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Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Sun May 27, 2018 10:23 pm
by Kasoria
Thread Name: To Trouble Their Fathers: Part I
City/Area: Westguard (Township East of Etzos)
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language
This will be a three- or four-parter, dealing with the Starter Quest that Djinn gave me upon approval of my CS. Here's a copy-
Children say the damnedest things, don't they? And the boy you visit every other season? He's old enough now to reason for himself, and your cousins say they see a lot of you in him. He's brash, quick tempered, and can take a good punch, but he's unguided, untempered. A letter from a concerned citizen of the city sent to his mother spoke of informing the authorities at the boy's violent and unrepentant nature. They say he's a criminal in the making, and wish to weed the boy out before he brings more trouble to their community.
You could remove the problem at its source, and teach the boy to direct his efforts to something constructive. Or you could track down whomever sent the letter, and convince them one way or the other not to interfere with the boy.
The choice is yours.
This is your chance to make peace, or make war.
Looked like a GREAT chance to develop Kas's character outside of nauseating violence (and thus it was quite tough for me to write!), but I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. The next posts will be coming, and I'll have placeholders up if I need them, considering how late it is in the season. Whoever grades this might wanna claim them, since they might be a little hard to follow, taken without context.
Thanks in advance!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Deception: Playing the Novice Traveler
Discipline: The Strength to Tell the Truth
Discipline: Putting Your Son First. Always
Negotiation: Not Going For the First Offer
Socialization: Having a Drink with Family
Tactics: Traveling with Foreigners, To Avoid Being Recognized
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Westguard
NPC Alsome: Kasoria's Cousin
NPC Regeta: Alsome's Wife
NPCs Nina and Alvian: Twin Daughters of Alsome and Regeta
NPC Jessye: Mother of Kasoria's Son
NPC Martyn: Kasoria's Son
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nada
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Nein
Magic EXP: Non
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Mon May 28, 2018 12:06 pm
by Faith Augustin
Thread Name: Planning
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Planning a large project
Logistics: Present a plan in preparation
Politics: Count successes, count failures
Politics:. Use all resources
Psychology: Emotions can be overwhelming, especially when bound up with guilt.
Psychology: Preconceived ideas can make someone's mind up before they meet you.
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Mon May 28, 2018 2:14 pm
by Faith Augustin
Thread Name: Beginning
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Deals with death.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sevrath: Mother's Song: Helps plants and trees grow
Sevrath: Mother's Song: Is proportional to the amount of emotion in it
Singing: Projecting your voice in an open place
Singing: Putting emotion into your song
Singing: Using song to work with Moseke's mark
Singing: Overcoming nerves
Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Mon May 28, 2018 6:19 pm
by Tio Silver
Thread Name: Into The Fracture
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Magical violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Kin to the Wind
Defiance: Hurricane Punch!
Defiance: Gets supercharged inside Fractures
Defiance: Difficult to control inside Fractures
Defiance: Breaking your fall with a gust of wind
Defiance: Naming a kin element
Defiance: The importance of a kin bond
Defiance: Using wind to help evade attacks
Defiance: Letting your spell fly out of control
Defiance: The consequences of letting your spell fly out of control
Tactics: Using the Fracture's strange empowering ability to your advantage
Magic: Fractures
Magic: Wells
Magic: The Coven
Magic: The Seekers
Magic: Defiance
Magic: Abberation
Magic: Abrigation
Magic: Witchmarks
Magic: Mutations
Fractures: Tears in reality
Fractures: Lead to a dimension called Emea
Fractures: Minor Fractures
Fractures: Major Fractures
Fractures: Fault-line Fractures
Fractures: The Heart of a Fracture
Fractures: Foyers
Fractures: Chambers
Fractures: Contain Wells
Fractures: Strengthen spells cast inside them
Fractures: Can have other weird effects
The Coven: Evil mages
The Seekers: Explore Fractures
The Seekers: Acolytes
Wells: Ezymite
Wells: Oolasyte
Loot: 7 x Ezymite Wells
Injuries/Overstepping: An odd burn mark on the side of his chin.
Renown: Medium - For winning a magic fight against two powerful coven mages and exploring a fracture, but only being able to tell a small group about it.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Defiance
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Mon May 28, 2018 8:13 pm
by Alistair
Thread Name: A Mother Forsaken
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Mostly babbling
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 Knowledges for Ali
Tactics: Targeting the weakest
Tactics: Isolating a man away from fortifications
Tactics: Taking out a leader
Tactics: Slowing your enemy's plans through subversion
Politics: Ideology runs thicker than blood
Storytelling: Ralaith's Time Travel: A story that no one will ever believe
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
Doran Cooney
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Tue May 29, 2018 11:05 am
by Ryder
Thread Name: Brutal Beginnings
City/Area: Fosters Landing, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Somewhat graphic
Requested Rewards:
Blades - Longsword: Stabbing through the stomach
Blades - Longsword: Spin and slash
Blades - Longsword: Tripping with the blade
Blades - Longsword: Hacking at their thighs
Blades - Longsword: Sidestep and stab
Intimidation: Making them beg
Loot: Two gold rings (Potentially damaged, up to reviewer)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
Doran Cooney
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Tue May 29, 2018 11:28 am
by Alistair
Thread Name: Are Those Crystals, Or Are You Just Happy to See Me?
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 10 Knowledges Each
Alistair
Running: High endurance means longer running uptime
Running: Liches can run tirelessly
Socialization: Introducing two important people
Socialization: Hosting a meet and greet
Doran
Endurance: Taking Time To Calm Down After Dashing
Endurance: Dealing With Oversized Clothes
Running: Dashing In Only a Small Towel
Running: Short Indoor Sprint
Running: Adjusting Speed to Stop Quickly
Running: Sharp Indoor Veer
Stealth: Stepping Quietly With Bare Feet Indoors
Stealth: Sprinting Quietly Indoors
Stealth: Opening a Door Quietly
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Tue May 29, 2018 2:24 pm
by Sephira
Thread Name: The Price We Pay
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Digging a deep hole to locate survivors
Strength: Prying at beams with your hands
Attunement: Omnivision
Attunement: Omnivision allows you to "feel" the world around you.
Attunement: Can be used to find people that you can't see.
Attunement: Differentiating between multiple frequencies
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Attunement Overstepping: Dizziness and blurry vision for a trial
Renown: Maybe 10 for helping with the Relief Effort
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes, for Attunement
Doran Cooney
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Tue May 29, 2018 5:01 pm
by Jonathan Burr
Thread Name: The Nature of Being Alone
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: The Conjunction
Aberration: bridges between reality and percieved reality
Aberration: A sphere loses power with size in the beginning
Aberration: Touching your Harvester for the first time
Aberration: A Harvester can only be hurt inside of a sphere
Endurance: Holding yourself against a current.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Aberration Overstepping: Slight dizziness and exhaustion for a trial. Injuries: Cat scratches on Jonathan's stomach, minor graze wound on Hob's left shoulder.
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
Doran Cooney
Review Requests 2.1.4
Posted: Tue May 29, 2018 8:17 pm
by Jonathan Burr
Thread Name: Heat is Rising
City/Area: Ne'Haer, Lochgrass Gardens
Notes/Warnings: Using this to set up a later mod-approved thread where Jon uses Bolstering, please inform me if this isn't ok!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Bolstering : The quality of strengthening rather than Corroding
Transmutation: Can be used to strengthen
Transmutation: Using the quality of stone to strengthen
Transmutation: Bolstering to repair very minor damage.
Herbalism: Succulents, charming little gems.
Endurance: Dealing with the heat
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
Doran Cooney