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Saun 12, Arc 720

On the 12th of Saun, Devin Thorn, thief, conman extraordinaire and not entirely clueless incredibly skilled and experienced Becomer entered the classroom, dressed in a somewhat eccentric way, as always, this time in one of his beloved military jackets, in black and purple.

He stopped in front of the professor’s desk for a moment, furrowing his brow a little at what seemed to be a plaster model of a human heart, complete with blood vessels and such, before he walked past several rows of desks until he had reached the center of the room and plopped down on the empty chair that was next to a young red-haired woman’s.

“Hello, Magdalene”, he said brightly to the girl that he had first met during a dissection course the season before and began to unpack his fancy black leather messenger bag. His notebook that did not only contain notes but also all kinds of really bad caricatures that he draw when he was bored, a pencil case, his lunchbox and a bottle that was labelled “stomach medicine”, but really contained brandy, landed on the desk in quick succession.

“I suffer from heartburn”, he explained upon noticing the questioning look on his classmate’s face, keeping an absolutely straight face and proceeded to take a swig. That he suffered from heartburn was actually not a complete lie. He usually had a pretty strong stomach, but telling the future made him sick (which was why he didn't like that ability a lot; he could come up with better stories without it anyway).

Magdalene didn’t react to that statement, but simply looked at him for a moment, furrowing he brow slightly, before she remarked, “I used to think that you were absolutely crazy, especially for a politician and priest and such, but then I heard about the councilor who floats, Tio or something like that. I guess that you are normal compared to him; and besides, you actually know something about medicine.”

She had meant that as a compliment – or something almost like a compliment – but Devin pouted, nevertheless.

“What?” Magdalene asked.

“You called me normal”, Devin complained and pouted some more.

“Being normal is a good thing”,
she pointed out.

“Not in my opinion”, Devin retorted. “Most people are normal. I don’t want to be like most people.”

“You are weird”, Magdalene decided in a very matter-of-fact tone of voice.

“Thank you”, Devin remarked, smiling all over his face and bowed somewhat theatrically, just as Professor Argus Hamilton-Smith walked into the room.

The look on the young Mortalborn’s face instantly darkened.

Why was he here?

Where was the professor that normally taught the cardiology course?

“What’s up with you and Professor Hamilton-Smith, by the way?” Magdalene who had noticed the instant change in Devin’s mood wanted to know. “He’s such a nice teacher!”

Devin didn’t reply, but only muttered something under his breath. When he had first met Argus Hamilton-Smith, he had actually agreed that he was a nice teacher (and he had had a huge crush on him on top of it), but then he had made him grade a lot of essays for supposedly misbehaving in class.

Since then, he hated him.

Argus Hamilton-Smith always seemed like such a helpful person, and he had even given him a few compliments after he realized that he really was a doctor and not a bad one either, but he would not forget that trial anytime soon!

He would bear that grudge forever!

Last edited by Devin on Thu Oct 15, 2020 8:13 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 599

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  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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“Your usual professor is unfortunately sick”, Argus Hamilton, a rich, young, handsome and very talented doctor told Devin and his classmates. “He asked me to cover for him to-trial, and I thought that we would do something that is a bit more on the practical side for a change. We will therefore practice how to listen to someone's heartbeat which is an important skill for a doctor to have. I want you to work in pairs.”

“But not with your usual partners”,
he added upon noticing how Magdalene looked at Devin expectantly (she had made a habit of partnering up with him when her friends were not available – she didn’t share all of her classes with them). “I want you to work with someone else this time. Find someone, please. I can also choose a partner for you”, he offered. He sounded very friendly – but Devin knew that he would get stuck with the ugliest person in class if he let the professor choose his partner. He didn’t trust him at all!

He looked around, wondering if he should just insist that the professor was wrong and that he had definitely never worked with Magdalene before (he was quite a masterful liar, after al). It was just then that he noticed that the redhead had already found herself a new partner though. He let out a sigh before he positioned himself in front of a young Eidisi man named Hadrian and smiled brilliantly at him. He had completely white eyes which was something that he found rather fascinating. He did in fact have a totem with such eyes!

“Let’s listen to each other’s heartbeats”, Devin told Hadrian once Professor Hamilton-Smith had explained how the process worked. “I can go first since I already have some practical experience as a doctor”, he added because he was in a fairly generous mood that trial, despite everything, and grinned at him. Hadrian looked a little unsure (or rather very unsure) at first – Devin was weird and eccentric and much too enthusiastic for his taste, and what more, he was a celebrity and such which was a bit intimidating, to be honest – but then he nodded.

Devin grinned, told him to lift his shirt and placed his ear on the left side of his chest in order to listen – and listen some more, furrowing his brow in confusion as he did so before he changed his position slightly because he wanted to be absolutely sure that he hadn’t just made some sort of mistake in the face of something of that magnitude. A bit later, after several more attempts, he came to the conclusion,

“Hadrian, you don’t have a heartbeat.”

