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5th of Cylus 718

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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5th Trail, Cylus, Arc 718
Northwestern Civilian Outer Housing
19th break
The reader did not want to waste the light, for he knew candles were at a premium during Cylus. Thirty trials of darkness and no force known to men or gods that could remove it. Of course any man selling illumination would be privately cackling with joy. He'd seen a single wick smeared with wax go for ten gold pieces, in the last, desperate days of Cylus. That or whole stretches of the City Of Rings swamped in endless shadow, houses and business alike willing to go it in the pitch rather than shell out precious funds for exorbitantly-priced candles or lamp oil.

The reader knew all this, just like he knew that the upright rats roaming the streets would see the glow in windows and know a few coins could be made from a rifling. His family had all stayed in one room at the end of the season, lit by a single candle, to protect their light from darkness bearing greedy hands. Relying on numbers and witnesses to dissuade robbers.

Parchment rustled softly as the reader turned a page. He didn't need to worry about being robbed. Not in this neighborhood.
"We are not their pawns, nor their followers," growled the Captain, his sweeping arm taking in the devastation behind him. "Is this what loving gods do to their faithful? Is this the future we give to our children? One of slavery and mindless obedience, lest we invite annihilation?"
He'd forgotten how many time's he'd read the book. Enough that the page corners were dog-eared and smooth from the rub of his fingertips. Enough that the spine had almost completely fallen away, gold-lettered book title soon to be replaced by the bare guts of several hundred pages stitched together. The reader barely noticed the book's condition. It was the story that mattered; the words captured within.
The priest looked beyond that trembling arm and forced himself to gaze upon the "judgement" of the Immortals. Corpses of all ages, still and smoking and often scattered in the ash and smoke. Buildings blasted apart like toys kicked by petty children. Bountiful fields and clever works of dedicated men, sustenance and innovation both, reduced to charcoal and rubble.
He bowed his head and prayers would not come. He had seen what the gods could do now. He did not want their answers, nor their attentions. Men and nations and monsters had wreaked havoc such as this before, but every time they were of mortal flesh, and could be destroyed.
And they never flayed a kingdom alive, then called it "righteousness".
Bells tolled in the darkness, and the reader's gaze flicked up from the words, peering out the filthy window into... well, nothing, of course. First one bell, the largest and most accurate, in the center of Etzos. He'd learned as a boy what that prime timekeeper was called, but had long since forgotten. All he knew was that every break, one lonely emanation came from skies, hidden by cloud and fog... and then a multitude of others took up the call. Almost like a single, dominat wolf howling, and a whole pack of pretenders echoing his cry.

The reader's lips twitched. That was rather good. He'd have to remember it. But, alas...

The book was closed and the page carefully marked with a twig. Back it went onto the shelf by his bed, with it's two siblings, the three of them alone there save for his purse (which was now in his pocket), and the hat he plucked and worked firmly onto his head. The mass of thick, black hair cascading down past his shoulders meant that sometimes it took a little effort, but he could hear the patter and splutter of water on the cobbles. Now it was a patter, but in a break or two, it could easily be a deluge.

With a whirl his cloak flailed around him, then was fastened around his neck. Much like his hair and his hat, his beard and cloak had a fractious relationship. A little pulling and tugging, though, and it was secure. The reader patted his pocket. Found his purse, and... yes, the key to the house. He marched to the door and reached for the handle-

The fact he could still see it tipped him off. He blinked and his mind vomited up a reminder. He sighed, walked to the candle and with a puff-

Darkness, yet not darkness. Silver and incomplete. A twilight of moonshine and warring shadows. In the open perhaps it would suffice, but in a place of towered brick and mortar, every structure cast it's own shades of pitch. The reader looked around and saw little. Just vague, dark blobs where he knew solid shapes rested. A few bits he stood there, in his threadbare cloak and ratty hat and long hair and matted beard, accentuating his eyes to the darkness.

