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Violet was sitting at the small table in her home in a straight-backed chair. A piece of parchment had been flattened neatly on the wooden surface and there were an inkwell resting above the top right corner. There was the scratching of the quill that filled the house along with the crackling of logs in the fireplace. A lantern was giving her light to write by. She had been to the library earlier to read up on the original Jacadon and the assignment professor Krome had given his students, even if she was not officially one- yet.

She scribbled the last few words on the parchment in a slanting cursive writing and laid the quill down by the bottle of ink. Violet’s warm breath blew against the wet ink on the parchment to help it dry. She touched the pad of a finger gently against the writing, and, when it didn’t smudge, she rolled it into a neat cylinder. She stretched lazily before getting up from the chair and leaving her written work on the table for in the morning. Opening the lantern door, she blew out the flame within with a soft puff of her breath.

The next morning she had awoken to the sunrise and the smell of smoky logs that had withered and burnt out during the night. She cleaned herself up, brushed out her golden hair, and dressed in black breeches, a flowing crimson blouse, a black leather belt, and black knee boots. She had boiled some water to cook eggs and ate them with a slice of crusted bread. When she was done, she grabbed her parchment and snapped her black cloak around her shoulders. She stepped out into the streets of Midtown and began the trek to Rynmere University that was located in the Crown.

Violet always marveled the white-washed building when she saw it. It was a great feat of architecture. When she entered the ground floor, she spoke to the woman manning the desk for the humanities department. Though she was hesitant, she mentioned that Malcolm was teaching his class in his regular classroom on the ground floor now that the leak had been fixed. She thanked the woman and went down the hall until she was outside the classroom door. She leaned against the wall and listened to the hum of voices through the wall, not wanting to disturb the class.

She waited until all the students had filtered out and Malcom was sitting alone at the front of the classroom at his desk. Violet quietly stepped in and approached the desk, unfurling the parchment as she did so. “Well I did it,” she said plainly, as if he would remember what she was talking about. His chair moved back from the desk and she slipped between him and the desk, resting herself on its edge as her eyes looked down at her parchment. “While the Jacadon turns to stone upon its death, including the winding labyrinth of its stomach, its heart turns into a precious metal. This is why the stone labyrinth cannot be the heart. Also, if the Burning Mountains are believed to be its spine, the labyrinth is better placed for the stomach.”

It wasn’t all of it, but just a piece of what she had written. She rolled the crinkling parchment back up and set it on the desk next to her. “For you… professor.” There was a hint of something lingering in her pale blue green eyes.
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The class had ended on a good note, everyone had handed in their essays and Malcolm had a pile to go through before making his way home later. For the time being he was sat holding a copy of the local gazette, reading up on the city news while the rest of the students cleared out. The lone thudding of feet against the wooden floors of his classroom drew his eye, wondering who it was that had returned to the room. Malcolm was surprised to find Violet heading towards him. He pushed his chair back to stand up, but before he could get to his feet, the noble woman took a seat in front of him on the edge of his desk.
The knight must have looked horrorstruck. If anyone walked in now they would suspect the absolute worst of him. Malcolm froze, torn between remaining where he was or getting up to lock the door. Violet read a small snippet from her essay, and Malcolm found himself glued to the chair, unsurprised by her logical, though well-researched response. For you… professor. Was it just him, or did those three words seem very suggestive, he wondered.
“Thank you, lady Warrick,” he replied, and lowered the gazette to sit across his lap. He made no attempt to lean forward and take her work, finding that it was close enough to the pile that he would not lose track of it.
Malcolm crossed his legs at the knee and bowed his head to rest chin upon balled hand, elbow pinned to the padded, leather arm of his chair. He studied the woman for a time, who didn't seem to be in any hurry to leave or get up from his desk, and wondered if she had noticed how uncomfortable she made him.
“I'm looking forward to reading it,” he forced the makings of a soft smile and gestured to the papers on his desk, “as you can see I have quite a few essays to get through before I can go home tonight.”
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Violet didn’t miss the obvious look of shock and horror that spread across his features. If she didn’t partially enjoy watching him squirm, perhaps she would have backed away from him and moved to the other side of the desk. Instead she leaned more heavily against the desk edge, her slender right leg moving to cross elegantly across her left. He thanked her for the work, nonetheless, and lowered the gazette he was reading to his lap. Her lips twitched at the corner, but she resisted the smirk that was threatening to come to the surface at the sight of him.

