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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Starving an Animal
City/Area: Viden Merk Pass
Notes/Warnings: Mental trauma
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Strength: Pulling the chains on your legs
Strength: Pulling the chains on your arms
Resistance: Hunger for a day
Resistance: Cold stone
Endurance: Hunger for a day
Endurance: Trying to break free of the chains
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Tristan Venora
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: [Oakleigh] A Man After My Own Hart (Tristan)
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished thread. Valeria stopped posting/retired.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mount (Horse): Mounting a horse
Mount (Horse): In order to get your horse to move, press your knees against its sides
Mount (Horse): Following someone
Persuasion: Tempting someone with delicious food
Persuasion: If someone is unsure, tell them that it isn't as hard as it sounds
Persuasion: If someone is afraid of horses, offer to cover the horsiest parts
Persuasion: You don't really know if you like something until you try it out
Seduction: Taking a woman into your arms and kissing her
Seduction: Telling a woman that she looks beautiful
Socialization: Giving complements

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A necromancer is born
City/Area: Melrath wilds
Notes/Warnings: no

Abra
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Undead don’t have souls
Necromancy: Necromancers don’t have to raise the dead to be effective
Necromancy: Mixing blood is a part of initiation
Necromancy: Husks are raised skeletons
Necromancy: Control of a thrall can be taken from another Necromancer
Running: The fear of being eaten by a Husk is good motivation

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: Necromancy
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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Welcome to Scalvoris
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished thread. The other PCs stopped posting.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Acting offended
Acting: Sometimes you need to tone it down
Deception: Sometimes it's better not to mention what you really do
Detection: Noticing that somebody's not happy
Persuasion: If you give me one of your feathers, I'll help you!
Persuasion: Let's skip the main course and just eat sweets!
Socialization: Apologizing when you feel it's necessary
Socialization: Getting to know a stranger better
Socialization: Greeting your (possible) fans

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 114

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 2. Stifle
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (Saber): Quick draw.
Flying: Spinning dive to quickly descend.
Flying: Casting off from a cliffside.
Intimidation: Screeching to unsettle your foes.
Meditation: Feathered Friend: Maintaining connection with your familiar, to receive direct sensory input.
Singing: Using the power of your voice to sound a battlecry.

Loot: +1 Ring of reversal bought from the Point bank shop.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Image
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

Aliases:
Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
,
Flavius Erythrian
,
Milian Le Moigne
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Ashling
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Deal With an Outlander
City/Area: Melrath, in the wilderness of the Fensalir/Alivilda region
Notes/Warnings:Note: The first thread in a series of two. Brent and Ashling meet in the wilds. They discover that they seem to have been deceived by outlanders who hired them and who are up to good. They decide to hurry back to Fensalir and try to twarth the outlanders. Next thread will be in Fensalir.
Requested Rewards:

Brent


Knowledge:
(5 posts, collab thread = 8+2 = 10 skill knowledge)
Navigation: Trailblazing using charcoal crosses on trees
Cartography: Using sightlines and a compass to determine angles
Cartography: Charting winding trail by using multiple short segments
Cartography: Indicating steep terrain with semi-circle symbols for hills
Socialization: A charming greeting
Seduction: Complementing a woman's looks
Business Management: Simple delegation for working as a team
Negotiation: Standing firm to the original agreement
Investigation: Noticing suspicious behaviour
Mount: Nudging a horse into a walk with one's heels


Non-skill:
Ashling: Young lady who looks like a child of the forest
Ashling: Herbalist from Fensalir
Warrick: Possible outlander causing trouble Melrath


Collaboration: Yes

Ashling


Knowledge:
(4 posts, collab thread = 8+1= 9 skill knowledge)
Detection: Detecting a snob from Raelia by their attire
Detection: Detecting a discrepance between appearance and accent
Detection: Detecting potentially suspect activity by signs in nature
Detection: Detecting a honest and reliable person by their behavior
Detection: Detecting when another person shows signs of attraction
Detection: Detectig the temeprament and age of an animal
Detection: Detecting a toxic plant by feeling the stench of it
Tactics: Unique knowledge of the terrain is a military advantage
Tactics: Avoiding a backlash by seeking approval from a spirit


