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20th of Saun 716

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20th of Saun, 716.

Being a handler for the Skye Verath Lodge meant more than what most people saw. Working with Volareon, Jacadon, occasionally Sarkin and even Gorde, they did more than than just groom, feed and treat them as little more as pets to visit on a regular basis. It was more than training them to be regular mounts or even war-mounts that flew in formation and attacked targets on command. When the going got tough, when the heat turned up, it was saving lives.

They'd all been called out. A Skyrider and her Volareon had gone out into the Royal Glenn on a little personal mission, and unknowingly picked up a Kidnapper Spider on the way. As they always did, the monsterous creature had hung itself over a common gaming trail, and when the Volareon passed underneath, it'd dropped down and stung it on the leg. The paralytic venom hadn't worked fast enough to paralyse any more of the larger creature, allowing the rider to shake the creature off - gaining a sting for herself in the process - and escape. Unknown to them both, it'd clung on... and when they took to the air, it stung again, finishing the job and completely paralysing the Volareon. Both it and its rider had fallen mid-flight, crushing the spider... but leaving both mount and rider heavily injured, both stung with a good deal of Kidnapper Spider paralysing venom.

Both hadn't landed far from the city. With good mounts, a host of doctors and veterinarians could be out and on the scene inside ten bits with the wind on their side. They could be, but they wouldn't be. Hearing the bizarre set of coincidences, the Infirmary had already pronounced the rider dead, claiming that the injury would send the venom straight to his heart... Kryll hadn't hesitated in refusing. Who would? So many other patients could be saved in the time that it would take to escort all of the staff needed, with all their supplies, down to investigate and treat the injuries of a man who could just as quickly die from the Kidnapper's venom the moment it hit his veins. As for the vet, well. The Lodge only had one. A young man with a constantly-pained expression and a sugar-coating of medical and surgical understanding.

He was sent out on the fastest horse he could fit in his saddle-bags, along with Poppy, Nir'wei and another regular handler. They'd treat the Volareon, and do whatever they could manage for the rider. If one, or even both died, then the rider would be sent to the morgue. The Volareon would be dragged back into the woods and left behind for whatever creatures that took it. One thing was for sure - the spider wouldn't take its meal back. The one saving grace in the whole mess was that the spider had been crushed under its own meal when it tried to finish the job.

"Come on, hurry!" Poppy shouted over her shoulder as Nir'wei fumbled with the reins and eventually abandoned them, clinging to his horse's neck as they rode out of the city gates in a full gallop. "If we don't make it within fifteen bells, it'll be too late!" If he had the courage, or the ability to raise his head an inch from where it was currently buried in the horse's wildly-thrashing mane, he'd have told her that if he tried to speed up any more, he wouldn't make it at all. It was hard enough coming to face the fact that there was a very real chance a man and his Volareon could die today, right in front of him, and nobody would be able to stop it. Trying to ride a horse, and a damn unruly one at that with that going through his head was a prescription for suicide. Poppy, noticing that Nir'wei was lagging behind, twirled back, grabbed his horse's reins in one hand and her own in the other, and rode them together in a feat that would have struck Nir'wei with awe, if he wasn't busy pissing over his own saddle all the way there.
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They arrived to a scene of disarray. The Volareon - Skyshred - hobbling around in circles around its downed rider, refusing to remain still. One leg was obviously heavily injured, scrapes and scratches littered one half of its body, and its wing was obviously broken, with bones poking through the skin and the tendons underneath twitching uncontrollably. It looked dazed, still under the lingering effects of the paralysis toxins. As for its rider... well, it was obvious from even a distance that they'd both taken quite a high fall, and Skyshred hadn't broken his rider's fall.

The farmers, who's land they'd fallen into, stood nearby with their eyes fixed on the animal. They both turned as the group approached; a middle-aged man with dark skin and a wife rippling with muscles through her thin shirt. "We tried to get close and tend to the wounds, 'much as we could," one of the farmers yelled up at Poppy and Nir'wei as they drew near, "but that winged thing nearly tore my arm off 'fore we could get in close! Won't respond t' anything." She turned, and Nir'wei caught sight of a tear in her shirt, stained with blood. She wasn't joking when she said it nearly tore her apart; though frankly they didn't have time to deal with this. All of them were racing against an invisible clock and the longer they spent calming an agitated and confused Volareon instead of treating its rider, the less time they had.

