Rewards for All!
Patrick
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Location: The Harlot'n'Hound
The Harlot 'n' Hound: Oh the many reasons why you love it.
Sugar: She's a sweet girl
Freya: Biqaj?
Freya: Gave you free drinks
Seduction: Slow and steady wins the race (sometimes)
Loot: NA
Fame: MA
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Story Oh poor Patrick! He got the girl, then lost the girl! A great, fun story, no worries. I'd have liked to see what he thought when he didn't find Freya, but other than that minor point, all good. EDIT: aaaahhhh - you went to the Adult Forum with it. Good work!
Structure Lovely writing style, clear and no worries.
Freya
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5 / 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Location: The Harlot'n'Hound
Linguistics: Common: Word / Phrase: Mead
Stealth: Avoiding detection in a public place
Seduction: Treat 'em mean, keep 'em keen
Seduction: A good exit is important
Loot: NA
Fame: -1 (spiking drinks)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Story What an unashamed temptress! I loved this story and I wish I could have seen what would have happened had Patrick caught her. Next time! EDIT: Ahaha! In the Adult Forum. I see
Structure Lovely writing, lovely writing style. All good.
Collaboration: 5 / 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Location: The Harlot'n'Hound
Linguistics: Common: Word / Phrase: Mead
Stealth: Avoiding detection in a public place
Seduction: Treat 'em mean, keep 'em keen
Seduction: A good exit is important
Loot: NA
Fame: -1 (spiking drinks)
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Story What an unashamed temptress! I loved this story and I wish I could have seen what would have happened had Patrick caught her. Next time! EDIT: Ahaha! In the Adult Forum. I see
Structure Lovely writing, lovely writing style. All good.
Wendell
Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Sugar: A very friendly girl who helps you with your shirt
Sugar: Thinks you drink too much, too early
Sugar: Seems to enjoy slapping your bottom.
Seduction: Keeping the tone light, engaging in banter
Seduction: Mine's bigger than yours.
Mathematics: Balancing the books
Business Management: Profit vs loss
Loot: NA
Fame: NA
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Story Oh, I love the relationship between Wendell and Sugar ~ lots to love about this story, I really enjoyed your portrayal of 'brotherhood' between Wendell and Patrick, it was very well written.
Structure Fabulous writing, no worries at all. Lovely, easy to read, great flow and cohesion.
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:
Sugar: A very friendly girl who helps you with your shirt
Sugar: Thinks you drink too much, too early
Sugar: Seems to enjoy slapping your bottom.
Seduction: Keeping the tone light, engaging in banter
Seduction: Mine's bigger than yours.
Mathematics: Balancing the books
Business Management: Profit vs loss
Loot: NA
Fame: NA
Magic: These points may NOT be used for arcana
Story Oh, I love the relationship between Wendell and Sugar ~ lots to love about this story, I really enjoyed your portrayal of 'brotherhood' between Wendell and Patrick, it was very well written.
Structure Fabulous writing, no worries at all. Lovely, easy to read, great flow and cohesion.
