Come and get your Loot!
(There's plenty more where that came from)
HUGE Thanks to Pegasus for most of the grading!!
I was in dread of taking this on.
VLUHARQIH:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: Identifying systems, or their lack
- Detection: Spotting your uniform
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Medicine: Weak and irregular pulse can be the symptom of many things.
No Loot, Loss, Injuries or Devotion
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Comments:
Only one post before you went into the healers tent spin off. As always, though, Vluh was well written and a delight to read. I’m glad that she got to take part!
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QUIO:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +3/5 (2 posts)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Animal Husbandry: Keeping Jack warm
- Bladed Combat (Dagger): Slice and slash on the move
- Detection: Tiny details, like a waving hand, can make all the difference
- Discipline: Fighting off panic
- Discipline: Keeping going through fear.
- Endurance: A brief respite is very welcome
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Shield Combat: Deflecting blows quickly
- Tactics: Danger to self vs danger to others
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Devotion:
Qylios' blessing - "Celarion" (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Love Quio! A shame that you had to take a hiatus before this thread finished. Thanks for your contribution and for taking part.
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FAITH:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: A Failure of a Known Hero's Courage Reveals an Imposter
- Detection: Signs That the Disciplined Shadow Beasts are Illusions
- Discipline: Allowing Yourself to be Pulled From one Goal to a Greater One
- Discipline: Duty to Famula to Investigate the Chasm in Treid's Tomb
- Discipline: Focusing Fanatacism and Fury
- Discipline: Keeping in Mind the Frequency of Illusory Foes
- Fred: A Promise to Love Him to Death After the Battle
- Immortal: Lisirra: Child Form and Insect Form
- Intelligence: The Tomb is the Key Target
- Leadership: Spontaneous Commands to Those Around You
- Leadership: Spreading the Word of Enemy Tactics
- Logistics: Better Suited as Fighter Than Healer in Tomb Battle
- Monster: Shadow Beasts Can't See You While Wearing Ufrek's Charm
- Monster: Two-Headed Sessfiend Hound
- Psychology: Grudging Respect for Naerikk's Devotion to Audrae
- Psychology: Motivated by Fear for Tristan's Well-Being
- Psychology: No Fear of Death in Famula's Service
- Psychology: Realization of Your Love for Padraig
- Tactics: Fighting a Holding Action
- Tactics: Go For the Ends of Enemy Lines
No Loot or Loss
Nothing to speak of
Injuries:
Many overall bruises and lacerations, but nothing major.
Fame: +20
+10 event participation
+10 many good deeds
Devotion: +10
Several small prayers, and much done in Famula's name.
In all seriousness, is "bloodletting" only supposed to refer to the medical process?
Moseke's blessing - Sevrath (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Good God! Faith is the perfect name for you. Such insane trust that the ultimate triumph or failure of your mission, or your own death or survival, will be the proper service to your Goddess. And the realization of your love for Padraig made the hell I put you two through on the rooftop so incredibly satisfying. I can not wait to drop you into the chasm. It was a little hard to tell if you meant to indicate that Syroa and/or Audrae were still there when you crept down into the tomb chamber, but I did not as yet give either of you any knowledge of them (There can be little doubt you saw Lisirra and Aelig! )
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SYMBRI:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Discipline: Keeping going in times of sadness
- Unarmed Combat: Dancing dodge
- Unarmed Combat: Hooking legs
- Unarmed Combat: Throat grab
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Devotion:
+3: Xiur
+3: Qylios
Comments:
Symbri! This went off into a spin off thread for you, so whilst your contribution to this thread was over after one post, big things were in Symbri’s future! Thanks so much for taking part. Only comment I’d make is to make sure that you play to your skill level – some of those combat moves were pretty awesome and Symbri’s level isn’t (yet!)
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NIGHTSHADE ELD:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Crossed blades with your opponent
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Stabbing through the skull
- Detection: Spotting friends and foes in a melee
- Discipline: Continuing to do what’s right in the face of complete hopelessness
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Endurance: Sometimes, the spirit is stronger than the body
- Flight: Battling freezing winds
- Flight: Dodging arrows
- Flight: Matching your speed with another
- Flight: Riding currents
- Flight: Saving a falling man
- Immortals: Aelig
- Immortals: Lysirra
- Immortals: Syroa
- Leadership: Focus on your strengths
- Leadership: Rallying support
- Leadership: Spotting who will help you
- Persuasion: Pointing out why people should not kill themselves.
