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Kisaik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Raining Fire
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Just a quick wrap-up of an old thread. Rabu and I are wanting to move onto new ones for the coming season.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Kisaik:

Acrobatics: Jumping onto a man’s shoulder.
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a man’s shoulder, when he’s at full height.
Climbing: Clambering onto a wagon.
Alchemy: Instrument: A Solar Calcinator is used to warm fluids without the use of fire.
Etiquette: Asking if a person is alright.
Etiquette: Politely asking where your things might be.
Mount (Wagon): Taking control of a cart run amok.
Mount (Wagon): Avoiding obstacles on four wheels.
Mount (Wagon): Minimizing collateral damage while driving into a crowded street.

Rabu:

Etiquette: Asking if a person is alright.
Etiquette: Politely asking where your things might be.
Medicine: Knowing when to take action and apply first aid.
Medicine: Applying a healing salve to a man’s ribs.
Medicine: Using divine power granted by Moseke, in tandem with healing skills.
Mount (Wagon): Letting a more experienced driver take the reins.
Socialization: A good bedside manner is important for a healer to form a repoire with a patient.
Socialization: Contact: Pickle Nose sells supplies that are useful for healers.
Socialization: Contact: Pickle Nose is a nice person, despite their harsh appearance.

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: +5 for averting disaster and helping heal folks.
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: no
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            Sybil Malach
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            Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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            Thread Name: (Emea) Hunger of a Hunter
            City/Area: Viden
            Notes/Warnings: Violence, psychological illness, reference to trauma, and a very non-naturalistic view on psychology.

            Syb is lucid, Wald is not.
            Requested Rewards:
            Knowledge:
            Sybil

            Meditation: Contemplating on one's own purpose
            Meditation: Coming to terms to one's own sins
            Meditation: Contemplating the actions of another
            Meditation: Coming to terms with the difference between friends
            Meditation: Finding harmony in Emean chaos
            Psychology: Perhaps -controlling- dreams can be healing
            Psychology: Watching dreams assists in diagnosis
            Psychology: Watching dreams assists in interpersonal understanding
            Psychology: Dreams are worthless for therapy if you're not in control
            Psychology: Influencing another through dreams requires planning
            Psychology: Emea is entirely changed by those that perceive it

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            Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
            Renown: (how much and for what?)
            Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
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            Collaboration: Yes
            Magic Experience?: No
             ! Message from: Pig Boy
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                      "No mass graves."

                      -Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

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                      Rei'sari
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                      Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                      Thread Name: Story Time
                      City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
                      Notes/Warnings: none
                      Requested Rewards:
                      Knowledge:

                      Skill Knowledges

                      Animal Husbandry: feline; kittens are very good at amusing themselves
                      Caregiving: all children love stories
                      Caregiving: a story makes a wonderful distraction from a fight
                      Caregiving: knowing when it is time to start weaning a baby
                      Storytelling: use what you know when making up a story
                      Storytelling: getting the audience involved in making up the story makes it more fun for them

                      Loot: none
                      Injuries/Overstepping: none
                      Renown: possibly slight (5) for making the kids at the orphanage happy, and distracting them from a fight
                      Wealth Points: none
                      Collaboration: no
                      Magic Experience?: no
                       ! Message from: Pig Boy
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                                Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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                                Alora
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                                Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                Thread Name: Fire Beneath the Mountain
                                City/Area: Melrath
                                Notes/Warnings: meh
                                Requested Rewards:
                                Knowledge:

                                Defiance: Embrace: The wind when embraced, can grant temporary flight or gliding.
                                Defiance: Embrace: The Earth, when embraced, can allow you to pass through it, under most circumstances.
                                Defiance: Spirits can interfere with your manipulation of the elements.
                                Defiance: Refinement: Earth and Fire create magma.
                                Meditation: Regulating your breathing.
                                Unarmed Combat (Armor): Pummelling rocks can build knuckle strength.
                                Loot: Nope
                                Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate overstepping for having pushed the boundaries of expert into mastery.
                                Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
                                Wealth Points: No
                                Collaboration: no
                                Magic Experience?: Yes Defiance level-up to mastery.
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                                          Wald Lowca
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                                          Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                          Thread Name: Baptism by Fire
                                          City/Area: Merk Pass, Viden
                                          Notes/Warnings: Blood violence and gambling
                                          Requested Rewards:
                                          Knowledge:
                                          Wald
                                          Unarmed (Wolven Wrestling): Tearing scales away
                                          Strength: Biting through scales
                                          Strength: Pulling away scales
                                          Endurance: Being choked
                                          Endurance: Getting beaten down
                                          Endurance: Pulled by the hair
                                          Loot:
                                          Injuries/Overstepping: exhaustion from the use of graft on him
                                          Renown: (Reviewer's choice)
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                                          Collaboration: (No)
                                          Magic Experience?: (No)
                                           ! Message from: Pig Boy
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                                                    Coroth
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                                                    Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                    Thread Name: -‡- Seeing Things -‡-
                                                    City/Area: Athart
                                                    Notes/Warnings: Blood and gore
                                                    Requested Rewards:
                                                    Knowledge:

                                                    Magic - Harden earth to entrap weapon when it hits ground.

                                                    Magic - Use the spark to call upon the elementals

                                                    Magic - You can only use one elemental at a time.

                                                    Interrogation - Threaten with drowning to get it out of them.

                                                    Combat : Polearms & Staves: - Staves can be leant towards enemy and impaled upon.

