Woman of Dreams [Alivilda]

The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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“Not a mistake. Beautiful.” Brent repeated.

Different, in many more ways than one, but Brent was quite firm in the truth of his words. It was hard to imagine a place without many trees. Maybe more ice and snow? And it definitely sounded like ‘the’ Academy, rather than just ‘an’ academy, by her description. For a moment he wondered if there was a way for him to see it, yet the thought of traveling to such a faraway place was both thrilling and terrifying at the same time. Despite traveling around Melrath, he couldn’t imagine leaving it for an extended period of time. What about his friends, his neighbours, the community?

Once Brent had finished with the hard boiled eggs, he handed Malach two and himself the other two. He ate his rather quickly, taking large bites and not thinking much of it before getting some outdoor clothing put together. He was more excited about showing her around the village.

“This one might be warmer,” he said as he offered his fur coat to Malach. He threw over his black cloak for himself and then dug out boots for himself and the old ones of Ted’s. When they were ready to head out, he opened the front door and gestured for Malach to step outside into the blanket of sparkling white snow. Brent would follow through after her, and then offer his arm.

Outside was quite bright with the light reflecting off the snow. There were a few specks in the air and distinct walking paths where people had traversed through the village. Many of the homes and buildings were made of logs. They were clustered together but not packed like in a city. There was also a large open space that in the warmer seasons could be used for festivals or gatherings. Here and there were the occasional evergreen pine tree laden with snow and a few deciduous trees bare of any leaves. Off in the distance one could just make out the general shape of a river, but more noticeably was the wooden palisade-like wall that was built along some of its length. But Brent didn’t lead her to this wall. Instead he pointed out a large wooden building near the open clearing.

“That one is the Alivilda Great Hall. It’s good for gatherings and also for getting the best mead in Melrath.” Brent explained cheerily.

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"... Not too sure about that." Sybil retorted, back at the comment on their beauty. There were no mirrors nearby that they could see, so their eyes just wandered for a moment as they were handed a hard-boiled egg. Their face was new, after all. Brent didn't know what they meant, and at this point? They were fine with concealing that bit of their history for some time more.

As Sybil began to peel the shells off of the warm egg, their eyes followed Brent. He was gathering clothes from various sources. Their eyes slowly blinked, as they were presented with some boots and a cloak halfway through finishing the hard boiled egg. Glancing up at Brent, they swallowed, with one egg still in their hand. Shrugging their shoulder at the offer, they simply begin to step into the boots, slipping a whole egg into their lips, before bending down to tie.

As Sybil chewed, they locked arms with Brent. They were... Notably not entirely prepared for the elements, but they showed no real sign of being bothered. They were clothed enough, and they were used to colder climates. As the two stepped out through the threshold of the house, Sybil didn't mind the hurried, excited nature that was Brent's boundless energy. They were along for the ride, and they squinted their eyes as they adjusted to the sun shining through.

"Thanks for the clothes." Sybil said, glancing to the side, towards Brent, "Didn't have to do that. It's comfortable, but... Not really needed. It doesn't feel that bad out."

A light breath left their lips, as their eyes slid across the constructed wall. With a note of confusion, they made a mental scribbling of its existence, before shifting their gaze to wherever he might gesture them to look. Sybil's eyes curiously glanced from place to place-- This was a new region of the world altogether. They had been to warmer areas in passing, but to see somewhere just a bit closer to Viden, yet teeming with life outside of stone fortresses...

As they pass a tree, their fingers linger upon it.
Sybil has Branded a location near Brent's home.
As Brent explains the functionality of the Hall, Sybil's eyebrow quirks. Melrath? They'd heard something along those lines of being a thing, "Melrath is... The country we're in, is it not?" Their eyes slowly scanned at the landscape, taking in the strangeness of the greenery, as their arm constricts a little tighter around Brent's.
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"No mass graves."

-Vri 720, scolding Sybil for disposing of necromancers.

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There was something extremely satisfying about taking Malach around the village he called home. He liked having a girl on his arm, even though his pace was slow with his limping gait. Malach also seemed oddly resistant to the cold. Even when the wind blew and Brent covered his face partly with his hood, she seemed to hardly notice. However, she did seem to notice the trees and what little vegetation there was. The cartographer smiled to himself. She must live in a very different world.

“Yes, we are in Melrath,” he replied. “We’re just in a small part of it. There are much bigger cities like Raelia and Fensalir, but this is Alivilda. Some people call it the breadbasket of Melrath. Other people call it the beer basket.” He gave a chuckle and glanced at the great hall again.

As much as he wanted to go in for a warm drink, he also got the suspicion that she was more interested in things like the trees and landscape. As most of the lands of Alivilda were farmed, there wasn’t much in the way of trees, or at least not in the sense of a true forest, but there were certainly large patches that sometimes shaded livestock in the hot cycle. So instead Brent led the way to a clump of evergreens that were laden with snow giving a white and green look.

He picked a small sprig from a cedar tree, then brushed away the snow from a stump large enough for them both to sit upon.

“This one is cedar. It has a nice smell.” Brent said as he held up the sprig to Malach. Taking a seat, he looked around at the tall trees surrounding them. It wasn’t completely isolated, but it was far quieter than what the great hall would be like.

“I thought you might like it better out here.”

He was quiet for a few moments before leaning in to plant a chaste kiss upon her cheek. There was something alluring about Malach, yet also something he couldn’t quite put his finger on. He had managed to trick his primal urges, but had he tricked his heart? It was almost as though she was a companion, someone to share some of the excitement of his life with, and yet… How long would she stay? Was she just a fleeting woman of his dreams? Would he dream of her again? It was almost more appealing thinking about dreaming of her again.

With slightly conflicting thoughts, he would invite her to see either the great hall or the wall he had constructed along the river banks, with the distinct gate that had been part of his first dream with Malach. After that, he would suggest to go back home so that they didn’t freeze out in the cold Zi’da weather.
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Partly because of the out of order threads, I'd like to wrap up this one soon so that I can get Brent thinking in the present again. So maybe another post or two?
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Brent

Brent Forrester
Skill Points: +15 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: None.

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • Cooking: Boiling eggs
  • Caregiving: Looking after a house guest
  • Caregiving: Finding appropriate clothes for a guest
  • Seduction: Keeping a lover comfortably close
  • Strength x2
  • Teaching: Sharing one's passion
  • Teaching: Showing places of note on a map
  • Teaching: Showing physical places in person
  • Seduction: Taking a lover to an excluded place in nature
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Dreamscapes: Dangerous world
  • Viden: City in the north with an Academy
Notes: You can request up to 2 more knowledge (12 in total, you've requested 10). PM me if you'd like to.
Skills Used: Socialization (novice), Seduction (competent), Cooking (unskilled), Strength (unskilled), Teaching (unskilled)
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Player Word Count: 3,385 words.

Sybil

Sybil Malach
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Loot: Branded a location near Brent's home (on a tree).

Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Notes: You can request up to 12 Knowledge for this thread, PM a staff member upon return if so.
Player Word Count: 2,824 words.

Brent treated Sybil very thoughtfully, offering breakfast and the like. He showed a lot of seduction skill through-out. This scene came across as a very comfy domestic thread due to the drowsiness from Sybil and the caregiving nature that Brent displayed here. I appreciated the inclusion of Brent's maps in this thread! Such a neat addition to include that into the IC life of the character, and while I've thought to do so with journal entries/essays, it never occurred to me to do so with something visual-based like maps, so kudos for creativity! Too bad the thread got abandoned, but it happens.

Great job and enjoy your rewards!

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