- Rhetoric: “We’re doomed even if we all fight” speeches
- Rhetoric: “We’re doomed unless we all fight” speeches
- Shield Combat: Bracing against the blows
- Shield Combat: Using the shield to disarm
- Strength: Holding the weight of a full grown Sev’ryn
- Strength: The muscle burn of long battle
- Tactics: Only attack definite enemies
- Tactics: Shield wall
- Tactics: Using every resource
- Tactics: When forward doesn’t work. Try up!
- Unarmed Combat: Elbow strike
Loot:
One of Lisirra's Frozen Antennas
Injuries:
Cut to shoulder. Bite on elbow
Fame: +40
+20 slicing the antennae!
+10 event participation
+10 many good deeds
Devotion:
+15 Ethelynda
+3 Chrien
Qylios' blessing - Celarion (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Sorry, it never really happened that you had a chance to see Audrae.
Now that this is over, I am going to start up a modded thread for Ethelynda to visit you.
Wow – what a great thread for Night. She got to be a hero, to do some real angst-thought uncertainty and she acted in character all the way through. Lots of detail in your posts, although the one that was nearly 5,000 words in one post nearly killed me! My favourite moment for Night was when she swooped in and saved Ti’niva – a real moment for her. Awesome writing – thanks for taking part!
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TEI'SERIN:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +3/5 (2 posts)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: Spotting functionality by space.
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Medicine: Bandaging wounds
- Medicine: Cleaning wounds
- Medicine: Euthanasia for those with trials of agony is an accepted practice
- Tactics: Putting your knowledge to the best use.
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame:
+10 (event participation)
Devotion:
+3 Moseke
+30 more Moseke
Comments:
Two posts before you went into the healers’ spin off. In those two posts, though, you showed Tei’serin really well and gave her some real situations to deal with. Great writing, thanks for taking part!
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DORAN:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: Observing the scene
- Psychology: The end of hope?
- Tactics: He who hesitates is lost
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Aiming for the internal organs
- Medicine: Internal organs are vital for survival
- Tactics: Aim for somewhere vital
No Loot, Loss, Injuries or Devotion
Nothing to speak of
Fame: -20
+10 Event participation
-30 Stabbing Xuir!!
Comments:
Oh Doran! You stabbed Xiur! We’ll be talking about that in chat for arcs to come! Only one post, of course, but what a post it was! Excellently played, beautifully written.
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AEON:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Acrobatics: It’s all in the landing
- Acrobatics: The aerodynamics of flight
- Detection: Investigate the scene in front of you
- Detection: Trying to drink in all the details of a scene
- Discipline: Death is not an option
- Discipline: Do not allow yourself to be overwhelmed by the odds
- Discipline: Don’t allow yourself to be overwhelmed by hate.
- Discipline: Ignoring distractions
- Discipline: Sometimes, trying to remain brave is the bravest thing you can do.
- Discipline: Taking strength from those who have gone before you
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Immortal: Audrae
- Immortals: Audrae and Syroa Interrogating Treid
- Leadership: Clear and lucid commands
- Leadership: It’s all in the pithy comeback
- Tactics: Age doesn’t matter in war
- Tactics: Head directly to where you need to go, do not be distracted
- Tactics: Surprise the enemy. Suicide is often surprising.
- Unarmed Combat: How to get maximum power in a swift punch
- Unarmed combat: Push and shove.
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +20
+10 Event participation
+10 many good deeds
Devotion:
Qylios' blessing - "Celarion" (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Wow! Aeon the hero – so prepared to do what needs to be done, for the greater good. A pleasure to read and some real moments of “Oh My God!” We love Aeon, great pc and very honestly played.
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PADRAIG:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Acrobatics: Riding an explosion
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Fighting as part of a unit
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Fighting things that can’t see you
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Plunging your sword into an Immortal
- Caregiving: Being with someone in their final moments
- Climbing: Scaling an icy wall in the midst of a battle
- Detection Recognizing individuals in chaos
- Detection: Recognizing voices
- Detection: Spotting illusions
- Discipline: Doing the crazy thing to protect loved ones
- Discipline: Remaining logical and calm
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Falling in love with a slave is generally a bad idea
- Leadership: Calling out commands
- Leadership: Shouting commands above the noise
- Lisirra: Transformed to Bug Form in front of you
- Running: Through the snow
- Self: A very strong gag reflex
- Tactics: Seeing the faults in the enemies formation
- Tactics: When straight ahead isn’t an option. Up?
- Unarmed Combat: Grabbing a charging companion
- Unarmed Combat: Kick techniques from the floor.