Forty-four years, and he still needed to take a few moments. Until he could blink and the blobs became sharper. His gaze flicked to the long, straight item hanging from the shelf. Beneath the books, next to his bed, within arms-reach at all times. A smear of moonlight touched the hilt, just for a moment, and the reader wondered if he should err on the side of caution.

He tensed his hands for a moment. Callused knuckles clenched but did not crack. He was getting older, older than he thought he'd ever reach, but no. He did not require such obvious protection. That was more a professional concession, not a personal talisman.

Thus decided, the reader left his home, and the empty house listened to the lock grind and click. Footsteps departed from it, leaving all the dead wood and cold metal inert and alone. They were steady claps on leather on cobble and brick. Measured and determined.

Kasoria hated being late.

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Commercial Circle
20th break
"Marshals' Balls, y'can feel it in the air, can't yeh?"

"Feel what?"

Vorund resisted the urge to close his eyes and sigh. See, this was half the problem: the materials that he had to work with. He needed marble and meteorite iron, given the forces creeping across the underworld like a fucking plague, and what did he have? Clay. Dull and dependable, but nothing special, easily-replaced, and just as easily shattered. But that didn't stop him trying to make them more.

"Cast yer mind back a few years," he said, sipping at his ale and jutting his chin out at the ribald cast of the Speckled Jim. "This place? Even at this time a' the year, would have been alive. Deals being made, money being exchanged, muscle recruited, schemes taken from the inside of some cunning bastard's head and made into real, solid plans to be enacted out. Y'remember that?"

The thug took a sip of his own cup. Same as his boss, even though he couldn't afford it (and Vorund would know). He looked over the tables and the booths, the long pitted bar and the bottles lined up beyond it. The bouncers at the door and the whores circling like perfumed buzzards. Even their own protection, a couple of brothers that looked like more fat than muscle, but only looked that way.

Vorund could see the wheels screeching in his head, grinding and trying to find the right answer. But that was the problem. All h wanted to do was please his boss, not see the reality that Vorund saw. Forty years in the business, he could smell the trepidation and stiff, brittle paranoia in the air. The word that was whispered again and again until it was like a constant-but-faint echo in every groghouse, brothel, drug den and ganger hovel in the city.

Al’Angyryl... Al’Angyryl... Al’Angyryl are coming, coming for us all.

"Everyone seems... nervous."

Vorund's lips curled and twisted in a quick grimace. Well, it wasn't great, but it wasn't bad, either. The boy had some potential. He knew that Ilos had a good head for numbers to go with his fists, but he needed more than that to be his second. Again, like the thousand times before, he sighed internally with wistful regret. Kasoria. He would make a fine second. But that was never going to happen.

"They do. Scared, even. You know why?"

He looked over and fought to hide his disgust at the fear flitting across Ilos' face. By Vri's Lifeless Fucking Balls, was this what he had to work with? Fear at the very mention of a name? Fear for something he'd never even seen or met, despite seeing what he could damn well do when he was roused enough? But even as Ilos found his voice, steadying it with another quick sip, Vorund had to admire the shadowy bastards. Fear was their greatest weapon, and they wielded it well.

"The... The Al’Angyryl, sir."

Vorund nodded and ignored the hushed tones. Children could be so superstitious. He waited until that redhead refreshed their cups before he continued... and he waited until Ilos took a sip, first. Once the youth had swallowed without vomiting up his own lungs, he enjoyed his ale.

"The Cutter Brothers. Freng's family. Even Don fucking Paul. I can't even keep up with how many of the little crews and gangs in the lands outside the city. Getting swallowed up, going off the map."

"Word is the Cutters' weren't anything t'do with Al’Angyryl. Was someone else."

Vorund shrugged. It was a moot point. The Al’Angyryl were the next big thing, he could feel it. They weren't just another crew or gang or faction, looking to carve out a fiefdom of their own out of the Eztos rackets. Their leader wasn't even their generation's would-be Under-Marshal, driven to become the One Boss of the entire underworld. In point of fact, Vorund didn't even know who that leader was, or what he wanted. He didn't know what they wanted at all, other than to conquer everything they came across.

