Wings And Things

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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24th of Saun

Horses never had this issue. Hell, for all the complaints their riders gave, falling from a horse was nowhere near as bad as they all said it was. What was a couple of feet, perhaps a sprained ankle or a few broken ribs if it was a particularly bad fall? At least you walked away at all.

They'd never know the horrors of losing your grip several hundred feet up in the air. "Roll back, roll back!" he screamed as he felt Traveller dip his left wing and quickly spin back to an upright position. Both arms clung tight around the Sohr Khal's neck and refused to loosen an inch until he found the bridle again and had it safely gripped in both hands. Perhaps it was a bit of an over-reaction, in hindsight; not only was his saddle fitted with leather cords that snapped to his back and waist, but straps at his ankles also meant he'd never actually fall, even if they were forced to dive straight down; a maneuvoure he was no stranger to, but still not something he enjoyed. Especially when not gripping the only thing that actually kept control over the Sohr Khal.

"You know he's not actually going to plummet straight into the earth if you don't tell him to pull up," Greyhide muttered dryly. The wolf was sat somewhere far below, watching and occasionally grooming himself while Cold lounged in the sun and Myrth played hide-and-seek with Jasper. They couldn't care less if he dropped to his death, they'd probably just keep playing, using his corpse for a disguise... "Focus," the wolf commanded sternly. "Let him do the riding for once." Sure, it was easy to say that from all the way down there on nice solid ground. Deep breaths, that's what he said right? Deep breaths. In and out. He could do this, he'd done it before. Back when he'd nearly died fighting off a load of skeletons charging at helpless villagers, the adrenaline had kicked in and he'd summoned the courage to fight them off. Or, well, Traveller had, while Nir'wei had sat on his back yelling commands. He could do this.

Leaning forward drew them down into a dive - Traveller's wings tucking close to his body with only the exposed tips used for the barest hint of guidance. Wind whipped painfully at his face and pushed at his chest, threatening to snatch him from the saddle. It wasn't the speed that frightened him, or the wind slapping at his face and hair. Traveller's angle meant he had a very clear view of the streets of Rharne far below, slowly growing wider as he flew to met them. He couldn't look away or he risked pulling away at the wrong moment and ruining the manoeuvre, but he knew full-well what he was looking at. Death. His own. One slip of the straps, Traveller accidentally dipping into a down-draft and opening his wings a little too late, and they'd slam into the stone slabs with enough force that neither of their bodies would ever be fully separated. You could survive a sword, an arrow, drowning, burning if you were lucky - but you could never survive a fall like this. Knowing that, he had to watch as he fell to his potential death... and pass what little scrap of control he had left over to Traveller. No pressure. He could do this.

One hand peeled from the reins and quickly reached down to the shortbow buckled to the side of the saddle, flipping the leather strap holding the handle and drawing it up under his arm in his practiced pose. They'd begun at an exceptional height, but even now he could start to make out the hats on the people below and there was still the hardest part to go. The other hand almost refused to listen to his request, wrapped around the reins in a white-knuckle grip and inches away from tugging Traveller back up. A few people in the street below were starting to look up, he might have heard shouting but making out the words above the roar of wind was beyond him. He just needed to reach for his arrow, aim, draw...