Loot:
1 vial of Xiur's Blood
Loss:
1 sword
Fame: +30
Stabbing Lisirra +30
Event participation +10
Taking a vial of Xiur's Blood -10
Devotion:
Qylios' blessing - "Celarion" (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Well written, as always, and well played! Standing on a rooftop in utter chaos is not the usual time for a chap to realise he’s in love, but it was very honestly played. Love the inner conflict of his collecting up some blood from Xiur too – look forward to seeing what he does with that! I figured some folks would frown on that, fame-wise, but did not figure it to affect devotion.
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YANAHALQAH:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: Spotting a familiar figure in an unfamiliar place
- Endurance: The biting cold
- Stealth: Remaining unnoticed
- Unarmed Combat: Trip
Loot, Loss, Injuries or Devotion:
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +2 (Saeri)
-4 bad deeds / -4 Killing NPC
+10 Event participation
Comments:
Oh, she was not pulling any punches! Only one post before you went into the spin off thread, but a great post! Yanahalqah at her finest / worst! Excellent writing, as always.
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LEI'LIRA:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +3/5 (2 posts)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Bladed Combat (Katana) Raise and slash
- Bladed Combat (Katana) Thrust
- Discipline: Keeping going in a place of horror
- Endurance: The biting cold.
- Leadership: Calling out commands
- Logistics: Effective triage uses simple methods
- Logistics: Ensuring that everyone knows what to do
- Logistics: Stocktake is important
- Medicine: Bandaging
- Medicine: Risks of a Tourniquet
- Medicine: Tourniquet
No Loot or Loss
Nothing to speak of
Injury:
Sword to upper right thigh
Fame+10
Event participation
Devotion:
Qylios' blessing - "Celarion" (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Just two posts before going to the healers’ tent spin off, but great posts. Lei’lira is played very honestly, she really jumps out as a real person who sometimes simply doesn’t know what to do. I loved that you thought to do the inventory of medical supplies. So important that someone did that – well done!
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RITA FENYO:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +3/5 (2 posts)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Caregiving: It isn’t a doctor’s place to judge
- Detection: The sense of someone behind you
- Endurance: The biting cold
- Immortals: Moseke
- Immortals: Qylios
- Immortals: Xiur
- Medicine: The importance of good supplies for better survival rates
- Polarm (Staff) Using it to defend against a sword
- Seduction: Rarely works on the battlefield.
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Devotion:
Moseke's blessing - Sevrath (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Only Rita would try to use seduction to distract an attacker! Just the two posts, before you went off into the healers’ tent, but great work. Rita was just absolutely determined to get there and help Xiur, which was lovely to see. It seems to me you ought to have gotten some knowledges of other Immortals from the threads that led to this one. But I gave the ones you would have likely met in this one.
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TI'NIVA:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Bladed Combat (Dagger): Stab through flesh and bone
- Bladed Combat (Sword): The danger of over extension
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Wild swings
- Climbing: Ice makes climbing even harder
- Detection: Searching for a weapon in a field of corpses.
- Discipline: Defiance
- Discipline: Ignore what is not helpful in the moment
- Discipline: In your face, Immortal!
- Discipline: Over riding fear in order to act
- Endurance: Continued battle is exhausting
- Endurance: Continuing on when adrenaline has left you
- Endurance: The Biting Cold
- Immortal: Aelig
- Immortal: Lisirra
- PC: Nightshade Eld: Saved You From Falling to Your Death
- Psychology: The Close Call of Being Used by Lisirra to Betray Everyone
- Psychology: The look of someone as they die
- Psychology: The moment before you die can be exhilarating
- Ranged Weapon (Bow): Aiming at multiple targets
- Ranged Weapon (Bow): Aiming into a large group
- Ranged Weapon (Bow): Killing shadow beasts
- Ranged Weapon (Bow): The efficiency of multiple shots
- Running: Adrenaline gives speed
- Tactics: Be equipped.
- Tactics: Be prepared
- Tactics: Communication with allies is vital
- Tactics: In battle, there can be no mercy
- Tactics: Use every available resource, even the bodies of fallen comrades
- Unarmed Combat: Front kick
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +25
+10 Event participation
+10 leap to defeat Aelig's scheme
+5 other good deeds
Devotion:
+12 Moseke
Qylios' blessing - Celarion (+10 devotion)
Comments:
How brave Ti’niva is! I love how you play him so honestly, so afraid and emotional and yet he continues on. Great work there – and that moment between you and Aeon was awesome!
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TRISTAN:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Detection: Searching for the familiar in a crowd
- Discipline: Doing what you should, not what you want to
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Endurance: The pain of impending unconsciousness
No Loot, Loss, Injuries or Devotion
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Comments:
Poor Tristan! Just about to give chase to his wayward and misbehaved slave and he falls. I understand entirely why you took him out of this thread and can only admire how you did it. Lovely work, as always.
