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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Rabbit and Lizard
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Naw
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Tunawa leaves and spit can help relieve hang overs.
Medicine: Always check to see if you patient is responsive.
Medicine: Find out where it hurts, and how it came to hurt.
Medicine: The blessing of moseke can only do so much right now
Persuasion: If someone is in need, don't take no for an answer.

Vasa Vashti: A drunken Ithecal
Ithecal: Decendent of dragons

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: Maybe small for helping someone
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Nope
word count: 98
One of Rabu's Mortal Born abilities involves emean creatures called Dooglewogs doing pranks and causing misfortune for the Rabu. I roll a dice every time Rabu uses his other powers and whatever it lands on will happen in the thread he's in.
If a Grader or Mod wishes to add a misfortune as a reward that would be wonderful but please be sure that it's only temporary and isn't too disruptive or disturbing (I'm mostly going with light and silly) look on my character sheet for examples.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The Fire of One's Soul
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Yes, violence :D

Qit'ria
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*]Endurance: Being shot in the arm by a crossbow
[*]Stealth: Staying low on a rooftop to prevent being seen by those on the ground
[*]Stealth: Keeping a hood up to disguise your face
[*]Tactics: Making loud noises when you want to be followed
[*]Tactics: Killing a child first reduces the likelihood of alarm being raised
[*]Throwing (Javelin): Keeping the sun at your back to hide the javelins
[*]Throwing (Javelin): Using different height arcs to cause throws to coincide
[*]Throwing (Javelin): Spinning sidearm sling

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5-10 for making a big scene
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Maxine
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*]Acrobatics: Juking Away from an Attack
[*]Discipline: Saving Emotional Outbursts for Later
[*]Intelligence: Finding a Good Surveillance Spot
[*]Intelligence: Waiting for Your Mark to Come to You
[*]Leadership: Knowing When to Leave
[*]Leadership: Knowing When to Turn Back Over Command
[*]Running: Evading Pursuers
[*]Tactics: Covering Escape with Fog

Non-skill:
[*]Stormy Skies: Perfect Concealment
[*]Stormy Skies: Light-headedness After Repeated Use
[*]Windstorm: Throws off Archers
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5-10 for making a big scene
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Sephira
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Ducking beneath a mace and using Skysteps to escape
Attunement: Using Soothe to hide an obvious physical mutation
Blades(Saber):Reversed Strike
Discipline:Resisting the urge to intervene even when your morals incline you to do so
Disguise:Sometimes you must hide your mutations
Leadership:Directing your team to withdraw from a dangerous situation
Leadership:Keeping your team safe no matter the risk to yourself
Leadership:Knowing when to use force and when to retreat


Non Skill:
[Location]Rynmere: Hatred of mages
[Location]Rynmere: Mage burnings prevalent

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5-10 for making a big scene
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)



Rey'na
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Resist losing control
Discipline: Keeping hardened infront of superiors
Discipline: Learning to follow orders
Discipline: Killing children is probably bad

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 5-10 for making a big scene
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Broken Queen and her Knight
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Cat Violence - Additionally, this thread was marked abandoned by Andraska (I asked). As such I'm just closing it. Can I get 5 or 10 exp, nothing more. Not overly concerned with it, just closing it out.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Injuries were awarded in the thread prior to this one
Renown: 0
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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word count: 80
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: [Treth] Star Games
City/Area: Treth, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: job thread, and this thread it eligible for certain rewards for being a holiday thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Caregiving: when you have an infant to take care of, a good night's sleep is a thing of the past

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Coconut oil is one of the more popular oils that are used as carrier oils when making essential oils. This particular oil comes from the fruit of the coconut tree. It has both antifungal, and anti-inflammatory properties that can enhance or add to the existing benefits of the essential oils that you want to dilute. Coconut oil is very good for nourishing the hair, nails and skin. It has natural deep moisturizing properties, which makes it good for helping with dry skin and treating skin conditions. This oil has a long shelf life.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Olive oil is another popular choice for a carrier oil, and it is easy to obtain as it is a common ingredient to cook with. It comes from the fruit of the olive tree, and it is a light oil with a mild fruity aroma that makes it good for blending with most essential oils. Olive oil is a potent anti-inflammatory. It is also good for dandruff, frizzy hair, and dry skin.. Since it is non greasy, it can be used for almost any skin or hair type as it does not clog skin pores or leave hair looking greasy.

