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Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 5:08 am
by Zemos
Thread Name: Through Warp and Weft
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Creepy Zemos tries to catch a disease, succeeds in tackling a patient.
Skills Used: Textile production: Novice; Needlework: Novice; Meditation: Competent; Resistance: Novice; Poison: Novice; Unarmed Combat: Untrained.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance: (Yithnai) Immunity: Cannot be afflicted by any disease.
Textile Production: x 2
Meditation: x 1
Poison: x 2
Loot: Acquired whooping cough (He's immune though, but is a carrier)
Injuries/Overstepping: Carries whooping cough
Renown: +10 for assaulting a guy in a crowded infirmary. Goes to jail for a season.
Wealth Points: Technically he did a job... so will be applying for wealth thread.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 2:59 pm
by Doran
Thread Name: Thesis I
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Thesis writing (and other paperwork). Scientific. I've included the outline of Doran's thesis this time (it's the first time it shows up in an IC thread), in the second part where he finishes his thesis, I may just link it though as it affects the thread's word count quite a bit.
Skills Used: Master Discipline (151x/38k), Master Research (151x/71k), Expert Endurance (76x/38k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Competent Writing (30x/12k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Writing x5
Discipline x1
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 3:24 pm
by Sintih
Thread Name: A light blue panther, part 2
City/Area: Viden, Student Accommodation Building
Notes/Warnings: Problem solved. Also, don't do this at home, kids.
Skills Used: Meditation (10, 4), Discipline (5, 8)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring cold room temperatures
Discipline: Failing to bury one thought with another
Discipline: Giving in to panic
Meditation: Repetition of knowledge as a mantra
Rupturing: A ceiling sized phasing portal
Rupturing: Overstepping: Telescopic Sight
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Telescopic sight from overstepping by phasing almost the entire ceiling of his room
Renown: Negative, throwing someone out of your room in the middle of the night
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Possibly.
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 4:44 pm
by Balthazar Black
Thread Name: Till We Meet Again
City/Area: Isabella's Dreamscape, The Veil, The Untold, A stranger's dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Lucid Dream
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Navigation (Novice), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Dreamwalking (Crossing - I have a chart to track his progress on the second page of my CS so it's not with the other skills.), Alchemy (Novice - they talk about it so I included it.)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Navigation - Moving through the Veil into the Untold
Navigation - Moving through the Untold
Discipline - Focusing on your goal in the Untold
Leadership - Delegating tasks to friends
Stealth - Trying to blend in during a lecture you showed up late too
Persuasion - Convincing an Ex to watch your stuff
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 4:55 pm
by Balthazar Black
Thread Name: Hello There
City/Area: Viden - The Cold Shoulder
Notes/Warnings: Naked Balthazar but I'm gonna be honest, I really don't describe how his butt glows. Ghost dialogue may be a little hard to see but that was kinda the point. I thought it would be a cool way to reflect that Balthazar doesn't really know what it is saying to him because he isn't focused on it.
Here is a link to the approval for the ghost.
Skills Used: Unarmed Combat (Master), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Stealth (Untrained), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Dreamwalking (Crossing), Intelligence (Expert), Investigation (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Intelligence - The Cold Shoulder is haunted
Investigation - Asking the bartender for information
Endurance - Choked by a ghost tendril, not in a kinky way
Endurance - Naked in the Viden cold
Stealth - Don't knock things over
Stealth - If someone spots you, knock them out
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None - He was trying not to be noticed.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance.
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 5:14 pm
by Gennadiya Lyosha
Thread Name: Return of Light and Rebirth of Storm's Edge
City/Area: Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: Some Language
Gennadiya
Skills Used: Leadership (Novice), Singing (Novice), Psychology (Expert), Dance (Novice),
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Leadership x2,
Singing x2,
Dance x2,
Psychology x2
Seduction x1
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Kasoria
Skills Used: Socialization (Novice), Detection (Expert), Psychology (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Socialization x5
Psychology x2
Detection x1
Rhetoric x1
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Mathias
Skills Used: Dancing (untrained), discipline (untrained), socialization (untrained), detection (competent), stealth (novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Dancing x 3,
Discipline x 3,
Socialization x 3
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: ?
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 10:54 pm
by Rei'sari
Thread Name: [Starter Quest] Third Test
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Musical Instrument; Percussion (glass flute) (Expert; 76/250 exp, 48 knowledges)
Requested Rewards: Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges
Detection: hearing emotions in someone's voice
Musical Instrument; Percussion (Glass Flute): x 5
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for giving a performance.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:37 am
by Kasoria
Thread Name: Scale and Shadow
City/Area: The Underground, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Hot, Sexy, Scaly, Hoboy Violence
Skills Used:
Kasoria - Unarmed Combat (Master), Gladius (Master), Karambit (Master), Throwing Knife (Master), Tactics (Master), Intimidation (Master), Acrobatics (Expert), Intelligence (Expert), Strength (Expert), Torture (Novice)
Praetorum - Defiance (Master), Polearm (Master), Shield (Master),Tactics (Expert), Endurance (Expert)
Requested Rewards:
PRAETORUM
Skill Knowledge:
Defiance x1
Tactics x3
Polearm x2
Shield x5
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes
KASORIA
Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation x2
Tactics x3
Torture x2
Negotiation x2
Strength x1
Unarmed Combat x1
Endurance x1
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:37 am
by Zemos
Thread Name: Feast on Life
City/Area: Emea, partly in the FRA, but I left that open to interpretation whether it was also part of the dream.
Notes/Warnings: Not lucid, disgusting imagery, mature content, beheading a sacrifice, disgusting disgusting don't read this. Seriously you were warned.
Skills Used: no skills not lucid.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?)
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Re: Review Request 2.2.4
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 6:43 am
by Carver
Thread Name: Thinking and Learning
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Romance, fade-to-black referencing of sexy times. Obviously, they are very studious students studying very hard.
Laures
Skills Used: Resistance (Competent), Climbing (Unranked), Strength (Unranked), Seduction (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Cosmetology (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance x5
Climbing x3
Endurance: x3
Cosmetology: x4
Carver
Skills Used: Resistance (Unranked), Climbing (Unranked), Endurance (Comp), Seduction (Novice), Strength (Novice), Research (Novice).
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance: Short-Term: Cold (Ice, Snow, etc.)
Climbing x 2
Endurance x 2
Seduction x 2
Caregiving x 2
Strength x 6
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Up to Reviewer.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No