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90th of Zi'da 719

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Eliza Soule
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One Last Dance


The 90th Trial of Zi'da in the Arc 719

It was late morning when Eliza arrived at the house on the outskirts of Scalvoris Town. She’d been there the trial before; but had remained outside the locked, wrought iron fence that kept the rest of the world at arm’s length. The structure sat on a rise, surrounded by what might have been its well kept and luxurious grounds in their heyday. It's position on top of that hill would have provided the home’s occupants with an impressive view of the landscape in every direction.

To call it simply a house, however, was to do it an injustice. A whale might well have been a minnow if that was the case. Instead, three stories high and sprawling in every direction, it might be considered to have surpassed mansion status and was halfway to palatial. But its glory trials were behind it now. From the looks of it, by a handful of decades; and it was exactly that which had caused Eliza to stop along the way to admire it.

From Eliza’s unique perspective, the home was so old that it might have been occupied by six, even seven generations over its lifetime. Be they all from one family who built it, or no. Crafted from solid, native stone with grand pillars at its entrance that had been carved, each in their entirety, from a single tree, it must have been something to see, once, when it was better cared for. Now, the naturally golden stone was stained with soot, and the paint on the pillars and window frames was chipping and curling away. If it wasn’t for the workmanship that had gone into its construction, a good stiff Cylus wind might have toppled or carried it away by now.

Gracefully, gloriously faded and nearly forgotten. The daughter of Ymiden found it to be both sad and fascinating at once. She’d taken out her sketchbook and had begun committing what she saw to paper, so that she could transfer it to canvas later, once she returned to her room at the inn. She was sure that this home had a story, and she wanted to know what it was. She’d ask around; but lacking anyone who could tell her, she’d be sure to devise one of her own. A masterful painting, after all, told as well a story as any book ever could.

She was just tucking her sketchbook into her bag and turning to leave, when the door of the home swung open abruptly and an old woman emerged. She must have once cut as graceful and dignified a figure as the home itself; and with just a glance, Eliza decided that the house must belong to this woman, and her, with the mass of gray curls twisted expertly atop her head and a long strand of pearls round her neck, to it.

She must have been eighty, maybe ninety arcs old, and was hobbling towards Eliza as quickly as gravity and the ravages of time would allow her to. With each step she took, the old woman’s cane tapped purposefully on the overgrown pavers along the way. It took her some time to reach the gate, and the artist found herself in the grips of a trill’s indecision. She’d been loitering there outside the gate after all, uninvited, and wondered if she should turn quickly and go. But the old woman had fixed an eye on her that as good as dared her to do it. And so, Eliza stayed still and waited.
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”Just what are you doing there?”. That’s what the old woman said when she finally reached the gate. She’d lifted a finger, covered in age spots and knotted with time, and jabbed it in Eliza’s direction for emphasis. The daughter of Ymiden had found herself temporarily speechless, her eyes wide in response to the woman’s no nonesense approach. ”Well? Cat got your tongue, girl?”

A long trill passed before Eliza found her voice. ”I apologize madam,” she said. ”I was only looking at your home. It’s beautiful and...”

The woman snorted. ”It’s been ages since its been anything of the sort. But you weren’t just looking”, she said. ”Well? Let’s see it then”. She gestured towards Eliza’s bag. For a woman as old as this, her eyesight was surprisingly good to have spotted it all the way from the house. Nevertheless, Eliza complied and dipped a hand into her bag, withdrew the sketchpad and handed it over. The silence was deafening when the old woman took it, and fixed her rheumy blue eyes on the drawing. For some strange reason, Eliza wanted to know what this prickly old woman thought of it, but didn’t dare ask. And then just as abruptly, the woman handed it back without praise or critique. ”Do you paint too?” The answer was yes ma’am. ”People? Faces and figures?” Again, yes, it was what she did best.

”Come back next trial then”, she’d said. ”Bring your brushes and canvas with you. And don’t you worry. If it's good, I'll pay you.” It wasn’t at all a request. In fact, it was as good as an ordered summons. This old woman wasn’t accustomed to being told no, and for reasons she couldn’t begin to explain, Eliza wasn’t going to be the one to say it now. She’d agreed, even without setting the terms or a price; and the old woman had huffed before turning and hobbling back towards the house, apparently satisfied that she’d commissioned herself an artist. For what exactly, Eliza couldn’t quite say.

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It was only later, when Eliza was having her supper in the common room back at the inn, that she’d been able to learn the woman’s name. Melvina Pruitt Brashar, she’d been told by the waiter, and she’d been a fixture at the crippled old home for as long as anyone could remember. Feared just a little, apparently, and based on an exchange that had been as startling as it was brief, Eliza wasn’t the least bit surprised.

So here she was again. Except this time she’d brought her canvas and paints, and was waiting outside the door for someone to come. She’d lifted the tarnished brass knocker, twice, to announce her arrival. But it was some time before she could hear the tapping approach of a cane on marble tiles, and the door swung open. ”Don’t know where that old man has gone off to,” Melvina complained as she opened the door. ”Can’t get proper help these trials....Well, there you are miss Soule. Don’t just stand there. Come inside.”

Eliza hadn’t introduced herself the trial before. She was sure of it, and she hadn’t been asked. And she’d only been in the city a handful of trials. The woman must have her sources, but she was no more going to ask, than she’d have dared say no the trial before when she’d apparently been commissioned.
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"Shut the door behind you," Minerva instructed when Eliza stepped into the foyer, and from there through an arched passage, Eliza could see straight through to the great room. It was as if she'd stepped into another time. Judging by the furniture, fixtures, floors and trim, a century might have passed since the home had last received a facelift. But in Eliza's eyes, it was beautiful and grand in all its faded and tarnished glory. From the ornate mosaic tiles, to the expensive carved pillars and trim, the rich fabric wall coverings to the crystal droplets in the chandeliers. It seemed frozen in time, a time that Eliza herself was old enough to remember while Minerva probably wasn't. And yet, the two of them, old woman and house seemed to suit each other perfectly.

