Marten Thorn

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Marten Thorn
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Posts: 17
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:45 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 30
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Marten Thorn

Marten Thorn
Name: Marten Thorn

Age: 27

Race: Human

Date of Birth: 79th Vhalar 690

Marks: Velduris (Lore, Approval)

Factions Joined: None

Languages Spoken:
Fluent: Common
Conversational: None
Broken: Xanthea
Appearance

Marten is of an average height at 5"7, composed of wiry muscle. The most striking feature of his face is his pair of bright green wolf eyes, a symbol of the fact that he is part of Karem's pack. The hair on both his head and chin is dull brown though his head is starting to show flecks of grey. His mouth rarely lifts into a smile, and he rarely deviates from his usual impassive expression. On the rare occasions he does show his teeth, usually when enraged, Marten's set of fangs are revealed.

Marten is nearly always accompanied by his wolf familiar, Elias. Elias is slightly larger than a regular wolf, with a heavy coat of black fur.
Personality

Marten is a man who enjoys solitude, happy to spend time alone for hours upon end. Often he can be found humming to himself while he carves small pieces of wood into the shape of animals. When interacting with others he is efficient with his words, rarely speaking more than he needs to. This often leads to people thinking he is sullen, whereas in truth he is just a serious person not fond of extravagance. Occasionally his dry sense of humour will float to the surface, usually accompanied by a small smile, but this only tends to happen among those he knows well. He approaches situations cautiously, not prone to rash or impulsive decisions. This means he can appear indecisive, but when a quick decision needs to be made he will do so.

Marten is a moral person, but puts the most worth on those within his community. Strangers are also treated with caution until he has a good read on them. He will usually only go out of his way to help complete strangers if they are in dire need, but has a soft spot for children. Marten's opinion of most people changes very slowly once it's formed. Although slow to friendship, once such a bond has formed Marten is fiercely loyal, protecting the interests of those close to him as if they were his own. Those who help contribute to the community earn his trust much faster than those who act entirely for their own good. Those marked by Karem or Moseke are also held in high regard, unless they do something that he seriously disagrees with. Pointless killing, of both animals and people, is one of the few things that raises his anger; which once stoked burns furiously. Arrogance and selfishness are traits that annoy him and once Marten has decided that he does not like someone, it is difficult for them to change his opinions.

Marten's general philosophy on life is a simple product of where he was brought up: Take only what is needed, waste as little as possible. Those who act in a manner not in line with this philosophy are sure to earn his disdain.
History

Marten grew up in the city of Desnind, surrounded by nature. His mother was a bowyer, making powerful bows for the multitude of hunters that inhabit Desnind. His father was a woodcarver, making pretty furniture and sculptures. Marten tried his hand at both as he was growing up, wishing to emulate his parents, but he found that he was not particularly skilled at either. Once he was old enough, he was taken out into the surrounding area to learn to hunt. He took to it quickly, showing a natural aptitude for the bow. He grew up worshipping Moseke,
as do nearly all who originate in Desnind. These ideals shaped his personality, his view on life, and the way he conducted himself while hunting.

In his early twenties, Marten went travelling for several arcs. He crossed the ocean to Ne'haer, then spent time travelling between the cities on the Western continent. He soon discovered that much of the rest of the world had very different views from the people of Desnind, some people even hunting for sport; something Marten struggled to comprehend. He made his living hunting, learning to survive out in the wild as he travelled between cities. It was during this time that Marten met Karem. Marten freed a wolf who had suffered at the hands of a cruel human, and so was granted the mark of Velduris. Although many of the new experiences were exciting, he longed to return home to Desnind and so headed back by boat. He had learnt much during his travels, but it was with relief that he found himself among the trees of his home city.

While he had been away, his father had passed away from a sudden illness. Understandably saddened, Marten's memories of his travels are tinted with pain, often wishing that he could have spent that time with his father instead. This pain has dulled over the past arc, but now he often spends his free time carving wood. It makes him feel like he is connecting with his father, and occasionally provokes bittersweet memories.