"Doesn't matter. They're here, they're staying, they're growing, and now everyone else is running scared. Business is suffering. Clients aren't paying, or they're running elsewhere. Things go on like this, bodies start piling up too high, the Citadel's going to take notice." He knocked back his cup, ale scorching its way down his throat. "And that'll go bad for everyone."

Ilos didn't say anything. Either because he was smart enough to know when words wouldn't matter, or he simply didn't understand the breadth of their problem. Vorund didn't need to guess which it would be. Etzos was thriving, even with those southern cunts invading the year before. She hadn't broken, the Glorious Bejeweled Bitch. The underworld was booming, but it was dancing on thin ice in heavy shoes.

The Al’Angyryl were coming, and Vorund didn't know how to deal with them.

"Wotch oo' want, little man?"

The racketeer blinked out of his unpleasant thoughts, and looked over at the slight figure the brothers were looming over. Only a few inches over five feet, made a little broader by his cloak and beard, taller by a ragged mess of black hair framing a tanned face. He held his hat in both hands and his eyes were downcast, like a penitent before a priest. Then he looked up, but not at the six hundred or so combined pounds of muscle in his way.

He looked at Vorund.

"He's okay, lads," the older man said, waving them off and gesturing to a free space in the booth. "Old friend a' mine."

Like slabs of fleshy granite, Lester and Lyle parted and Kasoria shuffled into the booth. Ilos frowned, confusion plain on his slender face as his boss spoke to the younger man with such familiarity. This man, so shambolic and unclean, with all the majesty and ferocity of a mouse. He let his nostrils curl as he caught a whiff and... by the Immortals, was that him?

"Ilos, could you give us a moment?"

"I... sir?"

"Give us the booth, please. Get another drink, have a game at a table, get your cock sucked for all I care. Just don't come back until he isn't sitting next to me anymore." Vorund leaned in just as his lieutenant was about to protest. "Some things go back before you, my boy. Some things only him and me can hear."

Ilos knew better than to argue. All that would get him would be a snarl at best and a broken jaw at worst. He'd put in time with Vorund, several years, from lookout to muscle to bookkeeper to this, his right hand and back-up brain. His clothes were nice and so were his lodgings, and his father went unmolested throughout the city all because people knew who his son was. This beggar looking bastard was an enigma, sure, but not one worth losing that over.

"Sure, boss."

Vorund watched him go, the brothers closing ranks again once he had, eyes and ears pointed the other way. Then he turned to Kasoria... and the new arrival saw some of the mask his patron wore chip away.

"Young people. They always need a reason. Being told by their elders is never enough."

"If he's smart, he will learn."

"Yes, but will he learn fast enough?"

"Time will tell."

Vorund snorted softly, rummaging around in his pockets for a few items. First a pipe... then a little purse of weeds for it... and then another, larger purse that clinked when he placed it on the table. Kasoria was not a stupid man, but in his own way, he was something of an intellectual sloth. Simple answers, short replies... he thought all of life could be encapsulated in them. But complexity was synonymous with Etzos, and Kasoria was determined to resist that. Hence why he was still a petty enforcer in his fifth decade, instead of making more of himself.

But talent was talent, and thirty years of street-fighting had made him... quite an asset.

"It usually does, but then I either have to train a replacement, or deal with a hungry young man who wants my chair... or maybe I'm getting too old to bother with both options."

Kasoria watched as the one man he'd consider a friend packed the bowl of the pipe and lit it with the table candle. Vorund had vigor in his eyes, wrinkles on his face, and strength in his hands. But he was old. More than ten years older than Kasoria, and a lifetime in the grime of Etzos was taking it's toll. When men got to that age, the joy of throwing themselves into a gang war or cunning contest was replaced by the simple need for things to just stay quiet, and profitable. Now, with this new faction upsetting the apples, the cart, the road, and the donkey pulling it, he could see the exhaustion creasing Vorund's face.

