Review Request 2.2.0

[Pegasus]

Peer Review Requests

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Peer Review Guide

Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: There is no minimum word count, however we feel that 1500 is a worthwhile number to strive for. That said, we will not be hard enforcing word count. Individuals found abusing this system in order to powerplay will be dealt with accordingly, as individuals.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain an additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. Less than three posts will allow you to claim only the 6 knowledge of a solo (please note, this does not apply to abandoned threads). For every post made after that, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.

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[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) 
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Ellen'wyn

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Fairytale

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[Aetu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Diffusal
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hone: It’s possible to learn new runes through meditation
Hone: Using Diffuse to spread a rune’s effects throughout the whole body
Hone: To diffuse you need to be in direct contact with the rune
Strength: Repetitions and Sets
Meditation: Trying to connect with your spark through meditation
Endurance: Muscle fatigue from a strength workout

Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: Muscle fatigue 3 days?
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - learned new ability

[Aetu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Lancealot
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Surgery: Lancing a boil
Surgery: Making a proper incision into skin
Surgery: Having a steady hand
Medicine: Comforting a patient
Medicine: Cloth in place of bandages
Medicine: Washing is actually important

Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: 5 healing someone
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Aetu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Disease pt1
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Cancer, if you're touchy about that
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Deception: Telling someone it’ll all be alright
Medicine: There are some conditions that can’t be cured with magic
Medicine: Making someone feel comfortable as they die
Discipline: Doing your best knowing you’ll probably fail
Meditation: Holding back tears and focusing
Navigation: Estimating the time based on the position of the suns

Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: 5 failing brain surgery to noones surprise
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Aetu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Disease pt1
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Cancer, if you're touchy about that. Also, this actually made my stomach turn to write towards the end. disgusting gore warning
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Medicine: Physical appearance of a person with cancer
Medicine: Cancers and Tumors go hand-in-hand
Persuasion: Telling someone their only alternative is death
Medicine: Brain & brainstem structure
Surgery: Breaking into someone’s skull
Surgery: It can be impossible to fully remove a tumor

Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: No - didn't do anything significant with magic
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No - I won't use it regardless

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: My Dearest Marina
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
None for this one.

Loot:
Nope

Injuries/Overstepping:
None

Renown:
Nope, maxed out.

Wealth Points:
Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Finn T Young One

Knowledge:
None for this one.

Loot:
Nope

Injuries/Overstepping:
None

Renown:
Yes - for being seen buying frilly clothes?!

Wealth Points:
Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ~~~ Soul Reason ~~~~~
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Part of a series....
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Detection: Spotting the difference between what is, and what seems to be.
Detection: Seeking patterns
Investigation: No matter how crazy, if it's the only thing left - it must be right
Investigation: Looking alike doesn't mean being the same.
Research: Sometimes, finding a solution is a long, hard slog.
Research: Looking in the right place, helps.

Loot:
None

Injuries/Overstepping:
Major emotional trauma from sharing the death experiences of a number of people. Faith is going to suffer from this for a number of seasons, it's going to haunt her dreams etc.

Renown:
Nope, maxed out.

Wealth Points:
Nah.

Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No

[Tei'serin Nji'ryn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Treth] Lessons in Beauty
City/Area: Treth, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: This thread is eligible for Ne'haer holiday rewards.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Linguistics: art is a language that transcends all boundaries
Linguistics: music is a language that transcends all boundaries
Teaching: chaperones are vital when taking the class out on a trip
Teaching: some festivals lend themselves to being educational tools more readily than others
Teaching: exposing children to art at a young age can encourage creativity
Teaching: art is part of a society's culture, and culture is important even in farming communities

Non Skill Knowledges

Ei'ryl: is weak and sickly in the heat of Saun

Ne'haer Holiday: Art Festival
Art Festival: is on the 35th of Saun

Loot: +2 Bonus Skill Points, and Free Item: Vhalar's Paintbrush -- At the end of a character's thread they'll find a paint brush given to them by a stranger, one that seems plain and ordinary in comparison to others. However when used the paintbrush creates almost life like illustrations, as colors seem more vibrant and mysteriously animistic when observed closely. Note that this is not Vhalar's personal paintbrush, just named after the Immortal, and cannot be sold or given to another character
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for a class trip her students will likely remember and talk about, and for participating in a festival
Wealth Points: no
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Varthakh]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: New year, new me
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence, blood, gore, death.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: If you've broken one of your hands from punching too hard, use the other.
Unarmed Combat: Putting too much force into your punch can be a bad thing.
Unarmed Combat: Punch the sternum as hard as you can to obliterate your opponent.
Strength: The amount of force required to break a lurker's rib cage.
Strength: The amount of force required to break a lurker's neck.
Strength: The amount of force required to hurl a giant terrendyte sword.
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Bestiary: Lurker of the plains: Lacks night vision.
Bestiary: Lurker of the plains: Relies on its sense of hearing in a pitch black environment.
Loot: One severed Lurker head.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: The renown reward for killing a high-exceptional monster in Eastern Gauthrel is +10, or was a long time ago. Its fine if you don't want to give it to me though.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Solo.
Magic Experience?: Magic was used, but none of it really pushed Fridgar's abilities, so no.

Rakvald

[Yrmellyn Cole]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A New and Hungry Spark Arises - I
City/Area: Rharne, in arc 707
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Meditation: Withstanding the mindless urges of the newborn spark
Meditation: Sitting totally still
Meditation: Experiencing the body’s stillness spread to the mind
Meditation: Bringing your focus back to the stillness if your thoughts stray
Meditation: Coming out of meditation in a controlled manner
Persuasion: Influencing people indirectly via jokes and raillery

Collaboration: No