Marten now spends his time living a simple life, with no particular desire to leave Desnind again. He brings in food for the city, stalking through the Makubwa Lori in search of prey. If required, he is ready to protect his home from any who seek to harm it.
Housing

Marten lives in a 400 square foot tree-house. Inside there is one bed, two chairs, one table, two knives, a set of six plates (assorted), one chest, two heavy fur blankets, and a green Iyọ lamp. Sitting on the table is a rough carving of a wolf, which he acquired when he returned to Desnind.
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Marten Thorn
Approved Character
Posts: 17
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:45 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Marten Thorn

Knowledge & Skills

SkillPoints AcquiredTotal Points SpentProficiency
Carpentry7/100 (7/251)Novice
Field Craft23/100 (20/251)+3VSNovice
Fletching5/100 (5/251)Novice
Hunting18/100 NA: FTNovice
Ranged (Long Bow)25/100 (25/251)Novice
Tanning 10/100 (10/251)Novice
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Wilderness skills

Fieldcraft:
  1. Field Craft: Starting a fire safely (SP)
  2. Field Craft: Take What is Needed, Waste None [NH]
Hunting:
  1. Hunting: Following animal tracks (SP)
  2. Hunting: Outsiders Hunt for Sport [NH]

Weapon Skills

Ranged:
  1. Longbow: Correct stance (SP)

Crafting skills

Tanning:
  1. Tanning: Skinning an animal (SP)

Social/Mental skills

Location/People/Religion


Locations:
  1. Location: Ne'haer [NH]
  2. Location: Desnind [NH]
Immortals:
  1. Moseke: Earth, Stone, Nature, Life [NH]
  2. Karem: The Hunt, Survival, Wolves [NH]
Skill Point Ledger

Thread or Skill NamePoints AwardedPoints SpentRunning Total
Ranged (Longbow) [RB} 25[RB] 2500
Starting Package 500050
Carpentry..5 45
Field Craft..15 30
Hunting..15 15
Tanning..10 5
Fletching..5 0
Carpentry [NH] 2 2 0
Field Craft [NH] 5 5 0
Hunting [NH] 3 3 0
Marks Section

Marks

Velduris: Favoured

Abilities

Pack Bond: The Favored is granted an omega wolf familiar, a constant companion. The wolf is significantly more intelligent than regular wolves and is somewhat bigger. In addition, this spirit can communicate not only with it's companion, but with other wolves of its pack. Karem can, at any time, contact any of the wolves her blessing grants, but they can only contact her if she chooses to listen. If the wolf is too heavily drained or badly injured it will revert to a spirit form until it is either rested or healed. The wolf can also choose to revert to spirit form at will, though they generally only do so in crowded cities and such. The blessed can still communicate with their wolf in spirit form. The wolf can tell when someone else has been blessed by Karem, and will always be able to find others who bear Velduris.

Sense of Prey: A skill that allows the blessed to tell where a prey animal may be found nearby, allowing the wielder to always be able to find food at need. They can also tell whether people around them have weak combat skills or are easily intimidated.

Velduris Skills I: The blessing of Velduris enhances the bearer's survival, hunting, and animal skills, raising any one of the following skills by three points: Animal Husbandry, Animal Training, Fieldcraft, Ranged Combat, Thrown Combat, or Trap Making. Any skill points granted by this Mark can break the 100 point cap on skills. (Picked Fieldcraft)

Knowledge

Velduris:
  1. Velduris: Karem's Blessing [NH]
Pack Bond:
  1. Elias: Constant companion (SP)
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Marten Thorn
Approved Character
Posts: 17
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:45 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Marten Thorn

Items
  • One set of clothing
    • Green cloak
    • Brown shirt
    • Brown pants
    • Black undergarments
    • Pair of brown boots
  • One Set of Toiletries: Soap, comb, razor, toothbrush, toothpaste,
  • One waterskin
  • Two sets of eating utensils
  • Tinderbox
  • Skinning knife
  • 2 daggers
  • 80 arrows
  • Good Longbow (Prized Possesion, made by his mother and given to him on his 16th birthday)
Ledger
ItemExpensesIncome Balance
Starting Package ... 100 100
2 Daggers 6 ... 94
Skinning Blade 2 ... 92
80 Arrows 2 ... 90
... ... ... ...
... ... ... ...
Total Currency: 0 ON, 90 GN, 0 SN, 0 CN
Fame Ledger
Item/ ThreadFameTotal
Human +10 10
Human in Desnind +10 20
Hunter in Desnind +10 30
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User avatar
Marten Thorn
Approved Character
Posts: 17
Joined: Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:45 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 30
Character Sheet
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Marten Thorn

Thread List/Timeline

Pre-creation
Ashan 712
Leaves Desnind
Ymiden 712
Arrives in Ne'haer
Ashan 715
Arrives in Etzos
Saun 715
Leaves Etzos
Vhalar 715
Gains Velduris
Arrives in Ne'haer
Ashan 716
Leaves Ne'haer
Ymiden 716
Arrives back in Desnind

Saun 717
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