                                                    Renown:
                                                    has a mentor at the Pit of reflection

                                                    Collaboration: (/No)
                                                    Magic Experience?: (Yes/)
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                                                              Abra
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                                                              Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                              Thread Name: The Glass Statue
                                                              City/Area: Melrath
                                                              Notes/Warnings:

                                                              Requested Rewards:
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                                                              Glassblowing: Take into account potential breakage hazards
                                                              Glassblowing: Hollow glass is prone to shattering
                                                              Business Management: Keep an eye on worker stress to keep productivity high
                                                              Meditation: Get rid of distractions before they can multiply
                                                              Meditation: It’s impossible to control other people’s actions
                                                              Empathy: Influencing more than one target is exhaustive if not impossible

                                                              Loot: N/A
                                                              Injuries/Overstepping: up to you. I intended to overstep at least a little
                                                              Renown: 10 for public embarassment
                                                              Wealth Points: N/A
                                                              Collaboration: no
                                                              Magic Experience?: Yes, Empathy
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                                                                        Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                        Thread Name: Fish for your life - Part IV.
                                                                        City/Area: Scalvoris
                                                                        Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. The other PC retired.
                                                                        Requested Rewards:
                                                                        Knowledge:
                                                                        Acting: Acting like a scientist
                                                                        Acting: Acting as if you're eager to help
                                                                        Deception: Replacing a book's cover
                                                                        Deception: Pretending to know what you're talking about
                                                                        Investigation: Examining the water
                                                                        Detection: Fish in the water
                                                                        Discipline: Trying not to stare at a half-naked woman
                                                                        Disguise: Disguising yourself as a scientist
                                                                        Stealth: Moving slowly in order not to scare away the fish
                                                                        Loot: -
                                                                        Injuries/Overstepping: -
                                                                        Renown: A little, for helping Emerit.
                                                                        Wealth Points: no
                                                                        Collaboration: yes
                                                                        Magic Experience?: no
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                                                                                  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
                                                                                  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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                                                                                  Soren Kvistson
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                                                                                  Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                                  Thread Name: All Around Me are Familiar Faces
                                                                                  City/Area: The road through the greater Eternal Empire Region
                                                                                  Notes/Warnings: mentions of violence

                                                                                  Vluhariqh
                                                                                  Requested Rewards:
                                                                                  Knowledge:
                                                                                  Linguistics: Yuri Accent
                                                                                  Linguistics: Listening for local dialects
                                                                                  Linguistics: Speaking with a thick tongue
                                                                                  Storytelling: Old stories have hints of truth
                                                                                  Disguise: Hiding your true identity from an acquaintance
                                                                                  Deception: Only sharing parts of your story to hide your identity
                                                                                  Deception: Hiding tales of wounds that would give you away as Yludih
                                                                                  Animal Husbandry: Proper care of your mount
                                                                                  Disguise: Matching the local accent makes you blend in
                                                                                  Etiquette: Road greeting to Caravans

                                                                                  Loot: Empty Bottle from Soren, "Lucky" Cork from Soren
                                                                                  Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                                                                                  Renown: For introducing oneself to a caravan
                                                                                  Wealth Points: N/A
                                                                                  Collaboration: (Yes)
                                                                                  Magic Experience?: (No)

                                                                                  Soren Kvistson
                                                                                  Requested Rewards:
                                                                                  Knowledge:
                                                                                  Intelligence - Contact: Alexandra McKay, lone traveler (Vluharqih, unknown)
                                                                                  Intelligence: Speaking in hints
                                                                                  Linguistics (Yari): Lots of R's
                                                                                  Linguistics (Yari): I's become Oirs
                                                                                  Linguistics (Ulehi): Unknown sound made by Alex
                                                                                  Mixology: The taste of Yari Bonemeal Lager
                                                                                  Mixology: The taste of Athartian Blood Wine
                                                                                  Resistance: Tolerance to Athartian Blood Wine
                                                                                  Resistance: Tolerance to Yari Bonemeal Lager
                                                                                  Storytelling: The Tale of the King's Fallen Son
                                                                                  Strength: Carrying a Barrel of Ale

                                                                                  Loot: N/A
                                                                                  Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                                                                                  Renown: For being the booze guy
                                                                                  Wealth Points: N/A
                                                                                  Collaboration: (Yes)
                                                                                  Magic Experience?: (No)
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                                                                                            Sybil Malach
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                                                                                            Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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                                                                                            Thread Name: Sybil's Skinnerbox
                                                                                            City/Area: Emea
                                                                                            Notes/Warnings: Psychological observation and study, blood.

                                                                                            Wald will be made lucid next thread.
                                                                                            Requested Rewards:
                                                                                            Knowledge:
                                                                                            Sybil

                                                                                            Detection: It's harder to notice changes when distracted
                                                                                            Detection: Even in dreams, one's perception must be honed
                                                                                            Detection: Watching someone from across the street
                                                                                            Detection: Using meditation to improve focus with sight
                                                                                            Detection: Using meditation to improve focus with hearing
                                                                                            Psychology: When in another's dream, dreamers adjust to it
                                                                                            Psychology: The mind acclimates to the dream or else...?
                                                                                            Psychology: Concept: Triggers
                                                                                            Psychology: Dreamers can be subject to familiar waking concepts for responses
                                                                                            Psychology: One can use their own dreamscape to learn about others
                                                                                            Psychology: Concept: Hypersensitivity
                                                                                            Loot: (If applicable)
                                                                                            Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
                                                                                            Renown: (how much and for what?)
                                                                                            Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
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                                                                                            Collaboration: Yes
                                                                                            Magic Experience?: No
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                                                                                                      "No mass graves."

                                                                                                      -Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

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