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Beautiful writing! I found thread a good read and also very informative. The silent interaction between the PCs during the class shows their feelings without telling and builds up their anticipation of what will follow. Your text was easy to read despite the complexity of the topics. Please find your individual comments and rewards in the player tabs!
Doran
The detail ou give Doran's teaching about alchemy is awesome. It also tells a lot about his attitude to other people. He asks advanced questions it takes courage to answer. Between the lines, he seems to demand high intelligence and be ready to despise failed answers. He also seems unaware of how intimidating he can be. "There were times when nobody answered for a reason that he had not managed to figure out yet."
Skillplay: Appropriate to the levels. This is a test review so you get way more detail than the average reviews use to give people as experienced as you. So. As a GM in Alchemy and Expert at teaching Doran is believable. Seduction of the super eager Llyr seems like an easy case and within the limits of Competent Seduction. The tiny amount of ether he sent at Llyr which is within the skill limits of Competent Transmutation. Poisons weren't listed as a skill under Skills Used but I found Competent Poisons 26/250 in the CS. Also appropriately used.
Please recall to always make sure that all skills you request knowledge for also are among those listed as skills used!
Knowledge awarded
Knowledge:
Alchemy x4
Poisons x1
Seduction x3
Transmutation x1[/align]
Skillplay: Appropriate to the levels. This is a test review so you get way more detail than the average reviews use to give people as experienced as you. So. As a GM in Alchemy and Expert at teaching Doran is believable. Seduction of the super eager Llyr seems like an easy case and within the limits of Competent Seduction. The tiny amount of ether he sent at Llyr which is within the skill limits of Competent Transmutation. Poisons weren't listed as a skill under Skills Used but I found Competent Poisons 26/250 in the CS. Also appropriately used.
Please recall to always make sure that all skills you request knowledge for also are among those listed as skills used!
Knowledge awarded
Knowledge:
Alchemy x4
Poisons x1
Seduction x3
Transmutation x1[/align]
Llyr
Llyr's behaviour in the classroom is entertaining, adorably so. It shows his personality so well. Exited and active he breaks the unspoken classroom etiquette and in general, he comes off as an eager in his admiration of Doran. He is interested in the alchemy but comes off as even more interested in the teacher. Gotta love how he blushes and pretends to make notes and scribbles in the marginals.
Skillplay: Appropriate to the levels. This is a test review so you get way more detail than the average reviews use to give people as experienced as you. So. As a Novice in Alchemy and at academic studies Llyr makes some droll beginner notes in a non-academic language that will earn him an F for his essay to come if he doesn't shape up, so it's okay. His degree of discipline is well within the limits of the Master level. The Expert Seduction allows for his seduction of Doran. (They also already know each other, Doran is his initiate and he has shown during the lesson that he is interested.) Intimidation of the Elluned by Edasha-born beauty was also appropriate to Expert Intimidation.
Teaching isn't listed under Skill Used but according to the CS Llyr has Competent Teaching. He doesn't teach in the thread but you request 1 knowledge in teaching - as I see it, he learns more about teaching by watching Doran in action.
Please recall to always make sure that all skills you request knowledge for also are among those listed as skills used!
Knowledge awarded:
[*] Alchemy 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Alchemy 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 1/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 2/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 3/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Intimidation 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Intimidation 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Seduction 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Seduction 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
Non-skill:
Doran: Somehow even more alluring while teaching a class.
Doran: Alchemy Professor Thetys.
Refinement: Individual Feeding (Doran): +5 breaks (35 Vhalar 719)
Renown: +10 for the spectacular entrance Llyr made in front of Doran's students
Skillplay: Appropriate to the levels. This is a test review so you get way more detail than the average reviews use to give people as experienced as you. So. As a Novice in Alchemy and at academic studies Llyr makes some droll beginner notes in a non-academic language that will earn him an F for his essay to come if he doesn't shape up, so it's okay. His degree of discipline is well within the limits of the Master level. The Expert Seduction allows for his seduction of Doran. (They also already know each other, Doran is his initiate and he has shown during the lesson that he is interested.) Intimidation of the Elluned by Edasha-born beauty was also appropriate to Expert Intimidation.
Teaching isn't listed under Skill Used but according to the CS Llyr has Competent Teaching. He doesn't teach in the thread but you request 1 knowledge in teaching - as I see it, he learns more about teaching by watching Doran in action.
Please recall to always make sure that all skills you request knowledge for also are among those listed as skills used!
Knowledge awarded:
[*] Alchemy 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Alchemy 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 1/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 2/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Discipline 3/3: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Intimidation 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Intimidation 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Seduction 1/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
[*] Seduction 2/2: Continue (35 Vhalar 719)
Non-skill:
Doran: Somehow even more alluring while teaching a class.
Doran: Alchemy Professor Thetys.
Refinement: Individual Feeding (Doran): +5 breaks (35 Vhalar 719)
Renown: +10 for the spectacular entrance Llyr made in front of Doran's students
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