Last edited by Devin on Thu Oct 15, 2020 8:13 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 455

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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Upon hearing those words, a couple of Devin’s and Hadrian’s classmates immediately stopped practicing and stared at the two young men. Hadrian stared back at them with a mixture of confusion and unease and blinked a couple of times before he tentatively I asked,

“I don’t have a heartbeat?”

“You don’t have a heartbeat”,
Devin confirmed, trying his best to sound like the competent doctor that he actually was, more or less. He usually loved to prank people, but this was a serious matter. “There’s nothing there. At all. Wait a moment”, he added as something just occurred to him. Without further ado, he grabbed the Eidisi’s wrist.

“You do seem to have a pulse though”, he observed, looking just as confused as the poor Eidisi for a moment. “That means that you can’t be a zombie. Or a thrall. Or whatever they are called. Undead don’t have a heartbeat or a pulse, at least as far as I know.”

Truth to be told, Devin was a bit disappointed about that because he had momentarily thought that he had discovered the only undead in Idalos that was actually capable of independent thought (he wasn’t aware of the existence of more advanced kind of undead) – and intelligent enough to attend university and get a Charter in Medicine on top of it.

A moment later, he switched back to doctor mode though and thought about possible conditions that could lead to someone having a pulse, but no heartbeat.

He was just about to tell Hadrian what he thought might be the case when Professor Hamilton-Smith who had noticed the commotion walked over to them and demanded to know what exactly was going on.

Last edited by Devin on Thu Oct 15, 2020 8:09 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 291

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  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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“Devin insisted that I don’t have a heartbeat, sir”, Hadrian informed the professor and looked up at him. He still seemed kind of confused, and maybe a tiny bit worried because he wasn’t sure what exactly was going on right now. “Maybe I don’t have a heart at all?” he wondered (which was probably a rather illogical thing to ask, in hindsight).

“Doctor Thorn, would you please let me take a look?” Professor Hamilton-Smith asked. Devin did so, with a hint of reluctance and only because he didn’t seem to have much of a choice (unless he wanted to grade more bad essays, he supposed).

He was pretty sure that he hadn’t done anything wrong though. He had repeated the process several times.

He was willing to concede that he might not be able to figure out if there was something wrong with someone's heart just by listening, for example, but anybody that wasn’t deaf or extremely hard of hearing could tell if someone didn’t have a heartbeat at all in his opinion!

“It’s easy to make a mistake and overlook things”, the professor pointed out in a very friendly and helpful tone of voice. He gave Hadrian a sign to lift his shirt once more before he positioned his ear on the left side of his chest.

A moment later, he furrowed his brow – before he abruptly turned to the right side of Hadrian’s chest. The Eidisi was trembling slightly and looking obviously nervous now.

“There is indeed no heartbeat on the left side of Hadrian’s chest”, he remarked to Devin and his classmates all of whom were watching them rather than practicing by now because this was much more interesting. “It seems as if we are dealing with a case of situs inversus, a rare condition where major organs are mirrored from their normal positions.”

“My apologies, Doctor Thorn”,
he added to the Mortalborn who couldn’t help but look a little smug. “I had not expected to encounter something like that in this class here.”

“The majority of people with situs inversus lead completely normal and healthy lives”,
he continued, turning to Hadrian, in order to calm the Eidisi who looked even unhappier now down and put his fears to rest. “You do not have any reason to worry. If you have any questions about this, let me know, please. We can go to my office after class”, he offered as the Eidisi might prefer to talk about that surprise diagnosis in private.

Hadrian shook his head though. He was a little uncomfortable with all the attention that he was getting (he wasn’t used to people staring at him like that), but he didn’t want to wait.

He wanted to know what was going on right now!

That was how a lesson on listening to someone's heart turned into an impromptu lesson on the condition known as situs inversus (with Devin looking at Hadrian with a mixture of admiration and envy because your heart being on the right side of your chest instead of on the left side was pretty awesome in his opinion – he didn’t have that!).

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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Devin

Experience: 10 no magic xp

Knowledge:

Discipline x1
Deception x1
Detection x1
Medicine x3

Renown: 5 for making a small discovery during class.

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: One of the other students in Devin's class slipped a note into Devin's pack with a heart drawn onto it. Whether a prank or a sneaky way of flirting, what could it mean? Did they find it amusing that he couldn't find Hadrian's heart? Did they want a date? What was that about?! He opens it up later to see a note written on it.

Comments: This was a hilarious thread, all told. Devin going straight from not hearing a heartbeat to thinking Hadrian might be undead was pretty hilarious. But then he detected his pulse, and determined that he was in fact, alive.

All around a great thread with a lot of comedic value. I always admire how, even when Devin is so skilled at what he does, you manage to put him believably on the backfoot at times. It makes for an interesting read.

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