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5th of Ymiden 720

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Beneath The Open Sky


Date: 5th of Ymiden, Arc 720
Status: Preparing

Weapons: Tower Shield, Scythe
Armor: Plate-like Leather

Current Magical Effects
  • Rune of Focus on head
  • Chained Runes of Strength/Endurance on limbs and tail
  • Taithir's Serpent's Hood
Praetorum sat at the edge of a sluggishly flowing river, gently petting his mount as she drank her fill. Poor girl, he mused. She'd been apart from him for so long, and now that they were together again, he was riding her hard across the entire continent. Still, it seemed that she would have a chance to rest today. 


"Heads up." Prae called out, pushing himself to his feet. Slipping on his shield, he wordlessly summoned his scythe to hand as he spoke. "There's a pack of something incoming; maybe a dozen of them, about shoulder height on me, pretty heavy. About a hundred fifty feet off." 


Ricky and Clarissa glanced at each other, and then came up to flank Prae, readying their weapons. "Which direction?" Clarissa asked, her voice quiet, but eager. At her side, Sneabru appeared, silent as always, but with a dagger in each hand. The smaller ithecal was warming up to the two Yari, Prae had been happy to see, but could he fight alongside them? This was as good a time as any to find out, he supposed. 


"North west." Prae gestured at where his defiance spark told him there was movement, clawed feet sinking into dirt and wind parting to make space for the bulk of a number of creatures. "Walking slow for now, but they're headed our way. Sneabru, traps."

The smaller ithecal nodded, and disappeared into the surrounding grasslands. Prae couldn't help but smile at that. There were only so many places to hide along stone corridors and brightly lit rooms, but here, Sneabru seemed much more in his element, moving unseen through the long, swaying grass. "So," Ricky clapped Prae on the back with a laugh, "still think you have what it takes?"

Praetorum just scoffed. After near fifty trials of nearly non-stop guerilla warfare, a single battle under the open sky seemed almost restful. Rather than respond, he started to draw runes over himself, chained strength and endurance over his limbs and tail, and focus on his head. He did the same for the two humans, adding a rune of resistance to their backs as well, before checking their surroundings again with defiance. 


Dirt shifted ever so slightly as Sneabru padded through the grass maybe ten feet ahead of them, laying down runic traps for whatever was coming. Prae wasn't sure how many creatures there were, but they were about eighty feet away now, and still moving slow. A divot in the landscape kept them out of sight still, but it wouldn't be long before the two bands came across each other. 


"Do you hear that?" Ricky asked, frowning. 


Hear what, Prae almost asked. But a moment later, he heard it too: a series of distant clicks sounding out a strange staccato rhythm. "Any idea what these things are?" Prae asked instead. He and Ricky both looked at Clarissa, who just shrugged. Prae sighed


"We'll find out, I suppose. Spread out." Ten feet of distance, Prae had found, was far enough that they could fight without interfering with each other, but close enough that Prae could come to their aid as soon as they needed it. The formation they'd settled on was a triangle, with Praetorum as its leading corner, and the other two covering his flanks, taking any of the creatures that slipped past him. 


"Sneabru." The other ithecal still hadn't reappeared, but Prae knew he was listening. "It's the same tactic here as it was inside, understand? The three of us will knock them down for you."

"We will?" Clarissa asked. 


"Yeah. Knock them down, or hold them still for a trill or two. Sneabru's job is to duck in and brand them with runes. Slows them down enough for an easy kill."

Sixty feet away now. 


"All ready?" Prae asked, heart starting to thrum with anticipation. It had been so long since a fight had filled him with excitement, rather than anxiety.

"Aye."

"Aye."

Sneabru said nothing, as usual, but popped up by Prae's side, just long enough to squeeze at his wrist, before vanishing again. That was a yes, then. 


"Ready yourselves, then." Prae raised his voice then, and activated Serpent's Hood. "And stand fast!"

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Beneath The Open Sky


Date: 5th of Ymiden, Arc 720
Status: Filled with stabs

Weapons: Tower Shield, Scythe
Armor: Plate-like Leather

Current Magical Effects
  • Rune of Focus on head
  • Chained Runes of Strength/Endurance on limbs and tail
  • Taithir's Serpent's Hood
  • Taithir's Nobility's Endurance

Two things happened at once: first, the pack of creatures ahead stilled, evidently having heard him, and then began to charge; second, Prae felt a shimmer in his Taithir mark, and then a rush of vitality. 


"Woah, that's new." Ricky straightened up behind him.

