Tastes like Victory

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Kalortah was carrying a new kind of sword. While he enjoyed his saber well enough, it left him vulnerable when passing by on the wing to deliver a flying slice. He wanted a more defensive, dominating and most importantly, something that kept as much distance between him and the shit-smelling Yari that challenged him as possible. He'd settled on a saber, crafted by one of the smith acolyte apprentices in Aeva's temple. It set him back a bit, but he thought he could manage.

He wore his simple black training leathers today, with a heavy linen, gray scarf wrapping his neck. The sword he held aloft, in his right hand, his left foot stood behind the right at shoulder width. Thus, he began fencing with an imaginary opponent.

He was training in a very secluded portion of the Ghost Burho, not far from the Shield Gate and the Burhos surrounding it. The ghosts didn't bug him all that often, and besides he was used to far scarier displays than most of them could conjure up. There were so many ghosts in Yaralon anyway. To the point where most of them had given up trying to spook the indomitable Yari.

However, there were a few who could spot a newcomer a mile away. Kalortah had tried to fit in as well as he could, but anyone could see by the scarcity of scars, that he wasn't long in Yaralon. And he wasn't. He'd only arrived about fifty days prior, and then barely arrived with his hide intact.

Flight was a boon, but there were dangers as much in the air as on the ground in this land. And those dangers that ruled the skies did so with an iron talon.

Kalortah sparred against his shadow, thrusting once and twice, testing his arm strength with the saber.

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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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The veteran eyes of Yaralon may be able to spot newcomers with ease but there is very little difference in naivete between fresh meat and slight-less-fresh meat. Victory was part of the latter, barely a babe to the ways of Yaralon at least in the minds of the local.

Barely two cycles in the jewel of the South, the young Sev'ryn was carving out a life as well as she could for herself. The constant danger, the constant need to cling to reserved of adrenaline 'just in case' was causing her to grow in both skill and awareness at an alarming rate. But oh my did she still have miles to go before she could think about resting on any part of it. Stranger in a strange land was apt, yet, the Yari people and their culture felt oddly natural.

The way they clung to traditions, even the ones that had felt outdated or archaic in the face of more modern solutions. Still, this was a land that adopted the people that braved The Run. Gave them a chance. Bring your individuality but respect what you find. She liked that; it was a simple premise very much in line with the Sev'ryn ways, insofar as she could remember them. Besides, the rate at which people forged, broke, and then reforged relationships over this system of duels was nothing short of fascinating to an outside. They'd make for a hell of a story.

Idly carrying a basket of fresh-picked herbs, Victory was returning to the Shield Gate to pay her tax from her latest voyage beyond the walls. Despite the sun being up in the afternoon sun, the tall buildings and cramped, narrow passages of the Ghost Burho cast long shadows on their cobbled paths. Victory, basket in hand, slowly weaved between courtyards, clearings, and apartments as she journeyed from her shack at a tourist's pace.

Up ahead, the tell-tale sounds of a spar or a duel echoed off the stucco and brick and into her ears but things sounded one sided? No clanking of steel, no screams of pain. Perhaps a student, perhaps a spar? She further slowed her steps and came to a stop as she tried to hone in on the ruckus, tilting her ear like some hound straining to source the sound. It wasn't far off, probably just the next courtyard over?

Rounding the last visual barrier, the big shouldered buildings that blocked out the sun gave way and parked to a sunny if not slightly dirty, comparably very open courtyard. There, gleaming in the sun, the dove's tail white plume of a regal Avriel thrusted forward against an unseen opponent with their rapier in hand. A firm, rigid back and wide stance drew her eyes up to the vibrant display which was a shame because the footwork involved to move such a lithe and graceful creature must be surely be worth note.

Not wanting to interrupt the fighter's focus, she leaned against a nearby stone banister and rested her basket of herbs on its railing. Surely, the sharp red eyes of this Avriel were perceptive enough to notice the lone onlooker taking in the spectacle of his thrust progressions.
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Delroth! His muscles didn't cease to burn. Although the blade of a saber was slender, it's length and the comparatively oppressive weight of its hilt was heavy in the hand. He had to admit to some degree of vanity with his new choice of weapon. While it might not be ideal for his usual method of self defense, of flying away or carrying ground-walkers and then dropping them, it was a pretty sword. The way the wires of the swept hilt wrapped around the hand appealed to him.

He lowered his arm, giving it a few moments of rest, before testing his speed at bringing the tip up to his shadow opponent's throat. Once the motion concluded, he tried different angles from the same starting point of the low-guard. Whether to deflect a blade while attacking their open area at the same time.

Though his muscles continued to burn, he advanced nonetheless. Pairing those simultaneous parries and thrusts with movement of the feet.

All of a moment, he thought he heard or saw a slight change in the air. As if someone was occupying his circle. At first he suspected ghosts, and looked at the air ahead of him, but nothing materialized. When he turned around to regain his ground, only then did he notice the Sev'ryn woman watching him, her shoulder leaning against the wall, and a basket on the base of the stone wall of Yaralon.

He started for a moment, but soon regained his composure, careful to slide his sword into its sheath, and then approached impassively. "How long have you been there?" He walked about a few feet from her, looking from the herbs to her, and trying to see if she was unarmed. "Have you come out to play, little Sev'ryn?" 'Little' being a bit ironic, with Kalortah standing a fair five inches shorter than her. But he always included his wingspan as part of his size.


