Rabbit Season

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Han Hetra
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Rabbit Season

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As the light of sun began to gently poke holes in the early morning darkness that enveloped the forest, the world began to come alive. Amidst the thick walls of trees, small rodents made their appearances. Rabbits, squirrels, even rats scurrying to and fro, tasting the first light of day and already beginning to forage and scrounge for food. Heralding the coming light, newborn birds- some of the firstfruits of Ashan- could be heard squawking and chirping in their nests, rousing their faithful parents to go and begin the days activities, hunting for whatever unlucky insect was waiting to become breakfast. Somewhere in the distance, a woodpecker worked his way through the trunk of a tree, known to the world only through the telltale echo that pulsated through the trees. Amidst this particular neck of the woods was a small pond, fed by a shallow creek that ran through much of the forest. Downstream just a few dozen yards, one would find a very large clearing surrounding the stream. Where water went, as was always the case, life followed. Herons probed the water for an early morning meal. A lone log that stuck in defiance out of the center of the pond was now being overtaken by several turtles, preparing for their daily basking. Meanwhile, the creatures of the night made their retreat. Overhead, a few bats still lingered, grabbing a final insect or two before returning to their home, obscured somewhere in the trees. A pair of beavers returned to the small dam they occupied at the stream’s mouth. Raccoons scurried back to their dens and burrows.

Kneeling silently on the edge of the tree line, Han looked out into the clearing, both in appreciation of the beautiful rays of sunshine breaking through the trees, and in search of quarry. He’d hoped to obtain a few kills from smaller game that day, perhaps a few rabbits or some turkey. Deer and the like had continued to elude him, demonstrating that his skill as a hunter simply wasn’t up to par for big game. He needed practice, perhaps even training, before he could really ascend to the next level. He had no trainer at the present, so practice it was. He’d remembered all the lessons of his previous hunts- careful where you walk, careful where you stand. Use cover. Stay quiet. Today his lesson would be patience. For two breaks already he’d sat in that same spot. He’d scouted it out the trial before and arrived to occupy it before sunup. He knew it was good. Hoped it was, at least. A partially dropped tree lay directly overhead, providing a sort of natural canopy. In front lay another long dead tree. Together with their branches and some natural brush, they formed a ready made shelter and hiding spot. Any animal onlooker would struggle to get line of sight on him. It was ideal for taking game from this field, ripe for the picking. He had only to wait for the denizens of the wood to reveal themselves properly.

He was obliged before too long, praise be to Ralaith. The immortal of time was sparing him some of it as a small group of rabbits seemed to emerge all at once from an unseen burrow somewhere not far in front of him. Deer had obviously been at work here, and the grass and brush were short. It was yet another reason he’d chosen the spot. He knew good and well that he wasn’t a great hunter, and planning his strikes even a trial in advance would be the best way to ensure consistency. As he watched the rabbits begin their hopping and scrounging around the den, Han took aim. Remember. Breathe deep. He thought to himself, calling to mind his previous practice and experiences. Drawing a deep inhale, he drew the bow back until it was as tight as he could get it. “Aim from the chin.” He mumbled almost imperceptibly before releasing the arrow, which found its mark with a satisfying thwack, running straight through the center of the rodent and leaving it either already dead or too shocked to do anything as its comrades fled.
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Two Breaks Later

Coming off of his first kill, Han had made the mistake of assuming the trial would only get better. It did not. Two breaks and 8 missed shots later, it was now very obvious to the fledgling hunter that the element of surprise he’d had at the outset was a major key. This method of stalking the rodents was doomed to fail every time, or so it seemed. They simply knew he was coming. Their lives as prey had taught them well, prepared them to be hunted. Sneaking up on them just wasn’t going to happen. He now sat and rested on the bank of the stream that ran through the area, taking a break from being frustrated and fruitless. He needed at least one more if he was going to return to the Kaelserad with a decent meal for the day. He hadn’t thought it would end up being this hard.

“Karem, give me help. Let a fledgling hunter find success this trial.” He mumbled the prayer under his breath, and found solace in it. Despite the countless setbacks and frustrations that had routinely characterized his work this season, he did always succeed in the end. He simply had to stay the course and in time, he would improve and he would take home his prey. And one trial, he might even be good at it. His determination renewed, Han rose from his resting and set out to continue the hunt. He knew that stealth was his best option, and the most likely way for him to get a kill on these wary little rodents. That left him with one real option: He needed to return to his original strategy and find a spot to hide and wait. Seeing as it had been a couple breaks now, he decided he would return to his original hiding place. And then, he waited.

For the first break, he saw nothing at all. Nothing passed through this area, though the sounds of life still filled the air all around. Birds and water and wind and the smell of tus trees and everything except something he could shoot and take back. It was frustrating, but not unbearably so. ’Patience. We must have patience. They will come.’ He reminded himself. He truly did have a ways to go as a hunter. He’d gotten into this profession thinking it would be easy. After, what was hard about shooting something with an arrow? Of course, he’d been more naive then. He didn’t understand the difficulties of pretty much every single damn thing that hunting entailed. He didn’t know the first thing about tracking prey. Didn’t know anything about dressing a kill, about skinning, about actually being decent with a bow- another skill he needed to shore up. And as this trial was proving, he still knew precious little about his quarry. Every animal had different behaviors that you had to know to hunt them properly. Rabbits were wary, paranoid little monsters that would dart if you so much as though about taking a shot at them. On the other end of the spectrum you had turkeys, who were so unbelievably stupid that you could practically stand right in front of them and they wouldn’t see you there. A real shame he didn’t see any of them around right now.

As the second break came upon him, so too did good fortune. He didn’t see a whole rabbit, not really. But he did see the tops of a pair of ears poke out of the tall grass not too far from him. It was enough that he had to try. Gently, quietly, he readied an arrow and drew back on his bow. ’Breathe deep.’ He inhaled deeply and steadied his aim at the patch of grass just below the ears. ’Karem guide me.’ He release the arrow and watched as a large mass of brown fur squealed and hopped high into the air out of shock, an arrow sticking out of it’s chest. It tore through the grass very noticeably for a time before finally coming to a stop not too far away. “Yes!” Han exclaimed, no longer caring for stealth. “Karem be praised.” He’d put in his time and succeeded at last. His patience had been rewarded and he was, perhaps, not the worst hunter there was out here in the world. He made his way quickly to his prize and pulled the arrow from it. “Thank you, friend. You’ll make a fine meal.” He said to the corpse he held by the legs in front of him, before knotting a length of rope around them to carry it, same as he’d done for the last kill. Satisfied and successful after many tries and failures, Han returned to Ne’haer, knowing he’d done his job and done it well.
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Name: Han

Knowledge:
Hunting: The Element of Surprise
Hunting: Rabbits are Wary Creatures
Hunting: Turkeys are Idiots
Hunting: Scouting Ahead for Shelter
Hunting: Using Natural Cover
Discipline: Necessary for Success

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Magic XP: N/A

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