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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I Met a Traveler
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none. it's very polite.

Requested Rewards:

Kasoria
Knowledge: n/a

Zarik
Non-skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking: Dreamscape Location: The Wastes (Karim)
Dreamwalking: Trespassing.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 55
Please — consider me a dream.
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Rabu
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Dollhouse Union
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Kisaik
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Yaralon Duelling Customs: Absence of a Darstrion means duel is to the death.
Etiquette: Yaralon Marriage Customs: Giving a weapon away means you're accepting a proposal.
Etiquette: Yaralon Marriage Customs: Weddings need witnesses.
Running: Running to help your friend.
Endurance: Getting swatted aside with a wooden sword.
Blunt (Club): Whacking tunawa around with a club.
Blunt (Club): Brandishing the club with a proper grip.
Acrobatics: Getting tossed about, and trying to right oneself in a sackcloth bag.
Socialization: Exchanging promises.

Rabu:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Yaralon Duelling Customs: Absence of a Darstrion means duel is to the death.
Etiquette: Yaralon Marriage Customs: Giving a weapon away means you're accepting a proposal.
Etiquette: Yaralon Marriage Customs: Weddings need witnesses.
Socialization: Exchanging promises.
Persuasion: Trying to convince someone not to hurt a loved one
Persuasion: Children are hard to persuade.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewers choice
Renown: Reveiwers choice.
Wealth Points: nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 173
One of Rabu's Mortal Born abilities involves emean creatures called Dooglewogs doing pranks and causing misfortune for the Rabu. I roll a dice every time Rabu uses his other powers and whatever it lands on will happen in the thread he's in.
If a Grader or Mod wishes to add a misfortune as a reward that would be wonderful but please be sure that it's only temporary and isn't too disruptive or disturbing (I'm mostly going with light and silly) look on my character sheet for examples.
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Alistair
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: One Last Memory
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: For a brief moment, Alistair's sparks did appear to go dormant as he briefly became an Immortal, but they all return to normal through a reversal of his divinity in the following thread. Same with his Blessings. I wouldn't worry about assigning anything.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:

Personal: I'm an Immortal


Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: Nu
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Nu
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 84
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Azrael
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Swim in the Bloodwater Part 1
City/Area: Bastard's Grove
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
- Ranged (Shortbow): Breath in while you draw, out while you fire
- Ranged (Shortbow): Aiming two arrows at once
- Ranged (Shortbow): Hold arrows between fingers for faster firing
- Ranged (Shortbow): Notching two arrows at once
- Ranged (Shortbow): Aim with your thumb
- Ranged (Shortbow): Quiver on hip for faster reload
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 88

Sesser Mark

  • Transformer's Toolbox [Minor]: Azrael can make superficial changes to his appearance (hair, nails, skin, eye, and voice.)
  • Ever Alluring I: Azrael seems to endure harsh conditions better than others and everyone, despite sexual orientation, is just a bit curious what he would be like in bed.

Spirit Impact

  • Darksight: Azrael's perception of light and dark have been flipped, allowing him to see more clearly in an absence of light than in the day.
  • Crow's Embla: So long as he doesn't mention proper names of people, either his own or that of others, he will be able to fit into any setting that he visits in Melrath. Once he uses a proper name of any person (even if it's made up) within another's hearing range, the effect is null until the next trial.

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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Void
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Blood and stuff (also sad)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 32
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Varthakh
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Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Varthakh
City/Area: Byblos, Kephallonia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Kinda weird
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Becoming: Borrow: The process of making a becoming form using traits from mutliple other totems.
  2. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Dexterity.
  3. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Speed via steamlined musculature.
  4. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Grip via sharp foot claws.
  5. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Prehensile tail.
  6. Meditation: Communing with your totems.
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  • Ithecal: Slower metabolisms due to being endothermic
  • Ithecal: Very effective
  • Personal: Fridgar is dead
  • Personal: Our name is Varthakh now
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe slight for waking a village up with a roar in the dead of night?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: Nah
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 113
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
-- Bertrand Russell
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Alistair
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Father That Is Always There
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: You can still review this. Also, Alistair is assigned the curse in another thread.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:

Bellinos: Condemned

Personal: I caused the worst cataclysm in the history of mankind
Personal: My Dreamscape
Personal: The Immortals must all despise me
Personal: I'm not truly an Immortal
Philosophy: All of the Immortals were born from reckless ambition
Vri: Cursed Me

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: I'd say decent renown since apparently Alistair is now cursed to be known by everyone as the one who messed up Emea
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Nu
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 116
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dancers of the Dying Sun
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: referenced apocalyptic death, drugs.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
none for either (not lucid).

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 45
Please — consider me a dream.
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Praetorum
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hobs and Gobs
City/Area: Goblin Sanctuary, Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearm (Scythe): Mowing down tiny enemies
Polearm (Scythe): Bracing against a charging foe
Polearm (Scythe): Using the hook to launch one enemy at another
Polearm (Scythe): Twist with the weapon inside an enemy
Shield (Tower Shield): Catching a blow with the side instead of the front
Tactics: Swarming can bring down a superior foe

Wells: Dreamstones
Wells: Nightmare wells
Wells: Splinterstone

Loot: One dreamstone
Injuries/Overstepping: Slight muscle strain
Renown: +5 for killing a hobgoblin
Wealth Points: 1 WP (Ashan Wealth Thread)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
 ! Message from: Nursia
Claimed.
word count: 108
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Native Tongues: Part 2
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: It's a bit short rip rip
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Checking for chipped claws
Leadership: Being able to share a language with subordinates is important
Linguistics: Common Sign uses facial expressions as well
Linguistics: Thumb Placement is important when signing
Linguistics: Language: Rakahi
Linguistics: Rakahi subtle tones for nuance

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
reviewed by strange
word count: 82
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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