Review Requests 2.2.5

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Review Requests 2.2.5

Peer Review Requests
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Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: There is no minimum word count, however, we feel that 1500 is a worthwhile number to strive for, for each participant. That said, we will not be hard enforcing word count. Individuals found abusing this system in order to powerplay will be dealt with accordingly, as individuals.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may usually choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. In most cases, this is the minimum. However, if the evidence of collaboration is strong enough, then a Peer Reviewer may award Collaboration Knowledge for less posts. If you feel this applies to you, identify the "additional" knowledge in your review and put forward a brief (one or two sentence) justification. For every post made after three, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Abandoned Collaboration Threads: Sometimes a collaboration doesn't work out. If one of your partners is absent for a length of time or loses inspiration, or the thread itself becomes non-canon you can submit a thread as abandoned. When an abandoned thread is graded, all participants are entitled to full knowledge and XP awards. If your thread does not meet the criteria for a collaboration's full rewards (outlined above) while you will still be given xp credit of a collaboration, you may only claim knowledge awards as if it were solo thread.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.

Roleplay Standards and Rules: 'As reviewers, it's our job to ensure that roleplay standards are upheld, such as playing to skill level. Those posting threads for review must identify skills used, skill levels, for the feats they are accomplishing. Reviewers should compare skill levels versus the poster's feats. If they do not match, reviewers may deny the review request until the player(s) fix the issues within the thread. Until then, the reviewer should mark the player's request as not approved. They are instead to identify the issue with the thread, message the player on the site, and review the players within the thread who have adhered to standards. Then they can move on to the next review if they wish.'

Wealth Points and Rewards: Once the seasonal Wealth Thread has been completed, players may request WP from other threads so long as they take place in that season and the PC is gaining additional wealth via IC means. The maximum per additional thread is 1 WP

Peer Reviewers may deny this request, and can only approve up to 1 WP.

Prophets reviewing modded threads may approve more than that, specific to the event and/or city-based approval.

Please note, this does not apply to business threads and the like, which have their own system for the acquisition of wealth points. If claiming Wealth points for a business thread, please note in the request and provide appropriate links to relevant information.


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[b]Thread Name:[/b] (Name with link included)
[b]City/Area:[/b] (Where is this taken place in?)
[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Skills Used:[/b] ex. Combat: Blades. Currently Competent (26 XP, 50 knowledge). 

[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)  
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: 
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) 
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Preparation
City/Area: Rharne, Stormwastes
Notes/Warnings: No
Skills Used: Defiance (Expert), Endurance (Competent), Unarmed (Unskilled)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Defiance: Melding with the Earth
Defiance: Moving freely through the ground
Defiance: Propelling out of the ground
Unarmed x3 (For pouncing a fake enemy, practicing technique etc)

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor Overstepping (Nausea, Dizziness)
Renown: Nope
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: Yeah
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Oberan
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Down in the Hole
City/Area: Etzos Underground
Notes/Warnings: Obe and Kas talk about current affairs

Oberan
Skills used: Stealth: GM, Investigation: N, Intelligence: N, Appraisal: C, Negotiation: N/A, Strength: C, Endurance: C, detection: E
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Scram before you get spotted
Stealth: Eliminating all spies before revealing sensitive information
Philosophy: Did Etzos deserve to fall?
Intelligence: Sharing information
Intelligence: Coded messages
Intelligence: Relies on Utilizing Resources, and Building Relationships
Investigation: provoke someone to get them to reveal their alliance
Detection: looking out for signs someone isn't quite themself
Appraisal: A good Venoran Red Wine
Negotiation: Setting terms for an exchange of information
Politics: Plotting Sintra's downfall


Loot: +1 ally, + a plan
Injuries/Overstepping: Not really
Renown: Unlikely

Kasoria
Skills used: Endurance: M; discipline: M, intelligence: E, Strength: E, detection: M
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring Old Fears
Discipline: Forcing Oneself to Broaden Perspectives
Endurance: The Effects of Thrill
Intelligence: Not a Narrow Field, But a Complex Web
Intelligence: Effectively Tailoring Coded Messages
Intelligence: Relies on Utilizing Resources, and Building Relationships
Intelligence: Sharing Information
Rhetoric: Passionate Defense of Your Homeland

