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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Alistair » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:56 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Make It Bold
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Meh

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
Transmutation: Bolstering
Transmutation: Bolstering is an intrinsic weave
Transmutation: Bolstered items can still be destroyed
Transmutation: Generally not apparent, or flashy
Transmutation: Channeling an Ether Missile
Meditation: Mentally centralizing a concept

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

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Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Jonathan Burr » Wed Jun 13, 2018 8:06 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bite of the Snake
City/Area: Ne'haer - Willow Woods
Notes/Warnings: Jon has left a thief of the Willow Woods alive and traumatized, with an order to spread the word among bandits there. He has been warned not to go anywhere near major cities or settlements under threat of death. I think he'll listen.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Whips (Bullwhip) - Targeting a hand or foot
Whips (Bullwhip) - Aim to blind and the rest is easy
Whips (Bullwhip) - Stepping back to gain range
Whips (Bullwhip) - using the crack to get someone's attention.
Intimidation - Backing up your savagery
Intimidation - making someone lose control of their bladder

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Doran Cooney » Wed Jun 13, 2018 8:26 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Who Are You?
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Bad poetry incoming
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
I mean. I wish.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Max » Wed Jun 13, 2018 9:33 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: All That Glitters
City/Area: The Beneath/Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Suggestions of withdrawals.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The Texture of Black Onyx
Detection: Deciphering Average Rock from Materials of Value
Mining: Look for Gemstones or Ore
Strength: Swinging a Pickaxe
Strength: Striking a Wall
Strength: Using All Your Arm Strength for Power

Non-Skill:
Slags Deep: Ranges from Sweltering Hot to Frigidly Cold

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Devin » Wed Jun 13, 2018 9:48 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Misfortune of Aelius and Vanessa Calder (Part One)
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: I mostly wrote this solo in order to grind Acting knowledges. I hope it isn't too boring and confusing!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Walking like a noble
Acting: Faking a posh accent
Acting: Coming up with a background story for your character
Acting: It's important to also dress like your character
Acting: Practice, practice, practice!
Disguise: Putting a fake moustache on

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

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Renown: +70
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Medals: 1
Lol Worthy (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Vega » Wed Jun 13, 2018 10:15 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Melody
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None. Possibly dull....

Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Putting emotion into your playing, even just scales.
Musical Instrument: Piano: Emotion is tricky when learning techniques.
Musical Instrument: Piano: Scales
Musical Instrument: Piano: Following verbal instructions.
Musical Instrument: Piano: The Sustain pedal
Musical Instrument: Piano: Learn by doing, not by listening to someone explaining

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe? She's impressing her teacher?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

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Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)
Cylus 717 Thread Challenge (1) Cylus 717 PC/Dev Challenge (1) Cylus 717 All Star (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Arlo Creede » Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:25 pm

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Rewards Requested

Thread Name: One Upmanship
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Acting: The picture of innocence
Acting: Pretending to be despondent
Acting: Wo-man hit things
Acting: Changing the timbre and pitch of your voice.
Caregiving: Thinking about ways to learn massage which aren't uncomfortable
Cosmetology: Dressing up when going somewhere nice
Cosmetology: Every girl should have a LBD
Cosmetology: Less is more
Psychology: Shared experiences are more than twice as fun
Psychology: Being the naughty student is fun!

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes - 5 or 10 for the amount that chef will talk?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope


Arlo


Knowledge:
Acting: Stifling a bark of laughter in a cough
Baking: Roasting cocoa beans
Baking: If you don't have an oven, rotate beans in a drum over flames.
Baking: Technique for removing husks from cocoa
Baking: Making cocoa butter
Baking: The different ingredients in different kinds of chocolate
Baking: How to make cocoa liquor
Baking: Pressing techniques for chocolate
Baking: Passing ingredients through a cloth to separate
Baking: Additional ingredients change the texture of a dish

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: As above
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Kasoria » Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:25 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: IV. The Logical Conclusion
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Gruesome Violence
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Karambit): Slicing Forearms to Break an Opponent's Hold on Their Weapon
Blades (Throwing Knives): Bigger Target, Smaller Chance of Missing
Blades (Throwing Knives): Smeared With Scarf Rot
Discipline: No Blade Left Behind (They Aren't Cheap)
Intimidation: Using a Dying Man as Punctuation
Unarmed Combat: Roundhouse Knee Strike


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Deshak: Ne'haer Eatery Owner and Occasional Underworld Facilitator
NPC Denis: Small-Time Crook, Freshly-Scarred


Loot: N/A - but this will be a Job Thread, natch!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Oh, yes... throughout the underworld, if not legitimate Etzos society, but both Vorund's word and the deeds of his messenger will spread
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Caius Gawyne » Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:16 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Black and Blue: Catching You
City/Area: The Black Market, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah.

Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge (8+2):
• Deception: Using official language to make a lie more convincing
• Detection: Paying attention to details in a busy place
• Detection: Finding that face in the crowd
• Endurance: Still too warm when it's cold
• Intimidation: Verbal threats, physical presence
• Intimidation: Promise of official procedures to quiet suspicions
• Investigation: Following your assumptions to a likely location
• Investigation: Proving your hypothesis
• Leadership: Making your presence known
• Leadership: Ignoring the opinions of the crowd

Non-Skill Knowledge:
• Charlotte Vale: Just a kid
• Charlotte Vale: Famula's Servant
• Charlotte Vale: Has a way with words
• Charlotte Vale: Knows a bit about you
• Charlotte Vale: Not the criminal you're looking for

• NPC: Essa, A Defier Refugee from Rynmere

• Location (Viden): The Black Market
• Layout (Viden): The Black Market

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice? (Possibly +5 for doing his sarding job.)
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Ew. Never.


Charlotte Vale


Skill Knowledge:
• Deception: Lying about others
• Detection: Looking for someone you know in a crowd
• Endurance: Breathing through the pain
• Hunting: Stalking one's prey
• Running: Dodging obstacles
• Stealth: Hiding behind objects
• Stealth: Changing one's appearance to avoid detection
• Stealth: Changing course to throw off a pursuer
• Stealth: Hiding one's intentions
• Stealth: Using a distraction to slip away

Non-Skill Knowledge:
• Caius Gawyne: Was chosen for his job
• Caius Gawyne: Thinks you're a smartass
• Caius Gawyne: Here looking for you
• Caius Gawyne: Will arrest you
• Caius Gawyne: Broken Man

• Essa: Works in the Black Market

• Location: Viden Black Market
• Layout: Viden Black Market

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's choice? (Possibly some for causing a scene?)
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Ew. Never.

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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Max » Wed Jun 13, 2018 10:23 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Horrors of War
City/Area: The Beneath/Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Detection: Finding Your Bearings in the Dark
Detection: Relying on Your Ears When You Can't See
Detection: Deciphering Between People's Footsteps
Intelligence: Using the Visual Abilities of Others to Gather Information
Stealth: Hiding in the Dark
Stealth: Moving Quietly Toward Potential Enemies
Stealth: Whispering
Stealth: Avoiding Being Seen Until the Time is Right
Tactics: Choosing to Wait and Learn Rather Than Attack

Mercedes:
Unarmed Combat: Right Seiken
Unarmed Combat: Left Seiken
Unarmed Combat: Right Shin Kick
Unarmed Combat: Left Shin Kick
Unarmed Combat: Don't punch the air
Unarmed Combat: Overwhelming Force
Unarmed Combat: Balance can be broken
Unarmed Combat: Blind Fighting
Unarmed Combat: Palm-slap
Detection: Detecting Enemies while blind

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

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Max
I am the storm, so wait
 
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