"Focus, Rick." Clarissa said. "But that is new and we should talk about it."

"Later." Forty feet. Away "Once they step over Sneabru's traps, they'll be blinded. It might not catch all of them, though, so watch for—"

The creatures came into view then, and Prae immediately spotted a flaw in this plan. The creatures were ugly, their bodies covered in thick, almost platelike hide. Their heads were massive, and their jaws alarmingly deep, but most importantly of all...

"No eyes." Prae sighed. The runes of night Sneabru had so carefully placed would do nothing, then. "New plan. Sneabru, flank them." With anything that ran in packs, facing them as a single, cohesive wave was stupidity itself. Prae had been counting on Sneabru's traps to break their cohesion, but if those wouldn't work, Prae would just have to improvise. 


Focusing on his defiance spark, Prae could feel Sneabru's claws digging into the dirt as he scrambled to flank the charging pack of whatevers, could feel the weight of those charging creatures in the earth, how they would sink in with every step. 


The moment Sneabru got into position, Praetorum reached out with defiance, calling the earth to his aid. And underneath these creature's feet, the very earth turned into mud, inches deep, but just for a moment, before returning to solid, packed earth. It wasn't enough to trap all of these creatures, but given the time they had, it would have to do. 


Praetorum dropped the sense for movement that defiance gave him, trading it for the more detailed, but shorter range of vision that omnivision provided. Sneabru was already in movement, darting between trapped creatures, drawing runes along them to sap them of their strength. 


And speaking of sapping—


Of the eleven creatures, only four of them had gotten well and truly stuck, the others having been in good enough positions to pull themselves out of the dirt with only a slight delay. That left seven moving too fast for Sneabru to catch, but the umbral mage wasn't the only one who could lay traps. 


<My turn!>

Sap, just as happy as Prae to be free from captivity, surged out, dropping a trap right in the middle of the creatures just a scant few feet away, catching three of them. Unlike with umbral hone, the effects were neither visible, nor immediate, but Prae had confidence that his Diri's powers would show results, as he began to drain the speed from their bodies. 


That was all the time Prae had for preparations; a moment later, four of the creatures were on him, two were advancing on Clarissa, and the last on Ricky. 


Prae caught one of them head on with his shield, the impact jarring, but not quite painful against his hone enhanced body. Another lunged at his right arm, trying to catch it between its teeth, while the other two circled around to try and flank him. But a warrior with an attunement spark had no blind spots to take advantage of. Twisting away from snapping teeth, Prae stabbed his scythe backwards, catching one of the creatures in the throat with it, the metal edge digging briefly into thick hide before sliding off at a bad angle. 


Thick hide, but not impenetrable, Prae noted. They'd fought worse in Yaralon, though there had been more of them then. Another of the creatures lunged at Prae from behind, strong legs sending it high into the air—a deadly mistake. A powerful gust of wind sent it flipping head over tail, Prae's kin element buzzing protectively around him. It landed hard on its back a short distance away, and before it could get back onto its feet, Sneabru was there, drawing a rune onto its hide before ducking back into the grass. 


Again, one of the creatures charge, teeth gleaming, but already Prae could see the effects of Sap's power begin to take its toll. The thing was starting to slow down, ever so slightly for now, but its effects would only grow as time went on. Again, Prae caught the charge on his shield, but this time at an angle, redirecting the blow instead of taking it head on. A moment later, the creature on his other side leaped as well, too fast for Prae to bring his shield back around again. So he didn't bother, instead turning his back to the creature as his tail whipped out, shooting a jet of flame into the creature's open mouth.
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Beneath The Open Sky

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Experience: 10 hone xp

Knowledge:

Defiance: Beneath The Open Sky (1/1)
Hone: Beneath The Open Sky (1/1)
Tactics: Beneath The Open Sky (1/2)
Tactics: Beneath The Open Sky (2/2)
Taithir (Nobility's Endurance): Activated with a phrase
Taithir (Nobility's Endurance): Reinforces allies


Renown: 5 for the start of a big battle/hunt

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: tbd

Consequences: none

Comments: I love the character you give all your npcs, and Sneabru is such a fun little runt of a Wyvarnth mage. That you set up blindness traps for an eyeless beast was an interesting development, and I applaud you for not metagaming there. You set the stage for what I'm sure will be a hard fought battle, can't wait to see what's next in this.

I appreciated also that Praetorum says he has fought bigger/worse in Yaralon, which is probably true.

Great writing and enjoy the points/knowledges!

If you have any concerns about this review, please PM me about them.
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