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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Victor Amielle » Thu Jun 14, 2018 12:17 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Academia Meet Research
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Requested Rewards:

Victor Amielle


Skill Knowledge:
Aberration: The Balance
Aberration: Initiation: You don't choose the Harvester, the Harvester chooses you
Aberration: Initiation: You don't know if the Harvester will bond with you or kill you
Aberration: Has a break-in period
Research: Taking advantage of an opportunity for research
Research: Study first, pass judgement later
Research: Interviewing your research subject
Research: There is much to be gained from researching forbidden subjects
Research: Planning to collaborate on a research project with somebody
Transmutation: Corrosion: Allows you to destroy as well as create
Transmutation: As individual as the mage who wields it

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Harvesters: Choose their own form
Harvesters: Respect strength
Harvesters: Satisfy their mage's needs
Harvesters: May have once have been mortal mages
Jonathan Burr: Transmuter and Aberrant
Jonathan Burr: Has a Harvester called Hob
Jonathan Burr: Wasn't Hob's first mage
Jonathan Burr: Had another Harvester before Hob
Jonathan Burr: Wants to make a place where no mages have to hide their spark
Jonathan Burr: Wants to collaborate with me

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Yes


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Knowledge:
Transmutation: Quality of Fire's Heat
Transmutation: As individual as the mages who wield it
Transmutation: Corrosion - can be used to decay materials as through time.
Research: sharing your interests
Research: Asking questions to learn more
Research: Being the subject of an impromptu interview
Research: A research proposal
Research: Seek knowledge first, not violence
Intimidation: Talking a big game.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:Yes
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Profession: Researcher
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Velaine Krome » Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:03 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Similar but Not the Same
City/Area: Endor, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Keeping Your Best Behavior
Meditation: Stilling Your Mind
Meditation: Pushing Away Excessive Worries
Empathy: Noticing When Someone Tries To Read You
Empathy: Recognizing Another Empath
Empathy: Managing Strings of Fear
Empathy: Quilting Is Important To Ward Off Unwanted Visitors
Empathy: Avoiding Eye Contact So Empathy Doesn’t Work On You
Empathy: Pulsing Strings of Annoyance

Alice Endor: Nathaniel’s Cousin
Alice Endor: An Empath
Alice Endor: Blunt With Her Words

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Velaine Krome
freedom becomes her.
 
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Velaine Krome » Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:54 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Gracious Host
City/Area: Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Venorans Have Lavish Taste
Politics: Krome is Still Indebted to Venora
Politics: Donating to Charity
Etiquette: Greeting the Host of a Party
Etiquette: Accepting an Offered Drink
Etiquette: Replying to a Compliment
Etiquette: Greeting a Sergeant
Etiquette: Not Interruptin Ongoing Conversations

Oliver Venora: Almost Became Your Betrothed
Oliver Venora: An Astute Politician
Oliver Venora: In a Relationship with Charlotte Warrick
Nathaniel Endor: Makes You Feel Unbalanced
Nathaniel Endor: Doesn’t Get Along With Xander
Xander Andaris: Doesn’t Get Along With Nate
Charlotte Warrick: In a Relationship with Oliver Venora
Charlotte Warrick: Sergeant in the Skyriders

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: For attending a ball and noble social niceties maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Velaine Krome
freedom becomes her.
 
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Alistair » Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:08 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: All Black, All Blue
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Meh

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
Transmutation: Corrosive Ether Missiles
Transmutation: Flinging an Ether Missile at high velocity
Transmutation: Shape-changing Ether Missiles
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Seemingly stops upon hitting organic material
Detection: Noticing fine details in craftsmanship
Investigation: The way in which a malicious deed was done can verify its malice

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Jonathan Burr » Thu Jun 14, 2018 8:05 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Making a Point
City/Area: Ne'haer - On the Road to Lysoria
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Reality changes inside of the sphere
Intimidation: Using a past victim to make a point about the present
Intimidation: Killing a man to make a point to his companions
Intimidation: Displaying dominance through confidence
Whips (Bullwhip) - Targeting a man's face more accurately
Whips (Bullwhip) - Learning to strike from a mounted position


