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Re: [Yaralon Harbor] Alliances and Consequences

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I remember this one! It has been fun reading the threads where Kasoria is working with the delegation and this was another great one. I enjoyed that the entirety of the thread wasn't just the meeting with the Crescent Empress but a good deal more as well. You always do a great job painting the world around Kasoria and this thread was not an exception to that. The build up to the attack had the perfect amount of tension and the fight itself was great to read. Lastly, as always, you do a great job of playing the NPCs in the delegation. You make them seem like fully realized characters and not just bodies for the fire.

Great writing and as always, enjoy the rewards!

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