It was no surprise that he did not reach over to the desk to move her parchment over to the pile of the other essays that had been finished. It would have brought their bodies closer together, and Malcolm seemed very tense by them coming close at all. She had recognized that same look on his face when she had adjusted the knife on his belt in the training yard. Violet reached over to grab the parchment she had left on the wooden surface and tucked it neatly into the pile that the other students had formed on the desk.

He mentioned that he was looking forward to reading it, and Violet wondered if he really meant that. After all, she was not actually one of his students yet, and she had not been in with the rest of the class through the season, learning and reading from books and from Malcolm himself. It almost seemed as if he were trying to get rid of her, the way he mentioned and gestured at his pile of collected essays. She might have been offended if she had not suspected he only wanted to do so because of the thick tension that lay between them.

“You might be giving more credit than I deserve to insinuate that you might enjoy reading it.” A smile curled on her lips and she spared a glance at the pile of papers. “At least you can’t complain about your students not doing the work.”

She slipped off the edge of the desk and moved around the leather-padded chair and came behind him. Both hands came to rest on his shoulders as she leaned over his shoulder to glance at the gazette. “Still a horse shortage? I thought the stable at the barracks looked awfully thin.” Her thumbs ran gently across the muscle of his shoulders. ”Do you ride, professor?” Though he was not looking at her, a sly smile grew on her lips.
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Relief softened his features as Violet stepped away from the desk, only for his muscles to go rigid again as he felt her slender hands settle against his shoulders. Malcolm’s innards twisted into tight knots as every hair on his body stood on end, making him hyper-aware of every move the woman behind him made. Her fingers ran across the tops of his shoulders and Malcolm’s eyes went to the classroom doors; what if someone saw this? It would ruin his career.
This whole thing had created so many questions, but before it could go any further, Malcolm stopped the woman's hand and twisted in his chair to look back at her. “Lady Warrick, this is highly inappropriate. I don't like to assume anything, but I'm getting some strange vibes,” he stood up and sat on the edge of his desk to look straight across at her. “You're a very charming, bright young woman, and I'm flattered that you came all the way up to the university to deliver your letter in person, but it isn't appropriate to touch any of the lecturers,” he warned. “If you intend to start classes in Ashen, I would advise that you try and be a little more professional from now on, after all you are a noble.”
Malcolm picked up Violet’s paper and slipped it somewhere into the pile before shuffling them all and straightening the stack up, and placed it down once more. Perhaps he hoped if he looked busy the awkwardness of the moment might pass sooner rather than later. Once returned to his seat, Malcolm made a start on the first essay, but felt the hairs on the back of his neck prickle, wondering what was going through the noblewoman’s mind.
“You know, I always wanted to believe that it was the heart,” he uttered. “I know technically the heart of a Jacadon turns into a valuable metal upon the creature's death, but what if Rynmere is alive?” Malcolm made a few notes on one of the papers and went on to start marking the next. “They believe the animals have a hive brain, and every now and then they do something strange, but all together. Something has to be the cause of that?”
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He was no fun in these harmless little games. He would look to the classroom door every time she made the slightest move, as if someone seeing her lean over him to read the paper would be the scandal of the arc. Violet didn’t see any harm in it. They weren’t doing anything wrong. It was hardly as if he had her on top of or bent over the desk engaging in some sexually explicit act. I wish, she thought as a puff of a sigh slipped through her lips and played against his ear and the side of his neck.

His hand came to hers in a wrenching grasp and stopped what little movement she was toying with. Violet’s blue green eyes observed the professor as he twisted around in his seat, his gaze seeming to level at her sternly. She knew she was about to be rebuked, and she was tempted to simply jerk her hand away and just walk away. There was no harm in the little bit of fun she was having, though apparently he deemed it ‘highly inappropriate’. He switched his seating to the desk so that they were looking right at each other. He followed up such stern comments with compliments before falling back into his rebuke.

“I apologize professor Krome, but I didn’t see any harm or inappropriateness in what I was doing. I was reading you an excerpt… and then glancing at your gazette.” Her arms crossed in front of her, fingers drumming against the pale fabric of her blouse. “It wasn’t as if I asked you or suggested that you bend me over your desk. Now that would be inappropriate.” Her tone, despite her words, was not haughty or offended. It was calm, as if she were just presenting him facts. In truth, that’s what she felt she was doing.