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Milian Le Moigne
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Time of Day/Night: Morning
Weapons: Average+ Steel Saber
Armor: T4 Blood Metal
Injuries: None
Illness: Maybe a bit exhausted
Ether Exhaustion: Spark dormant




 ! Message from: Kalortah
Hey Victory, if you return and feel like continuing at some point, feel free to let me know. I'm gonna start wrapping this collab up as abandoned, otherwise. Hope to see you around sometime in the future :)
The Sev'ryn seemed to retreat from the scene from then, whether their departure by physical or more postural. Kalortah hadn't realized that his ability to intimidate a potential challenger had advanced to such a state. This was a new power he would have to consider carefully, lest it be misused.

So, heaving a shrug to himself as the Sev'ryn excused herself, Kal turned back toward his shadow, to take note of its movements in tandem with his own. He took up a new stance, where he hung the blade of his saber against his shoulders, just in front of his wings. He tested his arm then, bringing it forward in a curving arc in line with his shoulder. It took some effort at first to avoid slicing his wings off where the steel caught on the valance wings he was wearing.

He was up for the challenge, however. He began singing a tune as he practiced his swordsmanship, his tone modulating high then low, testing his range as he tested the strength of his sword arm against the weight of the weapon. The song wasn't anything special, just a generic battle hymn he'd learned from his father.

"We Avriel are strong and swift,
On iron wings, with razor talons."


He tested his blade against the air, timing it (as if he needed to) with the movement of his shadow on the ground. He could imagine an opponent countering his moves with footwork to take themselves out of range while maintaining capability of striking.

"With razor swords we fear not foe,
But take to the sky to herald doom."


He buffeted his wings against the air, unfolding them and then striking forward with the valance protected wing tip.

His wings opened, he took to the air, swiping with his saber to see how swiftly and strongly he could move it while on the air. As he followed through with each strike, his wings took him backward, creaking with the cobalt-forged valance scales.

"I will not fall before a lowborn slave,
But make them my own, through guile to reign."


The opponent he was imagining fighting against, rushed him as he flew backward on the wind. At that point, Kalortah curled his saber into a backward grip, and grappled the opponent, then flew straight upward and with a single release let go of the opponent. That would've sent them to break their neck on the ground, under most circumstances, unless the person in question was skilled in breaking their fall.

As a follow up maneuver, Kalortah dropped to the ground himself, gliding vertically with his saber held in reverse to stab downward. The blade was intended to pierce the heart of his fallen foe, who was intended to die from the fall, but when fighting a crafty ground-walker, one couldn't be too careful.

Kalortah rose from a kneeling position, switching his grip on the saber to an upward guard. He then rested the blade back against his shoulders once more, and thought about what exercises to move through next.

He'd done enough of the swordplay for a day. Now perhaps it was time to fly.

With a powerful buffet of his armored wings, he lifted himself directly into the air, and caught a gust that he spotted coming from above. The gust gave him the boost he needed to pick up more air, and find a way over the low rooves of the series of Yaralon huts that surrounded.

Yaralon was not a high-rising city. It was spread out, over an immense area, building wide rather than tall. This suited the city, Kalortah thought as he flew along. His eyes fell on the people below, wondering what menial tasks occupied their time.

Suddenly, Kal was tackled out of his flight path by a immense raptor. The monstrous eagle screed and tore with its beak against Kal's breastplate, thankfully it was equal to the task of protecting his vitals. He sheathed his saber quickly, and grappled with the great bird in midair.

They flew, end over end, in a spiral going down toward the ground. Kalortah was more concerned with getting this thing off of him, rather than righting himself for a drop to the ground, at least for the moment.

His gauntleted hands and sabatoned feet kicked and punched, clawed and wrung the bird. He was able to get a grip on the bird's neck, which he threw to the side, allowing him a moment to right himself on the air. It was a challenge with all the weight he was bearing while on the wing, but he was able to fix his trajectory, or at least reverse it from it's deadfall to the ground.

The bird he saw coming at him again, this time from below. Kalortah spun on his wings, doing a flipping kick with his armored foot against it's beak.

The creature seemed to call in pain, and then gave up, flying off to find easier prey.

Relieved that he wouldn't have to destroy one of Delroth's creatures, Kalortah slowly glided to the ground, back around where his rented dwelling could be found. He landed about a break's walk from home. After figuring out his position, he checked the damage to his self, and made his way home.
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Name: KALORTAH

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:
Blades (Saber): Rest the blade against one's shoulder.
Blades (Saber): Experiment with different grips.
Singing: Singing while fighting.
Singing: Song: Avriel are Strong: A simple battle hymn
Meditation: Shadow Sparring.
Flying: Flying while armored.
Unarmed Combat (Glie-Av Orien): Wing buffet with valance.
Unarmed Combat (Glie-Av Orien): Tossing your opponent across the sky to gain an advantage.

Renown: Nada, since you weren't really seen...

Injuries: A few scratches about the chest and neck, nothing serious, healed up within 5-10 trials

Notes:
Always a bugger when your collab vanishes, isn't it? But my kudos to you for persevering, and salvaging a thread for the points and knowledge. That eagle came out of fucking nowhere, but it was still fun and surprising, and you handled it realistically enough. Fine work, mate. Keep on flappin'.

If you have any questions, comments or concerns in regards to this review, feel free to PM.
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