Kyin

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Kyin
Approved Character
Posts: 66
Joined: Sat Sep 02, 2017 1:13 am
Race: Prophet
Profession: Smith, Leather Worker
Renown: 20
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Kyin

Kyin
Name: Kyin

Age: 19

Race: Qi'Ora

Date of Birth: Saun 32, 699

Marks: None

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent: Common - Broken: Umaya

Partners: None
Appearance

He is slightly above average height, standing at 6'0", and he is thin but toned and wiry. His skin is dark as Grenadilla Wood. There is a tattoo of a hammer and anvil on his right bicep, he got drunk once, and yet of course that is the drunken stupor that he gets a tattoo. He tends to wear long flowing robes.
Personality

Kyin talks with a bored tone, and is always searching for something interesting. Kyin does not, in general, care what others think, unless he believes he can gain something from them, even if that something is little more than a way to stave off the oppressing boredom that makes up life. There is more to his personality than ennui, however, there is also a fairly unhealthy mixing of apathy. If it exists and especially if it doesn't, Kyin does not care about it, unless he can gain manipulate it to his gain. Kyin has a hunch, he may be a psychopath. In fact that is a bit lightly worded, Kyin is an absolute psychopathic asshole.

Kyin has a deep loathing for flowers, they remind him of himself, not that he has a flowery personality or is particularly nice smelling, but he is a god damn walking talking flower, He absorbs water through his feed, eats when the sun hits his skin, and it pisses him the hell off. They may remind him on a deeper level it probably reminds him of what he is missing out on, the thrill of the fight. It isn't like he cares about the three tenets of the Qi'Ora, but he does care about himself, and with hollow bones, fighting is not an option.
History


Kyin was born in Saun 32, 699, to a Qi'Ora couple, who Kyin has never felt any amount of attachment to. Kyin had a lackluster childhood, none of the other kids ever really wanted to be his friend, because he was strange and just mean to everyone else. For example, on one day in the late-ashan warmth, while all the other kids were playing, Kyin was opening up a dead bird, trying to figure out how it is put together, when the kids playing nearby came up. Once they saw what he was doing, they fractured into two factions, those that were disgusted or crying, and the ones Kyin had to worry about, the ones that thought he was weird (they were right), and beat him up for it. This was early enough in his life that Kyin realised he was not typical, which was a thought that was only reinforced later on.

Through Kyin's earlier teenage years he determined that there were no, or at least very few, people who would understand what he is, and accept it, although he may on the surface (and deep down) not care what people think of him, he does, in a way even he is unaware of, want to be accepted by those he deems worthwhile. Speaking of those he deems worthwhile, they are few and far between, he has never felt that his parents were, but there has been one before. A girl who Kyin met in his 14th Arc, he met her in his first apprenticeship, a shop that built bridalry and saddles from the ground up all the leather work as well as hardware work, she was a Human, with a similar expression to his. Kyin recognized her immediately, as if not the same as him, similar, and she must have seen it in him too, she approached him and explained that her name was Bea and her father needed a saddle for his new horse. Eventually they began raising hell together, and Kyin, much to his own surprise was beginning to feel something he never had before, sincere affection. It is the feeling he draws upon whenever he wants to act normal. They were secretly going out at night to raise hell for the next two years, until the death of Kyin's father.

Kyin's father died in spectacular fashion, but some context is necessary. Kyin's father was named Yurk he was a merchant, he was not a well off merchant, but toward the end he could have been. He had a deal with an Alchemist, which his father saw as his big break, he was storing some very rare and expensive explosives in his lousy little warehouse, which was only a warehouse in name, it was more aptly described as an addition to their house. Kyin's father was a smoker, smoke like a chimney, and he wasn't the brightest man, either. He kept an ash tray in the 'warehouse' which was the only indoor place his wife, Qyra, allowed him to smoke. Smoking and explosives are not the best combination. Long story short Yurk blew up himself and his house. Which surprisingly didn't phase Kyin (Points in favor of Sociopathy), but his mother, Qyra, was a wreck, not only emotionally, but financially. So Kyin, being 16 years old by this point, does the only thing a reasonable, self-diagnosed psychopath can do, he leaves his mother to wallow in her poverty and depression.

Kyin leaving was not without emotion, just not for his mother. Kyin asked Bea to come with him, but she couldn't, her father was too strict, which to be fair was probably for the best, she and he had been arrested for petty crimes more times than he can remember. There was no way to keep him from calling a search party (or at least enough people to find them), and knowing Bea she would claim the Kyin kidnapped her, before getting in trouble with her father for running away.

By the time Kyin was 18, he found himself in Etzos. This is where his story starts anew.
Housing

Kyin lives in a single room wooden house, The house initially had ample silverwear and dishes, which he destoyed all but one plate, and enough silverwear for one, He just doesn't want people to hang around his place, that becomes a monetary issue, he only kept the one plate because he does need to eat protein every once in a while. other than that there is a chair for sitting next to a table, and a piece of the back of a chair on the floor in the corner. Kyin killed two birds with one proverbial stone, now people won't sit in his property and he used the material for a job. His bed is in the other corner, it has a piece of parchment adhered to it that says "If you, yes you, the trespasser, if you shit my bed, I will shit your mother.", That is the only piece of decoration in the house. The fireplace is normally burning, Kyin is used to the heat after all.
Last edited by Kyin on Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:48 pm, edited 6 times in total. word count: 1188
Furthermore, I am of the opinion that Carthage should be destroyed!
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Kyin
Approved Character
Posts: 66
Joined: Sat Sep 02, 2017 1:13 am
Race: Prophet
Profession: Smith, Leather Worker
Renown: 20
Character Sheet
Personal Journal
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

