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Night practically had to drag herself down the street. She was shivering violently as her feet crunched against a thick layer of snow. Even with all the lights in the city burning she couldn't really see all that well. The darkness was nearly as thick as the blanket of snow which covered the world around her. She breathed out and took in a deep gulp of air. Her throat felt dry and scratchy, almost like it was on fire. "I really hope I'm not starting to catch a cold," she whispered to herself placing her hands against her arms and rubbing furiously. Her attempts to banish the cold from her bones were for the most part completely fruitless. Her skin was numb from the sheer cold, but at the same time there was a subtle painful burn that came with the temperature of her skin dropping far below normal. She glanced around ducking into the nearest building be it a shop or a bar. She had no desire to catch frost bite.

It just so happened to be a tavern. The place was warm and smelled of alcohol and people. A group of girls in the corner sat together laughing and winking at the men all around them. Judging by their dress they were some form of entertainment that could be paid for. The details were uncertain but Night could care less. She walked towards a corner and sat down. It was the closest seat she could get to the fire without actually sitting in the fire. That wouldn't be very pleasant for anyone that wasn't an Aukari. People glanced at her for a moment before turning away. Some began to whisper to each other continuing to look between their little groups and her. Others just turned away and complete ignored Night from that moment forward. Either way no one walked up to her and tried to speak to her. Her attention was drawn instead to something else entirely. She pulled out a couple piece of paper snagged from work as well as a small piece of charcoal curtsy of her own fire. She placed the large black chunk of burnt wood between two talons and started to sketch out something.

It wasn't a very good drawing but a couple moments later it started to look more and more like a person. Night was slowly becoming a better worker for the Smarter Charts because she was dedicated. She continued to improve her skills as best she could. But it didn't change the fact that she failed when it came to the actual drawing of the map. So one of the many people above her had shoved a couple rolls of paper into her arms and told her to go somewhere and practice. With her she had a list of various components to writing, things to practice and help her get better. The first thing on there was simple enough. "Drawing is half of what you see," she muttered to herself. Now she was stuck between looking down at the paper and looking back up at one of the bar maids. Her figure rushed back and fourth causing Night all the extra trouble. She quickly learned that it was hard to draw a moving target. She tried to start with some basic shapes. Of course most of the body like the head and hands and torso all could be summed up to a couple of large circles. That was easy enough. The basic figure sat proudly on her page, if she was just trying to draw the basic shape of a model then it wouldn't look that bad. The trill she tried to move on to the more complex details everything went wrong.

The eyes ended up to big, she made the hips far too small for a woman, the nose was completely wrong on so many levels. She ended up with a witch, not a beautiful bar maid. The frown she had walked into the building with got deeper as concentration creased her features. She crumpled up the piece of paper tossing it into the fire and starting over. This time she chose an easier target. Someone that was sitting and wasn't moving much. The man happily chatted with his companions not paying any attention to the half breed as her eyes seemed to burn holes into him. She tried to memorize the features, his body shape, how his nose curved. Her eyes almost crossed as she leaned so far close to the paper just trying to get the tiny details right. In the end it wasn't any better than the last drawing and now she was starting to get a head ache from staring at her sheet perhaps a little too hard.

She leaned back with a hearty sigh resting her head against the back of the chair. "I don't get it," she whimpered to herself. How did everyone at work make it look so easy. Most of them at least had the basics down if not higher level art skills. But Night? she could barely get a single portrait right no matter how hard she worked. Her attention turned to the last piece of information on her little list. "Drawing is a practiced skill, not magic. Only practice will make you better. I call bull! I can't ever be good at this," she said turning her attention away from the bitter situation at hand.
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Adam was just enjoying another beautiful evening, or day, or was it afternoon? He hardly noticed less he had to stumble out the bar and piss on the side of the building out in an alleyway he had some semblance of class. And for a guy who just didn't give a shit, he seemed to get what he wanted when he wanted it. The courtesans out there staring and giggling trying to seduce young men out of there coin for a taste of what they had between there legs. Adam could probably pluck there evenings earnings from each of them and have a wild slumber party that most wouldn't even dare dream about all the while laughing his ass off while he road miss daisy all the way to bank. Of course Adam wasn't going to play second fiddle and play around with scruffy unenticing women that had been in an unending free for all with any and all Johns that had a few silver to spare.

Courtesans aside oh how the barmaids fawned in there day dreams of being lucky enough to catch ol Adams eye for a frolicking, but he wasn't looking for there attention Even the bartender that sported kegs in her brazier that kept patrons coming in so they could try and score a brief gander at the snug gap between those marvelous twin peaks would probably think her life was incomplete until she caught a moment with this man.

