Review Request 2.2.0

[Hina]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fool's Garden
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: I don’t know how learning languages work and I didn’t understand the languages page very well.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Gardening: Working with poor soil
Gardening: Looking for areas with sun exposure
Meditation: Dealing with the frustration of not understanding a language
Cosmetology: Brushing hair
Cosmetology: Gentle strokes to get out knots

Language: Yaralon (Common Dialect)

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: no

Reviewed by Strange

[Zemos]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sweet Liberty of Oblivion
City/Area: Viden Auction House
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Sybil:
Socialization: Easing a slave into ownership
Intelligence: Circumstance makes all the difference
Intelligence: Take advantage of random encounters
Intelligence: A new perspective can change everything
Intelligence: Opportunities come from the strangest places
Psychology: Some things transcend species boundaries
Psychology: Concept of 'blank slate' minds
Politics: Slave ownership
Sociology: Viden: Slavery policies
Leadership: Slaves make for viable followers
Logistics: Planning for a slave's needs

PC: Zemos: An oblivious slave.
PC: Zemos: Can carry a moderate amount of weight.
Location: Viden: The Auction House
Auction House: Sells slaves primarily.

Nzi'Fuma:

Discipline: Doing as one is told.
Endurance: Carrying a load all the way home.
Intelligence: Questioning one's commands.
Intelligence: Learning more about people
Meditation: Bright white lights made it hard to remember the past.
Meditation: Contemplating one's origins.
Meditation: Staying calm while being sold off for auction.
Meditation: Sifting through thoughts to try and draw a line between a hint of familiarity.
Strength: Fireman's carry can make heavy loads lighter.
Strength: Sharing the load between limbs.
Strength: Shouldering the bulk of a weight.

PC: Sybil: A student and a master.
PC: Sybil: Didn't actually plan on buying Zemos.
PC: Sybil: Is polite to most everyone.
Location: Viden: Carnelian Prism: Dormitory.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Maybe Sybil for gaining a follower
Wealth Points: Might be a loss for Sybil buying a slave
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nope

Reviewed by Strange

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: And that has made all the difference
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hone: Rune of Regeneration isn’t the best option for healing
Hone: Drawing a rune on someone else without a rune of resistance is a bad idea
Hone: Chaining Runes
Hone: Diffusing Runes
Hone: Rune of Endurance eases muscle fatigue
Discipline: Calming yourself down from frustration

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe light overstepping, at the reviewer's discretion. They did a lot, but quite a few runes were drawn and dismissed without being activated
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Hone

Reviewed by Strange

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Rejuvenation
City/Area: Quacia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Nu
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Giving attention to multiple children
Caregiving: Giving attention to orphaned children
Caregiving: Entertaining a group of children
Storytelling: Telling stories to young people
Storytelling: Embellishing tales to develop audience excitement
Politics: It is good to publicly perform good deeds

Zarik
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Giving attention to orphaned children.
Caregiving: Spending hours while entertaining a large group of children.
Caregiving: Noticing the need for more beds.
Caregiving: Taking on the responsibility to provide food for orphaned children.
Etiquette: The delicate balance of romantic affection while in public.
Politics: A town’s wellbeing can be measured by the state of the vulnerable population.
Politics: Direct representation as a lord within the community.
Politics: Resources are incredibly important.


Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +10 for spending hours playing and talking with Marcoveran orphans and speaking with the headmistress about what resources are needed for the orphanage.
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nu

[Hina]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fool's Taekwondo
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Adjusting the support foot for a powerful kick
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Kicking to redirect the body
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Knifehand strikes
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Fingertip strikes
Unarmed Combat (Taekwondo): Kicks have more range than punches

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: no

[Pharan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Three birds on a boat
City/Area: Athart + the sea between Athart and the Ivorian Empire
Notes/Warnings: Just a travel thread
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Rhetoric: Emphasis can augment or clarify the meaning of a sentence
Linguistics: Avrielian Script: Is the ancestor of Lorien (after a fashion)
Linguistics: Avrielian Script: Is written in columns top to bottom
Linguistics: The sounds of a language evolve over time
Discipline: Facing one’s fear of water
Detection: Realize when someone's avoiding you

