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Devin
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Florence

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Vhalar 120, Arc 721

It was getting colder and colder, and soon, most outdoor activities would be a thing of the past, and the number of ships that would travel to the smaller islands would decrease greatly. On Faldrass, it wasn’t quite as cold as it was in the rest of Scalvoris – Devin didn’t know if it was due to the large amounts of orange sand, or if some other sort of natural phenomenon was responsible – but even here, the young man could feel it.

This would likely be one of the last times when he would practice in the garden since he was not a masochist and didn’t want to catch a cold either. He’d had (a moderate case of) the flu once; it was an experience that he didn’t want to repeat. He had felt miserable and unattractive.

Armed with Mistress Alina’s guide to sword fighting and his wooden practice bastard sword, he walked past trees and flowerbeds until he had reached the spot where he had set up his training dummy a little earlier. It was a perfect spot in his opinion. He was pretty sure that the people that were in the Green Room could see him very well from there, and he wanted to be seen. He had gotten better at fighting with two-handed swords.

It was time to show off a little, at least to accidental spectators!

(He had come to the conclusion that he still needed to practice a little more before he showed off to an actual audience!)

Since he couldn’t warm up with a book and a sword in his hands, he placed both on a wooden bench where people sat and enjoyed the garden when the weather was nicer, and then the young man who was dressed in sufficiently warm clothes, including a Cavani’s Cloak, began to do various stretches. Warming up, he had learned over the course of time, didn’t only make you more flexible; it also helped prevent injuries, and he didn’t want to injure himself.

Injuries were ugly and unpleasant, just like the flu!

Since someone might look out of the window, he made sure to make a real effort. Once he was done, he leafed through Mistress Alina’s guide until he had reached the chapter that dealt with various attacks and made sure to read it thoroughly. From his time as a teacher at the university (He had had to teach classes in order to get his Charter.) he knew that you could learn something the wrong way, and that it could be hard to fix things in that case.

He wanted to prevent that!

He already knew what you had to do with your hands when you used a two-handed sword, so, he placed his dominant hand near the guard and the thumb of that hand near the flat of the blade, and then he was finally ready to go. He had already practiced thrusts before, but he moved his sword forward in a straight line towards his training dummy that he had named “Florence”, because that had been the first name that had come to his mind, anyway. He wanted to make sure that he never forgot how to execute a thrust with a two-handed sword again.

Regularly practicing everything was important!

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            • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
            • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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            Once he had practiced a sufficient number of thrusts – they had looked pretty good, at least to him, although he was of course not biased – Devin moved on to the next attack. He checked Mistress Alina’s guide again – he knew how to execute all kinds of attacks with one-handed swords, but using two-handed swords was just a little different – and then he moved on to the …

            … slice!

            He had no idea why the slice was called the slice and not the hack or the stab or something like that – it reminded him of slices of bread, with jam and such, which he decided he would eat once he was done with his training – but anyway, that was what he decided to practice next. Mistress Alina had written that you should place the edge of your sword against an exposed area of your opponent’s body, so he did just that. And then he …

            … pushed with force to cut.

            Devin didn’t like wooden practice swords particularly, despite the fact that you couldn’t injure yourself as easily with them, because they were ugly, but in that moment, he was glad that he had one. If he had used an actual sharp sword made of metal, poor Florence might have a hole now. While he was pretty good at giving his patients stiches, he didn’t know how to properly take care of an injured training dummy. Could you even use surgical thread?

            He furrowed his brow and pondered that most important question for a few moments before he shrugged his shoulders and sliced again, and again, eventually striking from a different angle and focusing hard on getting it just right because he still wasn’t particularly keen on learning it wrong.

            When hitting Florence who probably had the training dummy equivalent of bruises now started to feel a little less awkward, he moved on to the next attack.

            Florence was of course completely stationary, but he pretended that she was about to attack him anyway. He stepped slightly to the side before he brought his sword down hard on her fake hands. Mistress Alina had claimed that doing that would cause enough of a wound that your opponent would be unlikely to be able to hold their sword anymore.

            It would subsequently allow you to finish them quickly.

            Devin didn’t think that he wanted to cut into people’s hands, or cut them off, for that matter, unless it was a medically necessary amputation – it sounded mean and messy – but attacking Florence was actually kind of fun. He just wished that she wouldn’t look quite as …

            … following a sudden epiphany, he took his hat that had a pretty red feather on it off and put it on Florence instead.

            Now, he decided with a grin, she didn’t look quite as boring anymore!

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                      Having improved Florence’s appearance, Devin moved on to the third and final new attack of the trial, the strike that Mistress Alina had described in extreme detail. After he had reread that part of the chapter, he came to the conclusion that she was probably just really fond of strikes for some reason, because it didn’t sound that complicated to him. He had learned most of it before, when he had started to use one-handed swords. Mistress Alina warned her readers not to twist their sword in mid-swing for example, and she told them that the attack should come from the body and not just the shoulders.

                      He already knew that.