The truth was Adam could be a legendary Seducer if he refined his game a little, but even then he was still a master and even on his worst he was still at his best when it came to putting notches on his belt. For example he was looking for a challenge, he prefered eyes on him and women to fawn but this one lady seemed so enthralled with her doodles she hardly paid him any mind.

It looked like he was going to go on safari, his quarry half bird human thing. Something tickled his fancy about being a regular beast tamer and would ready his charms to reduce a lion into a purring pussy cat. At this point he didn't even really need magic as his presence was as addictive as tapping a vein with narcotics. It was easy for him to manipulate with Empathy in seduction based situations because it was like illiciting a feeling that was already present as if simply enhancing a tickle to an itch. The real issue was using it in situations he was unfamiliar, people's emotions could often wreck a careless empath however he would secure himself by finding a fairly secluded spot so as not to be overwhelmed.

His first trick was the obvious choice, order two cups of wine. And introduce himself, really most of the set backs came from not even trying or getting derailed by an alpha male or catch the wrath of the woman's man if she had one. Getting that cookie out the jar was a dangerous game luckily Adam was a master of getting women to put him in there pants not the other way around.

So two cups of wine later after a brief watch, the hunter traversed the tavern wilderness keeping clear of the vultchers until he made his way to his quarry.

No man, check
No group, check
No killjoy friend, check

All systems go

As he approached he couldn't help but over hear her conversation, so he would nonchalantly place himself in it.

Your just trying to hard dear, its almost as if the paper feels your desperation. All you need to do is step back and have a drink, ignore it and come back with a fresh mind.

The truth was Adam didn't know what she was doing he just heard her speak aloud and saw frustration when she burned a paper. She was probably a hack but it wouldn't stop him from being a world class bullshit artist.

Here I saw you from afar, figured I'd get you a drink to help warm you from the frost

He offered her the drink before resting his back against the wall next to the fireplace, the way the light sparkled illuminated his face with agreeable ambiance. After all the right lighting really did cloak one with impeccable good looks, it could turn swine into damsels the only problem much like the fairy tales when the morning light came out to play the magic would vanish leaving you haphazardly to wake up to sum of all fears the dreaded buyers remorse of the questionable hookup.

He was curious about the hybrids reactions, after all Avriel as he heard were often doomed by the vanity they had been created from. As he attempted to gauge the accuracy of such drunken folklore, he took a sip from the brass chalice.
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Night's attention instantly turned to this new man. Confusion crossed her mind and a slight amount of distrust as to why she would be approached. "Oh? Apologies but I don't drink," the half breed said. For all of what he thought about himself Night didn't think him to be all too grand. Her reaction wasn't prideful though. Her reaction was the exact opposite, fearful of what he was trying to do since she knew herself to be far from beautiful. At least in her mind. The truth of the matter wasn't quite the way Night saw it. "I appreciate the gesture, but really I have work that needs to get done," she said as her focus shifted back to the paper.

If anything the overly prideful one in this situation was the human instead of the half breed. He wasn't that grand in her eyes, he was just like any other man to her. She couldn't see the difference, she couldn't see what made someone attractive and what didn't. Frankly there had been very few times in her life she could actually gauge the attractiveness of another being. She herself couldn't see her own attractive features. She saw her legs, covered in feathers and ended in hawk like feet. She saw claws and wings and other beastly descriptors. It would be a lie to say that was all that made her up. Her features were pleasant, soft. There was a maturity in her face that wasn't necessarily age. Her expression was far too youthful for it to be called aged. Her porcelain skin glimmered in the fire light, though it could be assumed it was the most beautiful under moon light. Her eyes glinted wildly with the lusts of a life of adventure and the wildness, yet there was a certain sorrow to them that came from loneliness, there was also a distrust that glinted in the corners of her orbs showing how fearful she was to get near to another person who might just decide to leave her. A sparkle of gray fluttered in the blues of midnight, making her shifting optics seem all the more mysterious and yet somehow completely open to the true nature of the woman behind them.

Her mind completely shifted towards the focus of her work, showing her obvious disinterest. Yet there was something about his presence that made the woman wary. There was a feeling in the back of her mind that she should make an escape, try to leave what could easily become a dangerous situation in the blink of an eye. She'd avoided the potential idea of having a drink slipped with drugs, but she had no clue what this man was capable of. When people flirted with her of all creatures it usually meant something was wrong and she was about to be tricked. It was best to avoid such a situation before it actually started, and there was only one good way to do that.

Coming a decision she stood up and smiled at him. "Actually, it might be better if I leave. I should go home, I have other things I need to work on after all," she said simply. She turned away moving towards the door. Her steps were graceful and quick, full of practiced purpose that kept her from randomly getting jumped or questioned. The power of her gait was something that wasn't reflected internally as her mind buzzed with fear for her life and yet the abandon of not wanting it any longer. It was a confusing mix, she wanted to stay alive and die at the same time. It was the curse of someone born a disgusting creature like herself.

