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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: On Neutral Ground
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Some minor language.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Caregiving: x 2
Intelligence: x 2
Investigation: x 2

Loot/Losses: A doomed letter.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Caregiving.
Competent: Strength, Leadership.
Expert: Endurance, Investigation, Detection.
Master: Intelligence, Meditation.
GM: Psychology, Socialization, Discipline
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Zemos
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Review Request!



Thread Name: Festive Contagion
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scaltoth
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, the other player never quite got off the ground.
Skills Used:

Novice: Logistics, Leadership, Navigation.
Competent: Stealth, Necromancy, Meditation, Discipline.
Expert: Medicine.
Master: Fieldcraft

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Fieldcraft: x 2
Necromancy: Swarm: Poisoning a hive of insects, in order to raise them as a collective thrall.
Medicine: Poisoning a wasp hive with deadly insecticide.
Navigation: Bringing along a great map can help one find their way.

Loot: 1 Swarm thrall of wasps.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: None
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: Yeah kinda
Magic Experience?: Yes Necromancy


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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: To Be or Not to Be...(Part Two)
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Part Two of Elisabeth's follow up with Jacien after his job offer during the Forging. Part One is linked in the thread. The original write up for Jacien is here. It was revealed in the Forging that he is actually the Deputy of the Spirit branch of the Elements.

Skills Used:
Socialization - GM
Detection - Master
Discipline - Master
Psychology - Expert
Etiquette - Competent
Investigation - Expert
Intelligence - Expert

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence - x2
Investigation - x2
Psychology - x2

Loot: A trial period as a member of the Spirit branch of the Elements
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - unsure. Elisabeth's meeting isn't public, and she's to keep her association private, but the appropriate people are going to be told it, possibly raising her profile in certain circles.
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Russel Kandor SadPlamt
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Imperial Arcane Academy] Bend and Sway
City/Area: Volcanic Mountain Region, the Eternal Empire
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Athletics (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Discipline (Novice), Detection (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Athletics x5, Endurance x1
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Thread Name: Not to Be
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund, Nellies
Notes/Warnings: Thread features Balth's personal NPC Robin and follows up on the consequence from this thread. It's mostly just the two of them talking about what to do next so I'm not claiming knowledge for it.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Detection (GM), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Stealth (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: None.
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Submitted for mod attention. March 20th, 2022.
 ! Message from: Avalon
Tagged for review
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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Curious Questions
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Skills Used:
Devin: GM Socialization, GM Athletics, Master Detection, Expert Logistics, Expert Discipline, Competent Animal Husbandry, Competent Animal Training, Competent Etiquette, Competent Teaching, Novice Caregiving
Alyssia: Animal Husbandry(Novice), Discipline(Novice), Etiquette(Novice), and Socialization(Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Devin
Animal Husbandry: Chocolate is bad for goats
Animal Husbandry: Stroking pets so that they don’t feel ignored
Athletics: Using your bed as a trampoline
Athletics: Stretching your arms a lot so that you can stroke two pets at the same time
Caregiving: Calming someone that seems nervous down
Detecting: Noticing when exactly someone’s smile disappears
Logistics: Planning what needs to be done in the Barony
Socialization: Convincing someone that they do have skills by mentioning examples
Socialization: Convincing someone not to become a mage by pointing out the dangers
Socialization: Assuring someone that their opinion matters
Socialization: Convincing someone that you are not racist by explaining why racism doesn’t make sense to you
Alyssia
Discipline – sharing a secret even when afraid
Etiquette - knock at the door before entering
Socialization - going to someone you trust with a secret
Animal Husbandry – give a pet love
Socialization – asking if another person is afraid of your race
Socialization – finding out something amazing about family
Devin – not fazed by the Aukari
Devin – a mortalborn
Aukari – not bothered by the cold like other races
Ishallr – a part of Scalvoris island
Becoming – a magic discipline
Becomers – transform into animals
Magic can mutate the user
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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Last edited by Devin on Thu Mar 17, 2022 3:22 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 263

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Test of Trust
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Devin's mother is a Personal NPC.
Skills Used: GM Socialization, GM Deception, Master Detection, Expert Discipline, Expert Logistics, Expert Leadership, Competent Stealth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Hearing that someone is walking in your direction
Leadership: Knowing if you can rely on the people around you is important
Logistics: Setting up a game to test people’s trustworthiness
Stealth: It’s easier to sneak in socks
Stealth: Holding your breath can help you remain hidden
Stealth: When hiding behind a curtain, make sure that your feet aren’t visible!

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Darius Baer Bottom
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Thread Name: Beauty For Ashes
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Darius discovers that Yeva is no longer dead! What the...?!
Skills Used: Caregiving (Competent), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Novice), Psychology (Novice), Writing (Untrained)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Holding a loved one close.
Detection: Recognising a familiar voice.
Discipline: Trying to be strong for someone else.
Discipline: I'm not crying, you're crying!
Meditation: Reflecting on the events of the trial.
Meditation: Reflecting on your emotions.
Psychology: Seeking solace in the company of another.
Psychology: Sharing grief can make it seem more manageable.
Writing: Recording memories to ensure they aren't forgotten.
Writing: Writing can be helpful for processing emotions.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Plan
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: Thread features Balth's personal NPC Robin and follows the two of them making a rough plan for a business/mercenary company. All they really figure out is where they want to base it and where they are going to start looking for employees. Oh! It also refers to the threats that were sent out, specifically the one Balthazar received. I'm not claiming full knowledge for it.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Detection (GM), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Stealth (Expert), Business Management (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Business Management - Consider the local demand for your service
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: None.

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Submitted for mod attention. March 22nd, 2022.
 ! Message from: Avalon
Tagged for review!
word count: 139

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Thread Name: Dragonlings And Other Things
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, but as good as finished. Korim is a Smooglenuff Manor NPC. I've requested fewer knowledges on purpose. Kisaik will request knowledges and such later on.
Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/145k), GM Medicine (250x/132k), Master Detection (151x/72k), Expert Endurance (76x/43k), Expert Discipline (80x/65k), Expert Leadership (76x/36k), Competent Storytelling (26x/20k), Competent Etiquette (26x/65k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: A chaos bolt-induced headache
Etiquette: Ask for permission before you write about someone
Medicine: Warmth can alleviate a headache
Medicine: Morning savior mixed with basil and mint helps with a headache
Socialization: Offering one secret for another
Storytelling: How I solved the beer crisis
Storytelling: Kisaik’s encounter in the Heart of the World

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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