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[Business] Egilrun Confidential

Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2021 6:54 pm
by Woe
Business Proposal
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Egilrun Confidential

  • ABOUT THE PC
    • Character Name: Woe Morandi
    • Current Wealth Tier: 6
    • Business Management Skill: 30 (Competent)
    • Profession's Main Skill (your level in it): Intelligence: 160 (Master); Logistics: 80 (Expert); Investigation: 80 (Expert)
  • ABOUT THE BUSINESS STARTUP Refer to the Business Guide
    What is your target tier? 8
    • Step 1: What is your startup wealth differential? +2
    • Step 2: What is the base cost of set up for your business? 45
    • Step 3: What is the startup cost? (Step 2 - Step 1)? 47
    • Step 4: Is this business a small or large business? If so, please show working out. Large 47 x 1.5 = 71 / 2 (Renown rewards) = 36 wp
    • How will this be funded? Will you lose the WPs or are you taking a loan? Please link to ledger or bank. Bank Loan
  • ABOUT THE BUSINESS
  • Business Name: Egilrun Confidential
  • Business Location: Egilrun, Scalvoris
  • Business Description: Egilrun Confidential is a large network of professionals, offering solutions to the problems of clients tailored to their needs. Whether you need a professional cook for a dinner party, or a more permanent resident servant, or a bit of fact-finding. Egilrun Confidential was established to help build a network of problem solvers, and matching them with the right clients.
  • Number of Employees: Fluctuates.
  • Which Categories from the Shoppe does your business sell? Edibles
  • Which non-Shoppe items / goods / services do you provide? Services of any and all kinds.
  • Are there any exceptions (eg: Weapons, but not bows) No illegal activities will be tolerated.
  • Which Wealth Tier does your business target at? 8
  • What is your Business Management Skill? 30 (Competent)
Goods & Services Available
Rules:
  1. Since this is a PC run business, you may buy certain items here at a lower cost than the Shoppe.
  2. Only the goods & services identified in this post may be purchased.
  3. This location is open for you to post in: any and all purchases must be posted with time stamps below.
  4. You can make multiple purchases per season, but log only ONE purchase post
  5. If you make a thread out of your transaction, the link should be posted here.

NPCs

Gloom
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Name: Gloom
Race: Tunawa (Rabu Clone)
Date of Birth: 1st Ymiden 720
Languages Spoken: Fluent Common. Basic Common Sign


Skill Table
Skill XP Level
Stealth 80 Master
Cooking 61 Expert
Athletics 53 Expert
Detection 51 Expert
Meditation 51 Expert
Mount (Flying) 30 Competent
Socialization 30 Competent
Torture 30 Competent
Combat: Whips 10 Novice


Appearance/Biometrics: Standing at around 2'5", he's rather large for a tunawa, but slender. He often wears dark clothing and makes up his eyes with poorly applied mascara. His bark is pale beech colored, and he has a set of rabbits ears that droop when he's sad. Which is almost all the time.

Personality: A gloomy tunawa, that's often found to sigh listlessly at the sky. He tends to have negative moods and thoughts and likes sharing them with others. He enjoys spending time in dark places, like caves, dungeons, deathly imagery, and cemeteries.

Backstory: Gloom was born one day when Woe met Rabu in a dream, and Rabu failed to make friends with Woe. Gloom was spawned from Rabu as a clone and went in search of Woe until the day he can find him.

What Gloom Believes is his Backstory: Gloom was born on a rainy day, in the darkest of Cylus in an Ojogbon tree in a cemetery. His mommy died when he was very young, and his step-mother (A groundskeeper) was very cruel to him, forcing him to do impossible chores and other hopeless errands. One day, he got lost on one such errand and found himself wandering the world listlessly. He had a dream one day about a child named Woe, and wishes to find this child as he believes he's the only one that can be a true friend to Gloom.

In-Game History Thus Far: TBD

Relationship to PC: Best friend, apprentice, personal chef.

Approved Here: viewtopic.php?p=160622#p160622
Cooking from 51-61: viewtopic.php?t=26182&view=unread#unread
As per this announcement, the following skill changes have affected Gloom: viewtopic.php?f=469&t=13364&start=230#p175240
  • Running is now Athletics.
  • Acrobatics is now Meditation
  • Climbing is now Mount (Flying)
  • Persuasion is now Socialization

Goods & Services

Shoppe Items
  • Edibles

This business is targeted at clients at Tier 8. This represents the majority of NPCs who shop here. PCs from any Tier may frequent a PC business.