Non-skill Knowledge:
Enori (Flavor NPC)
Enori: Her father worked with Ryvern in Korlasir a long time ago
Enori: Is going to study in the Ivorian Empire
Enori: Loves Linguistics
Inya (Flavor NPC)
Inya: Used to study with Pharan
Inya: Believes he benefit from nepotism
Inya: Will have an eye on him

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Wald Lowca]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Outskirts] of Bone and Teeth
City/Area: Viden Outlands
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Sybil

Discipline: Seeing a bear head jump out from a tent
Discipline: Riding adrenaline can be dangerous
Discipline: Control and serenity are not the same thing
Discipline: Controlling fear around Rangers
Meditation: Good rest is important for serenity
Meditation: Consistent sounds can improve serenity
Socialization: How not to greet a guest
Psychology: Primal responses to threats
Psychology: Fainting can occur when stress is switched out
Psychology: Signs of affection are important for social needs
Psychology: People can be erratic and mercurial
Caregiving: Understanding needs change based on upbringing
Caregiving: Understanding everyone has different needs in general
Rhetoric: Appealing to authority

Wald

Field Craft: Crafting Things from Sticks
Field Craft: Using knife to shape wood
Field Craft: Using Knife to make spikes
Field Craft: Using wood to make hooks
Trap making: Making Spikes
Trap making: Making Barbed Spikes
Trap making: Making Punji Spikes
Trap making: Impeding movement with traps
Hunting: Impeding Movement of prey
Hunting: Using gravity traps to hunt
Hunting: Always disarm prey
Meditation: crying is good
Meditation: Fear can take over
Strength: Fear can cause a surge of strength

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Kaelrik]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: meaning
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Sass. A lot of sass.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Zarik
Skill:
Detection: Recognizing physical strength by sight.
Discipline: Holding back a snide response.
Etiquette: Introduction using the full name.
Etiquette: The dynamic between master and slave.
Logistics: Slaves will learn what is required of them.
Logistics: The role of a slave in a household.
Appraisal: The value of a human being.
Persuasion: Sometimes being straight-forward doesn't work.
Psychology: Slaves speak differently toward their masters.
Psychology: The mindset of owning someone.

Nonskill:
Kaelrik: Tall, dark, handsome Lotharro
Kaelrik: Alistair's slave.
Kaelrik: My slave?
Kaelrik: said to disobey me is to dishonor Alistair.
Kaelrik: Mage: Defiance.
Kaelrik: Will learn any skill I require of him.

Kaelrik
Detection: Sensing Footsteps within a few feet
Detection: Observing condescension in bearing and attitude
Discipline: Restraining one's temper in the face of arrogance
Discipline: Keeping a straight face in spite of inner turmoil
Rhetoric: Turning another's words against them
Rhetoric: Telling the truth but not the whole truth
Rhetoric: Using words to project the image of subservience
Philosophy: The Role of a Slave
Rupturing: Sensing Alistair's Rupturing Spark in close proximity

Zarik: Husband to Alistair Venora
Zarik: Has no qualms with slavery
Zarik: Arrogant and Condescending
Zarik: Biqaj
Zarik: Intelligent. Sharp-tongued. Dangerous.

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: +10 to Zarik for asserting dominance over a slave and being a tactful logistician? +10 to Kaelrik for being cleverly defiant?
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bonding Moments: Part 2
City/Area: Eternal Empire
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft: Can’t survive on an all rabbit diet
Hunting: Barghest are pursuit predators
Hunting: Cats are ambush predators
Rhetoric: Speaking to one person to subtly reassure another
Stealth: Bare feet are sneakier than armored ones
Stealth: Using other sounds to mask your footsteps

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mynea
City/Area: Quacia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Nu
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Hone: Runic Grottos
Hone: Rune of Speed
Hone: Rune of Speed is best paired with Focus
Hone: One can whisper spoken triggers
Politics: Grooming political vassals
Politics: Learning of the dominion you rule

Koros: Mynea

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +5 for finally dispelling the myth regarding the Runic Grotto.
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Hone. Alistair learned a new ability.

Reviewed by Strange