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NAUTA F'MOS GEEY:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +1/5 (1 post)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Acrobatics: Protective Roll
- Deception: Self-Appointed "Doorman" at the Portal
- Deception: Blaming Doran's Actions on Faldrun's Assassins
- Discipline: Keep Duty Options Vague When You Can
- Immortal: Xiur: Stabbed by Doran
- Intelligence: Arrive Early to Survey the Battle Zone
- Logistics: Oscillus' Cold Weather Will Help Hide Auakari Body Heat
- Psychology: Rationalizing Staying out of the Doran/Xiur Incident
- Tactics: Claiming to Have Seen Aukari Assassin
No Loot, Loss, Injuries or Devotion
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Comments:
I liked your rationalizing to stay back at the portal. Your tactic of using the attack on Xiur to create animosity toward the absent Faldrun was well conceived, and well written.
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NOTH:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Blunt Weapons (Mace): Increased height for improved swing
- Blunt Weapons (Mace): Swinging can leave you open
- Detection: Piercing the fog of war
- Detection: Screams have different types
- Endurance: Aiming whilst injured
- Endurance: Biting Cold
- Endurance: When everything hurts, it’s hard to take stock
- Investigation: Putting together information to draw the most reasonable conclusion
- Ranged Combat (Bow): Harder to aim when injured
- Ranged Combat (Bow): Hold close to your cheek
- Running: Running in snow
- Running: Running whilst injured
- Tactics: Considering each individuals’ worth in battle
- Tactics: Never allow the enemy to regroup
- Tactics: Sometimes, it’s such a good tactic, it works twice.
- Unarmed Combat: Talons to the face.
- Unarmed Combat: Twisting and popping limbs
No Loot, Loss or Devotion
Nothing to speak of
Injuries:
Injured side – raking wound from shadow beast – it’s a nasty owie. 10 days
Fame: +10
Event participation
Comments:
Noth was a bit of a “Dark Knight” in this one. I loved reading his thought processes and some of the ways in which he killed the Naerrik were just…. icky. Love reading your work which was, as always, beautifully written.
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JACHIEL:
Rewards:
- Story: +5/10
- Collaboration: +3/5 (2 posts)
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Bladed Combat (Gladius): Draw and slice
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Endurance: Working in less than ideal conditions.
- Medicine: Pressure on a wound must be consistent
- Medicine: The patient needs to be still
- Psychology: Battle instincts
- Strength: Carrying bodies
- Surgery: Assisting in surgical procedures.
- Tactics: Be where you can be the most use
No Loot, Loss or Injuries
Nothing to speak of
Fame: +10
Event participation
Devotion:
Qylios' blessing - "Celarion" (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Jachiel is such a good character! He is played appropriately, to his skill level and he is just an ex-soldier doing his best to do his best. Lovely writing, great characterisation. Shame you only got two posts before the medical tent, but great posts, both.
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VINCENT:
Rewards:
- Story: +10/10
- Collaboration: +5/5
- Structure: +5/5
These points can NOT be used for magic.
Knowledges:
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Advanced slashing maneuvers
- Bladed Combat (Sword): Precision strikes
- Detection: Identifying friend and foe
- Discipline: Ignoring emotions in battle
- Discipline: Keeping a promise to a loved one can be a strong motivator
- Discipline: Using emotions in battle
- Endurance: A brief respite should be utilised fully
- Endurance: Biting cold
- Ilaren: A little bit like Sabine
- Ilaren: Bit of a temper.
- Immortal: Lisirra: Her Giant Insect Form
- Leadership: Direct and to the point is good.
- Leadership: Remind them why
- Leadership: Taunt the enemy to inspire allies
- Mortalborn: Rhonwen
- Mortalborn: Rhonwen: Believes you love Sabine.
- Shield Combat: Charge into a group as a precursor to combat.
- Tactics: Holding the line
- Tactics: Recognising when you have been tricked
- Tactics: When all else fails, there might always be a miracle.
- Tactics: When to go to an ally’s aid
- Taithir: Enduring Scales
- Taithir: Honor’s Shield
- Taithir: Inspire
- Unarmed Combat: Front kick
No Loot or Loss
Nothing to speak of
Injuries
Injured arm + all over lacerations
Fame: +25
+10 Event participation
+10 Fighting the Sessfiend beast
+5 other good deeds
Devotion:
+19 Ethelynda
Extra Qylios devotion - Blessing (+10 devotion)
Comments:
Oh, the knight in shining armour on the battlefield, fighting to get home and tell her that he loves her! The romantic in me is delighted. Awesome writing and a really clear portrayal of a heroic character. Well done!