He couldn't. Traveller was just a little faster, pulling back and spreading his wings wide still well above the city moments before he tugged sharply on the reins and drew them higher, swooping in a tight loop and levelling out facing the Glass Quarter. Here, on a level glide, he could release the reins without an issue. He could even shoot with a very vague idea of where the arrow might go, as long as there weren't any unexpected jolts. Shooting during evasive moves, though... while they dipped, curved and dove in the heat of an actual aerial battle, that was something he'd never come close to accomplishing. "You lack balance," Archailist had told him, as if he knew what he was talking about. "You don't ride, you just sit on his back. A real rider moves with their mount, flowing with the ride, anticipating where they'll move next and acting accordingly." He knew the squirrel was just repeating what Poppy and Gaspard told every green Skyrider about Volareon riding, but it didn't make it any less true. "Up," he told Traveller, pulling them from the glide and beginning to ascend the airspace over the Earth Quarter. Time to try again.
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Fire, it felt like her wings were burning, but she ignored the sensation. The stinging pain practically ringing in her ears with how viciously fierce the feeling was. She wasn't completely paying attention to where she was flying. Her attention was drifting at best while she focused on her target. She'd told herself that she'd take a quick rest in Rharne before she finished the journey back to her own city. She couldn't help but worry for what might transpire during her absence, but she knew if she pushed herself any harder she'd just end of regretting it. She had been far worse off when she finally arrived in Scalvoris after what had essentially been a suicide attempt of a trip. Most normal people couldn't get to the city in under 100 trials if they were lucky and the weather was fair. The half-breed pushed for 30. Honestly, maybe she was starting to go a little mad! She could just blame it on Etzos, she could honestly just blame every single one of her personality traits on Etzos and she was certain few people would even bat an eye if they knew the legacy the city was starting to form. Another wave of regret for even taking this trip washed over her as she sighed heavily. Trying to figure out everything that went wrong in her absence was going to be absolutely lovely.

Jolting back to the present she nearly collided with a large beast of some sort after putting on a burst of speed. Neither she nor the creature had seen each other due to her appearance being both quick and random combined with the wanderings of her own musings. She pulled back with a quick fling of her form to avoid actually colliding with the creature, missing it by the length of a feather. Then again, depending on which one you grabbed she had rather long feathers. "Sorry, sorry! My bad!" She shouted to the creature without even knowing if it could understand her or if it would simply try and eat her for the transgression. She didn't even notice the rider initially as she was still a little dazed and out of it. At least she wasn't so tired as to have lost her pleasant attitude like when she'd first arrived at Scal. She'd been admittedly a little snippy.

After taking a moment to right herself she looked over the form of the creature. It was a strange beast, the likes of which she'd never seen before in all her years. She couldn't even begin to attack a name or some kind of description to it, far beyond coherency at this point. Basic sentences and thinking before she actually spoke would be the name of the game until she managed to snap herself out of this little haze. It was only while she admired the monstrosity did she finally take note of the fact it had a rider. Of course, it had a rider, what was she thinking. As if a creature like this would fly around over a city if it wasn't' tamed! It didn't fully dawn on her that she'd told it sorry before she realized it had a rider or could actually understand her. It also didn't dawn on her that she'd reached her destination and a place to rest was somewhere below her. Hopefully. Perhaps it was a good thing she'd almost run into this thing as if she didn't she surely would have just kept flying until she hit Etzos.

"Sorry... again," she said sheepishly while she beat her wings lazily to stay aloft. She'd found a nice enough air current to do most of the work for her, at least with how light her body was.

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If he'd been quite honest, he'd not been paying attention. They'd been over and over and over the same square miles of air that all the clouds were starting to look the same. His attention drifted aimlessly through the bright blue sky and the beating of Traveller's mighty wings as he laboriously dragged them higher into the air with a slow, rhythmic beating. Until a screech of alarm tore all that down, and he jolted so hard in the saddle that he nearly slid off entirely. "SWEET KAREM!" Traveller seemed to jerk in mid-air, a gesture he'd never seen performed before, nearly flipping himself over completely before remembering that he had a rider on his back and righting himself again with a long sweep. Nir'wei, for all the good he could do at the moment, hugged the Sohr Khal with all the strength he could muster, pinned flat to his mount's back by centripetal force.

It took a long moment of heavy breathing, reassembling himself and pulling back the urge to vomit before he could sit up straight and take a look at what he'd nearly collided with. First instincts told him it was some kind of giant bird with abnormally big wings and a small body - a new species perhaps, or just something on a migratory path? Nothing too unusual, he guessed. Until it spoke. It apologised.