She pushed open the door moving out into the cold. The wind nipped at her face as she looked out upon a world of darkness. She pulled a stick from her bag and placed it for a moment inside of a nearby flame until it caught. It was a simple torch, it would burn out quick. But she had more sticks, they were easy to get when one lived in a forest. Hopefully what she had on her would be enough to get her home. If she tried to fly she'd certainly get lost without a dose of Brightfern. She sighed watching the shifting darkness as she though of the walk home that was ahead of her.
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Something had come off more then suspicious when the halfbreed quickly asserted she did not drink. Normally a woman that was asserting herself would frankly be irritated be annoyed or frustrated and he could feel it literally, but her vibe was all off for a women that was simply not interested. How she acted, how she moved it all indicated something else the fear she threw off made Adam step a bit further away angling himself from the intensity of the sudden surge of brash emotion that overwhelmed him as it hit him like a jolt Adam was in tune with feelings like lust and desire ectasy but fear of that magnitude was better handled by one skilled in intimidation. He was keen to step back and breath and smart enough to play the intelligence game rather then following a possible assassin into the darknesd, as a spy he had access to resources and he knew where to take his inquiry to Vuda himself. The woman was a half breed, with a job that involved doodling clearly it was a numbers game and she wouldn't be hard to find how many other half Avriel half women were under employ from the city with the same features she had? It wouldn't be hard to go to the employment office to get her name, and job and have her followed discreetly by spys.

Adam thought she was some kind of spy for the Aukari, maybe an Agent for the seekers or the cult. But one thing was certain, her sudden behavior and surge of emotion raised red flags and Adam had every right to view what he felt and saw and hold it with some level of suspicion as he only offered her a drink and some advice he over heard her grumble about aloud. He made a mental note to watch her leave from the window in the general direction she left as he took a sip of wine from his bronze cup.

He was on Safari the Gazelle could run, but it had no place to hide.

When she left Adam took his drink over to the bartender and smiled, he offered her the drink instead.

Aye, guess she was scared of my prized possession the family jewels are a lot to handle if you know what I mean, prolly a virgin or something. So tell me, what's your name sweet heart? You look a little braver then the last lass, care to go on an adventure when your shift ends?

He'd play it cool make a joke of it and carry on, stay incognito and chat it up with another girl as if he'd just been rejected by some uppity house wife. But he would certainly file a report on what happened in the evening, it wasn't right she was hiding something people that run always are hiding something.

After all that was his job as an Agent for lord Vuda, and Adam took that shit seriously. He wanted to desperately be part of Vuda inner circle and become a noble. Dropping the ball wasn't going to get him anywhere except mauled.
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It was almost laughable how far off his mark Adam was. If anything she was the exact opposite of what he thought her to be. Certainly if he went to Vuda to try and speak of her existence the mage would already know. After befriending Mal she had inadvertently put herself on his radar. She only continued to damn herself and make her presence known by gathering fame as if it was more precious than jewels. If Adam entered the Smarter Charts then most certainly he would get an ear full of praises and annoyance about the half breed.

Hours passed after Night realized that maybe she should stay in town a while longer. She needed to find work for the season anyway. She didn't feel safe wandering off into the darkness on her own, not when she could be getting tailed by some strange man. Crime recently has spiked in the city she'd come to adore, Adam was all too much of a reminder of that. The worst part had to be she couldn't manage to get her mind off of him. Perhaps he would have been attractive and caught her attention in a different way should Night have ever felt attracted to another being in her entire life. But such an event had never taken place. The sensations the male caused and the aura he seemed to radiate were foreign, the results of which unnatural and more or less disturbing. Hence her caution. Her feet let her wander the town trying to find someplace bright and warm to practice her skills. Focus however wasn't something that came easy.

"Greetings little bird," a voice said to her with a tone of amusement. She turned around a smile crossing her mouth at the familiar voice. She was able to glean some comfort from the figure which smiled at her kindly, his eyes glinting with a welcoming familiarity. How the guard had become a staple of her life she still didn't know, but he'd opened doors for the half breed and so far was a good friend to her.

"Dear Alexander! Aren't we just the pair, wandering dark streets in our time off," she said with a laugh. Her voice danced warmly and her tone became light. Her mind was able to pull its thoughts away from the shocking stranger who dared to approach a creature like herself. The man before her now was dressed casually aiding to her assessment that he was off duty. Yet here he was wandering the dangerous streets. Alexander huffed shaking his head with a sigh. "What brings you out and about in the dark and cold?"

"Actually I was trying to look for you," the guard replied casually, "We've been having some problems with a thief. If you're up for a hunt in the dark then I'd really appreciate the effort. You know we don't have many people to spare lately with all the problems running rampant in the city. I hate that we have to rely on you so much for the simple fact I'm sure it's an inconvenience to you, but I promise you'll be paid as richly as I can offer."