Kyin

Knowledge & Skills

SkillPoints AcquiredTotal Points SpentProficiency
Glass Blowing25/100 (25/251)Novice
Leather Working27/100(30/251)Competent
Smithing30/100(35/251)Competent
Appraisal1/100(1/251)Novice
Discipline4/100(4/251)Novice
Investigation25/100(25/251)Novice
*Construction is Kyin's fast-track skill.
Skill Point Bank: 30
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Leather Working

Leather Working: Identifying Cervine Leathers
Leather Working: Identifying Bovine Leathers
Leather Working: Blacking
Leather Working: Tacking
Leather Working: Cutting Straps of Buckskin
Leather Working: Measuring for Wearables
Leather Working: Sword and Knife Pommels

Smithing

Smithing: Identifying Copper
Smithing: Identifying Tin
Smithing: Identifying Iron
Smithing: Creating a Deadbolt
Smithing: Hole-punching
Smithing: Filing Barbed Weaponry
Smithing: Forging Short Edged Weapons
Smithing: Creating a Fuller
Smithing: 4:1 Riveted Chain Mail
Smithing: Creating a Rapier Basket
Smithing: Wire Drawing

Social Skills

Discipline: Waiting For an Opportunity
Discipline: Suppressing Insanity
Discipline: Suppressing Kyin's Natural Monotone
Deception: Seeming Interested
Deception: Playing dead
Negotiation: Sometimes Gifts are Mean-spirited
Negotiation: Firing Some People Makes the Boss Happy
Negotiation: Ask for Personal Favor for Discount
Appraisal: Ask One Question to Answer Another

Physical Skills

Stealth: Avoid Person of Interest's Sight
Strength: Pretentious Lady Bowling

Local

Etzos: City Layout
Etzos: Anti-Immortal Attitude

Investigation

Investigation: Realize When a Hunch is Wrong
Investigation: Note a Person of Interest
Investigation: Don't Directly Interfere (Until You Have Dirt on Them)
Investigation: Know When a Suspect Plans to Stay
Investigation: Tail a Suspect

General

Noth: One Winged Avriel
Noth: Sensitive to Dumbassery
Al'Angyryl: It Exists and is Not for Good People
Yurk: Killed by Carelessness
Qyra: On a Financial Sinking Ship
NightShade: Bird Lady Warrior
Skill Point Ledger

Thread or Skill NamePoints AwardedPoints SpentRunning Total
Glass Blowing [RB}25[RB] 2500
Starting Package500050
Leather Working002525
Smithing002500
Appraisal1100
Discipline04400
Salt in the Wound100010
Smithing 001000
Red Leather, Yellow Leather100010
Leather Working0055
A Special Request150020
It Is, Like So Totally a Shopping Day!100030
Investigation00255
What's Yours Is Mine150020
Items
  • Black Cloak
  • Flowing White Robes (Stained in Charcoal, unusable)
  • Undergarments (Stained in Charcoal, unusable)
  • Soap
  • Toothbrush
  • Toothpaste
  • Waterskin
  • One Set of Eating Utensils
  • Tinderbox
  • Scraping Blade
  • Scrimping Tool & Tips
  • Scoring Iron
  • Lacing Stitch-Wheel Roller
  • Adjustable Width Edge-Skiving Tool
  • Wire Bristle Buffing Brush
  • Sleeking Tool
  • Friction Rubbing Roller
  • Jar Softening Grease
  • Jar Glossing Wax
  • Tooling Hammer
  • 10-Piece Design Punch Set
  • Basic Hole-Punching Tool (Awl)
  • Multi-Hole Spacing Punch Set
  • Torque-Geared Leather Cutting Shears
  • Medium-sized Heating (Hardening) Flat Iron
  • Skinning Blade
  • Fez (Because AWESOME!)
  • Ink Pen
  • Ink Well
  • Blank Journal
  • Wool Cloak w/ Fur Lining
  • 2x Linen Shirt
  • 4x Cotton Socks (Not that Kyin wears them, but Nels + Sock = Flail)
  • 5x Cotton Underwear (Soft for Mr. Johnson and the Juice Crew)
  • 2x Black Cotton Pants
  • Black Cotton Jacket
  • Silver Armband
  • Bottle Sirothelle Fire Whiskey
Ledger
ItemDebitCredit
Starting Package 100gn 0
Leather Workers Kit 0 60gn
Iron Ingot 0 2gn
Really Ugly Floral-print Cotton 0 3gn
Wages (Smithing, Saun 717) 216gn 0
Wages (Leather Working, Saun 717) 216gn 0
Fez 0 1gn
Blank Journal 0 5gn
Ink Well 0 2gn
Ink Pen 0 1gn
Wool Cloak w/ Fur Lining 0 22gn
Two Linen Shirts 0 4gn 5sn
Four Pairs Cotton Socks 0 6gn
Five Pairs Cotton Undergarment 0 1gn 5sn
Two Pairs Black Cotton Pants 0 12gn 5sn
Black Cotton Jacket 0 6gn
Silver Armband 0 4gn
Two Bottles of Sirothelle Fire Whiskey 0 5gn
A Special Request (Loot) 60gn 0
Gross Ale Bought for Merc (Etzos Has Skills) 0 10gn
Prize Money (Etzos Has Skills) 0 200gn
Wages (Smithing, Vhalar 717) 885gn 6sn 0
Total Currency: 0 ON, 1142 GN, 1 SN, 0 CN
Fame Ledger
Item/ThreadFameTotal
Starting Race + 10 10
Starting Profession + 10 20
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