Yeah. No. He wasn't about to let that slide. "Hey, wait!" he yelled. "What... are you...?" Traveller turned, beating his massive wings to stay aloft and hover as close as possible to the thing, and Nir'wei leaned in and squinted. It looked like a person. Legs and arms in all the right places, a very normal and very human looking head with long black hair. Perhaps the thing that really should have screamed out at him was the clothes. Birds don't wear clothes. Humans wear clothes. But humans definitely don't have wings. Or taloned feet. Gods, he was genuinely struggling to wrap his head around the whole thing, it was like some mad scientist had stitched together all these odd pieces together. "Why are you here? How do you have wings? How are you flying? What... am I dreaming?"

"You're not dreaming," Archailist replied, mixed parts confusion and resignation.

"Okay, if I'm not dreaming, please... tell me what's going on here. You're supposed to be the expert."

"I have no idea, but perhaps you should talk to it, not the invisible thing on your shoulder." The penny dropped. He'd been talking out loud, not in his head. Crap, he'd not done that in a very, very long time. He'd also never been so utterly perplexed as he was now, either. Pain and pressure was building at the base of his skull; all this confusion was giving him a genuine headache.

"Sorry, sorry. I'm just... okay, I'm really confused." And tired. And confused. And... confused. "Uhh, okay, y'know what? I'm just... yeah. Sorry!" All of a sudden he decided that he'd seen far too much for one day and twisted in the saddle, yanking Traveller into a sideways dive that pulled up when he was much closer to the ground to soar on the rushing updraft. Down there he could catch his breath a little and let the fresh, cooler air blast him into a shivering wakefulness once more as he made it back to his camp. "Remind me never to ride while tired ever again. That was just far too much weird for one day. One season. All the seasons." Without any further issues they rushed upon his little campsite and landed in a small makeshift landing square cleared of debris and other things, mostly to make sure there was plenty of room for all his animals, but also to bring at least the illusion of order to the rag-tag little campsite.

To deal with the intense heat of Saun, he'd strung his tent between a rocky outcrop and a tree, hanging the tent fabric over a single line to keep plenty of ventilation and prevent overheating; he'd been lucky to find somewhere with shade as well, hidden under a small collection of trees that not only gave him a little extra protection from the constant burn of the overhead sun, but something to tap for easy water access with a spigot! Really, he couldn't hope for anything better than that. "Oh really?" Greyhide asked coyly as he dismounted and removed Traveller's saddle to give him a little more room to move. "What are you going to do about the wind blowing it away, huh?" He quickly pointed to the two extra lengths of rope tied down over either end, attached to stakes buried in the ground, all put together from spare pieces of firewood sharpened with his hunting knife. "Pfff. Won't be enough. It'll just slip out." Honestly, there was no pleasing some people... or, well. Wolves.

"It's tight enough to do the job and you should be smart enough to shut your mouth. Did it follow me?" It pained him to admit it, but he'd chosen the best place not only for the sake of his personal comfort. There was only one gap in the trees overhead that allowed swooping from above... and the rocky outcropping surrounded by trees made them all but disappear from three angles. He'd kept his bow and quiver within easy reach of his landing spot, dug into a little pit in the ground so he could grab it at a moment's notice if he needed to. After a few minutes, his shoulders slumped a little. Seems he was in the clear for now. But what the hell was that thing with wings, flying alongside them? Animal? Didn't seem like it, from the way it'd yelled at him. "I... I really need to get some better sleep tonight."
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Fieldcraft: Using your surroundings to protect your camp from detection by predators.
Fieldcraft: Using overhanging trees to shade your tent in hot conditions.
Fieldcraft: Preparing weapons nearby in case of ambush.
Fieldcraft: Organising your camp into sections to make it easier to navigate.
Fieldcraft: Tapping trees with a spiggot for a close-by fresh water supply.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Performing no-handed dives.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Corkscrewing during a dive for added speed.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Use your whole body when controlling your mount, not just your arms or legs.

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Comments: Unfortunate that the thread was abandoned, but there was still a lot of high quality material to read! You're very well-detailed in how you write progression threads, to the point where I was actually very impressed on several occasions. Your descriptiveness in dealing with nature, the animals, etc is laudable - so well done.

Nightshade, if you'd like to receive a grade as well, feel free to let me know; I'd like you to make a conclusion post if you do come back (and please do, cause I miss you!), but if you do I'll gladly add a review for you.

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