                      Nodding at Florence, he settled into his stance and executed a slightly diagonal, but mostly horizontal strike, with his arms extended. As he struck, he stepped forward with his right foot and finally transitioned to a guard. The individual parts of the attack were simply enough – but getting the timing right, Devin decided with a deep frown, was a bit of a challenge, especially when you had to make sure you were holding your sword correctly at the same time.

                      He briefly pondered the possibility of creating a magical glove that ensured that your fingers were always where they were supposed to be – he was a Mortalborn, so he could probably do all kinds of magical things – before he repeated the strike. He had remembered that there might be people watching, so, he would persevere and give his best.

                      He wanted everyone to see how hard-working he was!

                      Finally, he lowered his practice sword again, retrieved his hat from Florence’s head and plopped down on the bench in order to relax for a few moments. His arms had started to ache slightly from hitting Florence so much. He would, he decided, not only eat slices of bread with jam, strawberry jam, to be exact, he would also ask one of the servants to draw him a warm bath that would hopefully get rid of all of those weird muscle aches.

                      He disliked how his arms felt!

                      He had just packed his things and was heading back inside, when another thing occurred to him, or rather, occurred to him again. Soon, it would be too cold to practice in the garden. He didn’t want to stop practicing for an entire cycle though. He’d also told the employees of Smooglenuff Manor that he would teach them regularly so that they could defend themselves in case of a bandit attack or some sort of unpleasant catastrophe.

                      If he stopped teaching them for an entire cycle, they might forget what they had learned so far again, and he’d have to start from scratch. He really didn’t want to start from scratch though. Practicing inside was problematic though. There was often limited room, and there were pieces of furniture that could get in the way. He should, he realized, have thought about how he was going to organize those lessons in winter sooner.

                      Maybe …

                      “Miranda!” he greeted the head maid, a tiny mouse cadouri that was just supervising a group of people that were dusting off the paintings in the entrance hall, in a cheerful tone of voice. He had just had an idea that might actually work. There was one room that was big enough.

                      “I have a brief question for you, if you don’t mind!”

                      The cadouri turned around and curtsied before she asked, “Yes, Your Grace?”

                      “You know how I decided to train people in order to increase the Barony’s defensive capabilities?”
                      he began. When she nodded, he continued, “Training outside will soon become quite unpleasant, so, I was wondering if I could use the ballroom for my training sessions when we don’t have any balls or similar events.”

                      “I’ll be careful and make sure to always clean up afterwards”,
                      he added, in order to remove any doubts that she might have. He knew that he could just have issued an order, being a Baron and a leader and such, but he preferred asking people and being charming and personable.

                      He wanted his employees to actually have a say. Employees that had a bit of a say in how things were run were happy employees, and he wanted everybody to be happy all the time!

                      “Of course, Your Grace”, Miranda replied. “That’s actually a great idea. The ballroom is empty a lot of the time anyway. I don’t like not using a room for at least half the cycle!”

                      “Thank you so much, Miranda!”
                      Devin said and bowed in a somewhat dramatic manner, with a grin on his face, before he bade her farewell and headed up the stairs to his private quarters. He would take a bath first, and then he would eat, and he was really looking forward to being able to swing his sword in an overwhelmingly luxurious environment.

                      He should have done that sooner!

                      As he looked for an outfit to wear after the bath (He loved changing his clothes frequently!), he wondered if he should have taken Florence inside with him. She couldn’t feel anything, being a training dummy, so it would probably be fine if she stayed outside for another while, he decided.

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                                • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
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                                Experience: +10 xp

                                Knowledge:

                                Blades (Two-Handed) x3
                                Endurance: Having sore arms after practicing with a sword
                                Leadership: Don’t just issue an order, let people have a say!
                                Logistics: The logistics of combat training in winter

                                Skillplay: Appropriate to level

                                Loot: None.
                                Injuries/Overstepping: None.
                                Renown: None. By this time, Devin’s antics are familiar to the Smooglestaff
                                Wealth Points: None.
                                Collaboration: no
                                Magic Experience?: No.

                                Comments:

                                I was curious to find out who or what “Florence” was, and was amused that it was the name Devin gave his training dummy. The whole process of Devin imagining what Florence would be going through if it weren’t a dummy made the thread that much more entertaining. I was a little surprised that Devin put his nice hat on the training dummy. Clothing can get hurt that way!

                                Acknowledging the season and changing weather is also a nice touch, making the thread feel more grounded in a world that moves along and doesn’t simply await the PC’s convenience.

                                It sounds like Devin is getting better at two-handed sword. Hopefully he’ll be ready for Florence the next time they meet in combat.

                                Consequence The Smooglestaff have noted Devin’s penchant for decorating even the most mundane things. Without his asking, they will start dressing up Florence in a variety of outfits for training sessions: one trial Florence is in pirate get-up, another in a sexy black maid outfit complete with feather duster, or a chef’s jacket and toque. Feel free to narrate what the staff comes up with in future threads!

                                Enjoy your rewards!
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