Rupturer's Roar
Endurance: Being stabbed in the shoulder by a knife
Resistance: Smoke bombs that render a person unconscious
Stealth: Covering yourself in dark fur to match shadows
Stealth: Running softly as a cat
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Vaulting from a shield's edge
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Blocking a sword chop with your forearm
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Several
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (Yes)
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