"You've been boss around here for twenty years. You've got twenty more in you."

"You're a terrible liar, Kas."

One side of Kasoria's mouth lifted, and he shrugged. "I don't get as much practice as you'd think."

"No, truthfulness is an odd curse for a sword to have, and yet you bear it." The joke passed between the two men with a chuckle and a plume of smoke, but when it drifted away, so did the light mood. The problem was still there. The unknown and threatening future. "Time for me to consider wrapping this up, I think. There's other things I could be doing. Not as lucrative, of course, but..."

Vorund paused as he saw a very unfamiliar thrill of worry cross over Kasoria's face. It took him a few moments to understand it, and he was oddly reassured that even such a stoic man could be a selfish bastard, too.

"Worried about your job, hmm?"

"Yes."

Truthfulness. If not for his skills, it would have got him killed years ago.

"There's other men you could work for-"

"No others I trust to work for, sir."

There was no sound save the hiss and crackle of that pipe for a while. Vorund forgot sometimes that for Kasoria, loyalty wasn't the vague and easily-broken thing that it was for everyone else he worked with. He was the only killer he'd ever met that had a real, true set of morals, and chief among them was that once his sword was given, it could only be returned. Not taken back. Decades of work and he'd had plenty of chances to stab his master in the back, but had never taken the bait.

Vorund smiled softly. A living weapon, to direct as he wished, and all it had taken was a cart ride out to the countryside and some forged papers. Best deal he'd ever made.

"Trust... is not a thing you rely on in our world, Kas. Nothing lasts forever. But I'll find something for you." He leaned in, so the words were for only them, and tried to fix the deadly little man with the most sincere look he had. "I promise you that, if no-one else. No-one has served me longer, or more faithfully. That's entitled you to more than just a bonus purse after the last job I give you."

Kasoria's hand rested on top of the purse. "Is it this one?"

Sincerity slid to wry amusement. Dogged little sod, was Kas. And like he already knew, not stupid. Just ill-motivated.

"Not yet, my friend. But that is a problem that needs solving, rather urgently."

"How urgently?"

"Tonight."

His hand moved away, and the purse went with it. Steely and intent was his gaze now, crackling with energy that belied the clothes and form of a man you'd expect to see with an alms bowl waving in front of him. Vorund rehearsed his lines, the information he'd collected, locations and times and details that any killer worth his salt needed to know.

"Tell me everything."

The crowd at Speckled Jim droned on, shrouded in gloom and uncertainty. Ilos knocked back another one at the bar, scowled over his shoulder at his master and some little bearded shit, huddled together like blood brothers, and him all the way over here. The old man was losing it. He had to be.

The fuck would he waste time with him for, if he wasn't?

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The Citizens Market
23rd break
No matter what they did, no-one came to help him.

When they broke a bottle across his face and he was blinded by brandy and glass and blood and tears, no-one rushed forth to save him. When they yanked him over the bar and started to pummel him with fists and feet, none of his staff or patrons even stood up from their seats. When they half-dragged, half-carried him outside, cackling like jackals, and he was crying out for his friends, not one of those friends answered his calls.

They looked away, unwilling or unable to meet his eyes. They blocked him out, like he'd done before over the years. Not his business, he'd told himself. Not worth getting himself perished. Eyes front. Mind on the drink, or the game, or the girl, or the table. Just ignore it and carry one. It'll be over soon.

Theo never thought it would happen to him. But then again, you don't, do you?

"A'right, lemme 'ave a look adim."

One snarled sentence, and the wolves relented. Two of them at his sides, gripping his shoulders but keeping him on his knees. Two more, little more than blurs once they got more than five feet away, flanking their leader as he sauntered gently over... and crouched down... and finally swam into focus through the barkeep's ruined eyes.