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Velaine Krome » Thu Jun 14, 2018 8:28 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Into the Pits
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Quest thread, but since both of the mods had retired figured I should just turn it in
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Coming Up With a Fake Name
Deception: Pretending To Be Lovers
Meditation: Ignore the Crowd, Focus On Your Opponent
Unarmed Combat: Go For the Eyes
Unarmed Combat: Using Arms to Shield Your Face
Empathy: Touch Makes the Strands Brighter
Defiance: Reaching For Your Spark
Defiance: Combining Magic with Fighting
Defiance: Using the Earth to Hold Your Ground

Cormag: Trustworthy or Not?
Cormag: Servant By Day, Fighter By Night
Tengre: In Charge of the Pits
Tengre: Has an Ulterior Motive

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

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Velaine Krome
freedom becomes her.
 
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Doran Cooney » Thu Jun 14, 2018 10:54 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: What Do You Do?
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Feel free to just post the points! : )
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nu.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Doran Cooney
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Caius Gawyne » Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:27 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Not Your Sarding Hero
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Dead thread. My contribution is 1,533 words in two posts.

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge (8):
• Research: Knowing when your sources are limited
• Research: Gleaning facts even from the most paltry of sources
• Stealth: Using the darkness of Cylus to your advantage
• Stealth: Leaping from the shadows for a surprise attack
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): The shoulder slam
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Using a grappled opponent as a body shield
• Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Recovering your footing
• Blades (Saber): The quick riposte

Non-Skill Knowledge:
• Religion: Mastes, Immortal of Compulsion, Trickery, and Vices
• Religion: Kata, Immortal of Insanity, Injustice, and Ruin
• Religion: Syroa, Immortal of Acting, Fury, Lust, and Transformation
• Religion: Immortals have allies and enemies amongst themselves
• Religion: Mastes and Kata are allies with Syroa
• Religion: Mastes and Kata are enemies of Ziell

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Ew. Never.

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Vega » Thu Jun 14, 2018 7:47 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Generosity
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None. Possibly dull....

Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Harp: Basic position for playing
Musical Instrument: Piano: Musical notation for each hand
Musical Instrument: Piano: Will help you learn to play the harp
Musical Instrument: Piano: Musical notation has patterns which help playing.
Musical Instrument: Piano: Soft pedal changes timbre
Musical Instrument: Piano: When you press a key, a hammer strikes up to three strings

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: An antique fiddle. This is a renown reward and is PSF approved here. It has the following ability:
The fiddle itself is, as it seems to be, an antique and beautifully crafted instrument with a lot of history. When played by one of Xiur's blessed, however, it provokes one of three emotional responses in all those who hear it. The response is directly linked to the kind of music Vega is playing and the emotion will be the one she is trying to instil. For all three, this imparts a feeling, does not determine anyone's actions but provides a "nudge", nothing more. The responses Vega is able to provoke when she plays this fiddle are:

a) Hopefulness: with upbeat and cheery music, those who hear the fiddle being played will have a boost to their resolve and feeling of optimism - Vega can not make them feel optimistic that X or Y will happen but can instill a general feeling of being more up beat.

b) Peace and calm: with gentle and slow music, those who hear the fiddle being played will feel calmer, less inclined to violence or anger. Again, a general feeling, not one that she can target as feeling peaceful towards X.

c) Entranced: with a haunting melody, those who hear the fiddle will be focused on the music, pulled in to the emotion of it and will feel the urge to focus on that.

Vega can use this ability once a trial and so long as she keeps playing, the ability will work for up to an hour. However, she has to be playing, it has to be heard etc.


Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Doran Cooney » Fri Jun 15, 2018 4:27 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Where Did You Come From?
City/Area: Rynmere, Between Andaris and Venora
Notes/Warnings: Please feel free to skim!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Tensing One's Muscles to Keep From Shifting Around
Stealth: Ignoring the Sound of One's Own Heartbeat
Stealth: Moving in Time With Another's Footsteps
Stealth: Strike First
Stealth: Waking Another by Holding a Hand Over the Other's Mouth

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Doran Cooney
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Renown: +40
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