Medicine; Carrier Oil:
Jojoba oil is extracted from the seeds of the jojoba tree. It has a light nutty aroma. Jojoba oil has natural anti-fungal properties, so it works well when combined with essential oils that also have anti-fungal properties and are used for topical fungal infections. This oil has a high rate of absorption, and a long shelf life.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Sweet almond oil is extracted from the dried fruit of the almond tree. Since it is non greasy, and few people are allergic to it, it makes a great massage oil. It is even safe to be used on infants. Sweet almond oil is good for making facial skin smooth and supple and reducing wrinkles. It is also good for nourishing the skin, hair and nails.

Medicine; Carrier Oil: Argan oil is extracted from the fruit of the argan tree. It is especially good for healing inflammation, and damage caused by the sun. It is also helpful in reducing the appearance of stretch marks and scars, as well and promoting healthy cuticles and nails.

Non Skill Knowledges

Xiur: Immortal of Stars, Clouds, Hope, and Dusk

Nehaer Holiday: Celebration of the Stars
Celebration of the Stars: is on the 25th of Cylus

Loot: +2 Bonus Skill Points, and Free Item: A black pendant. On it, there appears a constellation - whichever is most visible in the night sky at the time of wearing
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) or small (10) for participating in a festival, and creating a fun trial for her students.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Get Outta My Head
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Some mild violence. This thread was done as Google Doc collab, and was going to be continued but Zip appears to have poofed. I'd just like the Exp please and to finish it out.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: no
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic Experience?: (No)
word count: 70
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stone Eggs
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Just completing one of the challenges for this season. Mastemyr hears the voice of someone deceased that was close to him, and chats with a Yari neighbor.
Requested Rewards: 10xp

Ranged Combat (Longbow): How to Waterproof your Weapon
Ranged Combat (Longbow): Lubricating your Bow String
Cooking: How to Light a Stove
Cooking: Scrambled Eggs
Cooking: Use Butter to Flavor Food
Discipline: Tolerating Grief
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Yaralon: Local Cuisine
Common: Yari Dialect
Common: Second Language
Common: Forgoing Filler Words

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +5 Cooking a meal for someone else.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 107
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Blighted Thicket: Part 1
City/Area: Quacia, the Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Lots of magical theorizing, so it might be boring.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Using Shapecraft to make remote projectiles
Transmutation: Utilizing Sculpting to craft makeshift weapons
Transmutation: Pairing Shapecraft with the Nail for high velocity strikes
Transmutation: High durability weapons can withstand more powerful Transmutations
Necromancy: Haunts are ingenious tools against the Creep
Rupturing: Using Nailing on the spot

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe some for killing lots of Ferahorns. 5-10?

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - for Transmutation, as he discovered lots of new ways to use Shapecraft, and even Sculpting. Plus usage of his Palate to craft ingenious creep-killing weapons.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Detrius of a Life Unknown
City/Area: Eastern Plains
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Animal Training: Estimating amount of food needed
Animal Training: Avoiding getting bitten
Animal Training: The importance of a name
Animal Training: Bonding through feeding
Tactics: Planning with enemy physiology in mind
Disguise: Importance of hiding symbols and markings

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Serinus: Made woodcarvings
Sivan: Meat Eating Mount
Sivan: Loved Serinus


Loot: None (Everything taken is part of the starting pack)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Praetorum on Sun Jan 27, 2019 6:38 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 91
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: High in the sky
City/Area: Eastern Plains
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kheledzan: How to use a flying saddle
Kheledzan: The importance of strapping in before takeoff
Kheledzan: Do a barrel roll
Kheledzan: Using reins with appropriate gentleness
Kheledzan: Use the command 'up' to fly
Field Craft: Navigating with a pass as a landmark

Sivan: Can fly fully equipped

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Praetorum on Sun Jan 27, 2019 6:38 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 77
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Varthakh
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Lurking Around
City/Area: Western heights, Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Teaching: Children get distracted easy
Teaching: Repeat the lesson until it sticks
Strength: Lifting heavy, giant terrendyte swords
Strength: Equipping a heavy, giant terrendyte helmet
Strength: Carrying a bunch of giant terrendyte gear across the plains of Gauthrel

Loot: Two giant standard quality terrendyte swords and a giant standard quality terrendyte helmet.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: probably not
Collaboration: nope
Magic Experience?: nope
word count: 81
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