"Did you come to stare or work?, the woman asked as she shuffled past the grand staircase with its faded red runner and into another room even grander than the first. "It's beautiful," Eliza said as she hurried to catch up and Minerva huffed. "My children and grandchildren would tell you you're as daft as me for saying it. Ever since I lost my Philip they've been after me to leave it to live with them. They'll be tearing it down behind me, before I've cleared the exit." Too large for one old woman. Eliza could hear it without knowing said children and grandchildren. Too expensive to repair or maintain. If it was her, Eliza would put up a fight. But she imagined that Minerva already had, and had lost.

The room they'd crossed into had obviously once been the most opulent and expensively dressed in the house. "A ballroom?" Eliza whispered and smiled as she spun round, taking it all in as she turned. "I can almost hear the music and the wine glassed tinkling away. Silken gown and bejeweled throats." That was about the size of it, Minerva said and nodded, apparently with some sense of self satisfaction. "Good. You've got an imagination. I thought you might if you're any kind of artist. You'll need it." What Minerva wanted, it appeared, was for Eliza to re-imagine the ballroom as it had once been, during a time when she had first met her beloved Philip.

Minerva went on to explain that the home had once belonged to her husband's family, from one generation to the next. They'd built it, and it was in this ballroom that she'd first met the man who would become her husband. She and a host of other young women from the area had been invited to attend a winter ball, though Minerva's former mother in law, the old woman said, would have liked to keep the commoners off the list. "She never did approve of me for Philip. A nobody. Poor family, my father was a laborer. But Philip wouldn't have it." There came another huff at that revelation, and this one was certainly one of self-satisfaction.

"I won't miss the rest of it," Minerva said, referring to the mansion itself. "It's drafty, the walls groan at night and the floors are cracking. But it's the ballroom, you see. Can you..." she began to ask, and Eliza smiled and reassured her. In fact, the daughter of Ymiden knew exactly what she might do, approach, technique and on canvas, that could bring a happier past back to life for this woman. "I can."
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Finally, Eliza was alone inside the ballroom. She found a place just near the door, and sat down cross legged on the cold mosaic floor that once must have been gleaming and resplendent in a riot of color. No longer though. It's beauty was now faded and made less by the neglect of a quarter century or more, hidden beneath a layer of tarnish and dust. As an artist, Eliza could see past the sad state of affairs, even without making use of her inherited gifts. She'd use one of them this trial, nonetheless.

She pulled her sketchpad and a wooden case full of pastel pencils from her satchel, placing them in front of her on the floor, and setting the satchel aside. And for a long bit or two, she worked to clear her mind, and then focus on what she was seeing. "I hired you to paint, not sit there staring the trial through." The voice coming from behind startled Eliza out of what would quickly have become a trance of sorts. She sighed, and frowned as Minerva stood over her, scowling with arm's crossed across her bosom.

"I'm working. It's a process. If I'm going to do what you've asked me to," she started, and then changed direction. "It's difficult to explain. I think you'll be pleased with the result, but I need privacy and quiet so that I can concentrate." The old woman looked skeptical to say the least, but with a humph, left her to it all the same. And so Eliza began again, and relied on her mortalborn ability Deja Vu to see what she otherwise, could not.

For a full bit, and maybe a little bit more, the ballroom came to life before her eyes. Its entire history played out in front of and around her; from the moment that the last tile had been fixed in place, the last stained glass window fitted and sealed, until now, this moment, when it sat silent and forgotten. All in snippets, glimpses and half trills. But it had once been filled to the brim with laughter, music, conversation, joy and a little bit of sorrow, now and again. All the souls that had attended the place, came and went, and aged as they did so. And eventually the attendees became fewer and fewer, the gatherings less merry until eventually, they came no more.

When finally Eliza blinked, but transitioned into yet another sort of trance, a more focused on, she picked up her pad and began to draw. As it always happened, the moment in time that she put down on paper or canvas was one that chose her, and not otherwise. Through it all, there was one man, one woman, always present time after time. Dancing together. A young beauty with auburn locks gazing lovingly at a tall, handsome young man. They'd aged with each glance that she'd gotten. But always the adoration was the same, until he was gone, the woman was alone, and the ballroom was empty.

And so in that trance-like state, Eliza drew in vivid color. A young couple on the dance floor, eyes just for each other. They were the focal point of Eliza's drawing, while the remainder of the work...people, place, things were treated with a much softer focus. When she returned to her rented room that evening, she'd set up her easel, arrange her brushes and reproduce this work on canvas and watercolor. She suspected once she'd emerged from the trance, that the couple in question, the subjects in her painting, were in fact Minerva and her beloved late husband when they were younger.

Later, when she returned to the home and delivered the finished painting, large and placed in an elegant frame, she'd have those suspicions confirmed. Their first dance, in fact, the night that they'd met. When Minerva, with tears in her eyes, asked how was it possible for her to have captured that precise moment; just as it had been that night and just as she and her love had looked, Eliza merely smiled, winked at the old woman, accepted her payment and went on her way.
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Renown: 10, word of mouth for making an absolutely beautiful painting.
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Comments: This was a beautifully written solo. I like in how much detail you described the house. I had no problem imagining what it looked like. It does sound like a fascinating house! You did a good job when it comes to the NPC and giving her a distinct personality as well. I wish I could actually see Eliza’s finished painting though. It must be quite beautiful!

Good job, and enjoy your rewards!


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