"D'yuh know me?"

"N... No-"

The slap snapped his head to the side but it was like a blowjob compared to the blows he'd already taken. Again Theo's vision cracked and fractured, whirling and dancing and becoming a pattern of black holes that spread over his eyes like spilled ink. The fleshy face with a rough beard vanished, then surfaced again as a hard hand jerked his face up by the hair.

"But y'know me now, dunt ya?"

"Y-Yes-"

"An' we know that y'sell weeds and powders an' shrooms under the bar. An' y'got a bunch a' girls selling their cunnies over it. Makin' pretty good money, I'd wager... an' every season, you give Vorund his cut, fer dealin' an' pimpin' on his patch. An' if someone needs a loan, who d'you point them towards?" It was a reflex. Primitive and instinctual and Theo was shaking his head, deny deny deny, survival genes kicking in even as the man's face twisted furiously. "... did I ask you-"

Another slap, backhanded, knuckles rattling around what teeth he had left.

"-if I was tellin'-"

A punch, short and sharp, his nose snapping under the force of it, blood pouring down into his mouth and making him cough.

"-the fuckin' truth?!"

And a headbutt like a fucking comet finished off the combo. The man grabbed the torn lapels of his shirt and suddenly his crown rose like a dark sun and smashed into Theo's face. Something else snapped. More blood. More coughing. He was swimming between Awake and Dream, passing between both like a drowning man, but then he saw the knife.

Awake. Definitely awake.

"W-Wait-"

"Ah, shaddap, ya fuckin' shite. I wanted y'dead, I'd a' killed yuh already." Another hand at his hair, jerking his head up so hard he could hear his neck creak. Cold, sharp steel against his face, ounces of pressure away from slicing flesh. "You ain't no good to anyone dead, wanker. But from now on, you pay me, not Vorund. I'll have some a' my lads around, help y'out if they need... clarification."

A high, skittering laugh oozed and rattled out from his mouth, taken up by his toadies. All four of them quick to do so, definitely not wanted Handsome Dom wondering why they were the last one laughing. Why would that be? What were they hiding? What could he cut off them to find out? No, they just chuckled along obediently, and waited for the show to be over.

"M'name's Dom. Handsome Dom," the thug said once Theo had fixed one, barely-open eye on him. "An' Vordund is fuckin' finished around the Market. Y'hear me?"

Dom leaned closer, and Theo wondered why he felt cold. And wet. His eyes craned up, even such a tiny gesture seemed to hurt... and he felt the rain patter down on him. Big, fat, welcome drops of cool relief, not the falling mist they'd had the rest of the night. He almost sobbed in the puddle of piss he was sitting in, barely listening but unable to close his ears.

"The Al'Argyryl are comin'. They're comin', an' when they ged'ere, I'mma hand this place over to 'em," Dom said, chuckling to himself as any grandiose wanker does when regaling a helpless victim with his Big Plan. "An' they're gonna make me a boss. But fer tonight, youse work f'me now. An' just in case y'need a reminder... hold 'im."

Panic gripped him again. Panic that had no strength or energy, but plenty of whimpering terror, making his limbs flap and flail and-

A foot like a wrecking ball caught him between the legs, and all breath and fight blew out of him as he doubled over. Then strong hands yanked him back up, boneless and panting, that blade coming closer and closer. Dom behind it, grinning with slathering glee, drinking in Theo's terror like wine, fantasizing about how sweet that pop would be when his eye went-

"... 'ey, boss?"

"Fuckin' what?!"

"Got an audience."

Handsome Dom looked up and followed Ferdy's gaze. So did Harry and Dean and Whistler. All five of them peering over... and eventually, even the battered owner of Sally's Mac peered around to stare.

"... who in the fuck're you?"

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I really have nothing left to say that hasn't been touched upon in the last 5 reviews or so >_> You're a great writer, man.
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Location: The Citizen's Market, Etzos
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