He fiddled with the papers and seated himself back in his chair, a moment of awkward silence lingering in the air between them. Then suddenly, he switched the subject back to his academic questions. He wanted to believe that Rynmere was alive in some way and mentioned that Jacadons had a hive mind and perhaps there was some explanation for it. But the labyrinth wasn’t metal, so by everything they knew it couldn’t possibly be the heart. For a moment she thought in silence, her finger tapping against her chin a few times.

“It would be more interesting if it were the heart, but perhaps…” She moved from behind his chair and sifted through his pile of papers, scanning the works of other student until she found what she was looking for. It seemed she wasn’t the only one who had the thought. “What if it were the brain?” She slipped the paper she had pulled out to the top of the pile, where upon it a student had written an argument that it could be the brain and not the bowels. “If it were the brain… even if it is stone, it could still have some kind of… latent mental power. Perhaps that could explain the strange occurrences? Or do you think it’s too far-fetched?”
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Violet suggested the worst and it was then that Malcolm knew she was playing with him. He didn't like the feeling of being thrown off his work or focus by the woman, but thought perhaps he had over reacted once again; the noblewoman had a point after all, even if it was a little extreme. He couldn't help but feel as if he were talking to Avari at times, she was also very good at putting ideas in his mind that he might not have otherwise entertained.
“If logic is our argument,” he began, “and the labyrinth is not the heart because of the simple fact that the walls are made out of stone and not metal, then what say you in regards to the fact that the walls are lined with thousands upon thousands of bones? Why would we find bones in the brain and not in the stomach?” These kinds of academic discussions and theories were the reason he was so often home late, as a stack of eight hundred word papers took him hardly any time to grade at all when he got going.
Malcolm scanned the paper Violet had fished out and skimmed it to get an idea of what the student was thinking, quickly realising that it was just another wild guess without evidence, argument, or justification. Two more essays in and the ideas weren't getting much better, all following the same trend of ‘it can't be the heart because…’, that saw Malcolm go through them with his ink pen with haste. At the back of his mind, he could sense Violet’s eyes on him and slowed down, why was she lingering?
“Tomorrow morning at the seventh break I have a class in which we discuss all of this,” he extended the invitation, hoping she might get the hint that he needed this time to be prepared for the next morning. “The lesson goes for forty bits. You can sit at the back,” he pointed, no one would notice her there. “I'll see you then?”
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There were bones in the walls of the labyrinth, and that it made much harder to be convinced that it could be the brain. Though, of course, the brain was incased in bone as well. “It is a very good point. But of course, you are the professor. The brain can be encased in bone. But, perhaps, something unusual happened the original Jacadon? Or perhaps it simply is the belly and those are the bones of its prey. Has anyone ever studied the bones?” She wondered if the bones were all of different animals, and, perhaps, maybe some of them were humanoid.

Between the chatter, Malcolm had started picking up and glancing through the essays the students had left behind. He had examined the one she had put on the top, and she noticed that he made a number of marks and comments on it that indicated that he felt it was a rather unfounded guess. That was probably true, even if Violet had brought up the same thought. It was unlikely that every student really cared about the subject at hand. Possibly some of them were slugging through the lectures they needed for their letters or certificates.

Then he made a surprising offer. His offer that that at the seventh break of the next trial, he had a class in which the papers and all of this would be discussed. He suggested that she sit in the back, almost the same place she had sat before, and a bit of a smug smile curled on her lips. Although he might not admit it aloud, there had to be something in her advances that he enjoyed or he wouldn’t be inviting her back. He could easily be rid of her until Ashan if he had wanted to be.

