(Viden Wilderness) Return to the Snowfall

71st of Vhalar 719

Stronghold of education and learning, this fortress is in one of the coldest areas of Idalos and home to many knowledge seekers in a variety of disciplines. However, unknown to most, below the city are those who suffer for the sake of science. While all are welcome, not everyone will be treated as they expect.

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Re: (Viden Wilderness) Return to the Snowfall

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Sybil:

Knowledge:
Endurance x 2
Endurance: Trudging through the snow for quite a while
Endurance: Mental exhaustion can lead to physical exhaustion
Leadership x 5
Leadership: What's best for a follower can often be exhausting
Leadership: It's best to personalize rewards to followers for best results
Leadership: Time outside can be refreshing to followers
Leadership: Morale in followers is a fickle thing
Leadership: Letting other people feel in control for a moment can refresh them
Negotiation x 3
Negotiation: Letting Wald have his way with outside time
Negotiation: Letting Wald feel in charge in exchange for warmth
Negotiation: The illusion of generosity can be instilled with basic actions
Socialization x 5
Socialization: Physically well people have a better time interacting
Socialization: Mentally well people have a better time interacting
Socialization: The snow can be a fun place to blow off steam for some
Socialization: Physical affection can serve as appropriate affirmation
Socialization: Letting people have breaks from society can help re-socialization

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Wald:

Knowledge:
Strength: Carrying Sybil
Strength: Steadying Sybil
Endurance: Walking through the snow
Endurance: Carrying Sybil
Discipline: Not letting your wants take over
Seduction: Do not say corny lines
Seduction: Keep calm
Seduction: Understanding the target
Meditation: focusing on keeping warm
Hunting: Pulling a rabbit out
Butchery: Killing a rabbit quick
Detection: Finding rabbit tracks
Navigation: Moving through the snow
Acrobatics: Moving with someone on your back

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

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Comments:Wald’s joy is almost tangible, even if it doesn’t seem to be exactly what Sybil expected. Their relationship has changed a lot! Wald has changed a lot! I remember reading threads where he was rather feral!

Wald’s telling Sybil that he loved them was a little unexpected. I wonder what exactly led up to his confession. I love how he worded it though! I’m glad that Sybil doesn’t seem to be entirely against the idea of romance and is willing to explore some things, at least.

I also enjoyed the interaction between Wald and Ari.

Great job, and enjoy your rewards!
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