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Kisaik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Raining Fire
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Just a quick wrap-up of an old thread. Rabu and I are wanting to move onto new ones for the coming season.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Kisaik:

Acrobatics: Jumping onto a man’s shoulder.
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a man’s shoulder, when he’s at full height.
Climbing: Clambering onto a wagon.
Alchemy: Instrument: A Solar Calcinator is used to warm fluids without the use of fire.
Etiquette: Asking if a person is alright.
Etiquette: Politely asking where your things might be.
Mount (Wagon): Taking control of a cart run amok.
Mount (Wagon): Avoiding obstacles on four wheels.
Mount (Wagon): Minimizing collateral damage while driving into a crowded street.

Rabu:

Etiquette: Asking if a person is alright.
Etiquette: Politely asking where your things might be.
Medicine: Knowing when to take action and apply first aid.
Medicine: Applying a healing salve to a man’s ribs.
Medicine: Using divine power granted by Moseke, in tandem with healing skills.
Mount (Wagon): Letting a more experienced driver take the reins.
Socialization: A good bedside manner is important for a healer to form a repoire with a patient.
Socialization: Contact: Pickle Nose sells supplies that are useful for healers.
Socialization: Contact: Pickle Nose is a nice person, despite their harsh appearance.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: +5 for averting disaster and helping heal folks.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: no
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Sybil Malach
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: (Emea) Hunger of a Hunter
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Violence, psychological illness, reference to trauma, and a very non-naturalistic view on psychology.

Syb is lucid, Wald is not.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sybil

Meditation: Contemplating on one's own purpose
Meditation: Coming to terms to one's own sins
Meditation: Contemplating the actions of another
Meditation: Coming to terms with the difference between friends
Meditation: Finding harmony in Emean chaos
Psychology: Perhaps -controlling- dreams can be healing
Psychology: Watching dreams assists in diagnosis
Psychology: Watching dreams assists in interpersonal understanding
Psychology: Dreams are worthless for therapy if you're not in control
Psychology: Influencing another through dreams requires planning
Psychology: Emea is entirely changed by those that perceive it

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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word count: 181
"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

NPCs: Karlsson, Margaret
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Rei'sari
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Story Time
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Animal Husbandry: feline; kittens are very good at amusing themselves
Caregiving: all children love stories
Caregiving: a story makes a wonderful distraction from a fight
Caregiving: knowing when it is time to start weaning a baby
Storytelling: use what you know when making up a story
Storytelling: getting the audience involved in making up the story makes it more fun for them

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: possibly slight (5) for making the kids at the orphanage happy, and distracting them from a fight
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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Alora
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fire Beneath the Mountain
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: meh
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Defiance: Embrace: The wind when embraced, can grant temporary flight or gliding.
Defiance: Embrace: The Earth, when embraced, can allow you to pass through it, under most circumstances.
Defiance: Spirits can interfere with your manipulation of the elements.
Defiance: Refinement: Earth and Fire create magma.
Meditation: Regulating your breathing.
Unarmed Combat (Armor): Pummelling rocks can build knuckle strength.
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate overstepping for having pushed the boundaries of expert into mastery.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes Defiance level-up to mastery.
 ! Message from: Werewere
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word count: 110
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Baptism by Fire
City/Area: Merk Pass, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Blood violence and gambling
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Unarmed (Wolven Wrestling): Tearing scales away
Strength: Biting through scales
Strength: Pulling away scales
Endurance: Being choked
Endurance: Getting beaten down
Endurance: Pulled by the hair
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: exhaustion from the use of graft on him
Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Coroth
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: -‡- Seeing Things -‡-
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: Blood and gore
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Magic - Harden earth to entrap weapon when it hits ground.

Magic - Use the spark to call upon the elementals

Magic - You can only use one elemental at a time.

Interrogation - Threaten with drowning to get it out of them.

Combat : Polearms & Staves: - Staves can be leant towards enemy and impaled upon.

Renown:
has a mentor at the Pit of reflection

Collaboration: (/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/)
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Abra
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Glass Statue
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Glassblowing: Take into account potential breakage hazards
Glassblowing: Hollow glass is prone to shattering
Business Management: Keep an eye on worker stress to keep productivity high
Meditation: Get rid of distractions before they can multiply
Meditation: It’s impossible to control other people’s actions
Empathy: Influencing more than one target is exhaustive if not impossible

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: up to you. I intended to overstep at least a little
Renown: 10 for public embarassment
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes, Empathy
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word count: 106
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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fish for your life - Part IV.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. The other PC retired.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Acting like a scientist
Acting: Acting as if you're eager to help
Deception: Replacing a book's cover
Deception: Pretending to know what you're talking about
Investigation: Examining the water
Detection: Fish in the water
Discipline: Trying not to stare at a half-naked woman
Disguise: Disguising yourself as a scientist
Stealth: Moving slowly in order not to scare away the fish
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: A little, for helping Emerit.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 110

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: All Around Me are Familiar Faces
City/Area: The road through the greater Eternal Empire Region
Notes/Warnings: mentions of violence

Vluhariqh
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Yuri Accent
Linguistics: Listening for local dialects
Linguistics: Speaking with a thick tongue
Storytelling: Old stories have hints of truth
Disguise: Hiding your true identity from an acquaintance
Deception: Only sharing parts of your story to hide your identity
Deception: Hiding tales of wounds that would give you away as Yludih
Animal Husbandry: Proper care of your mount
Disguise: Matching the local accent makes you blend in
Etiquette: Road greeting to Caravans

Loot: Empty Bottle from Soren, "Lucky" Cork from Soren
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: For introducing oneself to a caravan
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)

Soren Kvistson
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence - Contact: Alexandra McKay, lone traveler (Vluharqih, unknown)
Intelligence: Speaking in hints
Linguistics (Yari): Lots of R's
Linguistics (Yari): I's become Oirs
Linguistics (Ulehi): Unknown sound made by Alex
Mixology: The taste of Yari Bonemeal Lager
Mixology: The taste of Athartian Blood Wine
Resistance: Tolerance to Athartian Blood Wine
Resistance: Tolerance to Yari Bonemeal Lager
Storytelling: The Tale of the King's Fallen Son
Strength: Carrying a Barrel of Ale

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: For being the booze guy
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Sybil Malach
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sybil's Skinnerbox
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Psychological observation and study, blood.

Wald will be made lucid next thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sybil

Detection: It's harder to notice changes when distracted
Detection: Even in dreams, one's perception must be honed
Detection: Watching someone from across the street
Detection: Using meditation to improve focus with sight
Detection: Using meditation to improve focus with hearing
Psychology: When in another's dream, dreamers adjust to it
Psychology: The mind acclimates to the dream or else...?
Psychology: Concept: Triggers
Psychology: Dreamers can be subject to familiar waking concepts for responses
Psychology: One can use their own dreamscape to learn about others
Psychology: Concept: Hypersensitivity
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
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Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
CLAIMED BY Abra
word count: 171
"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

NPCs: Karlsson, Margaret
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