Wondering About You

25th of Ashan 718

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Strange
Prophet of Old
Posts: 1105
Joined: Wed Mar 27, 2019 1:43 pm
Race: Undead (Ghost)
Renown: 999
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Alistair

Alistair Venora
Skill Points: +15 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: None.

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Notes: n/a.
Player Word Count: 3020 words.

Trevor

Trevor Reverrik
Skill Points: +15 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: +5 (for learning about a Venora exile in a meaningful way)

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Notes: n/a
Player Word Count: 3653 words.

What an in-depth and complex dialogue between these two, involving so much: their backgrounds, slavery, cities, magic, etc. Trevor is so sweet while Alistair is so thoughtful. It was interesting to see Trevor try to convince about taking the tactic of outreach and education in regard to mages, rather than fighting to force a sense of protection for mage-kind.

Though I'm soooo curious... what would have Trevor's purpose in the faction been?

Great job the both of you and enjoy your rewards!

PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.

Total Word Count: 6673 words.
Review Request Link: viewtopic.php?p=117509#p117509
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