Warren
Overview
Oh wow! I love this pc ~ he's just so very yummy! Love the pc concept and the way you write him is awesome; when I read him, I feel like I can hear his voice. The way that he managed an impossible situation was clever and his overwhelming drive to survive was evident. Great stuff, great reading and I loved the relationship between the two pcs. I really hope to see more of that and look forward to next time I get to review a thread of yours!
NB: Reviewed under the Beta-test rules.
NB: Reviewed under the Beta-test rules.
Points
XP: 15 points
Devotion: Vri: +2 (prayers)
Fame: +5 (no one expected you to survive!)
Devotion: Vri: +2 (prayers)
Fame: +5 (no one expected you to survive!)
Loot
Injured face which will take 15+ days to fully heal.
Knowledge
Skill Knowledge
Detection: Reading Body Language
Discipline: Trust No One
Endurance: Surviving Starvation
Melee Combat (Battle Axe): Spinning Swing
Melee Combat (Morning star): Using Momentum To Deal Damage
Seduction: Flirtatious Jokes
Strength: Fighting In Chains And Shackles
Strength: Wielding A Morning star With One Arm
Unarmed Combat: Dodging An Opponents Attacks
Unarmed Combat: Right Hook
Non-Skill Knowledge
Benn: Cell Mate In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Died In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Had A Wife In The Fighting Pits
Fighting Pits: Guards Know You'll Try To Escape
Fighting Pits: Illegal And Owned By Powerful Nobles
Fighting Pits: Spectators Will Kill You If You Don't Please Them
Navyri: A Captive In The Fighting Pits
Navyri: A Naerrik
Navyri: A Thief
Navyri: Knows How To Pick Locks
Navyri: Little Damsel
Navyri: Made An Unfortunate Judgement Call And Owes A Debt
Navyri: Thought Warren Fought Well
Navyri: Wanted To Help With Warren's Wounds
Detection: Reading Body Language
Discipline: Trust No One
Endurance: Surviving Starvation
Melee Combat (Battle Axe): Spinning Swing
Melee Combat (Morning star): Using Momentum To Deal Damage
Seduction: Flirtatious Jokes
Strength: Fighting In Chains And Shackles
Strength: Wielding A Morning star With One Arm
Unarmed Combat: Dodging An Opponents Attacks
Unarmed Combat: Right Hook
Non-Skill Knowledge
Benn: Cell Mate In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Died In The Fighting Pits
Benn: Had A Wife In The Fighting Pits
Fighting Pits: Guards Know You'll Try To Escape
Fighting Pits: Illegal And Owned By Powerful Nobles
Fighting Pits: Spectators Will Kill You If You Don't Please Them
Navyri: A Captive In The Fighting Pits
Navyri: A Naerrik
Navyri: A Thief
Navyri: Knows How To Pick Locks
Navyri: Little Damsel
Navyri: Made An Unfortunate Judgement Call And Owes A Debt
Navyri: Thought Warren Fought Well
Navyri: Wanted To Help With Warren's Wounds
Navyri
Overview
Little Damsel?! Was there ever a less accurate nickname for a pc!? I love this pc, the concept and the way you write her. She's dark and dangerous and she came across as really cool, calm and collected in her dealings with Kade. Love the way you write her and the attention to detail in your posts. Look forward to seeing, and reviewing, more of your writing!
NB: Reviewed under the Beta-test rules.
NB: Reviewed under the Beta-test rules.
Points
XP: 15 points
Devotion: +2 Delroth (prayers)
Fame: None
Devotion: +2 Delroth (prayers)
Fame: None
Loot
1 x piece of rope
Knowledge
Skill Knowledge
Lockpicking: The Proper Tools Make All The Difference
Lockpicking: Counting Pins
Intelligence: Patterns of Behavior
Intelligence: Scout A Perimeter
Intelligence: Utilize the Eyes and Ears of Another
Intimidation: Exploit Previous Fears
Persuasion: Use a Name to Personalize an Offer
Unarmed Combat: Resisting an Armored Opponent
Tactics: Judging Odds of Success
Detection: Signs of Being Nervous
Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: Rynmere
Location: Krome
Location: Krome Fighting Pits
Krome Fighting Pits: Illegal
Krome Fighting Pits: Holds Unfair Matches
Warren Kade: A Decent Fighter
Warren Kade: Bounty Hunter
Warren Kade: Calls you "Little Damsel"
Warren Kade: Unsettled by the Undead
Lockpicking: The Proper Tools Make All The Difference
Lockpicking: Counting Pins
Intelligence: Patterns of Behavior
Intelligence: Scout A Perimeter
Intelligence: Utilize the Eyes and Ears of Another
Intimidation: Exploit Previous Fears
Persuasion: Use a Name to Personalize an Offer
Unarmed Combat: Resisting an Armored Opponent
Tactics: Judging Odds of Success
Detection: Signs of Being Nervous
Non-Skill Knowledge
Location: Rynmere
Location: Krome
Location: Krome Fighting Pits
Krome Fighting Pits: Illegal
Krome Fighting Pits: Holds Unfair Matches
Warren Kade: A Decent Fighter
Warren Kade: Bounty Hunter
Warren Kade: Calls you "Little Damsel"
Warren Kade: Unsettled by the Undead