Non-Skill
PC: Brent Forrester,a cartographer from Alivilda
PC: Brent Forreste,slightly disabled (limps)?
PC: Brent Forrester,charming good guy
PC: Brent Forrester,serious about his work

NPC: Warrick: Possible outlander causing trouble Melrath (hired Brent)
NPC: Well-groomed "raelnob" woman buying Hannyban (hired Ashling)

Melrathi Hannyban: A toxic and sticky plant
Melrathi Hannyban: White flowers with dark freckles
Melrathi Hannyban: Even the toxic smell is enough to make people giddy
Melrathi Hannyban: Shamans use as a drug to get complex visions
Melrathi Hannyban: Causes dry mouth and intense thirst
Melrathi Hannyban: Causes difficulties to swallow and slurred speach
Melrathi Hannyban: Causes drowsiness, delirium and disorientation
Melrathi Hannyban: Boosts aggression
Melrathi Hannyban: Causes warm and flushed skin
Melrathi Hannyban: Causes dilated pupils and so, intolerance to light
Melrathi Hannyban: A big dose leads to convulsions, heart-stroke, coma
Melrathi Hannyban: A big dose will mostly lead to death

Loot:
One sackful of Melrathi Hannyban

Collaboration: Yes


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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Another Day, Another Stool
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Brent Forrester
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Selling to businesses can have greater returns than selling to individuals
Business Management: A multitude of generic products are easier made than a few custom ones
Business Management: Proposing a verbal contract
Business Management: Benefit of a trademark name or signature on products
Negotiation: Offering a discount for a larger quantity
Storytelling: Recounting a simple childhood story
Teaching: Identifying flaws in a physical piece of work
Business Management: Creating a basic business plan
Business Management: Determining which skills are best delegated to a hired hand
Socialization: Using mime for comedic effect

Soren: Barkeep of Ox's Bellow Tavern
Soren: Verbal contract to sell maps
Soren's story of Nedward the fruit seller
Loot: +1 Business Deal with Soren Kvistson
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for making a deal with a local businessman
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

Soren Kvistson
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Deal with Brent Forrester
Business Management: Using one business deal to create another
Intelligence - Contact: Mrs. Torstold, widowed mother of three
Intelligence - Contact: Brent Forrester, crippled cartographer
Intelligence - Contact: Nedward, fruit seller
Mixology: The Taste of Noatun Blue Stout
Resistance: Tolerance to Noatun Blue Stout
Storytelling: The Tale of Brent Forrester Becoming a Forrester
Storytelling: The Tale of Nedward the Unyielding Fruit Seller
Woodworking: Creating a simple barstool

Loot: +1 Business Deal with Brent Forrester
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for making a deal with a local businessman
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Mathias Blackwood
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Rats... Always Rats...
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Ranged (Shortbow) - Shooting in the dark
Ranged (Shortbow) - Shooting at rats
Ranged (Shortbow) - Aiming based on sound
Detection - Listening for footsteps
Detection - Finding rats in the sewer
Trap Making - Mouse traps
Loot: If applicable
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None because I don't have a wealth thread/ this is passed the season change so I don't think I can claim any.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Maybe, using his hands is kinda using brilliance and he uses identity.
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Ladder or Man
City/Area: Merk Pass Viden
Notes/Warnings: Violence blood bodies
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Unarmed (Wolven Wrestling): Avoiding knives
Endurance: 50 lashes
Strength: Dragging bodies to pile
Strength: Pushing people back
Resistance: Whips on the back
Resistance: Flesh of man
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Rasul (can not be removed without a psychologist)
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Summit Journey, Dreams of
City/Area: emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream
Requested Rewards:
Business Management: Magic can be used to reduce inefficiencies of daily operations.
Mathematics: Addition is the act of combining two values
Empathy: Strumming multiple emotions at once
Empathy: Strumming a knot can make it loosen faster
Empathy: Knots become undone as soon as the connection goes away
Empathy: Each source of an emotion must be knotted separately

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: no
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Empathy was used. Up to you to reward
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