[Winter Reach] Preparation pt. I

8th of Cylus 722

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[Winter Reach] Preparation pt. I


8th of Cylus 722

There was an urgency to the task ahead of Lorogh. He needed to improve upon the design of the crossbow, specifically his heavy crossbow, and also its spanner mechanism. At present, his current crossbow was adequate, but far from perfect. The Cadouri was always trying to make things work better, to make them efficient, and to make them go. Going was a very important virtue for him. Especially for items with parts that were meant to move and interact with each other in a precise way. He thought he had a way of integrating a lever for a draw that made it easier and more reliable to draw the bowstring. He had the formulae worked out, for the alchemical bits, the diagrams for the replaceable metal bits, and the lumber for crafting the actual stave and stock of the crossbow. There was also a generous amount of bamboo, properly dried and fire--hardened for a strong draw weight.

All of these materials he knew or rather felt he'd need, but for now, it was all theoretical in the blueprint. He'd yet to secure the metal parts from his smith friend a few doors down.

In many ways, Lorogh enjoyed the winter, particularly the lull of Cylus. It always gave him time and opportunity away from work in order to improve upon his designs and blueprints. The ritualistic process of iteration and improvement after having tested his gadgets was an important part of his process. While smaller graduations and steps were had during the regular year, the real gargantuan leaps of innovation happened during the winter months. And for this, Lorogh gave silent thanks to Saoire and Ziell. Saoire for giving him life always, and Ziell for giving them winter, a time of lack, certainly, but also needed down-time to recover and huddle with the people who were important.

Right now, however, all that was important to Lorogh, were his pen and parchment, as he drew the plans for the threaded screws he'd need, the trigger, and the seating for the bow limb. These were the metal parts he'd need, and he would outsource them to his acquaintance, who did an adequate enough job at smithing. At some point, Lorogh had it in mind to learn himself and acquire his own foundry and forge, but at present he was content to leave that work to someone more competent.

All of this considered, he put pen to parchment, and began drawing out the plans for how the crossbow design would take shape. Beneath the parchment, he had a sheet of graphite that would make a hard copy beneath it. He not only wanted his own hard copy of the blueprint, but the copy would also be going to the one he'd design the crossbow for. All this, to make it easier for them to replace parts should they fall off or become damaged. Eventually, Lorogh had ambitions to create a process for unified replaceable parts. But such an ideal required that his designs be infallible. This was what drove him to continue improving and iterating on his older models, and what made his hands sore with effort as he drew newer and newer designs that improved on perceived and realized shortcomings in his work.

There was always room for improvement.
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Re: [Winter Reach] The Preparation pt. I

For instance, the differences between a simple crossbow and that of a siege-grade ballista or ship-mounted one weren't all that striking. While there were certain things that separated them, namely the mechanism that allowed a ballista's drawstring to get pulled back, in order to load another ballista bolt. The ballista required a mechanical crank that required enough power that it could only be drawn back through mechanical pulleys and levers. Given his experience with ballistas, it was only a given that he'd take away some of those lessons and perhaps consider applying them to more powerful crossbows.

He did a few doodles on his parchment, sticking out his tongue the side of his mouth as he twisted his point of view, trying to make sure his angles and lines were as exact, measured, and to scale as possible. There was little room for error. In fact, when it came to mechanical matters, you were either correct or not. There was no room for error, in fact.

All that considered, Lorogh was never one to let a pathway into error deter him from improving upon a design and correcting his mechanical flaws. This was all part and parcel of iteration and improvement. He almost relished the idea of failure, so long as it didn't result in too much physical harm or loss. It was just another lesson to learn.

After drawing up his plans for the widgets and metal bits he'd need, he began working on the wooden models of those pieces. His smith friend wasn't great at reading blueprints, and so Lorogh thought to take it easy on him by giving him wooden copies that were to scale. These, he carved out carefully, making sure they fit into the prototype crossbow stave he had on hand for these sessions.

He drilled holes where they were necessary, keeping the angles exact and taking away no more material than he needed. Of course, they weren't always precise, and this sometimes led to consternation as he had to return to the blacksmith to correct the fit on the prototype.

