Vengenance is hers [mature] (Graded)

[Pig Boy]

Coroth

Points

15/15 these points may be used for defiance magic

Knowledge

Interrogation: they need a tongue to tell what they know
Magic-defiance- The air will not always help you with your aim
Magic-defiance - Use the air to hover longer.
Combat -Ranged-bow - make a firmer connection with the air to make a better shot
Combat - Ranged - bow - stay out of range of crossbows from above and your shots will be the lethal ones
Combat -Ranged - bow - Shooting from the skies adds velocity to ones shots
Tactics - take out the ground archers before the melee ones.
Tactics - take out ground units with stones and fallen tree parts.
Intimidation - If your not sure to kill the person, scare him off with a few missed arrows.
Tactics - Get to your enemies before they reach shelter.

Loot/losses

n/a

Injuries/Conditions

n/a

Wealth

n/a

Renown

10 for saving a village

Abra

Points

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Knowledge

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Loot/losses

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Injuries/Conditions

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Wealth

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Renown

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Comments: I enjoyed this thread, it was a pretty thrilling pitched battle in the athart wilderness. Coroth, your skill-play here was very true to your levels, and you werent' afraid to miss here and there with the bow. Especially as that's bound to be hard to do on the wing at novice.

Abra, you overplayed some skills here. The first one I noticed being the mount skill. As a 10 novice you wouldn't be making better time than expected when giving chase to experienced riders. You'd be lagging behind and at least going at the default rate of travel. So this will need to be edited along with the rest of the threads we identify for you to fix up. All in good time.

Otherwise this was some fairly good writing.