"Personally offering me a job are we? You don't have to worry about me or my problems. It's my job and my pleasure to help others, we both know this. I live to serve whatever one could define as good. My only goal in life is too give someone else the best shot they can get. I've got the free time, I'll swing by tomorrow and you came give me the details. I might end up having to stay in town overnight..." She said with a worried look.

"Why? Did something bad happen?" Alexander had the look of protective warrior cross his face at the idea of his companion finding risk in his city. These streets were his as well as her's to protect, so was the forest outside. If one of the strongest women he'd ever met felt unsafe on the streets then he was truly a failure as a guard.

"I just met a really weird man in the tavern. He walked up to me and offered a drink as if it was normal. Which would be, if it was anyone besides me," she motioned to her body. Half avriel were something that were hated in Etzos. Her breed was something that people tended to try and avoid unless they already knew her personally. And she was pretty sure that was a requiem that didn't apply to the stranger. "Obviously it had me a little worried that there was foul play. It doesn't help that all these bad things have been having lately. For all I knew it could have been a murderer or someone finally got fed up with my presence and got an assassin to try and clip my wings," she said, "Maybe I should have stayed there and entertained instead of throwing some other poor woman to the wolves..."

Alexander shook his head with a sigh. "Eld, you can't keep blaming yourself for everything bad that happens. You're one person, you can't take responsibility for the world. I've got some other things I need to head off and do. Take care of yourself. You're as good a person as you are a fighter," he said with a look of worry. He did a small salute to his fellow warrior and started off.

Night nodded with a sigh. She moved to walk away and head home, only to turn around and come face to face with the object of her current worries. She felt every muscle in her body tense up. Her eyes narrowed slightly. Had he been stalking her? Was he watching her the whole time? Perhaps the season was just making her paranoid. Sweet immortals she hated Cylus! The cold, the dark, the difficulty when it came to flying, everything made the sell sword's life the closest thing to eternal suffering as it could get for 30 trials. "Hello again?" She said. Her voice raised up slightly at the end like a question and she took a step back trying to size up the man. If he did happen to hear her and Alexander's conversation he would surely understand her jumpiness came from the troubles of the city and not her own personal agenda. If he didn't hear, this was about to become a long conversation.
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What could he say? He was more then happy to oblige the bartenders advances and punch her ticket on Adams wild ride she'd have to hold on cause things got bumpy. But like most who get the service when the the gravy train reached it's intended destination to flavor country it was the passengers que to pack up and leave as there were no round trips on the Adam express. There were also no freebies or stowaways on the mean machine, so he'd be sure to collect his travel fees when a very satisfied customer left his presence.

It was time to make his way towards wherever, bottle o rum in one hand fancy hat on his head he ventured into the biting cold. His armor was generously cut from the best leathers available handcrafted by masters, he carried the emblem of a rooster on his chest as he pretended to feign some form of nobility as those in rynmere often chose animals for crests.

Eyes perked up as that woman from before showed up again, he smiled and sipped his rum. Clearly the Brown Cock of Andaris was enough to make the woman blush and flighty but clearly just a taste was never enough as she had returned. He suspected the woman to have had a revelation that he was the greatest thing she'd ever graced her eyes upon, and swallowed her fear for another gander at greatness. He suspected she was some lust filled maiden, but he was drunk and he'd already had his exploit for the evening.

"Stay back I say, ye ~fowl~ temptress. Thine kitchen is closed, come back at my usual hours of operation and I'll ruffle that plumage for ya, no problem."

He quirked a brow and gave her a wry smile delighted by how clever he was to wield such puns, Adam was of course indifferent to her reaction or what she may or may not think of him. A small price to pay to be submerged in madness. He smelt of fornication, pipe weeds and liqueur but there was something insatiable about him that made even those that truly despised the man to come back for more.

It's not that he was too drunk to over hear her conversations, it's that he didn't care the world revolved around him. People were just tools for him to manipulate, and he didn't have the capacity to handle other people's emotional baggage.
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OMG - this has to be the most funny, bizarre, weird- well written~ thread ever. I love your portrayal of Night here, her attention to detail, focus on the drawing. But from "I don't drink" this relationship was doomed. Although, I loved it - I loved how you both wrote it. Such a shame it was abandoned! Still if I've missed anything, give me a pm!

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So glad you came back - I loved this thread!!!

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Seduction; A drink or two helps
Seduction; Having a plan B for Bartender.
Seduction; Using dim lighting to highlight oneself
Seduction; Checking to see if a person of interest is in a group
Seduction; Offering a drink
Seduction; Sometimes the kitchen is closed
Empathy; It's difficult to deal with unfamiliar emotions.
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