Within a few breaks, he had the pieces of the puzzle that he'd need, to show to his colleague. This done, he placed them in a neat satchel, which he threw over his shoulder. He buttoned up his navy long coat, with the golden buttons, smoothing out the fine merwool fabric as he stepped out of doors, taking up the lantern hanging from his doorway.

This done, he made his way down to the blacksmith. Lyle was a decent smith, just decent enough to match and serve for Lorogh's mechanical designs, such as they were. Not for the first time, Lorogh considered that he would want to learn some foundry and smithing himself if he was to take his mechanical constructions to their full potential. With a bit of know-how, he could make his own full-metal crossbow limbs, increasing the draw-power substantially. As it was, he wasn't sure if Lyle had the facilities to create the grade of steel Lorogh would need, so bamboo was a good option at the moment for the limb.

A few bits after he began his walk, he came to Lyle's workshop, and knocked on the door, waiting politely for an answer.
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Re: [Winter Reach] The Preparation pt. I

Soon enough, not long at all, Lorogh was let in by Lyle himself, who answered the door with a kindly smile to the Cadouri engineer. "Good t'see ya Lorogh. Come on in, you have another prototype for me? Or need replacement parts?"

Lorogh smiled up at his friend and padded over the snow-covered threshold into his workshop. The place smelled of a variety of scents. Many people found the scents of the forge distasteful, but to Lorogh they smelled like progress and invention!

"Aye, a new prototype, and new parts to match it. You can do as you will with the old one that I lent you." Lorogh said, with a chuckle. He often made it a habit of letting the smith keep his prototype crossbow frame for reference when he needed parts replaced on his crossbows. He did the same for other inventions. He would've given the man the blueprints entirely, but Lyle insisted that he could scarcely read them.

So they got right to business, as Lyle had his own work to be doing in the anticipation of Ashan, and not a lot left over for Lorogh. The Cadouri could understand and respect that. He intended to make it up fully to Lyle when he had more spare time to come up with new gizmos that he might find useful or amusing.

Lyle took the small wooden parts that Lorogh granted him, staring through the holes drilled into this wooden panel, checking the dimensions of that screw, that sorta thing. Eventually, Lorogh presumed, the man seemed to have a good sense of their dimensions, or else was confident that he could replicate what Lorogh was looking for in those wooden models, smithed in steel.

But he still had to ask, "Do you think you can recreate those parts?" Lorogh tilted his head. "I know some of them may seem like they don't make sense, but I can assure you I have other parts that I'll be adding to the design from wood. If you're sure you don't want to look at my blueprints..."

Lyle shook his head vehemently, "No, not necessary. I can make these easily in an afternoon. I'll have them delivered to your cabin tomorrow."

Having come to an agreement, Lorogh smiled, handing the man the needed nels for his work, then went off, leaving the prototypes and models with Lyle as he shuffled off toward his own workshop.
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Re: [Winter Reach] Preparation pt. I

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Knowledge:
Engineering: Creating a blueprint in order to maintain a contraption's parameters and construction standards.
Engineering: Planning your designs is essential beforehand, in order to simplify construction.
Engineering: Drawing the blueprints for individual parts, so that their dimensions will remain uniform.
Engineering: Differences in the mechanics of a ballista can inform the construction of a stronger crossbow.
Engineering: Having a source of replaceable parts for your blueprints is vital to repair of your contraptions.
Woodworking: Creating bits and pieces to model how the metal version of an object should be shaped.

Loot: Small metal bits and stuff for the construction of a crossbow. And an improved crossbow blueprint drawn.
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Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: I love how you described Lorogh’s desire to always try to make things work better. You didn’t only have him work on his crossbow, you also described his work ethic and his plans for the future which is something that I find great, and which made this solo very enjoyable to read!

Creating unified replaceable parts sounds like a great business idea in my opinion!

I don’t know much about engineering or crossbows, I have to admit, but I found the description of Lorogh drawing up his plans and working on his models very easy to understand, nevertheless. And what more, I loved the scene where he stuck out his tongue when he doodled.

Such details can add a lot to a thread in my opinion!

With that being said, I look forward to reading more about your Cadouri engineer!

Enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: I might have added “Art” to the list of skills used. That probably plays a part when it comes to drawing plans as well.
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