Name: Elyna
Knowledge:
Medicine: Healthy mother, healthy baby
Cooking: Meat pie
Malcolm: Rode all night to get home
Malcolm: Remembers your promises of warm welcomes
Malcolm: No talk of the mission at night
Strength: Massaging out tension
Malcolm: Wants you to rest
Seduction: Easing frustration with physical affection
Malcolm: Messed up his clothes
Malcolm: Still distanced from you
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Name: Malcolm
Knowledge:
Mount: Horse: Riding at night
Detection: Noticing a loose horse shoe
Stealth: Walking quietly up stairs
Elsie: Recovered from her cold
Elyna: Collapsed while you were gone
Elyna: Didn’t want to alarm you via letter
Elyna: Says you’re her lover
Elyna: Was kept in the infirmary a few days
Elyna: Still distanced from you
Loot: N/A
Injuries: Scratches that will heal in 2 trials, fatigue and body aches that will fade in 3 trials.
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Comment:
Another sweet Malyna thread! My heart breaks for them and the fact that they still have this distance between them despite how hard they are trying to put things back together. Though this was a simple thread, you did good in giving nods to the whole overarching story. Good collaboration and structure looked fine!
If you feel that I've missed anything or have any questions or comments, please PM me!
Knowledge:
Medicine: Healthy mother, healthy baby
Cooking: Meat pie
Malcolm: Rode all night to get home
Malcolm: Remembers your promises of warm welcomes
Malcolm: No talk of the mission at night
Strength: Massaging out tension
Malcolm: Wants you to rest
Seduction: Easing frustration with physical affection
Malcolm: Messed up his clothes
Malcolm: Still distanced from you
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Name: Malcolm
Knowledge:
Mount: Horse: Riding at night
Detection: Noticing a loose horse shoe
Stealth: Walking quietly up stairs
Elsie: Recovered from her cold
Elyna: Collapsed while you were gone
Elyna: Didn’t want to alarm you via letter
Elyna: Says you’re her lover
Elyna: Was kept in the infirmary a few days
Elyna: Still distanced from you
Loot: N/A
Injuries: Scratches that will heal in 2 trials, fatigue and body aches that will fade in 3 trials.
Fame: N/A
Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5
Comment:
Another sweet Malyna thread! My heart breaks for them and the fact that they still have this distance between them despite how hard they are trying to put things back together. Though this was a simple thread, you did good in giving nods to the whole overarching story. Good collaboration and structure looked fine!
If you feel that I've missed anything or have any questions or comments, please PM me!