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35th of Ymiden 720

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A Bolt of The Blue

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35th trial, Ymiden, 720
Storm's Edge
Morning

It had become his habit to watch the mage when he worked his wyrd. Not in every instance, for the man everyone knew as "Karim" likely practiced his magic alone as much as in public. But when the little man came to the smithy and claimed whatever useless or broken items he needed for his "experiments", Rudy always found that he had errands to run beyond its baking atmosphere. There always seemed to be something. A message, a meal, some tool or material that had to be fetched right at once... yet always took a little longer to fetch than Isaak would expect.

If the smithy knew where his apprentice really was, he gave no sign of it. He had plenty of work to attend to. The arms and armor of Storm's Edge depended on his skill and his muscles. He focused on that, instead.

Rudy watched from the shade of a tower, as the little man heaved another barrel into place. He was stronger than a man of his stature should have been. He'd thought at first that was magic itself, but eventually realized the little bastard really was just that strong. A hard, brutal life to match his appearance, he'd wager. Sweating under the rising sun, Karim placed the barrel against an open patch of wall, and mounted a rusted suit of mail over the top of it. He adjusted it a few times, ensuring it wouldn't slide to the ground in a hissing clatter of red-brown metal... then he walked away.

The apprentice frowned. That was new.

The mage turned back once he was about ten paces away. He raised his hand, and Rudy saw the familiar witch-light start to build around it. Blue and white, sometimes more one than the other, as if the colors were fighting each other for dominance. Usually the man would get a decent cloud of the stuff, then direct it against whatever his target was. Watch it corrode and rust and fall apart as the ravages of arcs were packed into moments. But this time, he was too far... wasn't he?

He watched as Karim closed his eyes, and whispered a word he couldn't hear. The formless blob of magical power started to shape itself. Extending out from his fist, as if it was a stick... or an arrow... no, too long for that. More like a short javelin. Once it was about two feet long, the mage raised it over his head. Like a hunter stalking prey, he used his free hand to steady himself and mark the orphan suit of armor. The whole time, a halo of light bathed him, and when his arm whipped forward-

-the javelin didn't fall apart, and the bolt exploded from his hand, leaving tendrils of crackling etheric lightning behind, zipping and sizzling off his fingertips-

BANG

Rudy jumped as the missile struck the armor. But that was the wrong word. It didn't pierce it, not in any physical sense. It exploded against it, shattering and spreading out across the surface of the mail. Almost like it was thin glass containing liquid, and now the substance burst... and started to eat it. Rudy's widened as that same Corrosive effect he'd seen days before broke down the metal like fire would kindling. Rippling ether explosions, tinier than his eyes could see, spread across the interlocked links, dissolving each one or weakening them to the point of uselessness. Chunks of it fell away, bindings unable to support it.

The mage approached, slowly. Fingers flexing and tapping at his thing as he did. There was a restlessness in them, now. An odd physical sign of activity that clashed with his general stoic, silent, watchful nature. The man cocked his head and crouched down. Watched the hole his missile had blown in the armor take final shape as the last of his ether spent itself. He stroked his worn fingertips across the ragged edges of it... and seemed to decide something with his nodding head-

-which turned not quickly, but irresistibly, to look Rudy in the eyes.

The apprentice swallowed a squeak, and the Raggedy Man smiled.

"S'try that agen, eh?"
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Re: A Bolt of The Blue

He'd copied Mathias, and wouldn't be at all ashamed to admit it. Age difference was irrelevant between the cocky young archer and the gnarled old assassin. When it came to Transmutation, Mathias would likely always be his superior. So he took the boy as his model, how he wielded his magic, imbued his ether into his arrow, used it to know his surroundings... and, of course, fling it through the air.

Ether Missile, it was called. He'd read that much, instead of learning it from Mathias. But parchment could impart only so much. He needed to see, and Mathias had shown him. By killing a Firespitter with one, in fact. Kasoria had well-remembered that sight. The power channeled into a single, crackling weapon that ate rock like fire would paper. Now he was initiated, it was his turn.

"Hmm."