Poppy dismounted first, but Nir'wei jumped ahead of her and snatched the filled waterskin from his bag. "I'll calm him down, you attend to the wounds." He couldn't see it, but Poppy opened her mouth and nearly snatched the waterskin from his hand in protest, but restrained herself at the last moment. This really wasn't a good time for making arguments. Better if everyone just did what they were told and nothing less, regardless of who was giving the orders. They could all complain and argue about it later when there wasn't a man's life in danger.

"Hey. Easy." Despite their tight schedule, Nir'wei took it as slow as he thought he could get away with, letting the Volareon limp uneasily towards him before he made any moves. Anything remotely aggressive and they'd both regret it. With an injured wing and paralysis venom coursing through its body, escape wasn't an option. If Skyshred thought Nir'wei was even remotely dangerous, he'd swiftly find himself on the receiving end of some hundred pounds of clawed, toothed predator crashing down on his body... and although Volareon-caused deaths weren't common, they definitely weren't impossible. "Come on here. Down. Dooooooown." He reached out slowly and a low, dark growl replied. "Hey, hey." Even his softest voice wasn't doing anything to fray it's nerves. "Easy. Look, water. Come on, I'm not gonna hurt'cha."

Skyshred stopped moving but it wasn't coming any closer. He at least had its attention. The vet and the remaining two handlers gave the agitated Volareon a wide berth as they passed to surround the downed rider and begin treating his wounds. He was in much more danger of bleeding out and succumbing to the toxins than Skyshred... well, Nir'wei hoped as much. Although they'd at least managed to calm the Volareon down to the point that he wasn't actively attacking anyone nearby, he kept backing away every time Poppy tried to reach out for its broken wing; and boy, if it thought things were hurting now, it'd tear them all apart the moment they tried to set and splint its wing-bones back together.

Nir'wei pushed forward, eliciting another growl. "Hey, stop it now." Another step forward. The growl turned deeper and Skyshred took a step back, wobbling for a moment as it put too much pressure on its injured leg. "Come on, stop. Stay there. Stay." He was pushing his luck and he knew it all too well, but at this point he didn't have any choice in the matter; they needed to treat. Another step forward and he could visibly see the muscles all over its body tensing, fur bristling... he reached out with a hand and recoiled it not a second later as its jaws snapped at him. Not a warning bite, either. If he'd held his hand there for one moment longer, he'd have lost something. "Sweet mother of Moseke!" he cursed silently.
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The combination of extreme injury, toxins and the daze from the fall made it completely impossible to calm the Volareon by conventional means, it was obvious now. Neither Nir'wei nor Poppy could even lay a finger on it, and although the wounds had since dried and clotted, they needed proper treatment with antiseptics, cleaning and bandages to treat infection. "Poppy, got anything to help calm him down?" They both retreated back to their horses and Poppy reached into her saddlebag, searching through a small garden's worth of herbs collected into a bag. Nir'wei could only recognize Canenula, but Poppy pulled out two different flowers and took away Nir'weis waterskin to crush the petals of one, and the roots of another. Both she pushed through the narrow hole and swilled around a few times, mixing them all together.

"Valerian root," she explained, lifting a pink-petalled flower with a long narrow stem and wide white roots, "and Passion flower," as she lifted a stubby purple large-petalled flower. "Sedatives. Get him to drink from this and give it a few bits to work." Easier said than done. They couldn't even come close to Skyshred without luring him into an unprovoked attack, and they couldn't force him to drink it either, short of levering his mouth open and forcing the stuff down his throat... oh. Nir'wei grimaced.

It wasn't a good idea, but it was the best one either of them had. "Mind preparing something for me, too?" She looked at him with the most confused expression. "Just whatever you can brew together, for the pain." It still wasn't clicking, but that was a good thing anyway - it meant she was less likely to intervene as Nir'wei took off his cloak and wrapped it several times around his sleeve, creating the baggiest padding he could manage and bracing himself mentally for what he was about to do. "Alright. This is gonna hurt me a hell of a lot more than it's gonna hurt you, but hey, it's all in your best interests." He was mumbling to himself. For some reason he thought agitating himself would make everything easier to handle, but really it was just making it even worse.

