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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: Best Three out of Five?

City/Area: Andaris

Notes/Warnings: Somehow, I forgot about this thread. Anyway, it's about convincing a young mother to sell three of her children into 'indentured' apprenticeships. A euphemism for slavery.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Persuasion: Using positive phraseology to describe an unfavorable proposal.
Persuasion: Getting a mother to trust a stranger with her children.
Psychology: Extolling the benefits of letting go.
Negotiation: Bargaining with lives.
Detection: Intuiting a person's desperation.
Linguistics: Euphemisms.


Loot: Doesn't matter, he gets sold into slavery a arc later, all money gets gone.
Injuries/Overstepping: nope, wouldn't matter.
Renown: Slight minor bad deed. Coercing a mother into selling her kids to a slaver.
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: You Have Goat to be Kidding Me!
City/Area: Central Reservation
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Arlo

Knowledge:
Climbing: Sheer cliff faces are tricky to climb
Climbing: Climbing with a partner can be a help or hindrance
Climbing: Distribute weight evenly to make climbing easier
Climbing: Go slowly, but don't hesitate
Climbing: Make sure that you have a foot hold.
Climbing: Free climbing
Detection: It's hard to tell where noises are coming from when sound echoes and bounces
Detection: Distraction can significantly impact whether you notice something.


Sojourn Ability: Staunch Ally: Binds your soul to another
Sojourn Ability: Staunch Ally: Activated by blood


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Vega

Knowledge:
Climbing: Sheer cliff faces are tricky to climb
Climbing: Climbing with a partner can be a help or hindrance
Climbing: Distribute weight evenly to make climbing easier
Climbing: Go slowly, but don't hesitate
Climbing: Make sure that you have a foot hold.
Detection: It's hard to tell where noises are coming from when sound echoes and bounces
Detection: Distraction can significantly impact whether you notice something.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Bearly Qualified
City/Area: Bastard's Grove
Notes/Warnings: A bear! A bear!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Running: Running backwards.
Running: Don't look back in flight.
Ranged Combat (Longbow): Firing down center mass.
Fieldcraft: Baiting predators with your self.
Tactics: Flanking for archers.
Leadership: Good help is hard to find.

Loot: 1 x good longbow, 50 gn
Injuries/Overstepping: Scratches and bruises.
Renown: Slight for completing a task as a mercenary.
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Wedding Dance
City/Area: Streets of Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: It's a wedding proposal duel.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Dance: Rhythm in combat
Bludgeon (Mace): Shattering a weapon that's been heated, then chilled.
Bludgeon (Mace): Feigning the direction of your weapon.
Acrobatics: Combative dodging
Unarmed Combat: Sweep the Leg
Tactics: Wearing down the enemy.

Loot: Victory, and one less Shual to worry about.
Injuries/Overstepping: Don't think so. Some light magic use.
Renown: Slight for winning a duel.
Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Spying on Foreigners

City/Area: Scalvoris

Notes/Warnings: Hikaru being a creep

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Rupturing: Scrying – pinpointing the right location
Rupturing: Scrying – listening in on a conversation
Meditation: Using the setting to determine focus
Socialization: Chatting in a group
Socialization: meeting foreigners
Etiquette: going along with foreign greetings

Loot: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Yes - Rupturing
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: 25
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: no
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Jonathan Burr
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: They're All Mine...Get It?!

City/Area: Viden Academy

Notes/Warnings: Pun warning

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Engineering: Basic schematic
Engineering: Strength of a material
Engineering: Contracting out materials
Engineering: Prototype design
Chemistry: Tampering with accelerants
Chemistry: Shifting proportions to different effect.


Loot: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: No


Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Nope
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Nope
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: Into Blue
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not especially, mild mature themes
Requested Rewards:

Qit'ria
Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Bellyflopping into water
Detection: Recognizing Ink Bloom Disease
Detection: Feeling a pickpocket grab your coinpurse
Stealth: Moving through sand without kicking it up
Strength: Pulling your arm from another's grip
Swimming: Swimming with the tide
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Pulling hair for control
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Kicking a man's knees out from under him
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Knee Driver
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Striking a nose with an elbow

Ink Bloom Disease: Giant black splotch
Nalin: Pale man with a large black splotch
Nalin: Has a sister named Lavender
Zihida: Owns a whorehouse in Almund

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, not taking crap from strangers
Collaboration: (Yes)

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Magic EXP: (No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
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Nalin
Knowledge:

Negotiation- Getting free food for someone in need from your boss
Caretaking- Giving In.
Caretaking-Making sure they drink water
Caretaking - not being able to say no to a stranger
Endurance - Being slapped by a savage
Discipline - Not yelling at someone that just slapped a disease wound

Qit'ria: Wild woman from a land abroad
Qit'ria: A bit bossy

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small, helping a new arrival
Collaboration: (Yes)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

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Thread Name: You gotta believe
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A

Collaboration: No
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Treth] Target Practice and More
City/Area: Ne'haer, Treth
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges


Ranged Combat (Crossbow): your shooting ability is a bigger limiting factor than momentum when it comes to how far you should shoot
Ranged Combat (Crossbow): many skilled hunters have a range of 50 yards with a 60 yard range limited to those of incredible skill
Ranged Combat (Crossbow): wind is a factor
Ranged Combat (Crossbow): the further you are from your target, the more accurate your shot must be
Ranged Combat (Crossbow): speed in loading and firing a bow comes with practice
Prison: with practice, the amount of time the prison can be held for, and the further out it can be extended increases, and the less exhausting the ability becomes to use

Non Skill Knowledges

Tei'serin: can create a Prison up to five yards away, and hold a shield/cage for nearly forty five bits at a time


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: general exhaustion that can be recovered from with a long nap or a good night's sleep.
Renown: possibly slight (5) for impressing her weapons teacher by being one of Moseke's chosen, and for persistence in her lesson/reasons for wanting to learn how to defend herself
Collaboration: no

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: no
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Job Thread] A Map of Ice and Snow.
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None. Just a simple jt.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (solo = 6 skill knowledge)--
Cartography: A finished map may require more than one draft
Cartography: Include what information is relevant
Cartography: Using a system of measurement is essential
Cartography: Include a key
Navigation: The layout of Rynmere
Navigation: Figuring out the best routes

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Location: Rynmere
Location: The crown, midtown, and lowtown
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Location: The Rynmere University

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Nope.

Thanks for reviewing! :)
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