“Of course, see you then, professor. I look forward to seeing what you have to say to your pupils and what they have to say back to you.” There was a hint of a wink, though it would be hard for Malcolm to tell if she had actually winked at all. With a hand trailing on the wood of the desk, she turned and headed towards the door. “Good luck!” The door the classroom closed behind her.
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As soon as the door was closed behind the woman, Malcolm sighed, somewhat relieved. Was this really happening, had that just happened? He looked at the stack of papers and wondered if there had ever been a time he had felt so flustered at work. Female students had hit on him before, but none of them had been so bold or determined. Around about the same time he had met Elyna, a young woman in his class named Thea had admitted to being quite infatuated with him, and had even stopped by his house a couple of times to deliver letters. To say the least, it was all a bit puzzling.
Why had he invited her back to attend the lecture the following morning, would he have done the same for anyone else? His heart rate picked up, the muscle pumping wildly within his chest, he was making himself sick with all this second guessing and doubt. But what if… what if a small part of him did enjoy the attention? No, he mustn't think that way, he didn't feel that way.
Malcolm worked through a few more essays in an attempt to think of something else, anything else but Violet and the way she had walked up to his desk with all the confidence of a lion in the meadow, untouchable and proud. The warden drew his thumb back and forth against the edge of the papers, and caught himself daydreaming, convincing himself promptly to snap out of it. He had a wife at home who lo--... he frowned, did she love him? Elyna certainly didn't want to be his wife, not after what he had done; could he really blame her?
Malcolm dropped the pen, it was time to go home, he could come in early tomorrow and finish marking the papers then. These thoughts, this place, it didn't feel healthy anymore, he knew these were not the kind of thoughts he wanted to entertain. He loved Elyna with all his heart, yes the last few seasons had been rough, but he would not trade his life for any other, not in the waking world or that of dreams. The best way to rid himself of the strange guilt, he felt, was to be honest. He needed to talk to Elyna, and this time he needed to be truthful with her.
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Name: Violet

Knowledge:
Location: Violet Warrick’s Home
Location: Midtown, Andaris
Location: Malcolm Krome’s (Regular) Classroom
Malcolm: Feels your behaviour is inappropriate
Malcolm: You make him uncomfortable
Malcolm: Must be interested, otherwise he wouldn’t keep you around
Jacadons: Their bodies turn to stone upon their deaths
Jacadons: Their hearts turn into a precious metal upon their death
Jacadons: Hive mind
The Labyrinth: The brain of Rynmere?
Rynmere: Could Rynmere be alive?
Writing: Blow air at the wet ink to help it dry
Detection: How to recognize when someone is being made uncomfortable
Etiquette: Do not disturb a classroom in session
Etiquette: It is highly inappropriate for a student to touch his or her professor
Seduction: How to make a simple word sound suggestive
Seduction: How to use innuendo
Seduction: A soft touch can be more seductive than a heavy one
Seduction: How to play little games to confuse your target
Seduction: Avoid being too obvious or heavy-handed to keep them guessing
Rhetoric: How to argue a point using examples
Rhetoric: Use a calm voice to present the facts
Rhetoric: Ask a question to open debate

Loot: Please deduct the cost of the lantern, ink, and parchment from your ledger.
Injuries: N/A
Fame: -1 bad deed for flirting shamelessly with a man you know is married
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Name: Malcolm

Knowledge:
Violet Warrick: May have difficulty understanding boundaries
Violet Warrick: May be interested in more than your mind
Violet Warrick: Likes to play games with you
Violet Warrick: Confident and proud
Violet Warrick: There’s something about Violet…
Jacadons: Their bodies turn to stone upon their deaths
Jacadons: Their hearts turn into a precious metal upon their death
Jacadons: Hive mind
The Labyrinth: The brain of Rynmere?
Rynmere: Could Rynmere be alive?
Etiquette: A male professor should be cautious about being found alone with a female student
Etiquette: It is highly inappropriate for a student to touch his or her professor
Rhetoric: Ask a question to open debate
Rhetoric: Use questions to make a point
Detection: How to detect subtle clues that a woman is flirting with you
Discipline: How to maintain a professional demeanor when a pretty student flirts with you
Intimidation: Meet their eyes when delivering a warning
Teaching: Use professional language when delivering a warning to a student
Persuasion: How to subtly hint at what you want

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 good deed for staying professional in the face of temptation
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: Tsk, tsk Violet! You are a troublemaker, and I love it. This thread was such fun! The interaction between Violet and Malcolm was excellent, and you both made it quite clear what your characters wanted without explicitly saying it. I love the tension and conflict in this thread, and the questions that Violet's inappropriate behavior raised for Malcolm.

Violet, I think you portrayed your character's thought process, reasoning, and desire very well. I like that she didn't feel as though her behavior was particularly wrong (while simultaneously noting Malcolm's discomfort and knowing that he's married).

Malcolm, I really enjoyed how you portrayed Mal's stoicism, discipline, and professionalism while still making him question himself and his reactions to Violet. He's walking a dangerous line by inviting her back to his classroom - but that's what makes this so much fun to read!

Overall, great story. You're both brilliant writers, and I look forward to seeing this plot progress in future threads!

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
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