Etzos, Vhalar 720: Still in the Thrall of Sintra
Etzos, Vhalar 720: Sintra and her Minions are Poisoning Etzos' Drinking Water
PC Oberan: On the Side of Etzos (currently)
PC Oberan: Associates with the Etzori Resistance (sometimes)
PC Oberan: Wants to Expose Sintra to Destroy Her
PC Oberan: Possesses and Unknown Magic that Drains the Life from Creatures
Sintra: Immortal of Manipulation
Sintra: Plotted to Take Control of Etzos
Sintra: Has Minions Across Etzos
Sintra: Controls Hordes of Spiders, from Tiny to Vast
Sintra: Pushed Lisirra to Invade Etzos (to take advantage of the chaos following)
Sintra: Seeks to Dominate the Etzori through Mind Control and Propoganda


Loot: +knowledge
Injuries/Overstepping: Not really
Renown: Unlikely
Collaboration: Yes
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Tristan Venora
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stubby Legs
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Vhalar wealth thread. In case you are wondering about Arne’s breed – he’s a dachshund!
Skills Used: GM Sculpting (100x/52k), Master Persuasion (151x/52k), Expert Detection (76x/25k), Competent Discipline (26x/20k), Competent Endurance (26x/14k), Novice Strength (25x/7k) – Tristan used his Sculpting capstone “Galatea” to make the sculpture in this thread.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sculpting x2
Strength x4

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5? Tristan makes a very special sculpture for a wealthy Melrathi woman.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Dream of Fall
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream. Doran's latest attempt at Governing.
Skills Used: Master Discipline (151x/60k), Expert Meditation (80x/44k), Expert Detection (76x/43k), Competent Psychology (26x/35k), 30 Dreamwalking

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection x3
Meditation x3

Dreamwalking: Governing: Governing as a way to remember
Dreamwalking: Governing: Only enables you to create an approximation of life, at best

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Mutations

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Blessings

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Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Thread Name: Water to Camel Ratio
City/Area: Nashaki Trade Academy
Notes/Warnings: kinda boring class thread.
Skills Used: Logistics: Novice, Detection: Competent, Discipline: Novice, Research: Untrained, Tactics: Untrained.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline x 2
Detection x 3
Logistics x 1

Loot: nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: nothing
Renown: Yes if you see something award worthy!
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: no




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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Getting ahead(ernickel)
City/Area: Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: Fire?
Skills Used: Defiance (master), Tactics (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Discipline (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
3x Endurance
3x Tactics

Loot: One captured headernickel
Injuries/Overstepping: Bleeding from the eyes, a severe migrane
Renown: Probably.
Wealth Points: Maybe? Prae is a merc.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No—this wasn't a challenge in terms of defiance.
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Rorom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sure as Shore can Be
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Faith
Skills Used: Negotiation (Master), Logistics (GM), Leadership (GM),, Psychology (GM),, Etiquette (Master), Sociology (Competent).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None Requested
Loot: 1 Masterwork Scalvoran Ship of the Line "The Gray Asylum", 1 Masterwork Schooner "The Bed of Nels"
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: Yes please. If you see something award worthy. Maybe 10 for gaining two masterwork ships, one of them a ship of the line.
Wealth Points: nah
Rorom
Skills Used: Negotiation (Novice), Intelligence (Novice), Detection (Novice), Seafaring (Competent), Leadership (Novice), Discipline (Novice), Etiquette (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Negotiation: x 4
Intelligence: x 4
Leadership: x 2

Loot: Gave up 1 Masterwork Scalvoran Ship of the Line "The Gray Asylum", 1 Masterwork Schooner "The Bed of Nels". Gained an Isonomia pin and membership in Isonomia.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: 15 for making a princely donation to Isonomia, and joining Isonomia. Also meeting the famous Faith Augustin.
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: no
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Melinda
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: There's blood because a little girl had an accident. It's also my Zi'da wealth thread.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/86k), Master Medicine (151x/60k), Master Persuasion (151x/57k), Master Cosmetology (151x/38k), Expert Discipline (80x/33k), Competent Surgery (40x/26k), Competent Detection (26x/28k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology x2
Medicine x2
Surgery x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5 or so, for treating a patient.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Rakvald
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Confirmation
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: mature themes, part of a mature horror series, may be some subject matter that is not for sensitive eyes. Blood and being ripped apart by the particle and so forth.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

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Transmutation: Initiation:  The most pain Rakvald has ever felt.
Meditation x 2
Endurance x 3
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: This leads into a thread where Rakvald ends up with amnesia and stranded on Scalvoris. Part of a calendar event there.
Renown: 10 for astounding the Blood priests with his disappearance?
Skillplay
Graft: Master
Transmutation: Untrained
Endurance: Competent
Discipline: Expert
Meditation: Competent
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes Transmutation initiation.

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