Yet even now, his mind was wandering in new directions...

He flexed his hand, watching the ether pule and shimmer under his skin. It moved in waves, like glowing algae under an ocean. All save for his Abrogation witchmarks. The new Spark avoided those dark patches of skin like minnows would a shark. Kasoria smiled with one side of his mouth. His Sparks were still... reaching an agreement, it seemed. Content to minimize contact, for now. Each to their own and all that. Called when their master demanded, but working in concert was still somewhat beyond them. Well, no matter. He had time. They would learn.

If not, he'd educate them. But until then-

The Raggedy Man walked slowly back to where he'd stood before. The whole time, his hand was clenched into a loose fist. Not a true, clenched fist of a boxer, but one leaving enough space inside for air... and thus for ether. He let the stuff pour out of his palm and into the space of his hand. Didn't form it into a missile, this time. In a real fight, he may not have the time to sculpt and craft the missile into something appropriate for its name. Mayhap he wouldn't be "fighting" at all. Just launching an attack from an unexpected angle, like now-

-as he turned swiftly, arm raised, spinning in the direction of his throw so when he threw out his arm-

-the ball of ether crackling in his hand flew out like a ball towards carnival stand, hissing and snapping through the air until-

CRACK

It slammed into the wood of the barrel, eating through the strong wood. But it wasn't finished. Spherical shape ruined by the impact, the ether it was composed of was still... viable, Kasoria guessed the term would be. I spewed through the hole the missile had made, crashing onto the interior of the other side of the barrel. Kasoria could hear wood creaking and cracking. He could see, in the flickering, blue-tinged darkness, oak lengths rot down to blackened mulch in a handful of moments. Everywhere the ether touched, wood aged and weakened and twisted into aged death. By the time he'd walked back over, he could squat before the barrel... and peer through one hole and straight out of the other.

A shuffling again, from behind him. The apprentice was growing bold, it seemed.

"Can... Can you kill a man with that?"

Kasoria was tempted to lie. It would be worth it, to see the look on the boy's face. How would he know the truth, after all? One magic was much like another to the ignorant. Fates knew he'd thought as much, not so long agao. Mayhap that commonality was what changed his mind. Instead he shook his head and nodded to the wreckage of barrel and armor both.

"Nah. Jus' dead thing, y'ken? Rock an' wood an' metal an' the like. Nothin' livin'. Course..."

Kasoria's face became almost shark-like as he patted the hilt of his gladius.

"Ain't the kind t'just use magic."

Rudy gulped, and nodded. Point made, Kasoria walked away. Rudy watched the man go until-

CRUNCH

-the thick, wet, snapping sound made him jump and spin around. Just in time to see the wreckage of the holed barrel fall into itself, finally collapsing under its own weight. Much like he did before, Rudy shuffled over to study the detritus. He marveled and shuddered at the damage done.The thick oak turned to rot and mulch. The mail turned to rust and trash. Such a power would be-

"Boy?! Damnit, boy, where in the shite..."

The master called from the forge, and the apprentice rushed away.

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Re: A Bolt of The Blue

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Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation - Ether Missile: Usually Shaped into a Projectile
Transmutation - Ether Missile: Can Be Cast as an Orb
Transmutation - Ether Missile: Quicker Deployment Means Forgoing Shaping into a Projectile
Transmutation - Ether Missile: Corrodes Non-Living Material
Transmutation - Ether Missile: Explodes Onto and Spreads Across the Struck Surface
Strength: Hefting Barrels Around for Target Practice

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Rudy: Blacksmith's Apprentice at Storm's Edge

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: Yes, for Transmutation.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Points: 10
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Comments: The thread was a bit grindy, as you noted in the review request, but I didn’t mind. I liked in how much detail you described Kasoria’s using his magic. As someone wo plays a Transmuter as well, I’m rather interested in how you approach that particular domain. I think you are the only one who isn’t silent when he casts (I like how Kasoria actually says the names of the various techniques/spells out loud or at least whispers them). Letting us experience things partly through the eyes of Rudy was a nice touch as well.

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