"Focus on something else," Archailist offered as Nir'wei stepped towards the Volareon, earning another low warning growl as it stepped back and eyed his fabric-wrapped hand suspiciously. "You know what's going to happen. Don't let it surprise you, but think about something else. Eating some delicious beef later tonight, making some warm soup." That did sound nice. Another step, another growl as Skyshred tensed up but refused to attack immediately like last time. "Don't focus on the pain when it comes. Keep your thoughts elsewhere, be aware of what's happening, but don't let it affect your mental status." One more step. He reached out with his cloak-wrapped hand... and Skyshred's head whipped around and clamped down hard over his right forearm.

Its teeth dug painfully into his flesh even through several layers of cloth and he nearly bit through his own tongue as he tried to reel back a loud yell of pain. Screaming, attacking or flailing would only make things much, much worse. That didn't make the current situation any better. Pinpricks of pain and heat flared all down his arm, making his fingers turn numb as he tightened his fist. "Damnit... damnit damnit damnit damnit damnit!" Skyshred tugged, Nir'wei held firm. While its jaw was levered open around Nir'weis arm, he jammed the end of the waterskin into the Volareon's mouth and upended it, spilling a good portion on the ground and down over its lips and chin. Skyshred resisted, shaking its head again and biting deeper into Nir'weis skin, nearly shaking him from his feet... but after nearly emptying the waterskin into its mouth, it swallowed. And swallowed. And when he twisted the waterskin's metal cap in Skyshred's mouth, it opened a gap just wide enough to release his arm and back away to a safe distance behind Poppy.

It hobbled a few steps after him, but faltered and swayed, nearly losing its balance. No less than three ticks later, it'd fallen to all-fours, head bowed and eyes blinking in a dull haze. Nir'wei couldn't help with his injuries, but Poppy managed just fine - and later on, the vet returned to successfully re-set and splint Skyshred's wing.

As Nir'wei sat back near the horses and peeled back the cloak, smears of blood greeted him. There were fairly obvious teeth marks left over the middle of his forearm, digging fairly deep into the arm... although given the Volareon's weakness and his added padding and protection, he'd gotten away very lightly. A few scrapes was to be expected. After Skyshred's treatment was finished, Poppy turned to him and held out a small vial. "Mix that into your waterskin and drink it before you go to bed tonight. Scarf Rot, single dose." He pushed it away but Poppy was surprisingly insistent, pushing it firmly into the palm of his hand and closing his fingers around it. "Take it. Consider it an added payment, or whatever you want to call it. I consider it an investment to make sure you come in tomorrow. It'll help heal the bite."

As she turned back around to climb onto her horse, Nir'wei stood up again. "Is the rider alright?"

"He's dead. The fall split and crushed his skull; his spine was crushed and severed into two pieces at the neck. He died before those farmers even notified anyone."
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It's Not All Smiles and Dragon Rainbows.

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Name: Nir’wei

Knowledge:
Kidnapper Spider: Hangs over trails
Kidnapper Spider: Paralytic venom
Mount: Horse: Galloping
Animal Training: Volareon: Calming an injured animal
Animal Training: Volareon: Using a soft voice
Animal Training: Volareon: Recognizing signs of agitation
Detection: Spotting Canenula
Detection: Spotting Valerian Root
Detection: Spotting Passion Flower
Medicine: Valerian Root: Sedative
Medicine: Passion Flower: Sedative
Discipline: Thinking of something else to distract from pain
Animal Training: Volareon: Using sedatives when conventional methods don’t work
Animal Training: Volareon: Prying open the mouth with your arm
Medicine: Scarf Rot: Painkiller

Loot: Please deduct the supplies used from your ledger.
Injuries: Volareon bite that will heal in 7 trials
Fame: +1 general good deed

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Structure: 5

Comment:
I loved this thread! It was so exciting to see if they were going to be successful with the Volareon, and you did a good job by holding off the rider’s fate until the end. There were a few minor structural errors, like commas that need to be added. Perhaps brush up on that or keep it in mind when you proof. Nothing major though. Great story!

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