Goods / Services Not Explicitly Listed in the Shoppe
The following Goods and Services not listed in the Shoppe are available here.
  • General Problem Solving (known only to Competent/expert with investigative skills (intelligence, investigation, interrogation, etc)
  • Supernatural All-encompassing Cure-alls for all psychological ailments.
  • Job Placement/Client Consultation for talent-searches
  • Information collection/gathering.

Job information

Jobs are available here. To apply for a job, contact the player.

Player notes

Put notes from the city's mod(s) to the city's players here. Also put a "transaction template" for PCs?

Change log

Record any changes here that have been made to the location.

Re: [Business] Beacon Confidential

Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2021 9:51 pm
by Woe
Egilrun Confidential
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Egilrun Confidential is a large network of professionals, offering solutions to the problems of clients tailored to their needs. Whether you need a professional cook for a dinner party, or a more permanent resident servant, or a bit of fact-finding. Egilrun Confidential was established to help build a network of problem solvers, and matching them with the right clients.

Housed in a small, discrete shop on the corner of a busy street in Egilrun. Through the main door, it opens up into a reception, complete with seating and tables for those who are hungry. Gloom greets anyone who arrives with a frown and whatever soup he's cooked up for that trial. Otherwise, he bids one wait until Woe can see them for whatever their issue may be.

If they're admitted for consultation, they'll be escorted into a little partition, that separates them from Mr. Morandi, where he will hold an initial hearing. Subsequent appointments will be held in a cozier room. Morandi's office, next to the partition, is well furnished with a comfortable couch for the client to sit and relate their issues. There are even disposable handkerchiefs available for those who need them.
Building Layout
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NPCs

Gloom
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Name: Gloom
Race: Tunawa (Rabu Clone)
Date of Birth: 1st Ymiden 720
Languages Spoken: Fluent Common. Basic Common Sign


Skill Table
Skill XP Level
Stealth 80 Master
Cooking 61 Expert
Athletics 53 Expert
Detection 51 Expert
Meditation 51 Expert
Mount (Flying) 30 Competent
Socialization 30 Competent
Torture 30 Competent
Combat: Whips 10 Novice


Appearance/Biometrics: Standing at around 2'5", he's rather large for a tunawa, but slender. He often wears dark clothing and makes up his eyes with poorly applied mascara. His bark is pale beech colored, and he has a set of rabbits ears that droop when he's sad. Which is almost all the time.

Personality: A gloomy tunawa, that's often found to sigh listlessly at the sky. He tends to have negative moods and thoughts and likes sharing them with others. He enjoys spending time in dark places, like caves, dungeons, deathly imagery, and cemeteries.

Backstory: Gloom was born one day when Woe met Rabu in a dream, and Rabu failed to make friends with Woe. Gloom was spawned from Rabu as a clone and went in search of Woe until the day he can find him.

What Gloom Believes is his Backstory: Gloom was born on a rainy day, in the darkest of Cylus in an Ojogbon tree in a cemetery. His mommy died when he was very young, and his step-mother (A groundskeeper) was very cruel to him, forcing him to do impossible chores and other hopeless errands. One day, he got lost on one such errand and found himself wandering the world listlessly. He had a dream one day about a child named Woe, and wishes to find this child as he believes he's the only one that can be a true friend to Gloom.

In-Game History Thus Far: TBD

Relationship to PC: Best friend, apprentice, personal chef.

Approved Here: viewtopic.php?p=160622#p160622
Cooking from 51-61: viewtopic.php?t=26182&view=unread#unread
As per this announcement, the following skill changes have affected Gloom: viewtopic.php?f=469&t=13364&start=230#p175240
  • Running is now Athletics.
  • Acrobatics is now Meditation
  • Climbing is now Mount (Flying)
  • Persuasion is now Socialization

Price List / Goods Available

Item: Wealth Tier:
Discrete Problem-solving Any Tier, per appointment.
Edibles Gloom's cooking is complimentary, whatever he has available

Player Notes

 ! Message from: Pegasus
Please leave this for me to fill in

Changelog

Credits to: Woe
Submitted for Development: Date
Developed by: Woe

Re: [Business] Egilrun Confidential

Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2021 1:44 pm
by Vulpes
Hey Woe, this proposal looks pretty good. I have to ask though, why do you have "Which Categories from the Shoppe does your business sell?" answered none when the location itself seems to sell drugs and medicine?

Re: [Business] Egilrun Confidential

Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2021 2:06 pm
by Woe
Oops, thanks for spotting that. It was a holdover from an earlier draft of the business. They don't sell medicine. They do offer edibles, however, so I added that to the shoppe items offered. Thanks!

Re: [Business] Egilrun Confidential

Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2021 4:40 am
by Vulpes
Sorry for the delay ;-;

Everything looks good. Approved :3